ultraviolence.xx Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 12:20 AM, MattyTacos said: Proof or it didn't happen Expand what, are you jealous that i know other people? x
SaintWest Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 12:25 AM, Gastrodonatella said: I hate @Corsola for not playing PH11 Expand
MattyTacos Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 12:25 AM, ultraviolence.xx said: what, are you jealous that i know other people? x Expand why would i be jealous of someone named uvie sounds like a v***** flap
ultraviolence.xx Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 12:29 AM, MattyTacos said: why would i be jealous of someone named uvie sounds like a v***** flap Expand halfksjahadkdjsh i choked but how dare you disrespect the good sis hug’s nickname
SaintWest Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 12:34 AM, MattyTacos said: imagine thinking i asked Expand imagine thinking this was a good clapback
MattyTacos Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 12:36 AM, Gastrodonatella said: it's a public forum sis, remember? Expand imagine coming into this thread to see if i replied to you when i didn't even quote
MattyTacos Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 12:36 AM, SaintWest said: imagine thinking this was a good clapback Expand imagine stepping into a feud that didn't involve you to gain some relevancy
Aurora Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 9/30/2017 at 9:10 PM, ceremonials said: @Aurora, “The Gift” Okay, this was good, but perhaps a bit too narrative-driven. I liked that it was very narrative heavy to a certain extent, because this is a round based around storytelling, but some lines like “He told me not to worry and I nodded with reluctance” were just too unlyrical. It would fit in a short story, sure, but in a song it usually comes out sounding awkward. Like I said if this were a short story it would be great, because conceptually it’s just as interesting as the original, in my opinion. I think making a sequel was an interesting way of going about this, and while it is definitely interesting conceptually just by itself, it sort of lacks the subtlety that makes the original so great. You definitely got the message of the movie across but you directly state it in the final line of the bridge - and maybe there are multiple themes to the movie/story, but this seemed a bit too blunt. Overall, I think this was really good as usual, but maybe a bit too ambitious for its own good. “She shared her daughter’s cruel design / And wondered what I knew of mine” Expand Honestly, this review is exactly what I saw coming (Heptapod B future seeing abilities who?) and I definitely agree. Thanks for the review! For what it's worth, I kinda figured about halfway through writing my song that I'd bitten off way more than I could probably chew but I was so fixated on doing something I knew nobody else would that I decided to just go along with it. Of course there were various hurdles and I rewrote and tweaked it quite a bit but there was always going to be that difficulty of condensing an entire story's concept into a song without it feeling a) blunt and unlyrical at points or b) vague and ambiguous. My original draft was more of the latter and I feel like changing it to the former was a better compromise. My only question is; did you like it more or less than Confessions?
MattyTacos Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 12:41 AM, Gastrodonatella said: imagine making up fake news like this when your post was 45 seconds after mine and directly below it Expand imagine atrl's servers still being so ****ed up double posting happens
MattyTacos Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 12:45 AM, Gastrodonatella said: @MattyTacos relevance* Expand I caught that when I posted but I genuinely don't give enough ****s to fix a small error as you do in taking the time to point it out
ultraviolence.xx Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 imagine coming into this thread to attack an innocent member’s nickname and then receiving the ire of 3 other members oh wait you dont have to imagine
MattyTacos Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 imagine coming into this thread and trying to drag someone who you've been sending pics to jackson, care to explain yourself?
Aurora Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 12:42 AM, Corsola said: Imagine coming into this thread to actually post something positive and related to the game Expand Imagine me actually being positive in regards to my own song?
MattyTacos Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 uvie sounds like uvula, and if you were a TRUE #MonsterHouse film stan you'd understand the double meaning
MattyTacos Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 12:53 AM, Gastrodonatella said: imagine coming into this thread and making the most inconceivable reaches to sexualize EVERYTHING because your humor is just that dry Expand also imagine saying this with that ugly sig of yours
Aurora Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 9/30/2017 at 9:40 PM, ultraviolence.xx said: first time i haven't been in the first batch Expand Second time I have been! (Last round I was 6/6, this week I'm 2nd!) My speedy era is here. On 9/30/2017 at 11:13 PM, UFO said: Everyone on the charts when @Aurora goes #1 again: Expand I haven't even had a solo #1 since Round 2. A Katy Perry tea. Plus all of my rap songs fail to go #1. Is this how Marilyn Monroe felt?
UFO Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 12:55 AM, Aurora said: I haven't even had a solo #1 since Round 2. A Katy Perry tea. Plus all of my rap songs fail to go #1. Is this how Marilyn Monroe felt? Expand When Aurora's #1s at the start of the season are still more ICONIC than the bitch who got a #1 last WEEK
MattyTacos Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 12:56 AM, Gastrodonatella said: imagine running out of clocks so you have to clock a sig that is so obviously a parody and not serious that it's laughable that you'd even consider it serious in an ironic manner Expand um...then that completely defeats the point of you trying to drag me for making a sexual joke when your sig is literally a sexual joke whether or not it's meant to be ironic, it's still pretty unfunny so your humor is hella dry too. imagine trying to be deep about a sig talking about d***s
MattyTacos Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 12:58 AM, UFO said: When Aurora's #1s at the start of the season are still more ICONIC than the bitch who got a #1 last WEEK Expand wait akskgkal i actually forgot who got #1 last week
Aurora Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 12:58 AM, UFO said: When Aurora's #1s at the start of the season are still more ICONIC than the bitch who got a #1 last WEEK Expand wow shade that bitch down! what was her song title again? Bridge without Audio? Verse of the Deaf? no1curr, Loch Ness outsold
ultraviolence.xx Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 12:54 AM, MattyTacos said: uvie sounds like uvula, and if you were a TRUE #MonsterHouse film stan you'd understand the double meaning Expand uvie sounds like UV which sounds like the greatest album of all time so try again hihi and wtf is monster house
MattyTacos Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 1:00 AM, Gastrodonatella said: imagine having the point fly over your head like this fun fact that's actually really in the bible hihi Expand akskkfal well imagine the bible supporting beauty & the beast over gays
ultraviolence.xx Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 On 10/1/2017 at 12:54 AM, MattyTacos said: uvie sounds like uvula, and if you were a TRUE #MonsterHouse film stan you'd understand the double meaning Expand also mess @ you flopping at anatomy. uvula is the dangly thing in your throat. v*lva is the aforementioned southern lip. messy messy messy
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