Yvess Posted November 3, 2023 Author Share Posted November 3, 2023 13 minutes ago, Hey Dude said: We are probably headed for ~330 pages  hopefully, we need u to continue your poki diary here lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kern Posted November 3, 2023 Share Posted November 3, 2023 Will this game ever end? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yvess Posted November 3, 2023 Author Share Posted November 3, 2023 11 minutes ago, stupidjock said: Will this game ever end? hopefully! post ur crits! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kern Posted November 3, 2023 Share Posted November 3, 2023 (edited) 2 minutes ago, Yvess said: hopefully! post ur crits! Soon! It’s worth the wait I promise it will be amazing  also tell that to @CBC who has been slacking off at the Dj sets again Edited November 3, 2023 by stupidjock Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yvess Posted November 3, 2023 Author Share Posted November 3, 2023 16 minutes ago, stupidjock said: Soon! It’s worth the wait I promise it will be amazing  also tell that to @CBC who has been slacking off at the Dj sets again i miss @lacy suddenly when she fell for that prompt lmao  BOTH OF YOU BETTER SUBMIT SOON! also daddy @MusicLoverDude  i will not pressure elliement! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CBC Posted November 3, 2023 Share Posted November 3, 2023 3 hours ago, stupidjock said: also tell that to @CBC who has been slacking off at the Dj sets again maybe tomorrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen. Posted November 3, 2023 Share Posted November 3, 2023  3 hours ago, stupidjock said: Will this game ever end? If yall hurry up and post yall crits, then yes. No long essays are needed just get straight to the point.    1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kern Posted November 3, 2023 Share Posted November 3, 2023 34 minutes ago, Queen. said:  No long essays are needed just get straight to the point.    Nicki is the queen of rap. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen. Posted November 3, 2023 Share Posted November 3, 2023 2 minutes ago, stupidjock said: Nicki is the queen of rap.   Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Moderator Legend E Posted November 3, 2023 ATRL Moderator Share Posted November 3, 2023 4 hours ago, Queen. said: Â If yall hurry up and post yall crits, then yes. No long essays are needed just get straight to the point. Â Â Â you ate this, queen. Â 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yvess Posted November 3, 2023 Author Share Posted November 3, 2023 4 hours ago, Queen. said: Â If yall hurry up and post yall crits, then yes. No long essays are needed just get straight to the point. Â Â Â tea!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Year of Shadow Posted November 4, 2023 Share Posted November 4, 2023 If we continue on this pace and only 1 person is eliminated per week, we will reach the top 3 on December 10th.  Just sayin'. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yvess Posted November 4, 2023 Author Share Posted November 4, 2023 17 minutes ago, Hey Dude said: If we continue on this pace and only 1 person is eliminated per week, we will reach the top 3 on December 10th.  Just sayin'. hopefully the pace gets better soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yvess Posted November 4, 2023 Author Share Posted November 4, 2023 and maybe you guys better discuss or shade each other's entries to keep this moving jk lmao Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kern Posted November 4, 2023 Share Posted November 4, 2023 Okay let me just get some breakfast and start writing my clits but I have a feeling those will be my most lashful reviews  I already see some disappointments 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kern Posted November 4, 2023 Share Posted November 4, 2023 (edited) Ok, let me take back what I wrote earlier because I actually like all the entries and think y'all slayed   @blackoutbaby you got me w this, this song is passionate and powerful. I wish you'd written a bit longer essay tho.  @Kylie Verzosa this works too and the explanation is very nicely written.  @Legend E very good, not obvious entry. You really went deep in the explanation of the lyrics  @Hey Dude okay, this is interesting take. I thought you'd send something like Swim (water) or Bedtime Story (air) but I like your take on decisive trait, I think it works with Hung Up very well, her most confident and efortless bop. I'm sold  @Queen. at first I was like - you sent that song simply because it has 'potions' in the title? But now I see you went with forgiving trait and I'm sold. The lines like 'I'm angry but I still love you' fit the theme very well  @ZORBIT very good and interesting take on serenity. The production of the song itself feels like sitting in the garden with your lover during springtime. You don't even have to explain lyrics too much because the whole vibe speaks for itself  @Overprotected strong rapping skills + strong attitude towards bad lover = strong entry  @fiercE I understand what you did there but I think you could've gone crazier with the themes you could chose. This fits passionate but it just doesn't stand out amongst other strong entries  @Dessy a bop + very nicely written explanation (probably my favorite text from those entries) + again strong attitude = would you perhabs be interested in a nice spot in the finale?   k, that's all, bye  Edited November 4, 2023 by stupidjock 3 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen. Posted November 4, 2023 Share Posted November 4, 2023 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yvess Posted November 4, 2023 Author Share Posted November 4, 2023 41 minutes ago, stupidjock said: Ok, let me take back what I wrote earlier because I actually like all the entries and think y'all slayed   @blackoutbaby you got me w this, this song is passionate and powerful. I wish you'd written a bit longer essay tho.  @Kylie Verzosa this works too and the explanation is very nicely written.  @Legend E very good, not obvious entry. You really went deep in the explanation of the lyrics  @Hey Dude okay, this is interesting take. I thought you'd send something like Swim (water) or Bedtime Story (air) but I like your take on decisive trait, I think it works with Hung Up very well, her most confident and efortless bop. I'm sold  @Queen. at first I was like - you sent that song simply because it has 'potions' in the title? But now I see you went with forgiving trait and I'm sold. The lines like 'I'm angry but I still love you' fit the theme very well  @ZORBIT very good and interesting take on serenity. The production of the song itself feels like sitting in the garden with your lover during springtime. You don't even have to explain lyrics too much because the whole vibe speaks for itself  @Overprotected strong rapping skills + strong attitude towards bad lover = strong entry  @fiercE I understand what you did there but I think you could've gone crazier with the themes you could chose. This fits passionate but it just doesn't stand out amongst other strong entries  @Dessy a bop + very nicely written explanation (probably my favorite text from those entries) + again strong attitude = would you perhabs be interested in a nice stop in the finale?   k, that's all, bye  iconique! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yvess Posted November 4, 2023 Author Share Posted November 4, 2023 now cyberbully @CBC @MusicLoverDude and our guest judge @Element tysm lmao  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CBC Posted November 4, 2023 Share Posted November 4, 2023        The T with AB Spoiler Passionate   Spoiler  @blackoutbaby well shes really fckng horny! i think it's a great song and i see where youre going for with passionate but i do feel like the song is more lustful than it is passionate. You said it yourself "passionate sense of yearning", where passionate comes 2nd after yearning. still a great song to represent this trait! @Kylie Verzosa the song is very clearly about transformation and confidence but what's interesting about it is how the passionate trait is shown here. when talking about herself and her art you really see the passion that rosalia has for it and how meaningful it is to her. it's a great display of the trait.   @Legend E very good representation of turbulent, it's not just about the uncertainty of the relationship but also how her and her partner always find themselves in opposites of each other. the biggest enemy of walking on a tightrope being the wind gives this entry a new layer of excellence.  @PoKiTaurus not much to say honestly, this is a perfect demonstration of decisiveness, amazing entry   @Queen. very well done, the forgiving trait is very evident in the song and i enjoy how the production is calm like the feeling of forgiveness i understand that the melody is calm and serene but i dont think the lyrics match at all which is a shame because the songs really good.  @Overprotected oh yeah i will say this entry is really... STRONG! the lyrics and the production all scream the trait, you did that! @fiercE i can see the compassionate but it seems more like shes asking for accountability to me @Dessy  well yah its definitely a display of the strong trait. i wish it was exclusively focused on her but it fits regardless  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen. Posted November 4, 2023 Share Posted November 4, 2023 two critics so far today. we are moving on pretty fast! Â Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kern Posted November 4, 2023 Share Posted November 4, 2023 26 minutes ago, Queen. said: two critics so far today. we are moving on pretty fast!    Not @Queen. chosing to cancel one of our crits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen. Posted November 4, 2023 Share Posted November 4, 2023 44 minutes ago, stupidjock said: Not @Queen. chosing to cancel one of our crits  44 minutes ago, stupidjock said: Not @Queen. chosing to cancel one of our crits Did I miss someone? It’s have been a very long day sis.   Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MusicLoverDude Posted November 4, 2023 Share Posted November 4, 2023 6 hours ago, Queen. said: two critics so far today. we are moving on pretty fast!    You will get a third late tonight. Been working 5 days straight and finally get a day off tomorrow. So I'll listen to the entries tonight and rank them before I go to bed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen. Posted November 4, 2023 Share Posted November 4, 2023 Just now, MusicLoverDude said: You will get a third late tonight. Been working 5 days straight and finally get a day off tomorrow. So I'll listen to the entries tonight and rank them before I go to bed. Oh no rush sis, it's the weekend enjoy yourself.    Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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