poki Posted November 22, 2023 Posted November 22, 2023 When I've fallen down so far, I think I'll never see your light Bouncing off of me, shining down here from your eyes 1
fountain Posted November 22, 2023 Posted November 22, 2023 Thank you @Jackson and @Aurora for both reviews. I’m really glad you enjoyed the songs and I loved reading your interpretations of Harvest which I will neither confirm nor deny! Interested to see if @XO_Life has a third, different interpretation.
Aurora Posted November 22, 2023 Posted November 22, 2023 Hey, Hitmakers! So far this season you’ve taken us on a journey, given us a fright, made your choices, and embraced the season. While judging for Round 4 is underway, we decided to work together and provide an early start for your next writing challenge. Without further ado, let me introduce you all to the fifth round of Season 5... Surprise! An ancient evil returns: the collaboration challenge. The writing tournaments of yesteryear typically had at least one challenge where players were tasked with working together. This wasn’t always optional, and partners may have been assigned rather than chosen. As writing tournaments have shifted away from such imposed restrictions, we understand the importance of choice when it comes to collaboration. Therefore, Golden Hit’s first collaboration challenge has 3 ways to satisfy it: I ⚜ Writing Partners The challenge in its classic form: partner up with another player from this season and write a song. There is little restriction outside of this requirement: you may write about whatever you wish. It can be written as a duet or rap/sung collaboration, or as one cohesive song for a soloist. You may even work in groups if you desire! No need to itemize who wrote what—just let the lyrics do the talking. You will receive one score for your collaboration which will contribute to all its writers’ averages. II ⚜ Judge Co-write As a twist on the collaboration component, you may wish to choose this option if for whatever reason partnering up with another player isn’t suited to you. Your judges have written and curated a selection of incomplete song-starters for you to finish. Like a true co-writing session, sometimes an artist has an idea they can’t complete, and requires an outsider to free the diamond from the rough. You may manipulate these song-starters freely, and spin them in any direction you can imagine. Jackson's Song-Starters Spoiler Chorus - alt-pop I only call your number when the skies turn murky grey We’ll keep running in circles when the till the darker colors fade Then I’ll put you in my closet like a rain jacket in May We weathered April showers till you couldn’t take their weight You carry all my secrets till their pressure makes you break Then I bury you in regret till my errors are forgave But you’ll always reappear when thunder comes my way So if you’re the jacket maybe I’m eternal rain Verse/Bridge - rap I wear my cockiness like fashion Etch my name on it then cash in I’m a ten digit transaction Don’t need nobody, subtraction Stirring reactions is my passion Just need profit interaction Go on tour to hit my mansions And I’m just starting my expansion That’s my action, Movie, but no one could cast this beauty I got suitors of my choosing Find their love letters amusing Don’t go traveling for booty What I want they bring it to me If that shocks you you can sue me Call my lawyers, I’m recruiting This shít is booming Aurora's Song-Starters Spoiler Feel free to use these sections in whichever way you choose! “Predictable” I love it when my thoughts get unpredictable at night While everybody’s going left I’ll head the other way If half the world is sleeping I begin another morning The voices in my head all indicate a higher power With every second, every minute, every passing year I kept on wishing that the voices would just go away But now that I know better I accept my destiny Subverting the predictable is somewhat my forte “Parasite” You’re a moonseed chardonnay Mountain laurel laced bouquet Rhubarb pie baked with the leaves Chlorine carried by the breeze You’re the voice inside my head I’m the prey inside your web You’re the pill I’ll overdose Your hospitable new host XO_Life's Song-Starters Spoiler Chrous 1: urban/pop/RnB Sex Jam So gimmie this and gimmie that Exploring all of you, feeling like a tourist on crack Hit it hard and hit it fast Mesmerised by your eyes I am feeling like a tourist on Crack Waist line up and waist line down, stimulated by your scent, Babe, whenever I am with you I am feeling like a tourist on crack Chorus 2: 2010 katy perry style pop So Tonight! Nothing matters, baby you and I I am Alive! Every touch, burns like fire So Wild! Thousand kisses, our love just feels so right It's like! I'm seeing heaven in your eyes (Heaven in your eyes) III ⚜ Individual Duet Lastly, if the thought of somebody else’s lyrics—be it another player’s or a judge’s—contributing to your individual performance simply doesn’t inspire you, this option may be more suitable. In this challenge you are tasked with independently writing one song that conveys multiple distinct voices. We’re looking for a duet or rap/sung collaboration that feels as if it were written for two or more artists, and how you can utilize different techniques to achieve this while making a cohesive song. Songs due via Google Form submission by Thu. Nov 30, 11:59PM EST Jackson, XO, and I might just form our own group J.A.X. and challenge you all to stardom! You could be our groupies?! The top three submissions will earn their writers a Hit Token, so make sure to submit for your chance at one of those. If you have not yet signed up for Golden Hit: Season 5, that’s fine! Just submit an entry and we’ll add you to the sign-ups list. @stupidjock@fountain@Hey Dude@GentleDance@réveuse@Invisibility@worldwide angel@Legend E@JonginBey@Kayseri Mantisi@blackoutbaby@Navy4Life@Antikythera@Julianna Calm Down@Hug@Prisoner@punisher@TruGemini 3 1
Jackson Posted November 22, 2023 Author Posted November 22, 2023 really excited for this one it’s a very open challenge so hopefully this inspires a lot of creativity 1
Aurora Posted November 22, 2023 Posted November 22, 2023 To clarify: you only have to select one of the three types of collaboration challenges. If you are feeling game, you may feel free to mix and match (e.g. you could take a song-starter and turn it into an individual duet).
XO_Life Posted November 22, 2023 Posted November 22, 2023 7 minutes ago, Legend E said: ow...fun! You know what to do! 1
XO_Life Posted November 22, 2023 Posted November 22, 2023 28 minutes ago, fountain said: Thank you @Jackson and @Aurora for both reviews. I’m really glad you enjoyed the songs and I loved reading your interpretations of Harvest which I will neither confirm nor deny! Interested to see if @XO_Life has a third, different interpretation. I need another 24 hours. But then I can finally post my reviews. However they will be very short this time... sorry. Work has been crazy but I actually got "kinda" promoted, so there's that. 1
JonginBey Posted November 22, 2023 Posted November 22, 2023 The blue font is taking me OUT. My blind self cannot see 1
punisher Posted November 22, 2023 Posted November 22, 2023 wait so if i use III i don’t have to write with someone else or use the song starters?
Jackson Posted November 22, 2023 Author Posted November 22, 2023 1 hour ago, punisher said: wait so if i use III i don’t have to write with someone else or use the song starters? correct - option 3 is just writing a song individually that features at least 2 voices or perspectives
fountain Posted November 22, 2023 Posted November 22, 2023 Lol kinda have an idea for a really ridiculous song… let’s see what happens with the results for r4 and maybe I’ll take a risk based on their outcome
Hug Posted November 23, 2023 Posted November 23, 2023 I'm collabing with someone not in the game and claiming solo duet !!
Hug Posted November 23, 2023 Posted November 23, 2023 The thumbs down react to the challenge is sending me btw 2
Aurora Posted November 23, 2023 Posted November 23, 2023 3 minutes ago, Hug said: The thumbs down react to the challenge is sending me btw Right like why tank my reputation just because you don’t like the challenge.
Jackson Posted November 23, 2023 Author Posted November 23, 2023 1 hour ago, Hug said: I'm collabing with someone not in the game and claiming solo duet !! when we clock you for plagiarism
Kern Posted November 23, 2023 Posted November 23, 2023 @blackoutbaby do you want to write a song together
XO_Life Posted November 23, 2023 Posted November 23, 2023 So sorry... but I just can't write reviews for R4 this time around. I did score all of you and you all did well imo. Timing for this round is just not on my side. 1
fountain Posted November 23, 2023 Posted November 23, 2023 1 hour ago, XO_Life said: So sorry... but I just can't write reviews for R4 this time around. I did score all of you and you all did well imo. Timing for this round is just not on my side. It happens! No problem. Thank you for still scoring despite the bad timing
Jackson Posted November 23, 2023 Author Posted November 23, 2023 2 hours ago, XO_Life said: So sorry... but I just can't write reviews for R4 this time around. I did score all of you and you all did well imo. Timing for this round is just not on my side. you’ve done a great job this season and things happen so no worries! also happy thanksgiving to my fellow americans! we’re just waiting on one set of scores and will announce a results time for R4 shortly
Jackson Posted November 23, 2023 Author Posted November 23, 2023 9 minutes ago, Aurora said: So who is thankful for some results? i'm seated
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