tournament PLATINUM HIT 11▴ congratulations aurora ♛

[touya kinomoto]

37 minutes ago, Aurora said:

The only place this will be going #1 is the bubbling under charts.  Very polarizing so far!

 

 

Send it to me and we'll see. Also I can send you mine if you want. I never got opinions before I submitted mine. 

[Galah]

17 minutes ago, FCKNAmbrosia said:

If you win again this week  I will be pressed

Not Today, I Doubt. But we'll let Jackson and the others be The Judge of that.

 

3 minutes ago, KatyCatPH said:

Send it to me and we'll see. Also I can send you mine if you want. I never got opinions before I submitted mine. 

Sure! I'd love to see yours. I didn't have time to get opinions either, but at the same time I'm kind of glad I didn't overanalyze this one.

[FCKNAmbrosia]

 

1 minute ago, Aurora said:

Sure! I'd love to see yours. I didn't have time to get opinions either, but at the same time I'm kind of glad I didn't overanalyze this one.

oh I'd like to read your alternative rap smash too 

Edited September 8, 2017 by FCKNAmbrosia

[Hug]

Hello friends just letting everyone know I am going to bed.  Hope those of you awake have a good day.  

[Galah]

29 minutes ago, Hug said:

Hello friends just letting everyone know I am going to bed.  Hope those of you awake have a good day.  

 

However it's almost 1am here. I'd hate to think what time it is in Hugland.

[poki]

Lemme pray I'm not in the bottom 5 this round. 

 

[Citrus]

When will Fagson send us the songs tho

 

[Jackson]

10 minutes ago, Citrus said:

When will Fagson send us the songs tho

 

Coming now sis 

[Speezy]

2 hours ago, PoKiTaurus said:

Lemme pray I'm not in the bottom 5 this round. 

 

Same 

If my non-sex anthem snubs me I'll seethe 

[touya kinomoto]

2 hours ago, PoKiTaurus said:

Lemme pray I'm not in the bottom 5 this round. 

 

You don't wanna join me here sis? We have cookies here. 

[Citrus]

Since @ceremonials and I agreed to write songs this week, below is my stab at Florence xo

 

Spoiler

 

Piano

Genre: Spooky

 

[VERSE]

Fingers of lace on keys of ivory

Melodies dripping with the bitterest irony

Now she’s gone but still she plays

Her echoes permeate the haze

 

Mozart breaks my fragile mind

The sins I’d rather leave behind

All of those shallow, wasted nights

Of love in arms with emerald eyes

 

The girl who took my heart by storm

Yet not the one on my finger worn

My love was left to weep at home

So my devil’s urge could lurch and roam

 

[CHORUS]

I gave myself away

(To the broken roads)

God do what he may

(Left my love all alone)

Such a cheap affair

(The air is dripping gin)

Life is so unfair

(I killed my love again)

I can say that I’m sorry

I can say I was wrong

But I can’t hear over the piano’s song

 

[VERSE]

Misguided passion drove us apart

I kissed her lips and ripped out her heart

She held her tongue too many days

From the fires of the hell I’ve raised

 

Her anger quickly turned to dust

And her stricken frame went soon enough

From the fatal fruit she took a bite

And washed it down with cyanide

 

Life unto death is what they say

My devil’s dues I soon will pay

My love is gone but my guilt consumes

As her piano plays its song of doom

 

[CHORUS]

I gave myself away

(To the broken roads)

God do what he may

(Left my love all alone)

Such a cheap affair

(The air is dripping gin)

Life is so unfair

(I killed my love again)

I can say that I’m sorry

I can say I was wrong

But I can’t hear over the piano’s song

 

[BRIDGE]

Our baby grand cries vengeful wails

I’m in my coffin, I have my nails

My guilt, her music, follow me still

Into a cellar room with a purple pill

 

Each chord indicts another crime

Tortures this evil soul of mine

I eat my guilt and I eat my lies

And I wash them down with cyanide

 

[OUTRO]

I gave myself away

(To the broken roads)

God do what he may

(Left my love all alone)

Such a cheap affair

(The air is dripping gin)

Life is so unfair

(I killed my love again)

I can say that I’m sorry

I can say I was wrong

But I can’t hear over the piano’s song

 I can’t hear over the piano’s song

So I sing along

 

Explanation: This song is written from the perspective of a husband who cheats on his wife. After cheating on her for a good while, she kills herself. Then, however, he begins hearing her play the piano and the sound slowly pushes him to suicide, as well. Is the wife a vengeful spirit? A manifestation of the husband's guilt at neglecting the woman he pledged himself to? Or is Florence and the Machine just aggressive imagery over a small strings section?

 

 

[Denim]

Here to claim another #2

 

i kinda doubt it though considering how I took forever to write it

 

[UFO]

4 hours ago, Hug said:

Hello friends just letting everyone know I am going to bed.  Hope those of you awake have a good day.  

Thanks!     U2

Edited September 8, 2017 by UFO

[ceremonials]

14 minutes ago, Citrus said:

Since @ceremonials and I agreed to write songs this week, below is my stab at Florence xo

 

  Hide contents

 

Piano

Genre: Spooky

 

[VERSE]

Fingers of lace on keys of ivory

Melodies dripping with the bitterest irony

Now she’s gone but still she plays

Her echoes permeate the haze

 

Mozart breaks my fragile mind

The sins I’d rather leave behind

All of those shallow, wasted nights

Of love in arms with emerald eyes

 

The girl who took my heart by storm

Yet not the one on my finger worn

My love was left to weep at home

So my devil’s urge could lurch and roam

 

[CHORUS]

I gave myself away

(To the broken roads)

God do what he may

(Left my love all alone)

Such a cheap affair

(The air is dripping gin)

Life is so unfair

(I killed my love again)

I can say that I’m sorry

I can say I was wrong

But I can’t hear over the piano’s song

 

[VERSE]

Misguided passion drove us apart

I kissed her lips and ripped out her heart

She held her tongue too many days

From the fires of the hell I’ve raised

 

Her anger quickly turned to dust

And her stricken frame went soon enough

From the fatal fruit she took a bite

And washed it down with cyanide

 

Life unto death is what they say

My devil’s dues I soon will pay

My love is gone but my guilt consumes

As her piano plays its song of doom

 

[CHORUS]

I gave myself away

(To the broken roads)

God do what he may

(Left my love all alone)

Such a cheap affair

(The air is dripping gin)

Life is so unfair

(I killed my love again)

I can say that I’m sorry

I can say I was wrong

But I can’t hear over the piano’s song

 

[BRIDGE]

Our baby grand cries vengeful wails

I’m in my coffin, I have my nails

My guilt, her music, follow me still

Into a cellar room with a purple pill

 

Each chord indicts another crime

Tortures this evil soul of mine

I eat my guilt and I eat my lies

And I wash them down with cyanide

 

[OUTRO]

I gave myself away

(To the broken roads)

God do what he may

(Left my love all alone)

Such a cheap affair

(The air is dripping gin)

Life is so unfair

(I killed my love again)

I can say that I’m sorry

I can say I was wrong

But I can’t hear over the piano’s song

 I can’t hear over the piano’s song

So I sing along

 

Explanation: This song is written from the perspective of a husband who cheats on his wife. After cheating on her for a good while, she kills herself. Then, however, he begins hearing her play the piano and the sound slowly pushes him to suicide, as well. Is the wife a vengeful spirit? A manifestation of the husband's guilt at neglecting the woman he pledged himself to? Or is Florence and the Machine just aggressive imagery over a small strings section?

 

 

Surprising to no one I didn't actually write anything x

 

i like this, tho.

[UFO]

16 minutes ago, Citrus said:

Since @ceremonials and I agreed to write songs this week, below is my stab at Florence xo

 

  Hide contents

 

Piano

Genre: Spooky

 

[VERSE]

Fingers of lace on keys of ivory

Melodies dripping with the bitterest irony

Now she’s gone but still she plays

Her echoes permeate the haze

 

Mozart breaks my fragile mind

The sins I’d rather leave behind

All of those shallow, wasted nights

Of love in arms with emerald eyes

 

The girl who took my heart by storm

Yet not the one on my finger worn

My love was left to weep at home

So my devil’s urge could lurch and roam

 

[CHORUS]

I gave myself away

(To the broken roads)

God do what he may

(Left my love all alone)

Such a cheap affair

(The air is dripping gin)

Life is so unfair

(I killed my love again)

I can say that I’m sorry

I can say I was wrong

But I can’t hear over the piano’s song

 

[VERSE]

Misguided passion drove us apart

I kissed her lips and ripped out her heart

She held her tongue too many days

From the fires of the hell I’ve raised

 

Her anger quickly turned to dust

And her stricken frame went soon enough

From the fatal fruit she took a bite

And washed it down with cyanide

 

Life unto death is what they say

My devil’s dues I soon will pay

My love is gone but my guilt consumes

As her piano plays its song of doom

 

[CHORUS]

I gave myself away

(To the broken roads)

God do what he may

(Left my love all alone)

Such a cheap affair

(The air is dripping gin)

Life is so unfair

(I killed my love again)

I can say that I’m sorry

I can say I was wrong

But I can’t hear over the piano’s song

 

[BRIDGE]

Our baby grand cries vengeful wails

I’m in my coffin, I have my nails

My guilt, her music, follow me still

Into a cellar room with a purple pill

 

Each chord indicts another crime

Tortures this evil soul of mine

I eat my guilt and I eat my lies

And I wash them down with cyanide

 

[OUTRO]

I gave myself away

(To the broken roads)

God do what he may

(Left my love all alone)

Such a cheap affair

(The air is dripping gin)

Life is so unfair

(I killed my love again)

I can say that I’m sorry

I can say I was wrong

But I can’t hear over the piano’s song

 I can’t hear over the piano’s song

So I sing along

 

Explanation: This song is written from the perspective of a husband who cheats on his wife. After cheating on her for a good while, she kills herself. Then, however, he begins hearing her play the piano and the sound slowly pushes him to suicide, as well. Is the wife a vengeful spirit? A manifestation of the husband's guilt at neglecting the woman he pledged himself to? Or is Florence and the Machine just aggressive imagery over a small strings section?

 

 

 

[Tsareena]

2 minutes ago, ceremonials said:

Surprising to no one I didn't actually write anything x

[Tsareena]

18 minutes ago, Citrus said:

Since @ceremonials and I agreed to write songs this week, below is my stab at Florence xo

 

  Reveal hidden contents

 

Piano

Genre: Spooky

 

[VERSE]

Fingers of lace on keys of ivory

Melodies dripping with the bitterest irony

Now she’s gone but still she plays

Her echoes permeate the haze

 

Mozart breaks my fragile mind

The sins I’d rather leave behind

All of those shallow, wasted nights

Of love in arms with emerald eyes

 

The girl who took my heart by storm

Yet not the one on my finger worn

My love was left to weep at home

So my devil’s urge could lurch and roam

 

[CHORUS]

I gave myself away

(To the broken roads)

God do what he may

(Left my love all alone)

Such a cheap affair

(The air is dripping gin)

Life is so unfair

(I killed my love again)

I can say that I’m sorry

I can say I was wrong

But I can’t hear over the piano’s song

 

[VERSE]

Misguided passion drove us apart

I kissed her lips and ripped out her heart

She held her tongue too many days

From the fires of the hell I’ve raised

 

Her anger quickly turned to dust

And her stricken frame went soon enough

From the fatal fruit she took a bite

And washed it down with cyanide

 

Life unto death is what they say

My devil’s dues I soon will pay

My love is gone but my guilt consumes

As her piano plays its song of doom

 

[CHORUS]

I gave myself away

(To the broken roads)

God do what he may

(Left my love all alone)

Such a cheap affair

(The air is dripping gin)

Life is so unfair

(I killed my love again)

I can say that I’m sorry

I can say I was wrong

But I can’t hear over the piano’s song

 

[BRIDGE]

Our baby grand cries vengeful wails

I’m in my coffin, I have my nails

My guilt, her music, follow me still

Into a cellar room with a purple pill

 

Each chord indicts another crime

Tortures this evil soul of mine

I eat my guilt and I eat my lies

And I wash them down with cyanide

 

[OUTRO]

I gave myself away

(To the broken roads)

God do what he may

(Left my love all alone)

Such a cheap affair

(The air is dripping gin)

Life is so unfair

(I killed my love again)

I can say that I’m sorry

I can say I was wrong

But I can’t hear over the piano’s song

 I can’t hear over the piano’s song

So I sing along

 

Explanation: This song is written from the perspective of a husband who cheats on his wife. After cheating on her for a good while, she kills herself. Then, however, he begins hearing her play the piano and the sound slowly pushes him to suicide, as well. Is the wife a vengeful spirit? A manifestation of the husband's guilt at neglecting the woman he pledged himself to? Or is Florence and the Machine just aggressive imagery over a small strings section?

 

 

 

[Nait Phoenix]

"Hubris" - twentyonepilots

I did a thing.

[ceremonials]

hi

[ultraviolence.xx]

hi x

[Glassmouth]

just sent

 

i really really apologize for sending my entry so late, I was SO *** this week and I didn't realize that it was due yesterday so I just changed a bit of what i had and sent it, I'm not sure I'm going to do with what i did  

 

i should've told Jackson, sorry   

 

 

Edited September 9, 2017 by Glassmouth

[Speezy]

1 hour ago, Glassmouth said:

just sent

 

i really really apologize for sending my entry so late, I was SO *** this week and I didn't realize that it was due yesterday so I just changed a bit of what i had and sent it, I'm not sure I'm going to do with what i did  

 

i should've told Jackson, sorrynotsorryoniTunes   

 

 

King of honesty  

[poki]

This gif fits into so many things lmao

 

 

I hope my song does well. Dolly's songs tend be pretty short in terms of lyrics and based on what I see she's very straight to the point. I hope I managed to pull it off properly. I'll actually just post it here if anyone is curious 

Our Love's A Two Piece Heart

Genre: Joanne

 

Verse 1:

You left me on Friday

Said you’ll be back by Monday

As you kissed me I said

Your job always gets in the way

You said don’t you worry

And that we could use the money

So now I’m all alone

Left to count the days ‘till you’re home

Chorus:

I wish I wish

That you would be here

I hate I hate

That we can’t be near

Our love’s a two piece heart

When we’re not close it falls apart

Verse 2:

You called on Saturday

Reassured everything’s okay

Now there’s just one more day

I hope you’ll soon be on your way

They say life is so short

Why does this weekend feel so long

Chorus:

I wish I wish

That you would be here

I hate I hate

That we can’t be near

Our love’s a two piece heart

When we’re not close it falls apart

Bridge:

Oh baby the money isn’t worth  

Spending time alone

Out here on my own

Chorus:

I wish I wish

That you would be here

I hate I hate

That we can’t be near

Our love’s a two piece heart

When we’re not close it falls apart

 

It falls apart

[Glassmouth]

9 minutes ago, PoKiTaurus said:

 

Genre: Joanne

 

[Citrus]

7 hours ago, Gastrodonatella said:

genre: spooky

Clock the upcoming Halloween round