swiftie13 Posted November 27, 2017 Author Posted November 27, 2017 (edited) 2 hours ago, Fa1x intelectual said: The only guess I got is saying Beyonce is black... Wait! I think I figured this one out! Racisme, that has more to do with theifing Edited November 27, 2017 by swiftie13
bestfiction Posted November 27, 2017 Posted November 27, 2017 Oh wow oh wow I kinda didn’t know if I got the theme right but it seems that it has actually worked out I’m very surprised tbh
swiftie13 Posted November 27, 2017 Author Posted November 27, 2017 5 hours ago, bestfiction said: Oh wow oh wow I kinda didn’t know if I got the theme right but it seems that it has actually worked out I’m very surprised tbh Perched for the other judges’ critiques today
Fa1x intelectual Posted November 27, 2017 Posted November 27, 2017 13 minutes ago, swiftie13 said: Perched for the other judges’ critiques today Surely am
swiftie13 Posted November 27, 2017 Author Posted November 27, 2017 (edited) more judge comments at 4PM EST. Edited November 27, 2017 by swiftie13
Fa1x intelectual Posted November 27, 2017 Posted November 27, 2017 I see I'll have to keep going back and forth between here and Family Feud...
Witch Privilege Posted November 27, 2017 Posted November 27, 2017 Oh crap. I was going to sign up for this, but I forgot. Whoops.
swiftie13 Posted November 27, 2017 Author Posted November 27, 2017 19 minutes ago, Witch Privilege said: Oh crap. I was going to sign up for this, but I forgot. Whoops.
Fa1x intelectual Posted November 27, 2017 Posted November 27, 2017 I'm currently taking part on the best round of Family feud, so I'm sorry for not being able to bump the thread
swiftie13 Posted November 27, 2017 Author Posted November 27, 2017 (edited) @Tsareena - How many minutes did it take you to make this? 5? Although, the songs flow pretty well, I think that the descriptions are way too short. Try to describe the songs next time more. @Losing my ground - I guess it was a cute story, but the song choices were way too predictable. Try to delve into more genres for your next entry. @Fa1x intelectual - I actually loved this, but I feel that it's way too related to a possible love story than to the actual qualities your lover needs to have. Good song choices. @Noah - I think this is decent, but maybe a little more attention to the text next time. Ok-ish song choices. @Lukey - I think this round was about what you want your lover to be not what not to be. The song choices flow pretty well together, but the entry just feels pretty filler-ish @bestfiction - After you started your entry with Cowboy Style, I was expecting some riskier song choices. However, I think you saved yourself with the descriptions which fit the theme. @Dessy Fenix - This is good, the part with the smell was slightly messy, but unique in a way. @Xedretinz Lododnz (Asfgh Cvbmn) - I am glad that the choices are different, more alternative. The second song especially is just beautiful. The doggies were cute and the descriptions were good. The server was being a mess so Poki’s reviews will be posted in like five hours when I’m home again. Tomorrow is results + new round day! Edited November 27, 2017 by swiftie13
ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted November 27, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted November 27, 2017 1 hour ago, swiftie13 said: How many minutes did it take you to make this? 5? Although, the songs flow pretty well, I think that the descriptions are way too short. Try to describe the songs next time more. took me hours omg
swiftie13 Posted November 27, 2017 Author Posted November 27, 2017 2 minutes ago, Tsareena said: took me hours omg Me when no one complimented the graphics this season
ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted November 27, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted November 27, 2017 3 minutes ago, swiftie13 said: Me when no one complimented the graphics this season uhm I love it?
swiftie13 Posted November 27, 2017 Author Posted November 27, 2017 2 minutes ago, Tsareena said: uhm I love it? We have a winner ladies and girls
Dessy Posted November 27, 2017 Posted November 27, 2017 (edited) Not my last minute addition of "scent" winning over the judges. What kind of unforeseen impact. And yall don't want to smell your lover on his sweater that you're wearing? Why is that weird if it reminds you of ha? Edited November 27, 2017 by Dessy Fenix
Dessy Posted November 27, 2017 Posted November 27, 2017 1 hour ago, swiftie13 said: Me when no one complimented the graphics this season Tbh the designs are cute, very simple and fun to read. But I'm not really a big fan.
swiftie13 Posted November 28, 2017 Author Posted November 28, 2017 42 minutes ago, Fa1x intelectual said: PUBLISH POKITAURUS' CRITIQUES! I’m at my internship, sorry I’m a busy bitch ladies!
swiftie13 Posted November 28, 2017 Author Posted November 28, 2017 36 minutes ago, Dessy Fenix said: Tbh the designs are cute, very simple and fun to read. But I'm not really a big fan. You’re cancelled indefinitely!
swiftie13 Posted November 28, 2017 Author Posted November 28, 2017 38 minutes ago, Dessy Fenix said: Not my last minute addition of "scent" winning over the judges. What kind of unforeseen impact. And yall don't want to smell your lover on his sweater that you're wearing? Why is that weird if it reminds you of ha? I hope she smells my perfume.mp3
poki Posted November 28, 2017 Posted November 28, 2017 (edited) I had an ex girlfriend who LOVED how I smell, especially if I sweat so she always wanted my dirty shirts after a summer day nnn. One time when I was really sweaty when I was with her (it was a rural place that I lived at) she convinced me to take off my shirt and she would lust all over the smell I left on it. Britney "Perfume" her impact. My time limit today was a little limited so I apologize for some reviews being shorter than others. Edited November 28, 2017 by PoKiTaurus
Fa1x intelectual Posted November 28, 2017 Posted November 28, 2017 (edited) The graphix for the logo of this season reminds me of the Orient Edited November 28, 2017 by Fa1x intelectual
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