Jackson Posted October 26, 2023 Author Posted October 26, 2023 1 hour ago, Hug said: hurricane does this about 3 times a season (there's only six rounds) so just go for it! hurricane has already submitted twice this round
JonginBey Posted October 26, 2023 Posted October 26, 2023 8 hours ago, Aurora said: @JonginBey Following Jackson's wonderful writing examples, here are some of my own as additional inspiration for anyone still on the fence of whether to submit or not, or just unsure where to begin: “Italian Nights” (2015) “Positano” (2017) “El Orfanato” (2017) “Third Wish” (2023) My first two examples are both inspired by Italy, my third was inspired by my childhood home with some elements written in Spanish, and my last example written earlier this year was inspired by Turkey. Fun fact: "Positano" and "El Orfanato" were written in the same week for the final challenge of Diamond Hit. 💎 I also wrote a song last year loosely inspired by Pompeii, but that's part of an unreleased project I'm still working on. Thank you! I’ll read them asap
fountain Posted October 26, 2023 Posted October 26, 2023 Hmm, I think I’m getting there, but I might need to sleep on it to be certain! Will be submitting tomorrow either way 1
XO_Life Posted October 26, 2023 Posted October 26, 2023 20 hours ago, Legend E said: I have submitted, but I might wish to think it over again and resubmit 19 hours ago, stupidjock said: I don’t like what I wrote anymore too but let me just use this as a learning experience I totally get the wish to resubmit an entry. Just a little piece of advice, sometimes it can help to put the pen tho
Jackson Posted October 26, 2023 Author Posted October 26, 2023 14 minutes ago, fountain said: Hmm, I think I’m getting there, but I might need to sleep on it to be certain! Will be submitting tomorrow either way the tardiness already
XO_Life Posted October 26, 2023 Posted October 26, 2023 16 hours ago, JonginBey said: Can someone post an example? It’s not the most difficult prompt, but I also feel like my song will turn out too basic because of how simple the prompt is idk Personally I really prefer simple songs that get to the point and feel nice. For example like a pop song about someone that is in a relationship but feels numb and no longer appreciated by their significant other. These berlin nights feel like ice I no longer see your face All I feel are flashing lights This journey makes me want to race Race away, race to different places Paris, London and New York City I travel the world, so you learn to miss me LA, Tokyo and Mexico City Wished you'd run after me, it's a pity While this example could be considered "basic" it still would feel fresh to me and offer a different perspective and would give the opportunity to express deeper emotions. Hope this helps 1
XO_Life Posted October 26, 2023 Posted October 26, 2023 3 minutes ago, worldwide angel said: JUST SUBMITTED I will read it right away 1
fountain Posted October 26, 2023 Posted October 26, 2023 36 minutes ago, Jackson said: the tardiness already I patiently put up with everybody else being late for four whole seasons, it’s MY turn now! 2
Galah Posted October 26, 2023 Posted October 26, 2023 Not the submission count almost doubling since the last time I saw it. Let me get to judging, and if I finish before I leave for work, I might post some early reviews!
Galah Posted October 26, 2023 Posted October 26, 2023 OK early reviews have been scrapped due to pre-existing contractual agreements and an NDA I forgot I signed, but I can post some teasers of reviews for the first five submissions! Can you guess who is for who? "This is my rather long-winded way of saying I loved practically everything about this. The core concept resonated with me on a deeply personal level, and I loved every lyrical device you used." "I’m always nervous when somebody resubmits an entry that I’ve already given a positive review, but fortunately for you I’m in favor of all of your adjustments." "This lets the reader know you have forethought and an intent for where the song’s journey may take us." "Overall this was a very strong start to the season and I am amazed you were able to write something of this caliber so swiftly! Keep this up and you’ll be one to watch." "A lot of this song was very poetic, and a good amount was also quite conversational, which I found to be an interesting contrast and not something we typically see together." @Kayseri Mantisi@hurricane326@stupidjock@Hug@Legend E 1
Kern Posted October 26, 2023 Posted October 26, 2023 (edited) I know which one is mine (I think) Edited October 26, 2023 by stupidjock
blackoutbaby Posted October 26, 2023 Posted October 26, 2023 Almost done. I really put the LUST in wanderlust with mine 1
Kayseri Mantisi Posted October 26, 2023 Posted October 26, 2023 1 hour ago, Aurora said: OK early reviews have been scrapped due to pre-existing contractual agreements and an NDA I forgot I signed, but I can post some teasers of reviews for the first five submissions! Can you guess who is for who? "This is my rather long-winded way of saying I loved practically everything about this. The core concept resonated with me on a deeply personal level, and I loved every lyrical device you used." "I’m always nervous when somebody resubmits an entry that I’ve already given a positive review, but fortunately for you I’m in favor of all of your adjustments." "This lets the reader know you have forethought and an intent for where the song’s journey may take us." "Overall this was a very strong start to the season and I am amazed you were able to write something of this caliber so swiftly! Keep this up and you’ll be one to watch." "A lot of this song was very poetic, and a good amount was also quite conversational, which I found to be an interesting contrast and not something we typically see together." @Kayseri Mantisi@hurricane326@stupidjock@Hug@Legend E Omgggg they're all positive and one of them is definitely written about my submission so i'm so excited thank you 1
Hug Posted October 26, 2023 Posted October 26, 2023 1 hour ago, Aurora said: OK early reviews have been scrapped due to pre-existing contractual agreements and an NDA I forgot I signed, but I can post some teasers of reviews for the first five submissions! Can you guess who is for who? "This is my rather long-winded way of saying I loved practically everything about this. The core concept resonated with me on a deeply personal level, and I loved every lyrical device you used." "I’m always nervous when somebody resubmits an entry that I’ve already given a positive review, but fortunately for you I’m in favor of all of your adjustments." "This lets the reader know you have forethought and an intent for where the song’s journey may take us." "Overall this was a very strong start to the season and I am amazed you were able to write something of this caliber so swiftly! Keep this up and you’ll be one to watch." "A lot of this song was very poetic, and a good amount was also quite conversational, which I found to be an interesting contrast and not something we typically see together." @Kayseri Mantisi@hurricane326@stupidjock@Hug@Legend E I feel like I'm either first of fifth and maybe that sounds narcissistic but I just think they're the most fitting!! 1
poki Posted October 26, 2023 Posted October 26, 2023 21 minutes ago, Kayseri Mantisi said: Omgggg they're all positive and one of them is definitely written about my submission so i'm so excited thank you Yeah Golden Hit is a very positive game, everything comes from a desire to motivate us to want to keep playing and to constantly improve 2
Galah Posted October 26, 2023 Posted October 26, 2023 8 minutes ago, Hey Dude said: Yeah Golden Hit is a very positive game, everything comes from a desire to motivate us to want to keep playing and to constantly improve We certainly try! My reviews so far are quite lengthy since I’ve been able to stagger writing them over a few days, so I really hope everyone gets some good takeaways from them! So far I’ve been impressed by the output of this round.
Jackson Posted October 27, 2023 Author Posted October 27, 2023 1 hour ago, Hey Dude said: Yeah Golden Hit is a very positive game, everything comes from a desire to motivate us to want to keep playing and to constantly improve +1 what @Aurora said! I also want to mention ahead of time that unless I give a song a perfect 10, I always try to point out at least one thing I like and one thing to improve on or try differently - so the % of my review that's positive or critical doesn't necessarily correlate to the score I give a song. My goal is always to provide helpful (optional) advice
Jackson Posted October 27, 2023 Author Posted October 27, 2023 7 minutes ago, JonginBey said: Are extensions doable? we won't penalize you if you're a bit late - generally as long as you can submit before judging and scoring is finalized we'll accept it but keep us updated if you anticipate being more than a few hours late
JonginBey Posted October 27, 2023 Posted October 27, 2023 11 minutes ago, Jackson said: we won't penalize you if you're a bit late - generally as long as you can submit before judging and scoring is finalized we'll accept it but keep us updated if you anticipate being more than a few hours late I get off of work at 11PM PST If you guys don’t hear from me for the rest of the night, then safe to say I won’t submit this round.
Jackson Posted October 27, 2023 Author Posted October 27, 2023 1 minute ago, JonginBey said: I get off of work at 11PM PST If you guys don’t hear from me for the rest of the night, then safe to say I won’t submit this round. oof that schedule i know at least @fountain is submitting tomorrow, so if you have time tomorrow that would be fine tbh. you can also just wait for R2 if you don't have the time/energy this week 1
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