Aurora Posted September 15, 2017 Share Posted September 15, 2017 27 minutes ago, UFO said: I'll submit my song later today! Hopefully the penalty isn't too big nnn can't u just abduct one of the judges and blackmail for more time or time travel back through the space time continuum and submit on time? but seriously omg we can't lose you! quick submit something fat~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aurora Posted September 15, 2017 Share Posted September 15, 2017 Just now, Gastrodonatella said: luckily no one has to worry about losing gastrolegendtella! not everybody has that security and aurora gon do what an aurora does best, stay in the sky well above u bitches as u marvel @ my brilliance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Year of Shadow Posted September 15, 2017 Share Posted September 15, 2017 Is the title meant as a joke or is it serious Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touya kinomoto Posted September 15, 2017 Share Posted September 15, 2017 2 hours ago, Aurora said: Found a spare minute to read this, this is actually really cute. Whether or not it's the end of your time in this competition, you shouldn't let that discourage you because you've clearly got a good vision and understand of song and the only way you're going to get better is by keeping at it. Hoping you pull through, though! 0.3 points isn't really that much. Thanks Sam! You're always so encouraging. I was just having some time management issues this week and I felt that I did not do my theme enough justice. I am really enjoying my time here and knowing that it could end soon just saddens me. But that's how it is. I'll just try again and do better next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Denim Posted September 15, 2017 Share Posted September 15, 2017 9 hours ago, feelslikeadream said: Is this really the title, sis?.... Yeah lmao thjs is my artpop mini era Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touya kinomoto Posted September 15, 2017 Share Posted September 15, 2017 6 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: even if (note "if") ur eliminated ur still more than welcome at the dubtrack and stuff ph is more community than competition to lots of us I feel the same way too. This group is just a tight-knit, fun group and I am glad I got to be a part of it. And of course, I have to join the dubtrack sessions. Who else will serve you classics? Thanks Will! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Speezy Posted September 15, 2017 Share Posted September 15, 2017 Here's part of scrapped song from this round it lacked a bridge Spoiler Speezy - Putting Down the Toys [v1] There's a naked person by the corridor Curled up like a homeless man in the rain But I can't seem to recall their name Broken bottles and garments are on the floor I have bible scriptures all around me But white stains on my lower body - [Prechorus] I just want to pick up the pieces right now I want to put them back in the correct place I know it'll take some time To become right in gods sight [chorus] It's time for me to put on clothes of the lord I've been walking naked without his word I put my chastity belt on Covered the hickies on my neck Pour holy oil over my body I start to feel so refreshed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UFO Posted September 15, 2017 Share Posted September 15, 2017 3 hours ago, Aurora said: can't u just abduct one of the judges and blackmail for more time or time travel back through the space time continuum and submit on time? but seriously omg we can't lose you! quick submit something fat~ Nnnnnnn my time machine is broken sis I'm definitely not quitting tho, don't worry! I'll try to submit something today if I can Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UFO Posted September 15, 2017 Share Posted September 15, 2017 (edited) 23 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: if u hurry u might still only have about one point penalty Really?! OMG Yaaas thanks for letting me know! Nnnnn I literally just finished my song now ahhhh let me quickly submit. I'm pretty satisfied with what I wrote actually Edited September 15, 2017 by UFO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UFO Posted September 15, 2017 Share Posted September 15, 2017 (edited) Whew okay I finally submitted! I was so close to giving up this week but I'm glad I pulled through I definitely tried to apply the judges' feedback last week to my song this week as much as I could It's a LOT shorter than what I usually write Hopefully it does well! Even if it doesn't I'm just glad I didn't give up Edited September 15, 2017 by UFO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Speezy Posted September 15, 2017 Share Posted September 15, 2017 (edited) 1 hour ago, Gastrodonatella said: at least u knew to scrap it Praise the lord I didn't finish or send it Edited September 15, 2017 by Speezy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted September 15, 2017 ATRL Moderator Share Posted September 15, 2017 2 hours ago, Speezy said: Here's part of scrapped song from this round it lacked a bridge Reveal hidden contents Speezy - Putting Down the Toys [v1] There's a naked person by the corridor Curled up like a homeless man in the rain But I can't seem to recall their name Broken bottles and garments are on the floor I have bible scriptures all around me But white stains on my lower body - [Prechorus] I just want to pick up the pieces right now I want to put them back in the correct place I know it'll take some time To become right in gods sight [chorus] It's time for me to put on clothes of the lord I've been walking naked without his word I put my chastity belt on Covered the hickies on my neck Pour holy oil over my body I start to feel so refreshed this is a great concept though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minho Posted September 15, 2017 Share Posted September 15, 2017 I suddenly regret changing my title Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ultraviolence.xx Posted September 15, 2017 Share Posted September 15, 2017 cant wait for reviews. prolly gonna be a mess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted September 15, 2017 Share Posted September 15, 2017 Banana Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted September 15, 2017 Share Posted September 15, 2017 Banana Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hug Posted September 15, 2017 Share Posted September 15, 2017 Half of my heart was in Banana oh na na Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted September 15, 2017 Share Posted September 15, 2017 I'm just gonna keep submitting even if I get eliminated y'all can't stop me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aurora Posted September 16, 2017 Share Posted September 16, 2017 2 hours ago, Hug said: Half of my heart was in Banana oh na na You win ATRL. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ultraviolence.xx Posted September 16, 2017 Share Posted September 16, 2017 3 hours ago, Hug said: Half of my heart was in Banana oh na na zomg hug i said this in the OMG thread 17 hours ago, ultraviolence.xx said: whew, a song. banana wishes i think we're twins Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ultraviolence.xx Posted September 16, 2017 Share Posted September 16, 2017 Just now, Gastrodonatella said: wait hugs a scammer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touya kinomoto Posted September 16, 2017 Share Posted September 16, 2017 I think @Jackson did not see my song when I sent it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hug Posted September 16, 2017 Share Posted September 16, 2017 https://www.dubtrack.fm/join/platinumhitlers Hello friends, if you would like to interact and have fun please join Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintWest Posted September 16, 2017 Share Posted September 16, 2017 7 hours ago, ultraviolence.xx said: cant wait for reviews. prolly gonna be a mess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aurora Posted September 16, 2017 Share Posted September 16, 2017 1 hour ago, Gastrodonatella said: what people sound like when they call a #3 song a bomb #NoNames @Aurora Aegis outsold Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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