tournament PLATINUM HIT 11▴ congratulations aurora ♛

[Truffle.]

4 minutes ago, ceremonials said:

this areola copying

Spoiler

Verse 1

Wanna write a beautiful song?

Wanna write down all of your thoughts?

None of these things are offered by Platinum Hit

Hosted by Jack, ORAL, 8th and 13Swift

Verse 2

Here you will find unoriginal ideas

That test our patience time and time again

If you want to get bullied by the judges

Or get your kii’s then Platinum Hit is your friend

Rap Verse

Ellie? Ellie? This bitch stans for Kelly

When will she stop being pregnant with the belly?

Jackson acts like a dom daddy but he fronts for the press

Behind the scenes he stans Katy and wears his mother’s dress

8th’s obsession with a ying yang teddy bear is kind of selfish

Panda’s are endangered sis, go get yourself a new fetish

Swiftie13 stans Taylor, no shady remark needed

Katy ended that bitch when she took to her phone and tweeted

“Watch out for the Regina George in sheep’s clothing,”

Ever since that day Swiftie13 is a self-loathing

(GAY) …

Hook

A place where you can bond over your nonexistent sex life (PLATINUM HIT)

A thread that wasn’t nominated despite 13K replies (PLATINUM MISS)

A challenge which was created solely for pissing you off (PLATINUM PISS)

BeyAdmired already dropped out because his songs were too soft (PLATINUM ****)

Unlike his faves Adele & Bey, the charts; he couldn’t top (PLATINUM HISSY FIT)

Outro

If you sign up for Platinum Hit, the judges will send you nudes

So just submit your crap song then sit back and expose the truth 

 

i thought this was so good skskdnnsjsjc

[Glassmouth]

1 hour ago, ceremonials said:

It wasnt in the Google Doc, so Jackson knows, he just hasn't told me bc he's at work rn.

 

I wanna say @Glassmouth for some reason  

me what 

 

[ceremonials]

6 minutes ago, Truffle. said:

  Reveal hidden contents

Verse 1

Wanna write a beautiful song?

Wanna write down all of your thoughts?

None of these things are offered by Platinum Hit

Hosted by Jack, ORAL, 8th and 13Swift

Verse 2

Here you will find unoriginal ideas

That test our patience time and time again

If you want to get bullied by the judges

Or get your kii’s then Platinum Hit is your friend

Rap Verse

Ellie? Ellie? This bitch stans for Kelly

When will she stop being pregnant with the belly?

Jackson acts like a dom daddy but he fronts for the press

Behind the scenes he stans Katy and wears his mother’s dress

8th’s obsession with a ying yang teddy bear is kind of selfish

Panda’s are endangered sis, go get yourself a new fetish

Swiftie13 stans Taylor, no shady remark needed

Katy ended that bitch when she took to her phone and tweeted

“Watch out for the Regina George in sheep’s clothing,”

Ever since that day Swiftie13 is a self-loathing

(GAY) …

Hook

A place where you can bond over your nonexistent sex life (PLATINUM HIT)

A thread that wasn’t nominated despite 13K replies (PLATINUM MISS)

A challenge which was created solely for pissing you off (PLATINUM PISS)

BeyAdmired already dropped out because his songs were too soft (PLATINUM ****)

Unlike his faves Adele & Bey, the charts; he couldn’t top (PLATINUM HISSY FIT)

Outro

If you sign up for Platinum Hit, the judges will send you nudes

So just submit your crap song then sit back and expose the truth 

 

i thought this was so good skskdnnsjsjc

ok but to be fair the comeback challenge that season was so dumb  

[ceremonials]

6 minutes ago, Glassmouth said:

me what 

 

nevermind, doing yours right now

 

[Glassmouth]

1 minute ago, ceremonials said:

nevermind, doing yours right now

 

my song is shaking

 

Edited August 26, 2017 by Glassmouth

[Citrus]

34 minutes ago, ceremonials said:

its what she deserves

 

mine probably wont be this long every round tho, i just think its important for the first round

True, feedback is big since all but 14 will be leaving 

[Truffle.]

14 minutes ago, ceremonials said:

ok but to be fair the comeback challenge that season was so dumb  

like i really wanna know whose idea it was to give us jingles cuz ...

[Aurora]

the title change, drag me sisters

[Glassmouth]

i'm a bit scared for the reviews 

[UFO]

Spoiler

 

Also I wonder if the judges noticed how I start my song with "In the morning" and I end it with "I'm in the dark" with the tone shifting from bliss and complete light to heartache and complete darkness. As you read through the song, it's like a gradual sunset as if you're the Sun and you're gradually losing the Earth as the Moon steals its attention away from you and your light is slowly fading away. Sometimes I like to play with structure/imagery like that and the judges don't always pick up on it    at least in past seasons anyway

 

I really wanted to emphasise the idea that - as the Sun - you're the ultimate source of life, you give all of your light to the Earth and yet at the end of the day you're in the Moon's shadow. Interestingly enough, I did some background research while writing my song and "moonlight" is actually just sunlight reflecting off of the Moon's surface. It's as if the Moon is stealing the Sun's light in a way and I kind of wanted to explore that idea further. The line "You were with her bright side every night I was gone" is a reference to the Moon's "dark side" which is never seen from Earth or some **** like that. It's like the Earth is enamoured by what's right in front of it (i.e. the Moon's BRIGHT side) but it cannot see the Moon's dark side.

 

I also wanted to include another idea where the Sun is continuously giving into a vicious cycle of love and hurt (i.e. morning to night) which would've made the song really bittersweet and ****ed up but I eventually decided not to include that idea because I didn't want to over-complicate things and turn my song into vomit diarrhoea   I also wanted to develop the "ocean blues" idea more with the Sun setting and "falling into the ocean blue". The Moon controls the Earth's tides with its gravitational force and I kind of wanted to go in that direction too but of course I decided not to because my song would've been way too long and it would've been too centered around water imagery.

 

I probably would've explored those ideas I mentioned above more if we were allowed to write a full song this round but I think I did pretty well despite not fleshing out all of what I wanted to do conceptually. 

 

Those ideas are also another reason why I prefer seeing my song through a child's perspective of not receiving enough parental love and being in the shadow of their sibling (the Black Sun/Son wordplay) and how you're no longer the centre of your parent's love or some ****, although the song can be interpreted as getting cheated on too. I lowkey wanted the song to be about being a homosexual child and your parent (or even society, for that matter) wanting you to be heterosexual instead but I feel like that would've been way too much     e.g. they "dim" your light, you start to hide the fact that you're ghey and you become void of all light and love NNNnnnn at one point I even wanted to make it a song about discrimination and society rejecting you for being black     the Moon would represent white privilege     and how the "craters" in the Moon are imperfections that can be overlooked because they'd rather have the Moon than a black sun (a black sun = something useless and serves no purpose) but that would've been messy af so I was like nah    

 

I also wanted to do an idea where people living on Earth worship the Sun but as soon as it's night, the Sun is forgotten or some **** EVEN THOUGH moonlight is really just SUNLIGHT BITCH whew but anyway I'm getting ahead of myself !

 

Oops I wrote another essay again   alkfjalksfg I literally wrote so much  

 

I probably could've done something with stars too and other planets and THEIR moons and even galaxies too and how each galaxy has its own sun and how the earth is in the goldilocks region or some **** where the distance from the sun to the earth is PERFECT e.g. the distance from the sun to mars is too far away etc etc or even play with the idea that the Sun will eventually die and the moon is really just a rock from a collision between earth and another planet nnnn but whatever I literally could create an entire 3-disc ALBUM + an EP + a re-release + a National Geographic documentary inspired by this one 213-word song  ceremonials ha impact

 

for your convenience

so you don't have to scroll so much

 

Edited August 26, 2017 by UFO

[Speezy]

 

Ceremonials literally scalping the other judges back to back

 

[Citrus]

28 minutes ago, UFO said:

Also I wonder if the judges noticed how I start my song with "In the morning" and I end it with "I'm in the dark" with the tone shifting from bliss and complete light to heartache and complete darkness. As you read through the song, it's like a gradual sunset as if you're the Sun and you're gradually losing the Earth as the Moon steals its attention away from you and your light is slowly fading away. Sometimes I like to play with structure/imagery like that and the judges don't always pick up on it    at least in past seasons anyway

 

I really wanted to emphasise the idea that - as the Sun - you're the ultimate source of life, you give all of your light to the Earth and yet at the end of the day you're in the Moon's shadow. Interestingly enough, I did some background research while writing my song and "moonlight" is actually just sunlight reflecting off of the Moon's surface. It's as if the Moon is stealing the Sun's light in a way and I kind of wanted to explore that idea further. The line "You were with her bright side every night I was gone" is a reference to the Moon's "dark side" which is never seen from Earth or some **** like that. It's like the Earth is enamoured by what's right in front of it (i.e. the Moon's BRIGHT side) but it cannot see the Moon's dark side.

 

I also wanted to include another idea where the Sun is continuously giving into a vicious cycle of love and hurt (i.e. morning to night) which would've made the song really bittersweet and ****ed up but I eventually decided not to include that idea because I didn't want to over-complicate things and turn my song into vomit diarrhoea   I also wanted to develop the "ocean blues" idea more with the Sun setting and "falling into the ocean blue". The Moon controls the Earth's tides with its gravitational force and I kind of wanted to go in that direction too but of course I decided not to because my song would've been way too long and it would've been too centered around water imagery.

 

I probably would've explored those ideas I mentioned above more if we were allowed to write a full song this round but I think I did pretty well despite not fleshing out all of what I wanted to do conceptually. 

 

Those ideas are also another reason why I prefer seeing my song through a child's perspective of not receiving enough parental love and being in the shadow of their sibling (the Black Sun/Son wordplay) and how you're no longer the centre of your parent's love or some ****, although the song can be interpreted as getting cheated on too. I lowkey wanted the song to be about being a homosexual child and your parent (or even society, for that matter) wanting you to be heterosexual instead but I feel like that would've been way too much     e.g. they "dim" your light, you start to hide the fact that you're ghey and you become void of all light and love NNNnnnn at one point I even wanted to make it a song about discrimination and society rejecting you for being black     the Moon would represent white privilege     and how the "craters" in the Moon are imperfections that can be overlooked because they'd rather have the Moon than a black sun (a black sun = something useless and serves no purpose) but that would've been messy af so I was like nah    

 

I also wanted to do an idea where people living on Earth worship the Sun but as soon as it's night, the Sun is forgotten or some **** EVEN THOUGH moonlight is really just SUNLIGHT BITCH whew but anyway I'm getting ahead of myself !

 

Oops I wrote another essay again   alkfjalksfg I literally wrote so much  

 

I probably could've done something with stars too and other planets and THEIR moons and even galaxies too and how each galaxy has its own sun and how the earth is in the goldilocks region or some **** where the distance from the sun to the earth is PERFECT e.g. the distance from the sun to mars is too far away etc etc or even play with the idea that the Sun will eventually die and the moon is really just a rock from a collision between earth and another planet nnnn but whatever I literally could create an entire 3-disc ALBUM + an EP + a re-release + a National Geographic documentary inspired by this one 213-word song  ceremonials ha impact

This essay is like 2.5 times longer than your song 

[UFO]

2 minutes ago, Citrus said:

This essay is like 2.5 times longer than your song 

Right?   it would've been way too long if I included all these ideas in my song. jesus christ    

but thanks to Pears I have learned how to successfully self-discipline   

Edited August 26, 2017 by UFO

[Aurora]

1 hour ago, UFO said:

Rap challenge better become a real thing in the future, I'm so ready!      

I also need a Food challenge askdhgasf

I genuinely want this to be a thing. Perhaps we need another spin off; Platinum Rap or something, where contestants only submit rap songs (with potentially sung hooks or whatever) for the entire duration of the season. I'd be here for it!

 

Lemme get back to work on my diss track "Counterfeit".

[UFO]

Just now, Aurora said:

I genuinely want this to be a thing. Perhaps we need another spin off; Platinum Rap or something, where contestants only submit rap songs (with potentially sung hooks or whatever) for the entire duration of the season. I'd be here for it!

 

Lemme get back to work on my diss track "Counterfeit".

Platinum Rap would be everything alfkajsfklajg;ka I'm already imagining how messy a diss track challenge would be     I really want to write a rap song but I don't want to submit one for a random challenge and then get eliminated because of it  

[Aurora]

Platinum Hit wouldn't be Platinum Hit without a few Euphoressays.  Love you boo.

 

But ngl just read all of cere's reviews and while I'm shook at the dedication and care put into them I'm even more nervous to see my feedback considering some of the things people were pulled up on may be considered present within my song too, idk.

[Dylobs]

I'm not READY

[ultraviolence.xx]

Just now, Gastrodonatella said:

you're getting #1 so

yeah i was gonna say ummmm @Aurora shhhh

[Aurora]

3 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said:

you're getting #1 so

2 minutes ago, ultraviolence.xx said:

yeah i was gonna say ummmm @Aurora shhhh

I appreciate the sentiment but I don't think so, there are some amazing entries this round already, both of yours included.

 

highkey shocked you didn't get nothing but resounding praise Uvie

[UFO]

Whew! everyone who hasn't received a review yet must be ****ting themselves quite literally  

 

14 minutes ago, Aurora said:

Platinum Hit wouldn't be Platinum Hit without a few Euphoressays.  Love you boo.

 

But ngl just read all of cere's reviews and while I'm shook at the dedication and care put into them I'm even more nervous to see my feedback considering some of the things people were pulled up on may be considered present within my song too, idk.

Nnnnn love you too sis!   It's kind of my way of "emptying" my brain. I have to write down all my thoughts and process them otherwise my mind would just be a jumbled mess and I wouldn't be able to write any songs without them becoming  overcomplicated, disjointed with basic, avant garde imagery FLOPS  I honestly don't expect anyone to read my essays all the way through  it's more for my own satisfaction aklfjsalfg  I've been constantly editing and adding more and more to my essay these past 40 mins (because I'm a paranoid extra bitch with too many ideas) and now I'm kind of exhausted    slay a bit !

Edited August 26, 2017 by UFO

[ultraviolence.xx]

2 minutes ago, Aurora said:

I appreciate the sentiment but I don't think so, there are some amazing entries this round already, both of yours included.

 

highkey shocked you didn't get nothing but resounding praise Uvie

it's okay, it happens! excited to hear from the others too. awesome to get feedback regardless 

[SaintWest]

6 minutes ago, Aurora said:

I appreciate the sentiment but I don't think so, there are some amazing entries this round already, both of yours included.

 

highkey shocked you didn't get nothing but resounding praise Uvie

let me read your song. my pms are waiting for you with open hands....and open legs. 

[poki]

Wait so those who didn't get a review are in trouble? 

 

 

[UFO]

Mess

[Speezy]

2 minutes ago, PoKiTaurus said:

Wait so those who didn't get a review are in trouble? 

 

 

Lowkey yes the judges will skim through us like they skip songs on their playlists

Edited August 26, 2017 by Speezy