Hug Posted August 27, 2017 Posted August 27, 2017 I'd actually have no problem with non-entrants submitting a comeback considering that everyone who has signed up also has a chance to do the comeback.
Jackson Posted August 27, 2017 Author Posted August 27, 2017 6 minutes ago, Hug said: I'd actually have no problem with non-entrants submitting a comeback considering that everyone who has signed up also has a chance to do the comeback. And I need to boost the ratings somehow n
Jackson Posted August 27, 2017 Author Posted August 27, 2017 1 minute ago, EmojiClothes said: Wow I should've signed up :( Just now, Corsola said: do the comeback r2 +1
EmojiClothes Posted August 27, 2017 Posted August 27, 2017 1 minute ago, Corsola said: do the comeback r2 Just now, Jackson said: +1 Oh I thought it was only for people who registered rise up lotus rise
Hug Posted August 27, 2017 Posted August 27, 2017 Okay, since Aurora isn't here, I will be accepting the award in his place. This is my award-winning entry. Ms. Andry by Hug Spoiler [verse] I’m a gun, safety off I’m a shot, on the rocks Dressed to kill, for a price Not the type, for nine-to-fives I’m a blade, cold and sharp Swift and harsh, leave a mark Femme fatale, cherry lips Blow a kiss, scarlet bitch [hook] This lady Rolls inside a Royce All the boys want a ride The rush of lust that’s in my voice All the boys want a night This lady dressed in scarlet red Makes the men lose their minds Said I’ll love him ‘til the death Scarlet bitch doesn’t lie [chorus] I’m a vixen with a hitlist There’s a bounty for heads An assassin with a passion For the murder of men I’m a killer, I’m a villain But I’m never a pawn Always silent in the moonlight Then I leave in the dawn
mxtthewdelrey Posted August 27, 2017 Posted August 27, 2017 Just now, Hug said: All the boys want a ride What was the inspiration behind this line?
Hug Posted August 27, 2017 Posted August 27, 2017 Just now, mxtthewdelrey said: What was the inspiration behind this line? She's actually an Uber driver, and all the boys want a ride because they have places to be.
Denim Posted August 28, 2017 Posted August 28, 2017 aghhhh who are these peopleeee thankfully kendrick will save us!
Hug Posted August 28, 2017 Posted August 28, 2017 Let's use a non-laggy forum for our discussions, like https://www.dubtrack.fm/join/platinumhitlers
mxtthewdelrey Posted August 28, 2017 Posted August 28, 2017 Just now, Hug said: She's actually an Uber driver, and all the boys want a ride because they have places to be. She's doing good business! We love a strong successful woman
UFO Posted August 28, 2017 Posted August 28, 2017 (edited) Black Sun Inspiration: No Sun on the Horizon - ceremonials Spoiler VERSE In the morning All the way into the afternoon I was falling Kept falling in all your ocean blue Your source of life I grew all these flowers just for you I shine brightly Knowing you can't live without me too I start dimming As evening dies, night hides me from you In her shadow I'm shining but you haven't a clue With her moonlight She steals my love, my entire world As you break my universal trust CHORUS I'm barely shining I'm trying to give you light But I'm void of all your love I lose you in the nighttime Your horizon disappears A world so out of my reach All my efforts are eclipsed The world starts to freeze And you'd rather have the moon Cause I'm a black sun And you'd rather have the moon Cause I'm now a black sun BRIDGE In the past light years, you revolved around my sun But once my light had faded You were with her bright side every night I was gone You call me crazy, that I have the ocean blues Why wouldn't I when I can't forget I need you? OUTRO But you'd rather have the moon But you'd rather love the moon Than a black sun in the dark I'm in the dark Edited August 28, 2017 by UFO
ausdaniel Posted August 28, 2017 Posted August 28, 2017 How do I already know Im safe when I only got feedback from 1 judge?
Mezik Posted August 28, 2017 Posted August 28, 2017 How many contestants get eliminated next round? I feel like I just made it, and want to do my best to make sure I'm very safe next round.
ultraviolence.xx Posted August 28, 2017 Posted August 28, 2017 uvie, "timepiece" • a top 10 hit • Spoiler -verse 1- you shimmer in the golden sun your rosebud lips, your dancing tongue your eyes meet mine, my stomach soars as i say i've never loved before but i dream of you in darkened hours i lay you down among the flowers and trace your outlines with my hands i hold it back, i'll never tell i never can -prechorus- i feel so shy, release a sigh and wonder why i falsify i want to hide, i want to lie but we're alive on borrowed time -chorus- you are my timepiece i will keep you at my sleeve you will be here to fill my head with all the things i have not said -verse 2- you're bright as fire beneath the moon your heat is harsh in early june i lean in close to whisper truths but shy away before i do -prechorus- i'm petrified, i want to lie but we're alive on borrowed time -chorus (ext.)- you are my timepiece i will keep you at my sleeve you will be here to fill my head with all the things i have not said you are golden beneath the sun no, i'm not fooling anyone i will fall, i will come undone if i leave all these words unsung -bridge- will you hear me? do you feel this fire? i am done waiting for you to read between the lines -outro- i say i've never loved before you see through me, a half-closed door your eyes meet mine, my stomach soars you know i'm lying—you ask what for
poki Posted August 28, 2017 Posted August 28, 2017 6 minutes ago, Mezik said: How many contestants get eliminated next round? I feel like I just made it, and want to do my best to make sure I'm very safe next round. A total of only 4 more eliminations throughout the entire season, each part having only 1 elimination. So it's gonna be far less stressful than this round
Jackson Posted August 28, 2017 Author Posted August 28, 2017 12 minutes ago, ausdaniel said: How do I already know Im safe when I only got feedback from 1 judge? the rest of the reviews will come out tonight and tomorrow, the judges are just flopping
Mezik Posted August 28, 2017 Posted August 28, 2017 7 minutes ago, PoKiTaurus said: A total of only 4 more eliminations throughout the entire season, each part having only 1 elimination. So it's gonna be far less stressful than this round Wait so there's only 4 more rounds this entire season? I thought they eliminate until there's only 4/5 contestants left.
poki Posted August 28, 2017 Posted August 28, 2017 4 minutes ago, Mezik said: Wait so there's only 4 more rounds this entire season? I thought they eliminate until there's only 4/5 contestants left. Oh there's gonna be more than 4 rounds, but not every round will have an elimination. I guess whoever preformed the worst on a set of challenges will get eliminated. btw we have a fun dubtrack room if you wanna join us https://www.dubtrack.fm/join/platinumhitlers
Jackson Posted August 28, 2017 Author Posted August 28, 2017 17 minutes ago, Mezik said: Wait so there's only 4 more rounds this entire season? I thought they eliminate until there's only 4/5 contestants left. I'm doing things a littel different this season. Eliminations will only be held once every 3 rounds based on an average of the 3 rounds basically.
ICEY Posted August 28, 2017 Posted August 28, 2017 2 hours ago, Jackson said: @ICEY - Meet You in Space I was about to drag you for “guaranty”, but after a quick google I learned that it’s actually an acceptable, albeit defunct variant of “guarantee”. You had the start of some good imagery here. I would have loved to see something a little more descriptive than “deep dark seas”, for example. Typically, I’d try to avoid doubling up on adjectives to describe one noun. Try to find one, more descriptive, possibly longer word if you’re trying to full up space. This wasn’t a bad debut at all, though. Your sense of meter was good for the most part and I could possibly see some potential in you. Thanks so much for the feedback !! So glad I'm safe, I'm Canadian haha and that's how I learned to spell it lol
Mezik Posted August 28, 2017 Posted August 28, 2017 13 minutes ago, PoKiTaurus said: Oh there's gonna be more than 4 rounds, but not every round will have an elimination. I guess whoever preformed the worst on a set of challenges will get eliminated. btw we have a fun dubtrack room if you wanna join us https://www.dubtrack.fm/join/platinumhitlers What's dubtrack?
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