Euterpe Posted February 3, 2023 Posted February 3, 2023 50 minutes ago, Julia Fox said: BET (full lyrics)  Reveal hidden contents red carpet walking style vintage shirt that showed your chest with hair black hat that you touch everytime you look through a man with your eyes as blue as your so called yacht above the sea of fishes you promised them they were the ones  that’s how you arrive at the party cause you are always were you have to be you never lose, but when you do you can’t stand what you are nothing that a man can’t solve it though  I bet you think everybody dies to be with you I bet you think they all watch you when you walk through I bet you think that nobody does it like you do and you are right but the shine's always gone cause everyone thinks you are cool until you prove them that you are just another fool  drinking at the corner all alone your face being hidden with your thin cigarette smoke deciding who are you gonna take home because you never lose time when you need to validate you are the one And I bet you are already deciding who are you gonna take home tomorrow night am I right?  because that’s what you are a narcissist that can’t stand to not be the center of attention where he’s at and when you aren’t the focus of the eyes of any man you drive yourself insane like if you are about to die  I bet you think everybody dies to be with you I bet you think they all watch you when you walk through I bet you think that nobody does it like you do and you are right but the shine's always gone cause everyone thinks you are cool until you prove them that you are just another fool  you said your life was me for one night i was your trophy dozens of promises that I believed but i know I was naive but you don’t know what’s gonna be when this entire room knows the smell of your bed sheets then you’ll don’t have anyone to play with it what are you gonna do? tell me  cause I bet you think everybody dies to be with you I bet you think they all watch you when you walk through I bet you think that nobody does it like you do and you are right but the shine's always gone cause everyone thinks you are cool until you prove them that you are just another fool because everyone’s man is a man to none so by the way, at the end of the day you’ll end up alone you’ll end up alone   Okay, but…  “I bet you think everybody dies to be with you I bet you think they all watch you when you walk through I bet you think that nobody does it like you do”  I stan.Â
Aurora Posted February 3, 2023 Posted February 3, 2023 Can't wait to judge this round honestly. Â Me trying not to give everyone a 10 for their generated artworks alone.
fountain Posted February 4, 2023 Author Posted February 4, 2023 The songs of Round 2, the Midjourney challenge:  Julia Fox - Bet Kylie Jenner - The ocean sets me free worldwide angel - perfect blue DatChickDoe - Dancehall Fairy beatinglikeadrum - butterflies (daughters of Inspiration, her cruel assassins) XO_Life - GameBoy JoeAg - Where I Wish I Was Among the Owls Legend E - Desolation Augmented - Drunk on the honey Euterpe - A Pull Invisibility - Quaint Human Spectacle TruGemini - Kintsukurio  Thank you each for submitting! You can look forward to our reviews coming soon, the Round 3 post on Saturday, and Round 2’s results on Sunday.  I’ll also post a collection of everybody’s AI images to showcase what was created this roundÂ
fountain Posted February 4, 2023 Author Posted February 4, 2023 (edited)  The Midjourney AI art showcase:   @Julia Fox - Bet   @Kylie Jenner - The ocean sets me free   @worldwide angel - perfect blue   @DatChickDoe - Dancehall Fairy   @beatinglikeadrum - butterflies (daughters of Inspiration, her cruel assassins)   @XO_Life - GameBoy   @JoeAg - Where I Wish I Was Among the Owls    @Legend E - Desolation   @Augmented - Drunk on the honey   @Euterpe - A Pull   @Invisibility - Quaint Human Spectacle   @TruGemini - Kintsukurio   Thank you all for engaging with the more involved challenge this round, it is amazing seeing these lovely images you have created! Edited February 4, 2023 by fountain
fountain Posted February 4, 2023 Author Posted February 4, 2023 @Legend EÂ i wasnt sure if you would want your image included as well because of the posting from your submission question on the form, but if you are ok with it i can edit yours in as well!
ATRL Moderator Legend E Posted February 4, 2023 ATRL Moderator Posted February 4, 2023 2 minutes ago, fountain said: @Legend EÂ i wasnt sure if you would want your image included as well because of the posting from your submission question on the form, but if you are ok with it i can edit yours in as well! Yes you can post it!
fountain Posted February 4, 2023 Author Posted February 4, 2023 Just now, Legend E said: Yes you can post it! AHH lemme edit it in, one moment!
ATRL Moderator Legend E Posted February 4, 2023 ATRL Moderator Posted February 4, 2023 Perfect Blue + the last two >>
Aurora Posted February 4, 2023 Posted February 4, 2023 1 hour ago, fountain said:  The Midjourney AI art showcase:   @Julia Fox - Bet   @Kylie Jenner - The ocean sets me free   @worldwide angel - perfect blue   @DatChickDoe - Dancehall Fairy   @beatinglikeadrum - butterflies (daughters of Inspiration, her cruel assassins)   @XO_Life - GameBoy   @JoeAg - Where I Wish I Was Among the Owls    @Legend E - Desolation   @Augmented - Drunk on the honey   @Euterpe - A Pull   @Invisibility - Quaint Human Spectacle   @TruGemini - Kintsukurio   Thank you all for engaging with the more involved challenge this round, it is amazing seeing these lovely images you have created! *****, it's the serve!  My reviews will be coming soon, as soon as I finalise scores and can get formatting on this darned site to work. I was going to post your images with your reviews anyway so now I can just use fountain's embedded links hihi.  My reviews are going to be a little different this round—I actually did take your artwork into account and made a brief comment about them, however as previously announced only your lyrics (and how they related to your artwork in question) are represented in my scores. Stay tuned.
Aurora Posted February 4, 2023 Posted February 4, 2023  After spending a while trying to format my reviews on this blasted website only to have everything undone with a single undo keyboard shortcut, I have decided to take a leaf out of @Hug's book and share my Google Doc (where I write my reviews anyway). Scores have been removed of course hihi.  I have written a brief 1-2 sentence comment about your artwork itself and my predictions of what your song would be about purely from that, but the bulk of my review will address your lyricism, how it relates to your generated/chosen artwork, and any improvements I could think to suggest/general comments I wanted to make.  This round was somewhat polarising for me, my range of scores is a lot greater than last round and the margin between entries varies quite a bit, however overall it still averaged better than Round 1, so congratulations to you on the whole. I have also included some bonus reviews for songs that were posted in this thread after the conclusion of Round 1 that weren't intended to be formally judged during Round 2—I hope the recipients of those find them useful!  As always, if there is anything in your review you do not wish to be public, just let me know and I will remove it.  https://docs.google.com/document/d/1c9fBy2zSipOVstZ-ZVAy5GeqlyN5RzoAMOjM8neLbL0/edit?usp=sharing  @Julia Fox@Kylie Jenner@worldwide angel@DatChickDoe@beatinglikeadrum@XO_Life @JoeAg@Legend E@Augmented@Euterpe@Invisibility@TruGemini@fountain
XO_Life Posted February 4, 2023 Posted February 4, 2023 @Aurora thank you. But I had to change it because there is no pokemon in Gen 1 called caterpillar
fountain Posted February 4, 2023 Author Posted February 4, 2023 Wait not the review for my song too asdfghjkl I didn’t even think anybody had actually read it  thank you @Aurora this was a really nice surprise
XO_Life Posted February 4, 2023 Posted February 4, 2023 7 minutes ago, fountain said: Wait not the review for my song too asdfghjkl I didn’t even think anybody had actually read it  thank you @Aurora this was a really nice surprise Where is your song?
Aurora Posted February 4, 2023 Posted February 4, 2023 19 minutes ago, XO_Life said: @Aurora thank you. But I had to change it because there is no pokemon in Gen 1 called caterpillar Still, the mental image of struggling with some shitty Pokémon being better than enduring dinner conversation with some guy was side-splitting.  The revamped lyric just didn't have that same energy.  16 minutes ago, fountain said: Wait not the review for my song too asdfghjkl I didn’t even think anybody had actually read it  thank you @Aurora this was a really nice surprise As was your song, I genuinely loved it.
fountain Posted February 4, 2023 Author Posted February 4, 2023 12 minutes ago, XO_Life said: Where is your song? On the last page  3 minutes ago, Aurora said: As was your song, I genuinely loved it.
beatinglikeadrum Posted February 4, 2023 Posted February 4, 2023 @Aurora I always forget that there is a huge diffrence between writing in Polish and English. Like, when you read lyrics to Polish songs, writers very often create new words, change the order of the words in sentence and sometimes even grammar rules. So I must work on that.
ATRL Moderator Legend E Posted February 4, 2023 ATRL Moderator Posted February 4, 2023 Welp the panning
Euterpe Posted February 4, 2023 Posted February 4, 2023 Whew, @Aurora, the formatting.  But also, yes, death was the narrator, and because death is an omnipresent being that is everywhere and nowhere, it’s a weird entity that can both have first person and third person vibes, but it was also kind of explaining what it was to whoever was reading. Thanks for the review!
Invisibility Posted February 4, 2023 Posted February 4, 2023 Scream! @Aurora really said:  And I can see why  Thanks for the critique!
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