I'm coming to save the music industry

[vinster13]

My album is done and I'm taking it to a marjor label. Surprised? 😘

[vinster13]

 

[Saintlor]

Good effort with going for a unique sound

 

My criticism would be that you really need singing lessons, you have like a male Paris Hilton voice

[bielneira]

Good luck!

[ontherocks]

Stick to the daytime job 

[Trash]

[Kayseri Mantisi]

i'm taking the lyrics of ice man by vinster13 and really holding space with that and finding power in that

[liam13]

you sound like charli xcx at home.

good luck to you tho

[LoveInStereo]

OP, don't feel discouraged, you've def got the creativity & the passion but the technique isn't where it needs to be in the hyper competitive modern music landscape. You could try to use these recordings to get in with an A&R and connect with other writers or producers that could collab with you & help you gain more experience? The biggest advice I can give (I make music too) beyond singing is dynamics which require moments of quiet, even silence. Without dynamics, electronic music can feel rather static & monotonous. If you've got a 2 bar loop looping for 8 bars, try cutting out the last 2 bars. Stuff like that keeps the listener on their toes. Sometimes the missing ingredient isn't something you add, it's something you take away. But good luck & props to you for pursuing your dreams!

[Bitter Aging Twink]

I'm so sorry, sweetie, but I already saved the music industry last month when I released my brand new single about a succulent I bought at Tesco that ended up being transgender.  I'm currently charting in San Marino, Vanuatu, and Liechtenstein.   I don't see you anywhere on the charts, hun. I outsold you, I fear.

 

 

 

[Florence Belch]

You've just broken ATRL with your announcement, congrats

[massenlight]

oh selling sex is a bop, wish you luck

[Kh-Loud]

Where are ATRL vocalists at? Maybe get sign as a producer and hit up one of the ATRLERS that can sing 

Edited 5 hours ago by Kh-Loud

[massenlight]

all those people talking about vocals as if talk-singing is not the hottest thing nowadays

[smartalek22]

I think the tracks are mixed well, but need more variation in the songs to be boppy/interesting I need BIG BASS I need BOPS hunnieee

[Scandalous]

47 minutes ago, Kh-Loud said:

Where are ATRL vocalists at? Maybe get sign as a producer and hit up one of the ATRLERS that can sing 

where's @MatiRod  

[AmericanIdol]

This is bad and I love trash like this.

[Escape]

uhmm okay now

 

[MatiRod]

45 minutes ago, Scandalous said:

where's @MatiRod  

He's currently living off caffeine as he preps his debut album era starting early next year, so no time for singing on other people's tracks rn. But I'll never say no to doing a writing sesh with other artists!

 

 

[HardBambi]

2 hours ago, vinster13 said:

 

I clicked so I would encourage you but unfortunately no me gusta at all, my ears

[tost1]

 

Im the ice man 

 

Something something

 

Ice man

 

Something ice man

 

 

[Damien M]

quick comments, hopefully constructive:

1. melody is nice, concept is cute.

 

2. instrumental break after the chorus needs to be longer + more interesting. Add something dynamic like some bass or guitar (or take away something from the rest of the song so it stands out more).

3 the vocals are a bit muffled, there's too much going on with the layering

 

4. lyrics are too wordy. say less, enunciate more.

 

best of luck w your release!

Edited 2 hours ago by Damien M

[JEWRJEWR]

save it from what

[VerdantHue]

3 hours ago, Kh-Loud said:

Where are ATRL vocalists at? Maybe get sign as a producer and hit up one of the ATRLERS that can sing 

Here I am! Help me finish writing this song I hit a wall with and I'll help you out.

 

 

[Erreur2 La Nature]

This sounds like Charli xcx x Paris Hilton x Christina Aguilera. I don't know if it's safe for the human ear 

Edited 1 hour ago by Erreur2 La Nature