Aurora Posted September 19, 2017 Posted September 19, 2017 3 hours ago, Citrus said: Minho should've won last round 3 hours ago, Hug said: Let me not disagree i knew it. my overexposed era is here. i have to have my out of the woods and new romantics before i can have my look what you made me do and ready for it
ceremonials Posted September 20, 2017 Posted September 20, 2017 1 hour ago, keshaspearsxo said: What in the hell am I gonna write Trash, most likely
ATRL Moderator feelslikeadream Posted September 20, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted September 20, 2017 On 9/17/2017 at 6:13 PM, Covergirl said: 2 > 6 > 18 what a steep downfall omg Writing a song an hour before it's due, not even proofreading it, and letting it destroy your overall average is disrespectful and if you pull this **** again I'm disowning you as my mentee.
fountain Posted September 20, 2017 Posted September 20, 2017 36 minutes ago, ceremonials said: Trash, most likely Why so mean I did nothing to deserve this
Hug Posted September 20, 2017 Posted September 20, 2017 I can't believe I actually finished two songs. One of them used a chorus though so I can't send it.
Denim Posted September 20, 2017 Posted September 20, 2017 25 minutes ago, feelslikeadream said: Writing a song an hour before it's due, not even proofreading it, and letting it destroy your overall average is disrespectful and if you pull this **** again I'm disowning you as my mentee. I just spat out my goldfish, end me master
smholiv Posted September 20, 2017 Posted September 20, 2017 I have.... a song (and it low-key takes some of the feedback into consideration!) just sitting on it for a bit though
Aurora Posted September 20, 2017 Posted September 20, 2017 i have... half a verse idk if i'm even happy with
smholiv Posted September 20, 2017 Posted September 20, 2017 My main concern is that the song I have is kind of empty. I usually rely on a chorus or some kind of repetition.
ceremonials Posted September 20, 2017 Posted September 20, 2017 51 minutes ago, minho said: R5: Black Hole (my cover art starts now) here for it
Hug Posted September 20, 2017 Posted September 20, 2017 Hello friends. It is another day where I say goodnight and the only person its even remotely relevant to is Aurora. Anyway, goodnight!
Aurora Posted September 20, 2017 Posted September 20, 2017 w r i t i n g n e w w o r d s < 3 11 minutes ago, Hug said: Hello friends. It is another day where I say goodnight and the only person its even remotely relevant to is Aurora. Anyway, goodnight! 'night Bella
Citrus Posted September 20, 2017 Posted September 20, 2017 #BehindTheHits: Jacktrus' second joint #1, Lake Erie, was originally intended to be a song discussing the loss of the election by U.S. presidential candidate Hillary Clinton!
Citrus Posted September 20, 2017 Posted September 20, 2017 will someone #MoveYou with their song this week?
Aurora Posted September 20, 2017 Posted September 20, 2017 10 minutes ago, Citrus said: #BehindTheHits: Jacktrus' second joint #1, Lake Erie, was originally intended to be a song discussing the loss of the election by U.S. presidential candidate Hillary Clinton! Yet you dragged "Pyramid" through the sand for being too surface-level Egyptian, expecting a mummy to pop up, when it was a song discussing the loss of the election by U.S. presidential candidate Hillary Clinton. I smell jealousy, resentment and bitterness for Jackson not letting you continue with the concept and @Temporal and I turned it ouT and you wouldn't have someone else be successful with "your" idea. i c u, fat. But Lake Erie was a slay. Lakes always win. Loch Ness can relate.
Citrus Posted September 20, 2017 Posted September 20, 2017 9 minutes ago, Aurora said: Yet you dragged "Pyramid" through the sand for being too surface-level Egyptian, expecting a mummy to pop up, when it was a song discussing the loss of the election by U.S. presidential candidate Hillary Clinton. I smell jealousy, resentment and bitterness for Jackson not letting you continue with the concept and @Temporal and I turned it ouT and you wouldn't have someone else be successful with "your" idea. i c u, fat. But Lake Erie was a slay. Lakes always win. Loch Ness can relate. I'm too dumb for metaphors sorry!
Aurora Posted September 20, 2017 Posted September 20, 2017 2 minutes ago, Citrus said: I'm too dumb for metaphors sorry! güd 'cause ur not getting any this week !!
Citrus Posted September 20, 2017 Posted September 20, 2017 Quote Every storm we’ve weathered has meant everything to me In every storm we’ve weathered, you've been everything to me whew what an E-MO-TION-al couplet
Citrus Posted September 20, 2017 Posted September 20, 2017 but yes am very excited to see what you ladies do this week! fun challenge
ceremonials Posted September 20, 2017 Posted September 20, 2017 4 hours ago, Citrus said: will someone #MoveYou with their song this week? No x
ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted September 20, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted September 20, 2017 4 hours ago, Citrus said: I'm too dumb for metaphors sorry! true like how you missed my last entry was about being a closeted gay and you went on about rock formations
touya kinomoto Posted September 20, 2017 Posted September 20, 2017 (edited) 4 hours ago, Citrus said: I'm too dumb for metaphors sorry! Oh good. I don't know how to use them in my song this week so... But tbh, I don't even know if I have used metaphors well in this game ever. Edited September 20, 2017 by KatyCatPH
Citrus Posted September 20, 2017 Posted September 20, 2017 The burden of making your metaphor nuanced but also understandable is on you~~~~
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