ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted September 20, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted September 20, 2017 1 hour ago, Citrus said: The burden of making your metaphor nuanced but also understandable is on you~~~~ stifle my creativity? never!
ultraviolence.xx Posted September 20, 2017 Posted September 20, 2017 17 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: the phase 2 charts list purple mist as #2 despite it being a tie i demand names given, apologies issued, and for this blight against my character to be remedied at once not "blight against my character"
touya kinomoto Posted September 20, 2017 Posted September 20, 2017 (edited) I will be done with my song today. I know that most of you are on competitive mode now but I still want to ask if someone wants to read my song and give me feedback. Thanks. Edited September 20, 2017 by KatyCatPH
Aurora Posted September 20, 2017 Posted September 20, 2017 Praying.mp3 I can find the motivation to finish my song in 3 hours. Or at least get 90% of it done. 2 hours ago, KatyCatPH said: I will be done with my song today. I know that most of you are on competitive mode now but I still want to ask if someone wants to read my song and give me feedback. Thanks. Feel free to send.
Aurora Posted September 20, 2017 Posted September 20, 2017 when you don't wanna get political so you're totally not…
touya kinomoto Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 (edited) 1 hour ago, Aurora said: Feel free to send. This is an opportunity I'll dare not pass. Thanks Sam. 53 minutes ago, Corsola said: If sending to fellow competitors makes you wary then I'm always available It's not really being wary of them. They are much better than I am so it doesn't make any sense being wary of them. It's just that it feels that some of them might take the game more seriously since we've gone further into it. But since the cutest pink Gen 3 Pokémon volunteered to read whatever I came up with, then why pass on it? Thanks corsie! Edited September 21, 2017 by KatyCatPH
touya kinomoto Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 4 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: would biggest breakthrough and best new player grammy award winner KatyCatPH lie? I always loved Corsola's aesthetics. Add the fact that Gen 3 is my fave and I think it's the best Gen.
Aurora Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 @SaintWest seving Midsummer on ecstasy this week. Whew.
SaintWest Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 6 minutes ago, Aurora said: @SaintWest seving Midsummer on ecstasy this week. Whew. 5 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: this slander, he finally leaves the midsummer box and you paint him like this ? STARCROSSED ? HA ? SAGA ? IS ? COMING
touya kinomoto Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 Here's the scrapped chorus of my song for this week: Spoiler REDACTED . . . . . . . . . . . . . jk here it is Spoiler Cardiff love, we have to let go Cardiff love, best I ever know Cardiff love I gave you my all But our love's on its curtain call This moment's inevitable
touya kinomoto Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 7 hours ago, Gastrodonatella said: the phase 1 charts list purple mist as #2 despite it being a tie i demand names given, apologies issued, and for this blight against my character to be remedied at once Not you using this word. I used this in my song this week.
touya kinomoto Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 2 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: not redacted fldkjsf Of course, your impact. WILLpower as we know it.
smholiv Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 7 hours ago, KatyCatPH said: I will be done with my song today. I know that most of you are on competitive mode now but I still want to ask if someone wants to read my song and give me feedback. Thanks. No matter what I think most of PH is always willing to be supportive when it comes to helping each other out with songs and feedback! I don't necessarily think this is treated in the same way as most "games"... at the end of the day it's about improving our own writing skills together. Feel free to send your songs to me anytime (and that goes with everyone!). I'm always willing to read them even if usually I just talk about the good parts nn.
fountain Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 50 minutes ago, minho said: No matter what I think most of PH is always willing to be supportive when it comes to helping each other out with songs and feedback! I don't necessarily think this is treated in the same way as most "games"... at the end of the day it's about improving our own writing skills together True
ultraviolence.xx Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 me looking for motivation, ambition, any semblance of a will to live
touya kinomoto Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 Woo! Karli @Corsolascalped me with her feedback. I am grateful for the pointers she has given me tbh. At least I have a day to improve my song. Just waiting for Sam @Aurora ha feedback and I'll go back to the writing board.
Aurora Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 30 minutes ago, KatyCatPH said: Woo! Karli @Corsolascalped me with her feedback. I am grateful for the pointers she has given me tbh. At least I have a day to improve my song. Just waiting for Sam @Aurora ha feedback and I'll go back to the writing board. At work now so I won't be able to get back to you for another 5 hours or so :( trust Corsola, she's great! And I second what minho said.
touya kinomoto Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 4 minutes ago, Aurora said: At work now so I won't be able to get back to you for another 5 hours or so :( trust Corsola, she's great! And I second what minho said. Oh okay. I'll still wait for it. But I'll start with what Karli has told me so far.
Aurora Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 10 minutes ago, KatyCatPH said: Oh okay. I'll still wait for it. But I'll start with what Karli has told me so far. Nvm I just typed up a quick review. Hope it helps some! Best of luck. back to work I go...
touya kinomoto Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 10 hours ago, KatyCatPH said: I will be done with my song today. I know that most of you are on competitive mode now but I still want to ask if someone wants to read my song and give me feedback. Thanks. I just want to make myself clear with this statement. I still believe PH people are the most welcoming bunch in ATRL. I just thought that maybe some people might be taking this more seriously than the earlier rounds. But I am glad that I was proven wrong. PH and the Games section in general is really a great community of helpful people.
Aurora Posted September 21, 2017 Posted September 21, 2017 I think I'm ready to submit. I'll send it out to a few lovelies for thoTs and see if I get any feedback before I have to go to work tomorrow, but I'm glad I finished up tonight as this was my last free minute to work on it before the deadline (unless I pulled an all nighter, which is not a good idea before a 10 hour shift – learned that the hard way!)
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