touya kinomoto Posted September 8, 2017 Share Posted September 8, 2017 37 minutes ago, Aurora said: The only place this will be going #1 is the bubbling under charts. Very polarizing so far! Send it to me and we'll see. Also I can send you mine if you want. I never got opinions before I submitted mine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Galah Posted September 8, 2017 Share Posted September 8, 2017 17 minutes ago, FCKNAmbrosia said: If you win again this week I will be pressed Not Today, I Doubt. But we'll let Jackson and the others be The Judge of that. 3 minutes ago, KatyCatPH said: Send it to me and we'll see. Also I can send you mine if you want. I never got opinions before I submitted mine. Sure! I'd love to see yours. I didn't have time to get opinions either, but at the same time I'm kind of glad I didn't overanalyze this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FCKNAmbrosia Posted September 8, 2017 Share Posted September 8, 2017 (edited) 1 minute ago, Aurora said: Sure! I'd love to see yours. I didn't have time to get opinions either, but at the same time I'm kind of glad I didn't overanalyze this one. oh I'd like to read your alternative rap smash too Edited September 8, 2017 by FCKNAmbrosia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hug Posted September 8, 2017 Share Posted September 8, 2017 Hello friends just letting everyone know I am going to bed. Hope those of you awake have a good day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Galah Posted September 8, 2017 Share Posted September 8, 2017 29 minutes ago, Hug said: Hello friends just letting everyone know I am going to bed. Hope those of you awake have a good day. However it's almost 1am here. I'd hate to think what time it is in Hugland. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poki Posted September 8, 2017 Share Posted September 8, 2017 Lemme pray I'm not in the bottom 5 this round. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Citrus Posted September 8, 2017 Share Posted September 8, 2017 When will Fagson send us the songs tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted September 8, 2017 Author Share Posted September 8, 2017 10 minutes ago, Citrus said: When will Fagson send us the songs tho Coming now sis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Speezy Posted September 8, 2017 Share Posted September 8, 2017 2 hours ago, PoKiTaurus said: Lemme pray I'm not in the bottom 5 this round. Same If my non-sex anthem snubs me I'll seethe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touya kinomoto Posted September 8, 2017 Share Posted September 8, 2017 2 hours ago, PoKiTaurus said: Lemme pray I'm not in the bottom 5 this round. You don't wanna join me here sis? We have cookies here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Citrus Posted September 8, 2017 Share Posted September 8, 2017 Since @ceremonials and I agreed to write songs this week, below is my stab at Florence xo Spoiler Piano Genre: Spooky [VERSE] Fingers of lace on keys of ivory Melodies dripping with the bitterest irony Now she’s gone but still she plays Her echoes permeate the haze Mozart breaks my fragile mind The sins I’d rather leave behind All of those shallow, wasted nights Of love in arms with emerald eyes The girl who took my heart by storm Yet not the one on my finger worn My love was left to weep at home So my devil’s urge could lurch and roam [CHORUS] I gave myself away (To the broken roads) God do what he may (Left my love all alone) Such a cheap affair (The air is dripping gin) Life is so unfair (I killed my love again) I can say that I’m sorry I can say I was wrong But I can’t hear over the piano’s song [VERSE] Misguided passion drove us apart I kissed her lips and ripped out her heart She held her tongue too many days From the fires of the hell I’ve raised Her anger quickly turned to dust And her stricken frame went soon enough From the fatal fruit she took a bite And washed it down with cyanide Life unto death is what they say My devil’s dues I soon will pay My love is gone but my guilt consumes As her piano plays its song of doom [CHORUS] I gave myself away (To the broken roads) God do what he may (Left my love all alone) Such a cheap affair (The air is dripping gin) Life is so unfair (I killed my love again) I can say that I’m sorry I can say I was wrong But I can’t hear over the piano’s song [BRIDGE] Our baby grand cries vengeful wails I’m in my coffin, I have my nails My guilt, her music, follow me still Into a cellar room with a purple pill Each chord indicts another crime Tortures this evil soul of mine I eat my guilt and I eat my lies And I wash them down with cyanide [OUTRO] I gave myself away (To the broken roads) God do what he may (Left my love all alone) Such a cheap affair (The air is dripping gin) Life is so unfair (I killed my love again) I can say that I’m sorry I can say I was wrong But I can’t hear over the piano’s song I can’t hear over the piano’s song So I sing along Explanation: This song is written from the perspective of a husband who cheats on his wife. After cheating on her for a good while, she kills herself. Then, however, he begins hearing her play the piano and the sound slowly pushes him to suicide, as well. Is the wife a vengeful spirit? A manifestation of the husband's guilt at neglecting the woman he pledged himself to? Or is Florence and the Machine just aggressive imagery over a small strings section? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Denim Posted September 8, 2017 Share Posted September 8, 2017 Here to claim another #2 i kinda doubt it though considering how I took forever to write it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UFO Posted September 8, 2017 Share Posted September 8, 2017 (edited) 4 hours ago, Hug said: Hello friends just letting everyone know I am going to bed. Hope those of you awake have a good day. Thanks! U2 Edited September 8, 2017 by UFO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted September 8, 2017 Share Posted September 8, 2017 14 minutes ago, Citrus said: Since @ceremonials and I agreed to write songs this week, below is my stab at Florence xo Hide contents Piano Genre: Spooky [VERSE] Fingers of lace on keys of ivory Melodies dripping with the bitterest irony Now she’s gone but still she plays Her echoes permeate the haze Mozart breaks my fragile mind The sins I’d rather leave behind All of those shallow, wasted nights Of love in arms with emerald eyes The girl who took my heart by storm Yet not the one on my finger worn My love was left to weep at home So my devil’s urge could lurch and roam [CHORUS] I gave myself away (To the broken roads) God do what he may (Left my love all alone) Such a cheap affair (The air is dripping gin) Life is so unfair (I killed my love again) I can say that I’m sorry I can say I was wrong But I can’t hear over the piano’s song [VERSE] Misguided passion drove us apart I kissed her lips and ripped out her heart She held her tongue too many days From the fires of the hell I’ve raised Her anger quickly turned to dust And her stricken frame went soon enough From the fatal fruit she took a bite And washed it down with cyanide Life unto death is what they say My devil’s dues I soon will pay My love is gone but my guilt consumes As her piano plays its song of doom [CHORUS] I gave myself away (To the broken roads) God do what he may (Left my love all alone) Such a cheap affair (The air is dripping gin) Life is so unfair (I killed my love again) I can say that I’m sorry I can say I was wrong But I can’t hear over the piano’s song [BRIDGE] Our baby grand cries vengeful wails I’m in my coffin, I have my nails My guilt, her music, follow me still Into a cellar room with a purple pill Each chord indicts another crime Tortures this evil soul of mine I eat my guilt and I eat my lies And I wash them down with cyanide [OUTRO] I gave myself away (To the broken roads) God do what he may (Left my love all alone) Such a cheap affair (The air is dripping gin) Life is so unfair (I killed my love again) I can say that I’m sorry I can say I was wrong But I can’t hear over the piano’s song I can’t hear over the piano’s song So I sing along Explanation: This song is written from the perspective of a husband who cheats on his wife. After cheating on her for a good while, she kills herself. Then, however, he begins hearing her play the piano and the sound slowly pushes him to suicide, as well. Is the wife a vengeful spirit? A manifestation of the husband's guilt at neglecting the woman he pledged himself to? Or is Florence and the Machine just aggressive imagery over a small strings section? Surprising to no one I didn't actually write anything x i like this, tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UFO Posted September 8, 2017 Share Posted September 8, 2017 16 minutes ago, Citrus said: Since @ceremonials and I agreed to write songs this week, below is my stab at Florence xo Hide contents Piano Genre: Spooky [VERSE] Fingers of lace on keys of ivory Melodies dripping with the bitterest irony Now she’s gone but still she plays Her echoes permeate the haze Mozart breaks my fragile mind The sins I’d rather leave behind All of those shallow, wasted nights Of love in arms with emerald eyes The girl who took my heart by storm Yet not the one on my finger worn My love was left to weep at home So my devil’s urge could lurch and roam [CHORUS] I gave myself away (To the broken roads) God do what he may (Left my love all alone) Such a cheap affair (The air is dripping gin) Life is so unfair (I killed my love again) I can say that I’m sorry I can say I was wrong But I can’t hear over the piano’s song [VERSE] Misguided passion drove us apart I kissed her lips and ripped out her heart She held her tongue too many days From the fires of the hell I’ve raised Her anger quickly turned to dust And her stricken frame went soon enough From the fatal fruit she took a bite And washed it down with cyanide Life unto death is what they say My devil’s dues I soon will pay My love is gone but my guilt consumes As her piano plays its song of doom [CHORUS] I gave myself away (To the broken roads) God do what he may (Left my love all alone) Such a cheap affair (The air is dripping gin) Life is so unfair (I killed my love again) I can say that I’m sorry I can say I was wrong But I can’t hear over the piano’s song [BRIDGE] Our baby grand cries vengeful wails I’m in my coffin, I have my nails My guilt, her music, follow me still Into a cellar room with a purple pill Each chord indicts another crime Tortures this evil soul of mine I eat my guilt and I eat my lies And I wash them down with cyanide [OUTRO] I gave myself away (To the broken roads) God do what he may (Left my love all alone) Such a cheap affair (The air is dripping gin) Life is so unfair (I killed my love again) I can say that I’m sorry I can say I was wrong But I can’t hear over the piano’s song I can’t hear over the piano’s song So I sing along Explanation: This song is written from the perspective of a husband who cheats on his wife. After cheating on her for a good while, she kills herself. Then, however, he begins hearing her play the piano and the sound slowly pushes him to suicide, as well. Is the wife a vengeful spirit? A manifestation of the husband's guilt at neglecting the woman he pledged himself to? Or is Florence and the Machine just aggressive imagery over a small strings section? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted September 8, 2017 ATRL Moderator Share Posted September 8, 2017 2 minutes ago, ceremonials said: Surprising to no one I didn't actually write anything x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted September 8, 2017 ATRL Moderator Share Posted September 8, 2017 18 minutes ago, Citrus said: Since @ceremonials and I agreed to write songs this week, below is my stab at Florence xo Reveal hidden contents Piano Genre: Spooky [VERSE] Fingers of lace on keys of ivory Melodies dripping with the bitterest irony Now she’s gone but still she plays Her echoes permeate the haze Mozart breaks my fragile mind The sins I’d rather leave behind All of those shallow, wasted nights Of love in arms with emerald eyes The girl who took my heart by storm Yet not the one on my finger worn My love was left to weep at home So my devil’s urge could lurch and roam [CHORUS] I gave myself away (To the broken roads) God do what he may (Left my love all alone) Such a cheap affair (The air is dripping gin) Life is so unfair (I killed my love again) I can say that I’m sorry I can say I was wrong But I can’t hear over the piano’s song [VERSE] Misguided passion drove us apart I kissed her lips and ripped out her heart She held her tongue too many days From the fires of the hell I’ve raised Her anger quickly turned to dust And her stricken frame went soon enough From the fatal fruit she took a bite And washed it down with cyanide Life unto death is what they say My devil’s dues I soon will pay My love is gone but my guilt consumes As her piano plays its song of doom [CHORUS] I gave myself away (To the broken roads) God do what he may (Left my love all alone) Such a cheap affair (The air is dripping gin) Life is so unfair (I killed my love again) I can say that I’m sorry I can say I was wrong But I can’t hear over the piano’s song [BRIDGE] Our baby grand cries vengeful wails I’m in my coffin, I have my nails My guilt, her music, follow me still Into a cellar room with a purple pill Each chord indicts another crime Tortures this evil soul of mine I eat my guilt and I eat my lies And I wash them down with cyanide [OUTRO] I gave myself away (To the broken roads) God do what he may (Left my love all alone) Such a cheap affair (The air is dripping gin) Life is so unfair (I killed my love again) I can say that I’m sorry I can say I was wrong But I can’t hear over the piano’s song I can’t hear over the piano’s song So I sing along Explanation: This song is written from the perspective of a husband who cheats on his wife. After cheating on her for a good while, she kills herself. Then, however, he begins hearing her play the piano and the sound slowly pushes him to suicide, as well. Is the wife a vengeful spirit? A manifestation of the husband's guilt at neglecting the woman he pledged himself to? Or is Florence and the Machine just aggressive imagery over a small strings section? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nait Phoenix Posted September 8, 2017 Share Posted September 8, 2017 "Hubris" - twentyonepilots I did a thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Glassmouth Posted September 9, 2017 Share Posted September 9, 2017 (edited) just sent i really really apologize for sending my entry so late, I was SO *** this week and I didn't realize that it was due yesterday so I just changed a bit of what i had and sent it, I'm not sure I'm going to do with what i did i should've told Jackson, sorry Edited September 9, 2017 by Glassmouth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Speezy Posted September 9, 2017 Share Posted September 9, 2017 1 hour ago, Glassmouth said: just sent i really really apologize for sending my entry so late, I was SO *** this week and I didn't realize that it was due yesterday so I just changed a bit of what i had and sent it, I'm not sure I'm going to do with what i did i should've told Jackson, sorrynotsorryoniTunes King of honesty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poki Posted September 9, 2017 Share Posted September 9, 2017 This gif fits into so many things lmao I hope my song does well. Dolly's songs tend be pretty short in terms of lyrics and based on what I see she's very straight to the point. I hope I managed to pull it off properly. I'll actually just post it here if anyone is curious Our Love's A Two Piece Heart Genre: Joanne Verse 1: You left me on Friday Said you’ll be back by Monday As you kissed me I said Your job always gets in the way You said don’t you worry And that we could use the money So now I’m all alone Left to count the days ‘till you’re home Chorus: I wish I wish That you would be here I hate I hate That we can’t be near Our love’s a two piece heart When we’re not close it falls apart Verse 2: You called on Saturday Reassured everything’s okay Now there’s just one more day I hope you’ll soon be on your way They say life is so short Why does this weekend feel so long Chorus: I wish I wish That you would be here I hate I hate That we can’t be near Our love’s a two piece heart When we’re not close it falls apart Bridge: Oh baby the money isn’t worth Spending time alone Out here on my own Chorus: I wish I wish That you would be here I hate I hate That we can’t be near Our love’s a two piece heart When we’re not close it falls apart It falls apart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glassmouth Posted September 9, 2017 Share Posted September 9, 2017 9 minutes ago, PoKiTaurus said: Genre: Joanne Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Citrus Posted September 9, 2017 Share Posted September 9, 2017 7 hours ago, Gastrodonatella said: genre: spooky Clock the upcoming Halloween round Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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