touya kinomoto Posted August 19, 2017 Posted August 19, 2017 30 minutes ago, Corsola said: Not PH being in your username. Truly gonna be the new person who stomps us all this season I think I am destined to be good at this. But every time I remember my first (and only) attempt at songwriting ended like a rehash of "Twinkle Twinkle Little Star" for my dead bunny (RIP Bunnyfer), I immediately vision my name o the elims list after R1.
touya kinomoto Posted August 19, 2017 Posted August 19, 2017 Name/what should we call you?: KCPH, RJ, or just call me Jackson's future husband Platinum Hit/Songwriting experience: Aside from "I Will Miss You Bunnyfer", none. Favorite songwriters/artists: Katy Perry, Adele and Sara Bareilles. Favorite PH challenge (for return contestants): Favorite song on Witness: Future singles Witness, Roulette and Pendulum Fun fact about you: I am a short story writer and always wanted to try a hand at songwriting since God knows when. BONUS: are you OK with your song being posted if you win a challenge? Well, idk, yes, no, maybe. It depends.
Queen Conchita Posted August 19, 2017 Posted August 19, 2017 (edited) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________ CONTESTANT/JUDGE INTROS ________________________________________________________________________________________________________ let's get to know you! Name/what should we call you?: Hannah/Han/QC/Queen Conchita. Platinum Hit/Songwriting experience: Nnn none. Favorite songwriters/artists: Little Mix, Erasure, Years & Years, Sergey Lazarev, Conchita. Favorite PH challenge (for return contestants): N/A. Favorite song on Witness: Swish Swish bish Fun fact about you: I have a dent/dip thing in my forehead (a ****ing deep dimple I guess) whenever I slightly frown/blink, about the size of a £1 coin and it pulsates and creeps everyone out. It's pretty weird. BONUS: are you OK with your song being posted if you win a challenge? Nnn never going to happen but lemme say yes Edited August 19, 2017 by Queen Conchita
ultraviolence.xx Posted August 19, 2017 Posted August 19, 2017 4 minutes ago, Queen Conchita said: ________________________________________________________________________________________________________ CONTESTANT/JUDGE INTROS Fun fact about you: I have a hole in my forehead (a ****ing deep dimple type hole) about the size of a £1 coin and whenever I slightly frown/blink it pulsates and creeps everyone out. It's pretty weird. how did this come about?
Queen Conchita Posted August 19, 2017 Posted August 19, 2017 3 minutes ago, ultraviolence.xx said: how did this come about? Nnn do you mean like how did I know about it or why did I put it in my fun fact bit?
ultraviolence.xx Posted August 19, 2017 Posted August 19, 2017 (edited) 4 minutes ago, Queen Conchita said: Nnn do you mean like how did I know about it or why did I put it in my fun fact bit? like were you born with it or did you get hurt or how did it happen? unless it's a personal story you don't want to share, which i just considered Edited August 19, 2017 by ultraviolence.xx
Jackson Posted August 19, 2017 Author Posted August 19, 2017 16 minutes ago, Queen Conchita said: Name/what should we call you?: Hannah/Han/QC/Queen Conchita. Woo, always good to have a female join the cast. Here for you serving @CountryBritney and becoming the second female to make the finale
poki Posted August 19, 2017 Posted August 19, 2017 I'm low key interested in the song you wrote for Bunnyfer (RIP), Jacskon's future husband. When's the wedding?
Jackson Posted August 19, 2017 Author Posted August 19, 2017 R1 is gonna be posted within the next hour
Queen Conchita Posted August 19, 2017 Posted August 19, 2017 11 minutes ago, ultraviolence.xx said: like were you born with it or did you get hurt or how did it happen? unless it's a personal story you don't want to share, which i just considered I only ever noticed it about a year ago, my forehead looks no different to anyone elses until i frown and it pulsates. I guess it's just a different type of dimple or maybe I just have less fat on that particular circle of my forehead asjhs, hole probably wasn't the right word, dent/dip probably works better
Queen Conchita Posted August 19, 2017 Posted August 19, 2017 11 minutes ago, Jackson said: Woo, always good to have a female join the cast. Here for you serving @CountryBritney and becoming the second female to make the finale I wouldn't bet your house on it
touya kinomoto Posted August 19, 2017 Posted August 19, 2017 7 minutes ago, PoKiTaurus said: I'm low key interested in the song you wrote for Bunnyfer (RIP), Jacskon's future husband. When's the wedding? When he realizes I'm his fiancé. You know, it's kinda one sided now.
Queen Conchita Posted August 19, 2017 Posted August 19, 2017 @Jackson - Are there any links to winning songs that I can go back and read to see how in depth the songs are?
Jackson Posted August 19, 2017 Author Posted August 19, 2017 9 minutes ago, Queen Conchita said: @Jackson - Are there any links to winning songs that I can go back and read to see how in depth the songs are? Here's a couple of the highest scoring PH songs ever STARDUST Written for the label challenge: Birthright Ent. verse The sunset melts to darkness, gives way to cosmic glows I'm wrapped in silver moonlight as headlights guide me home Romantics in the sunlight give way to carnal sins And rational emotions dissolve as lust sets in So tiptoe down the hallway, take the third door on your right And text me when you get there, it's too late to knock tonight You look better than your pictures, you're so handsome in this light But you’re not here for small talk and I’m not here to waste your time chorus This moment is a shooting star That filters through my hands Your body's made of stardust Locked in an hourglass We're just two passing comets On to other rendezvous So until the morning breaks us I'll make the most of you verse Your body leaves me starstruck, your rhythm takes my breath With every empty kiss I hope this moment never ends I'll mirror every movement, use our bodies till we're spent Maybe if I give my all you'll see me once again If only these emotions gripped your heart each time we kissed In twenty minutes I'll be one more name upon your list There's galaxies of others that shine brighter than I do So maybe I'm just lucky that your orbit crossed mine too chorus This moment is a shooting star That filters through my hands Your body's made of stardust Locked in an hourglass We're just two passing comets On to other rendezvous So until the morning breaks us I'll make the most of you bridge Mourning doves awake me But I won't open my eyes I reach out for your body But there's just sheets on your side I’ll spend my whole day waiting For words that never come You’re just another glimmer Lost with the rising sun chorus This moment is a shooting star That filters through my hands Your body's made of stardust Locked in an hourglass We're just two passing comets On to other rendezvous So until the morning breaks us I'll make the most of you verse Take a left on Franklin Street and pass the riverside Shadows of steel giants daze the sight of little eyes These towers hold me captive, keep me sheltered from the wild This city is my kingdom, this city is my pride But everything I know sits in the back seat of a Dodge Rolling down the interstate as memories play on And as another sunset sets off beyond the plains I look back at the skyline as its figure calls my name chorus If only I could turn back and take a different road Take it to Chicago and never have to go But even if I'm lost my compass always knows It takes more than a house to make yourself at home verse Take the 55, then drive West past Joliet Through the golden cornfields we thought would never end I watch fluorescent starlight fade into muffled sparks And Orion takes over to save us from the dark chorus If only I could turn back and take a different road Take it to Chicago and never have to go But even if I'm lost my compass always knows It takes more than a house to make yourself at home verse We cross the Mississippi as it flows to distant lands The only thing that stops us from the fate of foreign hands And suddenly Chicago's just a fragment of the past The future sits before me set in unfamiliar land chorus If only I could turn back and take a different road Take it to Chicago and never have to go But even if I'm lost my compass always knows It takes more than a house to make yourself at home outro Nothing lasts forever The Windy City blows But even when I'm lost My compass points me home So wherever I go To mountains or to sea I always keep it close The city lives in me
Hug Posted August 19, 2017 Posted August 19, 2017 7 minutes ago, Queen Conchita said: @Jackson - Are there any links to winning songs that I can go back and read to see how in depth the songs are? I'll just self-promo my song that got the first #1 of the mini season from a couple months back! The challenge was to write a song that matches a single cover. We could make the single cover, find a picture on the internet, w/e. I edited a gif I found for this cover, but I had the song idea already. ‘Drowned in Neon’ By Hug (Round 1: The Single Cover) [Verse 1] It’s a technicolor ocean With a burning neon sky The smoke inside’s like summer rain And music pulls the tides The waters throw me through the room I’m washed in beats and lights I dive into the discotheque And swim throughout the night [Chorus] The crowd is drowned in neon I’m floating out at sea The waves of wasted people Are crashing into me I’ll ride the tide of dancers I’ll never think of land I’ll try to hide the handprints That time left in the sand [Verse 2] It’s an empty-feeling ocean Though it’s packed so ever tight The sea can hardly take away What kills me deep inside The waters toss me through the room I’m thrashed by beats and lights I fall into the discotheque And swim like I’m alright [Chorus] The crowd is drowned in neon And I’m lost out at sea The waves of wasted people Are crashing into me I’ll ride the tide of dancers And wash up on the land I’ll try to find your handprints That time left in the sand [Bridge] I look into the neon sky And there’s never any stars On every technicolored night I swim into the ocean far I look into the neon sky And I never see the moon On every technicolored night I find myself still stuck on you It’s all my fault, I can’t forget You’re not around, you’re in my head It’s all my fault, I can’t forget I can’t forget, I can’t... [Chorus] The crowd is drowned in neon And I’m lost out at sea The waves of wasted people Are crashing into me I’ll ride the tide of dancers And wash up on the land I’ll try to find your handprints That I left in the sand
8thPrince Posted August 19, 2017 Posted August 19, 2017 (edited) 15 minutes ago, Queen Conchita said: @Jackson - Are there any links to winning songs that I can go back and read to see how in depth the songs are? oop here, read Erased Spoiler [A] From the cold, white cream You drowned in your dark coffee To its sweet cloud of steam Rousing me from a lost dream Like these things, one day Memories of you will fade Yes, there will come a day Where you too will be erased Like the lingering body heat Between two hands that unfold Even that gentle warmth’s Dissipates into the cold Like your sigh hung in the air On a bitter Christmas Day Yes, there will come a day Where you too will be erased [R]If you catch the taste of tears you’ll think back to our shore The scent of tangerine perfume will fill an empty room “I can’t move on” will echo there but with each passing day You’ll be convinced there comes a day when I’m erased, too [A] Like the creases in the sheets Where someone used to sleep I trace your shape with my pinkie But you’re far beyond reach Somewhere far beyond ears Wedding bells ring and decay Yes, there will come a day Where you too will be erased Like the light space on a wall Where a portrait hung before Or the marks of furniture Pressed into the carpet floor Like these things, one day Memories of you will fade Yes, there will come a day Where you too will be erased [R] If you catch the taste of tears you’ll think back to our shore The scent of tangerine perfume will fill an empty room “I can’t move on” will echo there but with each passing day You’ll be convinced there comes a day when I’m erased, too Edited August 19, 2017 by 8thPrince
Hug Posted August 19, 2017 Posted August 19, 2017 OMG Erased, legendary. The way we rushed to self promote tho tybgfd shameless
Queen Conchita Posted August 19, 2017 Posted August 19, 2017 4 minutes ago, 8thPrince said: oop here, read Erased Hide contents [A] From the cold, white cream You drowned in your dark coffee To its sweet cloud of steam Rousing me from a lost dream Like these things, one day Memories of you will fade Yes, there will come a day Where you too will be erased Like the lingering body heat Between two hands that unfold Even that gentle warmth’s Dissipates into the cold Like your sigh hung in the air On a bitter Christmas Day Yes, there will come a day Where you too will be erased [R]If you catch the taste of tears you’ll think back to our shore The scent of tangerine perfume will fill an empty room “I can’t move on” will echo there but with each passing day You’ll be convinced there comes a day when I’m erased, too [A] Like the creases in the sheets Where someone used to sleep I trace your shape with my pinkie But you’re far beyond reach Somewhere far beyond ears Wedding bells ring and decay Yes, there will come a day Where you too will be erased Like the light space on a wall Where a portrait hung before Or the marks of furniture Pressed into the carpet floor Like these things, one day Memories of you will fade Yes, there will come a day Where you too will be erased [R] If you catch the taste of tears you’ll think back to our shore The scent of tangerine perfume will fill an empty room “I can’t move on” will echo there but with each passing day You’ll be convinced there comes a day when I’m erased, too 8 minutes ago, Hug said: I'll just self-promo my song that got the first #1 of the mini season from a couple months back! The challenge was to write a song that matches a single cover. We could make the single cover, find a picture on the internet, w/e. I edited a gif I found for this cover, but I had the song idea already. ‘Drowned in Neon’ By Hug (Round 1: The Single Cover) [Verse 1] It’s a technicolor ocean With a burning neon sky The smoke inside’s like summer rain And music pulls the tides The waters throw me through the room I’m washed in beats and lights I dive into the discotheque And swim throughout the night [Chorus] The crowd is drowned in neon I’m floating out at sea The waves of wasted people Are crashing into me I’ll ride the tide of dancers I’ll never think of land I’ll try to hide the handprints That time left in the sand [Verse 2] It’s an empty-feeling ocean Though it’s packed so ever tight The sea can hardly take away What kills me deep inside The waters toss me through the room I’m thrashed by beats and lights I fall into the discotheque And swim like I’m alright [Chorus] The crowd is drowned in neon And I’m lost out at sea The waves of wasted people Are crashing into me I’ll ride the tide of dancers And wash up on the land I’ll try to find your handprints That time left in the sand [Bridge] I look into the neon sky And there’s never any stars On every technicolored night I swim into the ocean far I look into the neon sky And I never see the moon On every technicolored night I find myself still stuck on you It’s all my fault, I can’t forget You’re not around, you’re in my head It’s all my fault, I can’t forget I can’t forget, I can’t... [Chorus] The crowd is drowned in neon And I’m lost out at sea The waves of wasted people Are crashing into me I’ll ride the tide of dancers And wash up on the land I’ll try to find your handprints That I left in the sand 9 minutes ago, Jackson said: Here's a couple of the highest scoring PH songs ever Hide contents STARDUSTWritten for the label challenge: Birthright Ent. verseThe sunset melts to darkness, gives way to cosmic glowsI'm wrapped in silver moonlight as headlights guide me homeRomantics in the sunlight give way to carnal sinsAnd rational emotions dissolve as lust sets in So tiptoe down the hallway, take the third door on your rightAnd text me when you get there, it's too late to knock tonightYou look better than your pictures, you're so handsome in this lightBut you’re not here for small talk and I’m not here to waste your time chorusThis moment is a shooting starThat filters through my handsYour body's made of stardustLocked in an hourglassWe're just two passing cometsOn to other rendezvousSo until the morning breaks usI'll make the most of you verseYour body leaves me starstruck, your rhythm takes my breathWith every empty kiss I hope this moment never endsI'll mirror every movement, use our bodies till we're spentMaybe if I give my all you'll see me once again If only these emotions gripped your heart each time we kissedIn twenty minutes I'll be one more name upon your listThere's galaxies of others that shine brighter than I doSo maybe I'm just lucky that your orbit crossed mine too chorusThis moment is a shooting starThat filters through my handsYour body's made of stardustLocked in an hourglassWe're just two passing cometsOn to other rendezvousSo until the morning breaks usI'll make the most of you bridgeMourning doves awake meBut I won't open my eyesI reach out for your bodyBut there's just sheets on your sideI’ll spend my whole day waitingFor words that never comeYou’re just another glimmerLost with the rising sun chorusThis moment is a shooting starThat filters through my handsYour body's made of stardustLocked in an hourglassWe're just two passing cometsOn to other rendezvousSo until the morning breaks usI'll make the most of you Hide contents verse Take a left on Franklin Street and pass the riverside Shadows of steel giants daze the sight of little eyes These towers hold me captive, keep me sheltered from the wild This city is my kingdom, this city is my pride But everything I know sits in the back seat of a Dodge Rolling down the interstate as memories play on And as another sunset sets off beyond the plains I look back at the skyline as its figure calls my name chorus If only I could turn back and take a different road Take it to Chicago and never have to go But even if I'm lost my compass always knows It takes more than a house to make yourself at home verse Take the 55, then drive West past Joliet Through the golden cornfields we thought would never end I watch fluorescent starlight fade into muffled sparks And Orion takes over to save us from the dark chorus If only I could turn back and take a different road Take it to Chicago and never have to go But even if I'm lost my compass always knows It takes more than a house to make yourself at home verse We cross the Mississippi as it flows to distant lands The only thing that stops us from the fate of foreign hands And suddenly Chicago's just a fragment of the past The future sits before me set in unfamiliar land chorus If only I could turn back and take a different road Take it to Chicago and never have to go But even if I'm lost my compass always knows It takes more than a house to make yourself at home outro Nothing lasts forever The Windy City blows But even when I'm lost My compass points me home So wherever I go To mountains or to sea I always keep it close The city lives in me Oh wow i'm shook and even more nervous now, they're all amazing.
Jackson Posted August 19, 2017 Author Posted August 19, 2017 OK so I just literally came up with a good challenge so I'm going to format it right now, might take a few mins more than expected
poki Posted August 19, 2017 Posted August 19, 2017 The stuff I tend to write is very pop-ish so I hope I'll be okay in this game. And idk if my stuff is even good nnn no one really knows I write stuff I'm set for this challenge There is nothing I can't manage I'll just take one more shot and then I'll show you what I got *EDM drop* a meter of 6/8/6/8 unless I am stupid
touya kinomoto Posted August 19, 2017 Posted August 19, 2017 I. AM. SHOOK. I was thinking of repetitive choruses but damn, you were all serving!
Hug Posted August 19, 2017 Posted August 19, 2017 3 minutes ago, PoKiTaurus said: The stuff I tend to write is very pop-ish so I hope I'll be okay in this game. And idk if my stuff is even good nnn no one really knows I write stuff I'm set for this challenge There is nothing I can't manage I'll just take one more shot and then I'll show you what I got *EDM drop* a meter of 6/8/6/8 unless I am stupid Just try not to be too basic [don't put *EDM drop* in your entry judges hate that]
fountain Posted August 19, 2017 Posted August 19, 2017 This is a song I wrote for the PH7 final if you wanna read this. It's over two years old at this point but I think it's my favourite PH entry I've done. Into the Woods Verse What lies beyond the boundary A place of endless mystery Delve into whatever could be The sights of beauty you may see A place to let the spirit go For you to wander ever so The nature sets your soul aglow A feeling some may never know Pre-chorus We’ve found just what we had wished for They cannot find us anymore Chorus Shrouded with greenery The place your dreams may be I dare you, come deeper And run into the woods Through all hold onto me I’ll show you what you must see I dare you, come deeper And run into the woods Verse The deepest dark you must let in Before your journey may begin The coldest wind against your skin The haven without human sin A fragile place some tear apart Protect it like it is your heart I hope you see what I see too The beauty of this heaven’s view Pre-chorus A world you can forget your woe And run among the little doe Chorus Shrouded with greenery The place your dreams may be I dare you, come deeper And run into the woods Through all hold onto me I'll show you what you must see I dare you, come deeper And run into the woods Bridge The world will watch us from afar And question all the things we are There is no path you may follow But I can lead you where to go We must hold back our dawning fear They’ll come with flame and soon draw near We’ll hide until we’re in the clear The hunter never finds the deer Chorus Shrouded with greenery The place your dreams may be I dare you, come deeper And run into the woods Through all hold onto me I'll show you what you must see I dare you, come deeper And run into the woods
Dylobs Posted August 19, 2017 Posted August 19, 2017 13 minutes ago, KatyCatPH said: I. AM. SHOOK. I was thinking of repetitive choruses but damn, you were all serving! Sorry but no lazy songwriting allowed here
touya kinomoto Posted August 19, 2017 Posted August 19, 2017 6 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: This is a song I wrote for the PH7 final if you wanna read this. It's over two years old at this point but I think it's my favourite PH entry I've done. Hide contents Into the Woods Verse What lies beyond the boundary A place of endless mystery Delve into whatever could be The sights of beauty you may see A place to let the spirit go For you to wander ever so The nature sets your soul aglow A feeling some may never know Pre-chorus We’ve found just what we had wished for They cannot find us anymore Chorus Shrouded with greenery The place your dreams may be I dare you, come deeper And run into the woods Through all hold onto me I’ll show you what you must see I dare you, come deeper And run into the woods Verse The deepest dark you must let in Before your journey may begin The coldest wind against your skin The haven without human sin A fragile place some tear apart Protect it like it is your heart I hope you see what I see too The beauty of this heaven’s view Pre-chorus A world you can forget your woe And run among the little doe Chorus Shrouded with greenery The place your dreams may be I dare you, come deeper And run into the woods Through all hold onto me I'll show you what you must see I dare you, come deeper And run into the woods Bridge The world will watch us from afar And question all the things we are There is no path you may follow But I can lead you where to go We must hold back our dawning fear They’ll come with flame and soon draw near We’ll hide until we’re in the clear The hunter never finds the deer Chorus Shrouded with greenery The place your dreams may be I dare you, come deeper And run into the woods Through all hold onto me I'll show you what you must see I dare you, come deeper And run into the woods Taylor is shook!
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