ATRL Moderator feelslikeadream Posted September 1, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted September 1, 2017 Just now, Lémur said: wow @ you ignoring my post when I said I missed you but quoting me now, you're a piece of **** Oh, I missed that. Must have gotten it when I was on mobile and then lost it But do you even need a response to know how I miss you? You should know by all the snaps I send you!
Jackson Posted September 1, 2017 Author Posted September 1, 2017 3 minutes ago, Lémur said: om glkasdfjdsklfakls i have not done anything yet Get to werk bitch
SaintWest Posted September 1, 2017 Posted September 1, 2017 3 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: you little ****ers ignored it last time so i'm pasting again and i'm holding you all at gunpoint until you tell me i did a good job didnt ask
skwonderfactory Posted September 1, 2017 Posted September 1, 2017 I haven't done anything because I completely forgot round 2 started. I'm sick and going to sleep soon to see if I can have energy for work tomorrow. Count me out I guess!
Jackson Posted September 1, 2017 Author Posted September 1, 2017 2 minutes ago, Speezy said: @Jackson I never hit or miss, know I always come through OK but where's your song
Glassmouth Posted September 1, 2017 Posted September 1, 2017 1 minute ago, Gastrodonatella said: you little ****ers ignored it last time so i'm pasting again and i'm holding you all at gunpoint until you tell me i did a good job serving random **** page add teas
Nait Phoenix Posted September 1, 2017 Posted September 1, 2017 Just now, Gastrodonatella said: you little ****ers ignored it last time so i'm pasting again and i'm holding you all at gunpoint until you tell me i did a good job You did a good job, Alex Negrea!
Glassmouth Posted September 1, 2017 Posted September 1, 2017 3 minutes ago, Glassmouth said: UNICORN BLOOD Reveal hidden contents v1 I'm sure, I can tell, I know you're not well No love, you just see life turning gray It might be enough to know that your blood Will be on the rocks painting rainbows v2 Your skull will crack, there'll no turning back It's true, Unicorn friend You do what you do, it's all up to you But know ashes will cover up my sun too prechorus Before magic is gone Before all it takes it's a step forward Think of what it can be chorus Your Unicorn blood Your misfit teenaged soul Might be the only thing you've got Think beforehand There's help for your health Just know there's more to life than this postchorus I know you get scared For what they can say Think of your unicorn, unicorn blood v3 Despite all our pain, I've stayed and I've prayed For you to finally, finally see through This cliff is so high, the edge captures sighs Imagine the landscape covered by your loins v4 There's not such thing as lifetime hurricanes These thoughts could drown you, they get inside you Before shattering the skin, before you give in Just know all storms pass away prechorus Before magic is gone Before all it takes it's a step forward Think of what it can be chorus Your Unicorn Blood Your misfit teenaged soul Might be the only thing you've got Think beforehand There's help for your health Just know there's more to life than this postchorus I know you get scared For what they can say Think of your unicorn, unicorn blood bridge I look at the bright side You see all in dark The lights can't turn on by themselves I know it feels you don't fit And that loving them hits But it's okay to not be the same outro I know you get scared Think of your unicorn, unicorn blood I know it's not an easy way Think of your unicorn, unicorn blood I know it can be hard to live with yourself Think of your unicorn, unicorn blood I'll be there for you just Think of your unicorn, unicorn blood EXPLANATION The song is about suicide, about a guy that is dealing with his homosexuality and that wants to kill himself, I used a unicorn because of how commonly attached with homosexuality they are (almost as a joke) and also I used the kind of mystical and 'rare' quality of unicorns in literature to represent how 'unique' this person is, the song is sang by the 'positive' side of his mind, like.. as someone who tried to kill himself because of not being accepting of himself and heard that 'positive' voice inside to avoid going 'in' I know these are the things that I heard, it's kind of a wake up call, as if this positive voice was like ''bitch, you're a UNICORN, you're UNIQUE, you're ONE OF A KIND, things get better!'' (lol), I intended the song to be cheesy but I also wanted to create a morbid but almost satirical atmosphere, like, the song is about unicorns that kill themselves, I guess that's pretty morbid. don't ignore iT, i wanna get dragged
touya kinomoto Posted September 1, 2017 Posted September 1, 2017 I said I'll try to send my entry before 12mn but I was a few minutes late. @Jackson did you receive it?
Hug Posted September 1, 2017 Posted September 1, 2017 So the story of Tu'er Shen is actually a simple one. He was a man who loved another man, and because it was deemed a crime, he got killed. The gods of the Underworld decided that because his crime was one of love, they would make him the god of homosexual men, so he could protect them and help them find love. I really loved this concept when I was doing research, so that's why I went with it despite it being a bit of an unknown one. Spoiler [verse] It’s a scary thought to know that I could die for love Even worse yet to know it’s out of my control It’s a lonely world for me to see and not to touch Even worse yet for me to know that I’m a fool [pre-chorus] To love a man’s to hate the gods My beating chest goes on and on To love a man’s to hate the gods So why is he the one I want? [chorus] He’s a beautiful man I’ll never have So I look on from afar He’s a beautiful man I’ll never have It’s a crime by rule of law And if somehow my secret got out It’ll be the death of me He’s a beautiful man I’ll never have So I look on from afar [verse 2] It’s a scary thought to know that I will die for love Even worse yet to know it’s out of my control I’ll be beaten ‘til my heart stops beating for his touch Even worse yet for me...I know I was a fool [pre-chorus] To love a man’s to hate the gods My punishment will never stop To love a man’s to hate the gods ...I’m a victim of my heart [chorus] He’s a beautiful man who took my heart And he crushed it into dust He’s a beautiful man who took my heart And I bled because I loved If I’m somehow remembered at all I pray it’s for my love He’s a beautiful man who took my heart And he crushed it into dust [bridge] As I stood before the gods They deemed that I’d done nothing wrong Reborn, I live to watch above And safeguard men who dare to love [outro] Although my heart no longer beats The love I felt still stands For every man who just like me Found love in another man My life was just a sacrifice So others won’t be harmed Now every man who’s just like me Won’t fear their beating heart
Jackson Posted September 1, 2017 Author Posted September 1, 2017 Just now, KatyCatPH said: I said I'll try to send my entry before 12mn but I was a few minutes late. @Jackson did you receive it? Yes, thank you
Speezy Posted September 1, 2017 Posted September 1, 2017 6 minutes ago, Jackson said: OK but where's your song Gonna be on your doorstep like UPS, Don't send it back
Hug Posted September 1, 2017 Posted September 1, 2017 10 minutes ago, Glassmouth said: UNICORN BLOOD Hide contents v1 I'm sure, I can tell, I know you're not well No love, you just see life turning gray It might be enough to know that your blood Will be on the rocks painting rainbows v2 Your skull will crack, there'll no turning back It's true, Unicorn friend You do what you do, it's all up to you But know ashes will cover up my sun too prechorus Before magic is gone Before all it takes it's a step forward Think of what it can be chorus Your Unicorn blood Your misfit teenaged soul Might be the only thing you've got Think beforehand There's help for your health Just know there's more to life than this postchorus I know you get scared For what they can say Think of your unicorn, unicorn blood v3 Despite all our pain, I've stayed and I've prayed For you to finally, finally see through This cliff is so high, the edge captures sighs Imagine the landscape covered by your loins v4 There's not such thing as lifetime hurricanes These thoughts could drown you, they get inside you Before shattering the skin, before you give in Just know all storms pass away prechorus Before magic is gone Before all it takes it's a step forward Think of what it can be chorus Your Unicorn Blood Your misfit teenaged soul Might be the only thing you've got Think beforehand There's help for your health Just know there's more to life than this postchorus I know you get scared For what they can say Think of your unicorn, unicorn blood bridge I look at the bright side You see all in dark The lights can't turn on by themselves I know it feels you don't fit And that loving them hits But it's okay to not be the same outro I know you get scared Think of your unicorn, unicorn blood I know it's not an easy way Think of your unicorn, unicorn blood I know it can be hard to live with yourself Think of your unicorn, unicorn blood I'll be there for you just Think of your unicorn, unicorn blood EXPLANATION The song is about suicide, about a guy that is dealing with his homosexuality and that wants to kill himself, I used a unicorn because of how commonly attached with homosexuality they are (almost as a joke) and also I used the kind of mystical and 'rare' quality of unicorns in literature to represent how 'unique' this person is, the song is sang by the 'positive' side of his mind, like.. as someone who tried to kill himself because of not being accepting of himself and heard that 'positive' voice inside to avoid going 'in' I know these are the things that I heard, it's kind of a wake up call, as if this positive voice was like ''bitch, you're a UNICORN, you're UNIQUE, you're ONE OF A KIND, things get better!'' (lol), I intended the song to be cheesy but I also wanted to create a morbid but almost satirical atmosphere, like, the song is about unicorns that kill themselves, I guess that's pretty morbid. Two things I wanted to say is...I was lost reading your song prior to reading your explanation, and I'm still not completely getting it, but I can see how you could say the song is what it is. Also, there were some easy rhymes here that felt a bit...too easy? I don't know. I love the idea of having the magical serene imagery juxtaposed with the morbid reality of what you're portraying, though!
Glassmouth Posted September 1, 2017 Posted September 1, 2017 1 minute ago, Hug said: Two things I wanted to say is...I was lost reading your song prior to reading your explanation, and I'm still not completely getting it, but I can see how you could say the song is what it is. Also, there were some easy rhymes here that felt a bit...too easy? I don't know. I love the idea of having the magical serene imagery juxtaposed with the morbid reality of what you're portraying, though! I tried to not be too 'on-the-nose' with the whole ''i'm gay and i wanna kms'' as always i failed thank u! my little pony is shook
touya kinomoto Posted September 1, 2017 Posted September 1, 2017 9 minutes ago, Hug said: So the story of Tu'er Shen is actually a simple one. He was a man who loved another man, and because it was deemed a crime, he got killed. The gods of the Underworld decided that because his crime was one of love, they would make him the god of homosexual men, so he could protect them and help them find love. I really loved this concept when I was doing research, so that's why I went with it despite it being a bit of an unknown one. Reveal hidden contents [verse] It’s a scary thought to know that I could die for love Even worse yet to know it’s out of my control It’s a lonely world for me to see and not to touch Even worse yet for me to know that I’m a fool [pre-chorus] To love a man’s to hate the gods My beating chest goes on and on To love a man’s to hate the gods So why is he the one I want? [chorus] He’s a beautiful man I’ll never have So I look on from afar He’s a beautiful man I’ll never have It’s a crime by rule of law And if somehow my secret got out It’ll be the death of me He’s a beautiful man I’ll never have So I look on from afar [verse 2] It’s a scary thought to know that I will die for love Even worse yet to know it’s out of my control I’ll be beaten ‘til my heart stops beating for his touch Even worse yet for me...I know I was a fool [pre-chorus] To love a man’s to hate the gods My punishment will never stop To love a man’s to hate the gods ...I’m a victim of my heart [chorus] He’s a beautiful man who took my heart And he crushed it into dust He’s a beautiful man who took my heart And I bled because I loved If I’m somehow remembered at all I pray it’s for my love He’s a beautiful man who took my heart And he crushed it into dust [bridge] As I stood before the gods They deemed that I’d done nothing wrong Reborn, I live to watch above And safeguard men who dare to love [outro] Although my heart no longer beats The love I felt still stands For every man who just like me Found love in another man My life was just a sacrifice So others won’t be harmed Now every man who’s just like me Won’t fear their beating heart Oh wow oh wow.gif Serving Tiziano! Kworb will be proud!
Glassmouth Posted September 1, 2017 Posted September 1, 2017 11 minutes ago, Hug said: So the story of Tu'er Shen is actually a simple one. He was a man who loved another man, and because it was deemed a crime, he got killed. The gods of the Underworld decided that because his crime was one of love, they would make him the god of homosexual men, so he could protect them and help them find love. I really loved this concept when I was doing research, so that's why I went with it despite it being a bit of an unknown one. Reveal hidden contents [verse] It’s a scary thought to know that I could die for love Even worse yet to know it’s out of my control It’s a lonely world for me to see and not to touch Even worse yet for me to know that I’m a fool [pre-chorus] To love a man’s to hate the gods My beating chest goes on and on To love a man’s to hate the gods So why is he the one I want? [chorus] He’s a beautiful man I’ll never have So I look on from afar He’s a beautiful man I’ll never have It’s a crime by rule of law And if somehow my secret got out It’ll be the death of me He’s a beautiful man I’ll never have So I look on from afar [verse 2] It’s a scary thought to know that I will die for love Even worse yet to know it’s out of my control I’ll be beaten ‘til my heart stops beating for his touch Even worse yet for me...I know I was a fool [pre-chorus] To love a man’s to hate the gods My punishment will never stop To love a man’s to hate the gods ...I’m a victim of my heart [chorus] He’s a beautiful man who took my heart And he crushed it into dust He’s a beautiful man who took my heart And I bled because I loved If I’m somehow remembered at all I pray it’s for my love He’s a beautiful man who took my heart And he crushed it into dust [bridge] As I stood before the gods They deemed that I’d done nothing wrong Reborn, I live to watch above And safeguard men who dare to love [outro] Although my heart no longer beats The love I felt still stands For every man who just like me Found love in another man My life was just a sacrifice So others won’t be harmed Now every man who’s just like me Won’t fear their beating heart oh my god the story is so cute, my gay unicorn is crying in the club Quote He’s a beautiful man I’ll never have So I look on from afar He’s a beautiful man I’ll never have It’s a crime by rule of law
Hug Posted September 1, 2017 Posted September 1, 2017 3 minutes ago, KatyCatPH said: Oh wow oh wow.gif Serving Tiziano! Kworb will be proud! 2 minutes ago, Glassmouth said: oh my god the story is so cute, my gay unicorn is crying in the club Thanks y'all
poki Posted September 1, 2017 Posted September 1, 2017 My song is inspired by Taurus, my zodiac sign, and Aphrodite/Venus, which controls Taurus according to Astrology. The two are actually quite contradicting in the sense that Aphrodite is the god of love and lust, yet Taurus is known for a degree of loyalty. When you think Taurus, you pretty much never think about cheating. So by combining art with pop, I have created the song Promise Ring. A song that creates a path between cheating, and staying loyal to the one you promised your love to. So the guy ends up in a club, making out with some random chick, but he is saving his virginity for the one who promised his love to. It's very contradicting in the sense that he's cheating, but he's still loyal to a certain degree. Tbh to me it sounds like an Artpop reject nnn I listened to it a lot this week and now, 4 years later...I totally get her concept with the album. I actually really like it. Also didn't make an artwork, cause on mobile lol. So anyways, feel free to drag my song: PoKiTaurus - Promise Ring Chorus Intro: Last night we were causing a scene You don’t wanna know inside what I’ve been Don’t worry baby I’m still clean So I will not take off my promise ring Verse 1: It started as just a party Then it got so naughty Think I had something in my drink Then I met an old friend Little chit chat and how you been You should have seen her wink Pre Chorus: You know what they say about Taurus yes? Aphrodite lives in all her men So planet Venus I will represent It’s going to be quite the event Chorus: Last night we were causing a scene And no I haven’t been inside anything Don’t worry baby I’m still clean So I will not take off my promise ring I can’t control what I’m feeling Just some kissing not a sexual thing Don’t worry baby I’m still clean So I will not take off my promise ring Verse 2: And now you say that you’re ready C’mon now let’s go crazy Just remember what I told you There’s one thing I won’t do [Pre Chorus] [Chorus] Bridge: I won’t take it off Cause we never got it on I just had some fun I’m still saving for the one [Chorus]
Glassmouth Posted September 1, 2017 Posted September 1, 2017 2 minutes ago, PoKiTaurus said: My song is inspired by Taurus, my zodiac sign, and Aphrodite/Venus, which controls Taurus according to Astrology. The two are actually quite contradicting in the sense that Aphrodite is the god of love and lust, yet Taurus is known for a degree of loyalty. When you think Taurus, you pretty much never think about cheating. So by combining art with pop, I have created the song Promise Ring. A song that creates a path between cheating, and staying loyal to the one you promised your love to. So the guy ends up in a club, making out with some random chick, but he is saving his virginity for the one who promised his love to. It's very contradicting in the sense that he's cheating, but he's still loyal to a certain degree. Tbh to me it sounds like an Artpop reject nnn I listened to it a lot this week and now, 4 years later...I totally get her concept with the album. I actually really like it. Also didn't make an artwork, cause on mobile lol. So anyways, feel free to drag my song: PoKiTaurus - Promise Ring Reveal hidden contents Chorus Intro: Last night we were causing a sceneYou don’t wanna know inside what I’ve beenDon’t worry baby I’m still cleanSo I will not take off my promise ring Verse 1: It started as just a partyThen it got so naughtyThink I had something in my drinkThen I met an old friendLittle chit chat and how you beenYou should have seen her wink Pre Chorus: You know what they say about Taurus yes?Aphrodite lives in all her menSo planet Venus I will representIt’s going to be quite the event Chorus: Last night we were causing a sceneAnd no I haven’t been inside anythingDon’t worry baby I’m still cleanSo I will not take off my promise ring I can’t control what I’m feelingJust some kissing not a sexual thingDon’t worry baby I’m still cleanSo I will not take off my promise ring Verse 2: And now you say that you’re readyC’mon now let’s go crazyJust remember what I told youThere’s one thing I won’t do[Pre Chorus] [Chorus] Bridge: I won’t take it offCause we never got it onI just had some funI’m still saving for the one[Chorus] literally ARTPOP, I can imagine a Sexxx Dreams like instrumental reading the song the explanation was confusing as hell but the song isn't so that's great cause I would've been really like ''wut'' if your song was as confusing the explanation also: Quote There’s one thing I won’t do bareback? Quote I can’t control what I’m feeling Just some kissing not a sexual thing Don’t worry baby I’m still clean So I will not take off my promise ring why is this me
ATRL Moderator feelslikeadream Posted September 1, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted September 1, 2017 44 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: you little ****ers ignored it last time so i'm pasting again and i'm holding you all at gunpoint until you tell me i did a good job A little tacky tbh. Tu'er Shen outsold.
touya kinomoto Posted September 1, 2017 Posted September 1, 2017 I am a big Greek mythology geek so I was very happy when I found out we are doing cryptozoology/mythology/folklore for this round. I have a lot of mythological stories that I wanted to use but I eventually decided to use the gay love story of Zephyros, Hyacinthus and Apollo. Hyacinthus is a very handsome Spartan prince that he got the admiration of not one but two gods. Hyacinthus was closer to Apollo which made Zephyros jealous which pushed him to use his powers and kill Hyacinthus. So my song basically discusses Zephyros' grief and remorse. I hope you like it. If you would drag it, kindly do so with constructive comments. Thank you. Spoiler ZEPHYR'S SONG [VERSE 1] Oh my beloved Spartan prince So fair, so strong, the envy of many Even gods got down on their knees Even I fell for your unmatched beauty Oh my beloved Spartan prince I could only adore you from afar For the Sun God claimed you were his I stayed silent even though it was unfair [PRE-CHORUS 1] But resentment got the best of me All my eyes could saw was green with envy [CHORUS] I didn't mean to hurt you, my flower But jealousy has driven me blindly mad Rage consumed me, made me a murderer Though I might have eluded Apollo's wrath Losing you's a punishment worse than death [VERSE 2] Oh my beloved Spartan prince Why did I let love cloud my sanity? I could blame my master for this But it was I who caused this tragedy [PRE-CHORUS 2] Now guilt and grief got the best of me All my eyes could see are tears falling [CHORUS] I didn't mean to hurt you, my flower But jealousy has driven me blindly mad Rage consumed me, made me a murderer Though I might have eluded Apollo's wrath Losing you's a punishment worse than death [BRIDGE] Mortals may forget our tragic story But the pain will live in me for eternity Every west wind wail and every spring rain It will be me begging to see you again [OUTRO] Because losing you is a punishment worse than death
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