tournament PLATINUM HIT 11▴ congratulations aurora ♛

[Denim]

slay sam

[Hug]

I'd actually have no problem with non-entrants submitting a comeback considering that everyone who has signed up also has a chance to do the comeback.  

[Speezy]

I'm safe. Yaaaaasssss

[Jackson]

6 minutes ago, Hug said:

I'd actually have no problem with non-entrants submitting a comeback considering that everyone who has signed up also has a chance to do the comeback.  

And I need to boost the ratings somehow n

[EmojiClothes]

Wow I should've signed up :(

[Jackson]

1 minute ago, EmojiClothes said:

Wow I should've signed up :(

 

Just now, Corsola said:

do the comeback r2 

+1

[EmojiClothes]

1 minute ago, Corsola said:

do the comeback r2 

 

Just now, Jackson said:

 

+1

Oh I thought it was only for people who registered

 

 

rise up lotus rise

[Hug]

Okay, since Aurora isn't here, I will be accepting the award in his place. This is my award-winning entry.

 

Ms. Andry

by Hug

 

Spoiler

 

[verse]

I’m a gun, safety off

I’m a shot, on the rocks

Dressed to kill, for a price

Not the type, for nine-to-fives

 

I’m a blade, cold and sharp

Swift and harsh, leave a mark

Femme fatale, cherry lips

Blow a kiss, scarlet bitch

 

[hook]

This lady Rolls inside a Royce

All the boys want a ride

The rush of lust that’s in my voice

All the boys want a night

 

This lady dressed in scarlet red

Makes the men lose their minds

Said I’ll love him ‘til the death

Scarlet bitch doesn’t lie

 

[chorus]

I’m a vixen with a hitlist

There’s a bounty for heads

An assassin with a passion

For the murder of men

 

I’m a killer, I’m a villain

But I’m never a pawn

Always silent in the moonlight

Then I leave in the dawn

 

 

[mxtthewdelrey]

Just now, Hug said:

All the boys want a ride

What was the inspiration behind this line?

[Hug]

Just now, mxtthewdelrey said:

What was the inspiration behind this line?

She's actually an Uber driver, and all the boys want a ride because they have places to be.

[Denim]

aghhhh who are these peopleeee

 

thankfully kendrick will save us!

[Hug]

Let's use a non-laggy forum for our discussions, like https://www.dubtrack.fm/join/platinumhitlers

[mxtthewdelrey]

Just now, Hug said:

She's actually an Uber driver, and all the boys want a ride because they have places to be.

She's doing good business! We love a strong successful woman

[Denim]

can't wait for round 2!

[UFO]

Black Sun

Inspiration:

No Sun on the Horizon - ceremonials

 

 

Spoiler

 

VERSE

In the morning

All the way into the afternoon

I was falling

Kept falling in all your ocean blue 

 

Your source of life

I grew all these flowers just for you

I shine brightly

Knowing you can't live without me too

 

I start dimming 

As evening dies, night hides me from you

In her shadow

I'm shining but you haven't a clue

 

With her moonlight

She steals my love, my entire world

As you break my universal trust

 

CHORUS

I'm barely shining 

I'm trying to give you light 

But I'm void of all your love 

I lose you in the nighttime

Your horizon disappears

A world so out of my reach

All my efforts are eclipsed

The world starts to freeze 

And you'd rather have the moon

Cause I'm a black sun 

And you'd rather have the moon

Cause I'm now a black sun

 

BRIDGE

In the past light years, you revolved around my sun

But once my light had faded

You were with her bright side every night I was gone

You call me crazy, that I have the ocean blues

Why wouldn't I when I can't forget I need you?

 

OUTRO

But you'd rather have the moon

But you'd rather love the moon

Than a black sun in the dark

I'm in the dark

 

 

Edited August 28, 2017 by UFO

[ausdaniel]

How do I already know Im safe when I only got feedback from 1 judge?

[Mezik]

How many contestants get eliminated next round? I feel like I just made it, and want to do my best to make sure I'm very safe next round.  

[ultraviolence.xx]

 

uvie, "timepiece"

• a top 10 hit •

 

Spoiler

-verse 1-

you shimmer in the golden sun

your rosebud lips, your dancing tongue

your eyes meet mine, my stomach soars

as i say i've never loved before

 

but i dream of you in darkened hours

i lay you down among the flowers

and trace your outlines with my hands

i hold it back, i'll never tell

               i never can

 

-prechorus-

i feel so shy, release a sigh

and wonder why i falsify

i want to hide, i want to lie

but we're alive on borrowed time

 

-chorus-

you are my timepiece

i will keep you at my sleeve

you will be here to fill my head

with all the things i have not said

 

-verse 2-

you're bright as fire beneath the moon

your heat is harsh in early june

i lean in close to whisper truths

but shy away before i do

 

-prechorus-

i'm petrified, i want to lie

but we're alive on borrowed time

 

-chorus (ext.)-

you are my timepiece

i will keep you at my sleeve

you will be here to fill my head

with all the things i have not said

 

you are golden beneath the sun

no, i'm not fooling anyone

i will fall, i will come undone

if i leave all these words unsung

 

-bridge-

will you hear me? do you feel this fire?

i am done waiting for you to read between the lines

 

-outro-

i say i've never loved before

you see through me, a half-closed door

your eyes meet mine, my stomach soars

you know i'm lying—you ask what for

 

[poki]

6 minutes ago, Mezik said:

How many contestants get eliminated next round? I feel like I just made it, and want to do my best to make sure I'm very safe next round.  

A total of only 4 more eliminations throughout the entire season, each part having only 1 elimination. 

 

So it's gonna be far less stressful than this round 

[Jackson]

12 minutes ago, ausdaniel said:

How do I already know Im safe when I only got feedback from 1 judge?

the rest of the reviews will come out tonight and tomorrow, the judges are just flopping

[Mezik]

7 minutes ago, PoKiTaurus said:

A total of only 4 more eliminations throughout the entire season, each part having only 1 elimination. 

 

So it's gonna be far less stressful than this round 

Wait so there's only 4 more rounds this entire season? I thought they eliminate until there's only 4/5 contestants left. 

[poki]

4 minutes ago, Mezik said:

Wait so there's only 4 more rounds this entire season? I thought they eliminate until there's only 4/5 contestants left. 

Oh there's gonna be more than 4 rounds, but not every round will have an elimination. 

 

I guess whoever preformed the worst on a set of challenges will get eliminated.

 

btw we have a fun dubtrack room if you wanna join us 

https://www.dubtrack.fm/join/platinumhitlers

[Jackson]

17 minutes ago, Mezik said:

Wait so there's only 4 more rounds this entire season? I thought they eliminate until there's only 4/5 contestants left. 

I'm doing things a littel different this season. Eliminations will only be held once every 3 rounds based on an average of the 3 rounds basically. 

[ICEY]

2 hours ago, Jackson said:

@ICEY - Meet You in Space

I was about to drag you for “guaranty”, but after a quick google I learned that it’s actually an acceptable, albeit defunct variant of “guarantee”. You had the start of some good imagery here. I would have loved to see something a little more descriptive than “deep dark seas”, for example. Typically, I’d try to avoid doubling up on adjectives to describe one noun. Try to find one, more descriptive, possibly longer word if you’re trying to full up space. This wasn’t a bad debut at all, though. Your sense of meter was good for the most part and I could possibly see some potential in you.

Thanks so much for the feedback !! So glad I'm safe, I'm Canadian haha and that's how I learned to spell it lol 

[Mezik]

13 minutes ago, PoKiTaurus said:

Oh there's gonna be more than 4 rounds, but not every round will have an elimination. 

 

I guess whoever preformed the worst on a set of challenges will get eliminated.

 

btw we have a fun dubtrack room if you wanna join us 

https://www.dubtrack.fm/join/platinumhitlers

What's dubtrack?