ceremonials Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 PH: Enigma is coming Speaking of dubtrack, everyone come there. Gabe is being racist
Jackson Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 2 minutes ago, ceremonials said: PH: Enigma is coming Speaking of dubtrack, everyone come there. Gabe is being racist I'm learning about title processing
ceremonials Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 Just now, Jackson said: I'm learning about title processing Who cares
ceremonials Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 We're listening to MANiCURE, get in sister friends https://www.dubtrack.fm/join/platinumhitz
swiftie13 Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 we already have swigie, we never needed another judge anyway
ughgabriel Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 2 minutes ago, ceremonials said: Wow another Cupid, fire him RT if you agree RT
ceremonials Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 Ok its not citrus's fault since the incompetent host told them they had til Thursday but share your opinion http://www.easypolls.net/poll.html?p=58b74d28e4b0c3d9e4cead05
ceremonials Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 1 hour ago, ughgabriel said: RT if you agree RT RT unless he gives me a 10
fountain Posted March 1, 2017 Author Posted March 1, 2017 1 hour ago, ceremonials said: Ok its not citrus's fault since the incompetent host told them they had til Thursday but share your opinion http://www.easypolls.net/poll.html?p=58b74d28e4b0c3d9e4cead05 Gosh
Jackson Posted March 2, 2017 Posted March 2, 2017 I want citrus to judge cause I think he'll like my song
ughgabriel Posted March 2, 2017 Posted March 2, 2017 Well there are 7 contestants and 5 judges, so 12 people and the majotiry has voted so, results today
ceremonials Posted March 2, 2017 Posted March 2, 2017 1 hour ago, Jackson said: I want citrus to judge cause I think he'll like my song why r u such a bitch just bc you pandered to Washington
Aurora Posted March 2, 2017 Posted March 2, 2017 11 hours ago, swiftie13 said: Aurora Amazing performance! This legitimately feels like a real song both melodically and lyrically. Sometimes your stylistic and diction choices come off as clunky and sometimes even contrived but this felt so effortless. I would not call it dumbing down because smart language is not elevating an entry if it doesn’t belong, this is being more concise with your thoughts while still having flare. Ostensibly, this has awkward meter problems, but as you have shown, that doesn’t matter if you have a great melody (which is why I rarely nitpick on meter and such). Thanks for showing the other picky judges! The idea of sleeping with the enemy is an overdone one but you brought a Sam-ish quality to it that it doesn’t feel as cliche as it could have. There are terrific lines all over such as “Ego buried in the dirt,” “Another medal you adore,” and the RAP It was so perfect (and the PACE!!!). That part was so poetic but in a way that conveys song not AP English Comp. There were a couple, but very minimal, lyrical duds but nothing worth me complaining over. I was so impressed! I never expected this kind of review, so thank you so much Hor. Pretty much every point you covered was something I was trying to achieve, especially the "sleeping with the enemy" hook; I wanted to take a common, perhaps overused phrase and put a new spin on it, since in the song it's used in a literal context, which isn't how the idiom is typically meant to be used. I appreciate the comments on the melody and how melody can save poor meter which is definitely what I went for in this song because it's not something I can usually afford to do, as well as the comments on the lyrics you really liked too. The rap was my favourite part of the song and I'm so glad it connected with you. This is probably my best review for a song thus far I'd say so thank you! 11 hours ago, Jackson said: Also @Aurora I accidentally stumbled upon your song last night, and WOW! BOP! I didn't know you could sing too I just KNEW this would happen sooner or later. I'm not mad tho. I still don't think I can sing but for what it's worth, especially coming from the vocal king, thanks. 4 hours ago, Jackson said: I use the superior Emerald Wow we use the same theme. Talent winning? 3 hours ago, ceremonials said: Ok its not citrus's fault since the incompetent host told them they had til Thursday but share your opinion http://www.easypolls.net/poll.html?p=58b74d28e4b0c3d9e4cead05 Voted to wait for @Citrus but it seems I'm outnumbered 2:1 anyway.
ceremonials Posted March 2, 2017 Posted March 2, 2017 Just now, Aurora said: I never expected this kind of review, so thank you so much Hor. Pretty much every point you covered was something I was trying to achieve, especially the "sleeping with the enemy" hook; I wanted to take a common, perhaps overused phrase and put a new spin on it, since in the song it's used in a literal context, which isn't how the idiom is typically meant to be used. I appreciate the comments on the melody and how melody can save poor meter which is definitely what I went for in this song because it's not something I can usually afford to do, as well as the comments on the lyrics you really liked too. The rap was my favourite part of the song and I'm so glad it connected with you. This is probably my best review for a song thus far I'd say so thank you! I just KNEW this would happen sooner or later. I'm not mad tho. I still don't think I can sing but for what it's worth, especially coming from the vocal king, thanks. Wow we use the same theme. Talent winning? Voted to wait for @Citrus but it seems I'm outnumbered 2:1 anyway. yes pear said results r happening tonight :cupid:
Aurora Posted March 2, 2017 Posted March 2, 2017 6 minutes ago, ceremonials said: yes pear said results r happening tonight I'm not sure when tonight is but
fountain Posted March 2, 2017 Author Posted March 2, 2017 8 minutes ago, ceremonials said: yes pear said results r happening tonight um i meant my reviews when u asked that lol
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