Golden Hit: Season 3 📀 Congrats to TruGemini! ✨

[worldwide angel]

18 minutes ago, Julia Fox said:

omg i mean yes, but i do not think my next entry is gonna skyrocket to the top since it’s very personal and awkward lol but i think it’s fair to made a tribute to my dear friend. 
“Consuelo” really made me shed some tears while writing it 

i think it might because of those very reasons  

[Hug]

I was at work during results, but huge congrats to everyone! This was an excellent round for everyone and you all should be proud.

[Element]

8 hours ago, fountain said:

At #2 with a score of 9.333…

@Element with “Heaven in the Deep”! 

What a moment this song is… as Hug said, absolutely one of the most fun and entertaining reads that I’ve ever seen across all the writing tournaments I’ve been part of here. This song will absolutely go down as unforgettable for its amazing mix of creativity and comedy, all while retaining a strong and well written nature! This also continues your streak of top 3 scoring entries, a consistent hit maker (for the rounds you take part in)! It’s always a joy when we see your name pop up in the submissions and the continual acclaim should demonstrate this. An amazing job this round, congrats on the #2!

 

ahhh thank you! i am so excited to have earned a silver token!! i was really trying to break out of bronze. i'm so glad that you and @Hug both enjoyed it so much! thank you both for your commentary!! i had a lot of fun writing it and coming up with something super fun and ridiculous. trying to balance the rhythm/rhyme scheme with these comedic elements + also building the characters a bit... it was tough!

 

8 hours ago, Aurora said:

Congratulations once again on proving that if you ever decided to commit to an entire Golden Hit season, you would be unstoppable. Correct me if I'm wrong, but I don't think you haven't gotten a Hit Token out of one of your submissions for Golden Hit yet, which in and of itself is ******* insane. Speaking of insane... what on earth was this song, and what drugs were you on/did you put into it? Full disclosure, the others stanned it even more than I did, but this was a huge surprise and I love that we can still be surprised by entries after so many seasons of these writing tournaments on this website. You reached a new peak too, so congrats! Next up: the #1!

thank you!! you are correct -- i now have two bronze and one silver across my 3 submissions. i guess i'll just have to keep submitting to try for gold!

 

this is really crazy to me, as i was reading some of my old submissions back from 2015-2016 and most are so generic and cringey lol. it's so exciting to see how things have evolved for me!

 

i'm glad that you were surprised and enjoyed the creativity of my song! i figured i'd try and bring something new to the table. i was originally pondering a song about a siren luring people to their doom... and then it evolved into the idea of the ocean as someone's resting place. it kind of just popped into my head to have an older woman touring potential resting places, but to make it kind of camp and comical. i had never tried a showtune before, so i was like hmm let me challenge myself then! i had told @Euterpe the idea and she then said it sounded like a role for jennifer coolidge, and that was the final cherry on top of the chaos haha. she gets a creative director credit for this cracked out musical number xx

[Element]

If anyone is interested, Heaven In The Deep.

[fountain]

50 minutes ago, Element said:

If anyone is interested, Heaven In The Deep.

A future Tony winner honestly

[sugarshine]

Do y'all ever feel like a plastic bag get this feeling after writing a song and you don't record it like "damn, I really wish I could listen to this song"?? My song this week does that for me. Like I can't listen to it unless I sing it or record it. I want it on my playlist!!!! Maybe I'll program a vocaloid to sing it I can already see the music video too, with the flashes of my couple in all the different universes

 

One time I was really lucky, I wrote a song and then Cut To The Feeling came out and sounds pretty similar to it - it's so cool to hear the song, which is kinda like my own song - whenever I listen to Cut To The Feeling it's so magical it's like hearing my own song. the RUSH. I love that song

 

I wiiiiish someone with Linkin Park vocals could sing my song this week with a rock-tinged dance beat. I could probably do it, but I'm unbothered LOL

 

I really did bridge the gap between dance music and rock music with Love Across the Universes. imma have the rock gw0rls in the nightclub and the dance gw0rls in the mosh pits

 

I'll release another snippet I guess, here ya go :

 

Remembering you in another life

Flashes of you so deeply immortalised

Loving someone in the eye of my mind

My soul keeps running to you, we're magnetised

I sense someone so similar, I know it's you

Cause you light up the room

And my spirit burns, burns, burns, burns

 

 

 

Edited February 13, 2023 by sugarshine

[fountain]

Happy Valentine’s Day everybody

[fountain]

11 hours ago, sugarshine said:

Do y'all ever feel like a plastic bag get this feeling after writing a song and you don't record it like "damn, I really wish I could listen to this song"?? My song this week does that for me. Like I can't listen to it unless I sing it or record it. I want it on my playlist!!!! Maybe I'll program a vocaloid to sing it I can already see the music video too, with the flashes of my couple in all the different universes

 

One time I was really lucky, I wrote a song and then Cut To The Feeling came out and sounds pretty similar to it - it's so cool to hear the song, which is kinda like my own song - whenever I listen to Cut To The Feeling it's so magical it's like hearing my own song. the RUSH. I love that song

 

I wiiiiish someone with Linkin Park vocals could sing my song this week with a rock-tinged dance beat. I could probably do it, but I'm unbothered LOL

 

I really did bridge the gap between dance music and rock music with Love Across the Universes. imma have the rock gw0rls in the nightclub and the dance gw0rls in the mosh pits

 

I'll release another snippet I guess, here ya go :

 

Remembering you in another life

Flashes of you so deeply immortalised

Loving someone in the eye of my mind

My soul keeps running to you, we're magnetised

I sense someone so similar, I know it's you

Cause you light up the room

And my spirit burns, burns, burns, burns

 

 

 

Oh, absolutely. The greatest bops and most poignant and heartbreaking songs are sat unheard in my google docs, and the world is at a loss! (Always be your own biggest fan )

 

But it’s also fun in a way because they can become your own private anthems. 

 

[Legend E]

On 2/13/2023 at 8:17 AM, Element said:

If anyone is interested, Heaven In The Deep.

the Lea lyric cvsfvdf; ICONIC

[worldwide angel]

finally finished

thank you cupid  

 

 




day by day, the rhythm changes 

and today, i find it hard to hate it

... ... .. 

into a city, a planet, a heaven 

made from two pure doves

 

[sugarshine]

I never knew, never knew, never knew that love was the bright side of the moon

And on the other side was a darkness you never knew had bloomed

 

omfg. am I a P O E T ?!?! am I ******* poe whett ??

God must be programming these lyrics into me like zap zap zap

cause gw00000rl

this is a legendary lyric

 

[sugarshine]

1 hour ago, worldwide angel said:

finally finished

thank you cupid  

 

 

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day by day, the rhythm changes 

and today, i find it hard to hate it

... ... .. 

into a city, a planet, a heaven 

made from two pure doves

 
 

 

and today, i find it hard to hate it

 

ughhhhh Y A S I know that exact feeling. when you usually have resting ***** face cemented but today! you can't help but smile, even a wiul come on boo!

[worldwide angel]

1 hour ago, sugarshine said:

and today, i find it hard to hate it

 

ughhhhh Y A S I know that exact feeling. when you usually have resting ***** face cemented but today! you can't help but smile, even a wiul come on boo!

thank you hunni

 

1 hour ago, sugarshine said:

I never knew, never knew, never knew that love was the bright side of the moon

And on the other side was a darkness you never knew had bloomed

 

omfg. am I a P O E T ?!?! am I ******* poe whett ??

God must be programming these lyrics into me like zap zap zap

cause gw00000rl

this is a legendary lyric

 

living for these lyrics  can’t wait to see how the rest of the song looks 

[sugarshine]

7 minutes ago, worldwide angel said:

thank you hunni

 

living for these lyrics  can’t wait to see how the rest of the song looks 

thank you!

[fountain]

Hey everybody! I hope that you had a great Valentine’s Day, no matter how big or small it was!

 

This is the reminder that there are two days left to submit for Round 4!

 

Looking forward to seeing what you create  hope you’re all doing well!

 

@mxtthewdelrey  @Remmy  @Augmented  @Kylie Jenner  @8thPrince  @sugarshine  @XO_Life  @Element  @DatChickDoe  @Julia Fox  @beatinglikeadrum  @Euterpe  @Legend E  @worldwide angel  @Invisibility  @TruGemini  @JoeAg
 

p.s.

Edited February 15, 2023 by fountain

[Invisibility]

Spent the late night having way too much fun creating my rap verse, CupcaKke-approved debut  oh yeah we're serving vers king in more ways this time!

 

Cost a kidney, my life savings and a ten-year old loan

But f*ck me is it worth it when I hear your Siri voice moan

 

[fountain]

24 hours to go! 

[fountain]

12 hours left until the round 4 deadline! Get those love songs in

 

Submit here:

https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSdrG_RfmoFc4YUlBKu6su3RB4HYmCwXFXgQkH8kd3lSpw1AZg/viewform

 

Countdown to deadline:

https://www.timeanddate.com/countdown/valentines?iso=20230216T235959&p0=179&msg=GH3+Valentines+challenge+deadline+&font=cursive&csz=1

 

Challenge:

https://atrl.net/forums/topic/427082-golden-hit-season-3-📀-~-24-hours-left-~-💛💫-round-4-valentine’s-pg23-✨💘/?do=findComment&comment=23298294

 

@mxtthewdelrey  @Remmy  @Augmented  @Kylie Jenner  @8thPrince  @sugarshine  @XO_Life  @Element  @DatChickDoe   @beatinglikeadrum  @Euterpe  @Legend E  @TruGemini  @JoeAg
 

 

[Legend E]

12 hours and 0 ideas

 

 

[Prisoner]

Got drunk on a thursday evening and felt randomly artistic, might write something 

[JoeAg]

oh legg world, i’ll do mine rn lol

[Legend E]

It was twilight
On the Fourteenth of February

[fountain]

3 hours ago, Prisoner said:

Got drunk on a thursday evening and felt randomly artistic, might write something 

YAS was wondering if you’d ever join again after Season 1, come through inspiration 

[beatinglikeadrum]

@fountain i need like less than one day more bcuz of personal reasons. Is it possible ?

[Aurora]

Hey, Hitmakers! Time is running out to declare your love for Round 4's Valentine’s challenge. We know we're going to love what you write! 💖

Remember, if you've only just discovered Golden Hit or didn't wish to participate in prior rounds, fear not: sign-ups are still open—just submit!

 

With that, it's time to present the top three of last round's Way of Water challenge with their bonus prizes: the Hit Tokens!

I've reviewed the requests from our trio of top writers for the week, and done my best to grant them for embossment.

 

 

Celebrating a third place triumph with “Dolphin Dive” and its splashing 9.217 score:

@sugarshine

Here is your Bronze Hit Token embossed with your ATRL username and a dolphin.

Congratulations! This is your first Hit Token of S3, and first Hit Token of Golden Hit overall! 

 

 

Celebrating a second place success with “Heaven In The Deep” and its theatrical 9.333 score:

@Element

Here is your Silver Hit Token embossed with your ATRL username and Jennifer Coolidge.

Congratulations! This is your second Hit Token of S3, and fourth Hit Token of Golden Hit overall (including your S1 judge's token)! 

 

 

Celebrating a first place finish with “Water Breaks in a Lunar Mare” and its invigorating 9.833 score:

@Invisibility

Here is your Golden Hit Token embossed with your requested name and Issa Lish.

Congratulations! This is your first Hit Token of S3, and first Hit Token of Golden Hit overall! 

 

I hope you all enjoy your Hit Tokens as much as I did making them! Feel free to use them as a forum avatar if you wish, or just let them be a reminder of your time in Golden Hit—ultimately the choice is yours, and if for whatever reason you are dissatisfied with your token or simply wish to change the embossed graphic/text please contact me and I can arrange a remake. Remember, the top three writers of each round will earn their own Hit Token just like the three above, so make sure to submit each week for the best chance to claim one of these bonus prizes.