Aurora Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 “Confessions”submitted for the ‘Cut the Chorus’ challenge “Looking for some time to kill, I'm looking for a man Stole some hearts and slurpees at the 7-Eleven Speeding down the parking lot inside your old sedan Accidentally running over hordes of pelicans…” Thank you @Gastrodonatella for the much needed help and advice with this one. A true SAINT (poor @SaintWest).
Aurora Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 OK, but for real, I've submitted now. Excited to see where everyone took this challenge. ~ “Confessions”submitted for the ‘Cut the Chorus’ challenge “Freedom through confession is the perfect paradise…”
MattyTacos Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 10 hours ago, ultraviolence.xx said: me looking for motivation, ambition, any semblance of a will to live Maybe you can find it reviewing my song
touya kinomoto Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 @Aurora coming for that number 1 again. I was slayed.
ultraviolence.xx Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 59 minutes ago, MattyTacos said: Maybe you can find it reviewing my song i will now that i finished a draft send it to me
MattyTacos Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 2 minutes ago, ultraviolence.xx said: i will now that i finished a draft send it to me I sent it to you the other DAY bitch
ultraviolence.xx Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 16 minutes ago, MattyTacos said: I sent it to you the other DAY bitch oh MESS, lemme hit up my inbox right quick hihi
ultraviolence.xx Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 15 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: and the story unfolds didn't asK
MattyTacos Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 I wrote a 2nd song called Weekend With Him a simple title that's interesting when will y'alls faux titles?
funnellegs Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 I know I'm not very active on here, but would anyone like to read my song before I submit? I'm a little nervous this round.
touya kinomoto Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 34 minutes ago, funnellegs said: I know I'm not very active on here, but would anyone like to read my song before I submit? I'm a little nervous this round. I would love to read it but I am not sure how much help I could provide you.
UFO Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 (edited) Whew my song this week is an ANTHEM It's kind of giving me Lana del Rey meets Carly Rae Jepsen and I'm SO here for it also btw sorry @MattyTacos for not giving you feedback nnn I've just been REALLY busy lately, a lot of **** has happened so I'm sorry I couldn't review your songs these past two rounds Edited September 21, 2017 by UFO
MattyTacos Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 7 minutes ago, UFO said: Whew my song this week is an ANTHEM It's kind of giving me Lana del Rey meets Carly Rae Jepsen and I'm SO here for it also btw sorry @MattyTacos for not giving you feedback nnn I've just been REALLY busy lately, a lot of **** has happened so I'm sorry I couldn't review your songs these past two rounds don't worry about it sis i get it
UFO Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 Just now, MattyTacos said: don't worry about it sis i get it
UFO Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 Dancing With Disaster Time stopped when I looked in your eyes and my heart swayed faster, faster As we interlocked I soon realised I was dancing with disaster
funnellegs Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 44 minutes ago, KatyCatPH said: I would love to read it but I am not sure how much help I could provide you. I'll send it now
MattyTacos Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 1 hour ago, UFO said: Dancing With Disaster Time stopped when I looked in your eyes and my heart swayed faster, faster As we interlocked I soon realised I was dancing with disaster wtf this is better than my entire song, starting from scratch rn
SaintWest Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 (edited) “PATTERNS” ☆☆☆ ☆☆☆ Someday we’ll be immortalized, as lovers of the night Like fossils in the galaxy, etched into the sky Edited September 21, 2017 by SaintWest
fountain Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 44 minutes ago, SaintWest said: “PATTERNS” ☆☆☆ ☆☆☆ Someday we’ll be immortalized, as lovers of the night Like fossils in the galaxy, etched into the sky I give this a 10
Hug Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 15 minutes ago, minho said: If only the book was a wig, it'd be much more useful
SaintWest Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 6 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: I give you as a person this a 10 wow i'm honored
smholiv Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 12 minutes ago, Hug said: If only the book was a wig, it'd be much more useful Well now I have to make that edit don't I EDIT: Kind of living for how poorly done it is lksdhgjf
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