tournament PLATINUM HIT 11▴ congratulations aurora ♛

[Jackson]

Just now, Covergirl said:

What!?!?

 

omg 

 

i still have it, I don't know how to prove it to you that It was done at 1:30 and sent but it doesn't show I sent it in my inbox either idk why

Just send it now, I'll probably just give you a little penalty for forgetting to send unless you can prove it was sent somehow 

[ceremonials]

ugh now i have to do another review

[Denim]

Just now, Jackson said:

Just send it now, I'll probably just give you a little penalty for forgetting to send unless you can prove it was sent somehow 

Okay is fine I just wish I knew it didn't fully send

 

I'll send it rn

[Denim]

mess. the second i went to dm jackson the song popped up in full.

 

I must've closed the tab / turned my pc off before it fully sent or something

 

 

[Denim]

[ultraviolence.xx]

the clue is interesting. the fact that hug and i are the same makes me happy. maybe the good sis is #2 and i am #20  

Edited September 10, 2017 by ultraviolence.xx

[Denim]

interested to see my pokemon hint from king of dragging gen 6 ceremonials

[ceremonials]

1 minute ago, Gastrodonatella said:

austin didn't respond to this so i'm right  

nope

 

[ceremonials]

Just now, Gastrodonatella said:

you would've responded earlier if you weren't threatened by how correct it was  

i wasnt home

 

[smholiv]

they're all between like 4 colour palettes...? grey/yellow/pink/purple

 

just explain why i'm an ugly one fat

[ceremonials]

your black eye casts no shadows

 

my red eyes see no blame

 

your slaps dont stick, your kicks dont hit, so we remain the same

 

[FCKNAmbrosia]

Just now, minho said:

they're all between like 4 colour palettes...? grey/yellow/pink/purple

 

just explain why i'm an ugly one fat

we have the same pokemon! Hello my flop twin

[Citrus]

hi honies. Sent my scores in, this round was my least fave to judge so far but I attribute that to being restricted to a single artist. I'm rush releasing reviews throughout the night since I have an obligation for the next couple hours. Go to bed if you're tired, I'll @ each of you when your review is posted. 

[smholiv]

1 minute ago, FCKNAmbrosia said:

we have the same pokemon! Hello my flop twin

our reviews were both semi-positive so hello to us skating by  

[Citrus]

Also gentle reminder that there's more to imagery than water and fire love you all tho x

[Denim]

Just now, Citrus said:

Also gentle reminder that there's more to imagery than water and fire love you all tho x

me with my constant ghost imagery
 

[Citrus]

1 minute ago, Gastrodonatella said:

okay hennies it's time to commit mass suicide together

You did fine, I was really pleasantly surprised because Dolly is hard to write for. I stanned! 

[Denim]

2 minutes ago, Citrus said:

hi honies. Sent my scores in, this round was my least fave to judge so far but I attribute that to being restricted to a single artist. I'm rush releasing reviews throughout the night since I have an obligation for the next couple hours. Go to bed if you're tired, I'll @ each of you when your review is posted. 

This was my least favorite round to write for too

 

I personally don't like writing for other artists, but i'm gonna pretend like this is RPDR and say that I know what the competition is like before coming in and I should be able to adapt to all obstacles that come my way!

[FCKNAmbrosia]

cute

Edited September 10, 2017 by FCKNAmbrosia

[funnellegs]

I used some fire imagery nnn

[funnellegs]

Gotta go to bed cos of work. See you on the other side ya'll 

[SaintWest]

2 hours ago, ceremonials said:

 

@SaintWest, “Numbers Girl” (REHAB)

 

Oh wow, Numbers Boy her sister. I thought this would be for 21p weirdly when I saw the title, but immediately dismissed that as I started reading. I was originally dewigged at the first verse, it was literally a flawless representation of Amy, as well as flawless writing in general. Things sort’ve went downhill from there but I mean, the first verse was a 10, so there wasn’t anywhere to go but down. And while it was essentially a downward slope of a song, it wasn;t a very steep one. The second verse almost holds up as well as the first, but felt a little out of place. I wasn’t very fond of the second chorus - I get what you were trying to say, but I felt it could’ve done better. I don’t think the whole “number one” motif needed to be repeated at all, for that matter. In this sense, I liked the final chorus a lot more than the original, though I get why they are separate entities. Likewise, I wasn’t feeling the bridge. The “inside your home” line was just a bit too blunt, maybe not for Amy in general, but I dont think it fit the tone of the song up til that point very well. Still, this was a very good attempt at tackling a very hard artist to emulate, and I definitely like this more than Numbers Boy

 

omg, thank you cere! we love a good review. i think the numbers boy chorus will still remain that chorus, but i'm glad the rest of the song wasn't as bad as it could've been. i wasn't a fan of the bridge either, i just struggled to find a good transition into the final chorus and the deadline was cutting close. i knew the number one repetition would seem off, i just liked how it went from "i never thought i'd be your number one" to "you're number one." even though it was just a repetition of the line above, i liked how it contradicted the message.

 

[smholiv]

"this round was my least fave to judge so far"

 

well I will still plan my train station jump scene just in case!

 

[SaintWest]

9 minutes ago, Citrus said:

You did fine, I was really pleasantly surprised because Dolly is hard to write for. I stanned! 

Should Numbers Girl be shook or can she breath?

Edited September 10, 2017 by SaintWest

[ceremonials]

Just now, Gastrodonatella said:

@ceremonials purple is my favorite color, grimer is purple, i was your favorite entry  

Grimer is also the pokemon embodiment of shït