JoeAg Posted September 16, 2022 Share Posted September 16, 2022 submitted, that took a bit longer than expected but i'm actually pretty proud of it for being something that i cranked out in like 30 minutes 32 minutes ago, fountain said: Sis it wouldnât be a JoeAg entry if it wasnât written an hour after the deadline  tea  i'm the most disorganized person i've EVER met Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Better Mistakes Posted September 16, 2022 Share Posted September 16, 2022 9 hours ago, Better Mistakes said: Cruel World   Full lyrics below. Drag me.    Reveal hidden contents (Verse 1) Never fought with time Only those across borders Never looked in your eyes On fields with others (Pre Chorus) All of the weeping crosses in blushing reds wonât retell what we knew All of the weeping crosses wonât raise me from the ground (Chorus) Goodbye to this cruel world Goodbye to this cruel world Itâs the end, itâs the end of our world Goodbye to this cruel world Goodbye to this cruel world âTil we meet in the light (Verse 2) Never lost the fight Only lost the power Never gave up on life In our secret hours  (Pre Chorus) (Chorus) (Bridge: spoken) Iâve fallen down, Lord help me up As Death comes in to take my hand Your voice still rings and sings Like the first time you unlocked what it meant to love When I complained that life isnât fair To love in secret but not out there It shouldnât be a secret But Lord, Iâll take them with me As the world crumbles around me I know youâre fighting for glory, King and country As I lose you and everything is ripped from me I pray that some history remembers me Give me life and live honestly Just donât let them alter me (Chorus) (Outro: spoken) All of the weeping crosses in blushing reds wonât retell what we knew All of the weeping crosses wonât raise me from the ground Goodbye to this world, Iâve fallen forever now Goodbye to this world, itâs ending now You have fixed my Life â however short. You did not light me: I was always a mad comet; but you have fixed me. I spun round you a satellite for a month, But I shall swing out soon, a dark star in the orbit where you will blaze. It is some consolation to know that Jupiter himself sometimes swims out of Ken!    Bonus photo of daddy Wilfred Owen  Spiralling and having a folklore moment. Iâve got stories to tell, both real and imaginary; connections to be made across songs that link them together. Letâs see where this goes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted September 16, 2022 Share Posted September 16, 2022 24 minutes ago, JoeAg said: tea  i'm the most disorganized person i've EVER met I can relate  Iâm generally quite laid back and so time can pass me quite easily sometimes  15 minutes ago, Better Mistakes said: Spiralling and having a folklore moment. Iâve got stories to tell, both real and imaginary; connections to be made across songs that link them together. Letâs see where this goes Hopefully the next challenge can fit into this! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hug Posted September 16, 2022 Share Posted September 16, 2022 NOT soundcloud down when it's actually important to me for it to be working this week ???? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted September 16, 2022 Share Posted September 16, 2022 (edited) The songs of Round 4, The Spoken Word Challenge: (minus any late entries)  @hurricane326 - Autumn @XO_Life - Only Ones Who Know @Allday - Leaving The City @Julia Fox - I will know @Kylie Jenner - This Is War @Hug - [C:\DIGITAL-DYSTOPIA] (feat. Alluring Name) @Better Mistakes - Cruel World @beatinglikeadrum - xxx (forbidden prayer) @Remmy - Flowerbloom (S2 Version) [Live from the Memorial Civil Center in Canton, Ohio) @Augmented - The Battle @Legend E - Interviewing Myself @Euterpe - Wasteland @TruGemini - Long Road @JoeAg - Itâs Your Shade of Blue Now Edited September 17, 2022 by fountain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted September 16, 2022 Share Posted September 16, 2022 really living for these titles, the creativity   I think we are in for another great round if I do say so myself Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Moderator Legend E Posted September 16, 2022 ATRL Moderator Share Posted September 16, 2022 Remmy  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted September 16, 2022 Share Posted September 16, 2022 canât wait to read the entries as soon as @Aurora gives me access  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted September 16, 2022 Share Posted September 16, 2022 55 minutes ago, Jackson said: canât wait to read the entries as soon as @Aurora gives me access  If you insist, I guess Iâll add you to it âŠÂ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
worldwide angel Posted September 16, 2022 Share Posted September 16, 2022 17 hours ago, fountain said: Can we expect any late entries, hopefully?  @worldwide angel @Gavin. iâm sorry, this week was hectic irl , i will be back for r5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted September 16, 2022 Share Posted September 16, 2022 1 minute ago, worldwide angel said: iâm sorry, this week was hectic irl , i will be back for r5 Aw a shame, life always comes first though. Iâm glad youâll be back for round 5!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Galah Posted September 16, 2022 Author Share Posted September 16, 2022 8 hours ago, fountain said: The songs of Round 4, The Spoken Word Challenge: (minus any late entries)  @hurricane326 - Autumn @XO_Life - Only Ones Who Know @Allday - Leaving The City @Julia Fox - I will know @Kylie Jenner - This Is War @Hug - [C:\DIGITAL-DYSTOPIA] (feat. Alluring Name) @Better Mistakes - Cruel World @beatinglikeadrum - xxx (forbidden prayer) @Remmy - Flowerbloom (S2 Version) [Live from the Memorial Civil Center in Canton, Ohio) @Augmented - The Battle @Legend E - Interviewing Myself @Euterpe - Wastleland @TruGemini - Long Road @JoeAg - Itâs Your Shade of Blue Now Another wonderful turnout, it's fantastic to see Golden Hit rounds average higher submission rates than their respective counterparts in a traditional Platinum Hit season. The non-elimination format definitely appears to be working!  While seeing a few names missing from the list is sad, it's great to see the likes of Kylie Jenner, Better Mistakes, and TruGemini return.  I don't want to spoil too much, but for anyone who wasn't around for the Golden Hit: Season 1 finale, you might want to participate in these last two challenges if you have only participated in one or two thus far. You never know what you might be Hit with! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Galah Posted September 16, 2022 Author Share Posted September 16, 2022 With that said, it's now time...   Good luck y'all! I hope your songs speak to me... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Galah Posted September 17, 2022 Author Share Posted September 17, 2022 My reviews are serving novella this week... apologies in advance (or you're welcome?) Definitely some scalps this week. Hopefully will be able to wrap these up in a few hours! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Galah Posted September 17, 2022 Author Share Posted September 17, 2022  Hey, Hitmakers! Your songs really spoke to me this week... and I'm not just saying that to make a pun on Round 4's Spoken Word challenge, they did! đŁ I'm heading out of the state this coming week following the Round 5 challenge announcement tomorrow, so enjoy my reviews now while I finalise scores. If there is anything in your review that you do not wish to have public (lyric excerpts, references to your material etc.) I will remove it upon request.   1. @hurricane326 - âAutumnâ First cab off the rank again! (Thatâs Australian slang for being the first to seize an opportunity, if you didnât know ) Iâve come to anticipate your entries, as they always provide a strong start to a reviewing session. In some ways I feel like this challenge was tailor-made for you, given Iâd say your typical writing style already trends more on the poetic side. What youâve submitted definitely gives off strong spoken word poetry vibes, although the little âAutumn has comeâ refrain does bring it back into spoken word song territory. Thematically, this feels almost like a continuation of âLove Under a Blue Tarpâ, or more accurately as if they belong to the same concept album (i.e. a âcardiganâ/âaugustâ/âbettyâ from folklore tea). While part of me loves the idea of this, having another song with vivid seasonal/tree imagery directly following the deciduous tree challenge potentially feels a tad uninspired. Conceptually, I think writing about seasonal affective disorder is solid, and the logic of connecting it with seasonal imagery is sound, if not a bit predictable. What canât be faulted is your knack for crafting captivating one-liners, and itâs evident that care has been placed into even the simplest imagery of falling leaves and your preferred attire. While I canât say this is my favourite submission of yours, I still enjoyed it and consider it another solid addition to your repertoire. 2. @XO_Life - âOnly Ones Who Knowâ Let me start off this review by saying... WHERE đ WAS đ THIS đ DURING đ THE đ BLACKGOLD đ CHALLENGE? This song is serving textbook Audrey Onyx and I honestly stan this so hard. You mentioned you were aiming for âLana Del Rey going popâ and I think you succeeded in that 100%. Iâm not sure if they were intentional references or not, but I loved all the Lana nods throughout, such as the âboat at seaâ (NFR! cover art), âlate night driveâ (âRideâ), âWest Coastâ (obvious reference), the beach setting (âHigh By The Beachâ) etc. Nothing felt forced or shoehorned in either. Beginning the verses with the year was a good technique. âForbidden twin flames on the run, heading towards the night sunâ was a standout lyric, although I think âmidnight sunâ might have flowed a bit better. The spoken bridge was a complete collapse, it was giving strong Lana monologue vibes, and this probably has some of your best imagery weâve seen throughout this tournament: âliquid diamondsâ, âwettelsbach-graf eyesâ, and âpurest crystal heartâ fit the dramatised context of this section so immaculately. This section alone was a 10. Needless to say, I think you crushed this challenge, you had a strong vision and concept and saw it to fruition, and I think this is absolutely your best work thus far. Please let me know if Audrey can add this as a digital bonus track for her forthcoming album, Ophelia. 3. @Allday - âLeaving The Cityâ Before I start my review, I just wanted to ask if you were saving your songs somewhere else? I noticed you were using the same submission doc link for all of your entries and just replacing the contents. I hope you have a copy of your original songs since Iâd definitely recommend keeping them! With that said, I think your submissions are definitely showing strength from round to round, and there is consistent growth here. Much like fountain, I wholeheartedly disagree with âRedâ scoring lower than âAnimal For Youâ, despite its higher rank. I liked the image of the shiny city lights fading into the distance from the view of the train window. Your spoken word elements were definitely minimal, but they were present and obviously notated. Some suggestions for this song that would get you into the next score bracket for me would be to really hone in on that imagery. Like I mentioned earlier, the visual you conjured with âthe shiny distanceâ was a highlight of this piece. Playing with ideas such as, âThe Big Apple seems so small now,â as a metaphor for leaving New York City, for example. Another suggestion would be to utilise more poetic/lyrical language: certain words like âstuffâ just donât have a very appealing melodic tendency, and this lyric could have been improved on, potentially, âThey say lies like, âoh youâre fineâ,â which would also include an imperfect internal rhyme of âliesâ/âfineâ. 4. @Julia Fox - âI will knowâ Not you admitting to submitting an older song... I donât know how I feel about that. While this was undoubtedly an improvement over âCoconut Treeâ, this definitely did give me Golden Hit: Season 1 Julia Fox vibes rather than the new-and-improved Golden Hit: Season 2 âvintageâ chanteuse weâve come to know and love. Your first two entries this season demonstrated terrific growth, and I want you to get back to that place so we can see more of that. âThe Last Time I Saw You (Ivanâs song)â was such a fitting closing chapter to the Ivan saga, too. As for the spoken word element of the challenge... it honestly did feel as if you just took an old song and italicised some sections and called it a day. This was particularly evident in lyrics that were only intended to be spoken mid-sentence, which could come across as extremely unnatural in an actual song without the proper setup. I feel like perhaps this song was a good fit for what you are going through personally right now, and not necessarily the challenge at hand. But if Golden Hit helps you process your feelings through art, thatâs reason enough to create without being worried about a high rank/score. Moving forward, Iâd love to see you freshly reinspired for Round 5, and write a new song from the ground up! 5. @Kylie Jenner - âThis Is Warâ The return of Ms. Jenner. And we have a working Soundcloud link, spoil us! I thought it was instrumental-only at first, so I was shook when the backing vocals came in... gorgeous. Conceptually, I think your selection of a more serious subject such as war was definitely a clever decision for this challenge, as it lends itself to that dramatic monologue intro and outro format that youâve opted for (and would be easily trimmed for a radio release/added to a short film music video). Lyrically, I think youâve stuck rather closely to a common story of soldiers at war fighting for their loved ones, knowing full well that they might not make it home. âAnd walk the line like you donât know your fateâ was my favourite lyric from the pre-chorus section, as it really reinforced this. The lyrical body of the song felt as if it was prioritising the melodic delivery and general narrative over the individual lyrics. Everything does sound good together, but I canât really isolate any specific lyrics and say, âWow, âOne more dayâ was a powerful moment.â I think your most powerful was probably the outro and use of extended rhyme scheme there. As for the spoken word elements, these were by far and away the highlight of your song for me, especially the latter one. The section about the space between the lines of a bookâs final page was beautiful, and I almost wish the whole song had been centred around this metaphor instead. All in all, your technique is solid, and I definitely consider this a step up over âBig Girl (Bang Bang)â. 6. @Hug - â[C:\DIGITAL-DYSTOPIA]â (feat. Alluring Name) The other information... giving Legend E a run for their money! Back-to-back Soundcloud links, we are being spoiled this week. My review for you this week is going to be a little different, because I think youâve expressed a lot of public uncertainty regarding your originality, or alleged lack thereof, and I think following this song itâs important to address this: WAY đ TO đ PROVE đ THAT đ NOTION đ WRONG. This was quite simply one of the most unique package deals weâve seen in Golden Hit, period, and possibly in any writing tournament? The way you COMMITTED to this concept through and through, from the cover art, to the documentâs formatting, to the recording... genius. Combining technology with religion, two conceptual ideas that are typically mutually exclusive, in such a perfect and harmonious way alone is impressive, but the extra care youâve put into every aspect of this song just sells the concept so well, even down to the little binary code easter egg on the doc (which yes, I did have fun translating). Iâm glad you added in the intro monologue, not because I think the song wouldnât have satisfied the brief otherwise (it would have), but because itâs so great, and your friend did an AMAZING job voice acting in this part. Like seriously, wtf? This is not something they ******* made, this is some professional like, and this... this is in different areas wtf, this ainât no homemade ****. Are those your vocals as âGodâ, too? You are literally playing God, the serve. I havenât even addressed the lyrical content yet, which is absolutely fantastic, and doesnât feel as if itâs playing second fiddle to your concept or other information. I like that it could be either sung or spoken honestly, it retains that strong melodic presence, preventing it from just reading like a partially rhyming story. I canât even isolate specific one-liners I loved because thereâs too many and this review is already serving novella. In short, I think you hacked the mainframe of Golden Hit and gave yourself a 10 this week, and I have absolutely no objections to that.  7. @Better Mistakes - âCruel Worldâ The first thing Iâd like to address is the other information section: while I did just what you suggested, others may not have due to the rather dismissive nature of the request. Which would be a shame, because knowing the background of the relationship described in the song really does frame the song and add layers not necessarily evident from the lyrics alone. This is easily my favourite submission of yours from either of the Golden Hit tournaments thus far. Youâve selected a really interesting source of inspiration andâlike I said in my review of Kylie Jennerâs songâthe more serious war subject was definitely a clever decision for this challenge. The spoken word bridge is my favourite section of this piece, and the final lyric of this section has the powerful effect I imagine you designed it to have. The outro is similarly strong, and the comet lyric was lovely, even if the celestial imagery toward the end of the song did feel a touch out of place, but I kind of got Kesha's âSpaceshipâ vibes so I enjoyed it anyway. The prechorus was another strong moment. In the verses and chorusâthe verses especiallyâI would have liked to see some more details being clearly referential to Wilfred Owen and Siegfried Sassoonâs relationship and lived experience, particularly their mutual anti-war stance. Overall, I thought this was clever, challenging, and creative, and I would LOVE to see more material from you in this vein in the future. 8. @beatinglikeadrum - âxxx (forbidden prayer)â Shall we just rename this season âGolden Hit: Lilith Reloaded â The Eve-Upâ? I know every now and then we see trends, but to have four (4) different songs across three (3) separate rounds reference Lilith without a single round devoted to her or any kind of religious/biblical theme is a little bit more than odd. On paper I think this would have been a clever approach to the challenge; the spoken prayer intro, the biblical setting, the âtwistâ framing sin as desirable and following Jesusâ word as undesirable etc. and had we not already received three other submissions more or less promoting the same idea, I think this would have hit a lot harder. Still, I donât feel it is entirely fair to essentially penalise you for not paying attention to what others are submitting, so I wonât be too harsh when taking this into account for scoring. Delving into your song, I found the intro idea being framed as a prayer genius, but it didnât actually read like a prayer in execution, more like a reprimand? Your prechorus was really solid, and I think âAll I know I dont want heaven's cold perfection, I prefer hell's cozy flamesâ was a strong way to close out your chorus, and pretty much summarised your intentions behind the song. Despite my less-than-favourable review, this definitely wasnât a bad song by any means, and while I acknowledge it as somewhat a victim of circumstance, it didnât reach the highs of âRunning away from the sunâ or âThe Kingâ for me regardless. 9. @Remmy - âFlowerbloom (S2 Version) [Live from the Memorial Civic Center in Canton, Ohio]â Not you literally re-submitting âFlowerbloomâ, I actually went back to the Golden Hit: Season 1 submission form to find your original song to compare the two and realised you just used the same link and updated the formatting a bit and made some minor changes. Iâve already expressed my thoughts on this song back in Season 1, and while my score technically wonât have changed, I donât know if itâs really fair to give you the same score since itâs obviously not an entirely new song youâve written for this challenge? I will have to deliberate with my fellow judges. I think this will serve you better than a non-submission, so good thinking at any rate. 10. @Augmented - âThe Battleâ I have two words for you: YOUâRE BACK! Youâve been very vocal about your lack of inspiration lately and it feels like being honest about this and facing this issue head on has definitely helped you work through whatever writerâs block youâve been experiencing these past few weeks. The interesting thing about all of this is, it validates that you really do put yourself into your work, because when youâre struggling we can see it in your music, and when youâre bringing it... you most certainly bring it. In some ways, I feel like this song is very symbolic, and that it literally is as if this is the battle between you and your inspiration, and youâve most certainly been victorious on this occasion. I loved the A section and how each closing object became the subject of the following line, wrapping its way back to the beginning. Your spoken sections were also strong, in fact I donât really consider any of the specific verses to be weaker than the others. This is definitely leaning toward spoken word poetry more than song, but I think the outro is the perfect balance and brings it back in. Definitely flying high up with the likes of âNight owlâ, letâs hope you stay up on that perch.  11. @Legend E - âInterviewing Myselfâ First impression: love this title and concept. I feel like we need to have a Psychology round or something because I just know it would spawn some really interesting songs, such as this and Euterpeâs âFive Stagesâ from the Girl Group challenge *pencils in notebook for Golden Hit: Season 3*. While Iâll be honest, I did find the execution of this particular piece a little confusing at times, it was kind of endearingly so, and almost added to the mystery of the song and made you second guess what was really being said between the lines? The idea of the crackling radio frequency foley effect being incorporated in this song was super fun also, and not just for random flair, but sort of like representative of drifting in and out of reality. In some ways this song reminded me of âTalk of the Townâ in that it was very conceptual and had specific meanings associated with the plants that werenât necessarily the most obvious, but I think this was very much an improvement over that entry and I donât think you got as caught up in the metaphors this time, but instead controlled the narrative and made a much more engaging piece overall. Another exceptionally unique offering from you, Iâm eager for your next!  12. @Euterpe - âWastelandâ This was definitely a moment. My review is going to be on the shorter side in comparison to some of the other reviews, but I donât want you to take that as an indication of my opinion on the song, I just donât think itâs necessarily my place to comment on many of the issues youâve addressed in this piece being a cisgender man. This definitely stands apart from your typical mystical, earthy style in a bold and brave way. This composition absolutely reads like a spoken word poetry performance piece rather than a song with spoken word elements, but that technicality aside, this is enthralling. The final couplet was such a powerful way to end this piece. Despite not reading like a song in a traditional sense, this is still one of my favourite examples of your writing that youâve submitted in either Golden Hit tournament, and I commend you on writing such a moving piece.  13. @TruGemini - âLong Roadâ Glad to see you back after taking the week off last week! You have a distinct style that definitely is unique and appreciated in this tournament. I want to get this out of the way, the first two sections were nice but most of my prior criticisms about writing to track rather than writing for the lyrics first apply as youâve essentially just taken up eleven bars to say the same thing. Even though it might sound catchy and have a nice vibe, thereâs definitely a lot more you could have done lyrically with these opening sections. That said, as soon as you get into the longer verseâwhich I definitely read as a rapâthis is some of your best work since âSweet Releaseâ, honestly. Youâve definitely got bars and flow. I found the spoken section rather interesting and endearing, even if it was almost serving ârambling to meet the word countâ a tad. I completely understood what you were going for though, that sort of post-song interlude while the beatâs still going that you might hear on a mixtape. All in all, the good far outweighed the bad here, and I enjoyed seeing how you interpreted the challenge and tackled it in a way that suited your style, and youâve done a pretty good job at that. 14. @JoeAg - âItâs Your Shade of Blue Nowâ First impression: love this title! Iâm definitely getting Golden Hit: Season 1 JoeAg vibes from this one because there were more than a few parts I wondered if I was misinterpreting. I didnât sense too much of a tonal shift between the spoken and sung sections, nor between your typical writing style, but honestly a lot of your writing does have that naturally poetic aptitude to it anyway so itâs not hard to believe a majority of this piece is spoken rather than sung. Is this piece addressing same-sex marriage? I feel like it is with the references to a union, judgemental âfriendsâ, being queer, and kings plural, but I wasnât sure if there was something else I was missing? If so, what is the shared shade of blue referring to? Is it the way the light is filtered through the stained glass, meaning the home is his now? As you can see, I have a lot of questions, which isnât necessarily a bad thing: I WANT to know more because I found your song interesting. I feel out of everyone, your songs could benefit the most from the other information section, and Iâm usually left wanting more. Regardless, this was another lovely offering from you, and another strong addition to your Golden Hit catalogue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hug Posted September 17, 2022 Share Posted September 17, 2022 1 hour ago, Aurora said: 6. @Hug - â[C:\DIGITAL-DYSTOPIA]â (feat. Alluring Name) Omg acclaim ???  Quote The way you COMMITTED to this concept through and through, from the cover art, to the documentâs formatting, to the recording... genius. So one part I don't think I even mentioned is that the base picture I used for the cover art was made using Craiyon (formerly DALL-E) which I thought was a cute nod to the concept of "technology going too far" that I had in my song, because people are worried these AI programs will be able to replace real artists, just like this online utopia could potentially replace Heaven! It's meta-commentary yeah.  1 hour ago, Aurora said: your friend did an AMAZING job voice acting in this part. Like seriously, wtf? This is not something they ******* made, this is some professional like, and this... this is in different areas wtf, this ainât no homemade ****. I'M ******* SAYING. Imagine me sitting there listening to them perform that over Discord in real time. My jaw was on the ******* floor. There was no way I couldn't give them their due credit after hearing that, after WITNESSING that. She told me afterwards she was having a whole existential crisis afterwards because she hated her performance like wtf???? Imagine doing something phenomenal like that and going into a self-hate spiral afterwards. Ugh she's amazing and in my honest opinion added a flavor this piece really needed.  Quote Are those your vocals as âGodâ, too? You are literally playing God, the serve. Yeah  ofc I pitched my vocals way down and added vocoder and I'm not even audible for most the song, but HEY I tried. I think it's better than the judgeth hearing me lithp all through the thong.  1 hour ago, Aurora said: it retains that strong melodic presence, preventing it from just reading like a partially rhyming story. See that was a problem I figured a spoken word entry could have (side-eyes "mm" from Season 1) so keeping some melodic presence was something I felt was important, though toeing the line between that and just "you didn't even do the challenge" was one of my biggest concerns (as I said in the submission form). Happy to see you at least thought it would've been fine either way!  Thank you for your honestly very encouraging review dfskjfds I was so close to phoning the rest of this season in out of pure demotivation but I was glad I put the effort I did into this, it felt worth it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beatinglikeadrum Posted September 17, 2022 Share Posted September 17, 2022 I sent this song bcuz I had to send something. It is literally last hour job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Moderator Legend E Posted September 17, 2022 ATRL Moderator Share Posted September 17, 2022 The way I was so scared to include the flower line  But glad it's not a total flop. Thanks, Aurora Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Euterpe Posted September 17, 2022 Share Posted September 17, 2022 Thank you @Aurora! Iâm glad my song came across as it did, because it was as intended. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Remmy Posted September 17, 2022 Share Posted September 17, 2022  Yeah this was just a silly droplet idea, it's okay if it gets panned  But I did think about the fact that this would be better than getting no points at all  All I did was add maybe 4 new lyrics & were replace some lines that didn't get a lot of love originally, and I made it "live" as a reference to the Grammys when people can get nominated for live versions of songs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted September 17, 2022 Share Posted September 17, 2022 1 hour ago, Remmy said:  Yeah this was just a silly droplet idea, it's okay if it gets panned  But I did think about the fact that this would be better than getting no points at all  All I did was add maybe 4 new lyrics & were replace some lines that didn't get a lot of love originally, and I made it "live" as a reference to the Grammys when people can get nominated for live versions of songs. Not your bending the rules to get a Grammy nomination era  kinda here for it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted September 17, 2022 Share Posted September 17, 2022 (edited) Working on my reviews, hoping to have them posted tonight!  Also, @Aurora will be posting the new challenge in the next few hours, Iâm quite looking forward to this topic, and I hope nobody finds it too⊠tiresome Edited September 17, 2022 by fountain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted September 17, 2022 Share Posted September 17, 2022 some reviews coming in about an hour. i have 7 done and will post whatever i've completed by then so i don't leave everyone waiting until tomorrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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