Angelo Posted May 30, 2022 Posted May 30, 2022 Hey ATRL! I started posting short videos for fun and I titled it as "Living Alone in the UK". I enjoyed doing it. I want to know what's your opinion about it? What's good? What's bad? What should I add? Here is the latest one:
May Posted May 30, 2022 Posted May 30, 2022 listen .. out of context of this forum id have no issue w ur video , but i can’t take anything an atrler does seriously . to me i find the video funny bc i never thought about atrler’s actually functioning in real life .. im sorry
Illuminati Posted May 30, 2022 Posted May 30, 2022 My favorite part was the pov inside your laundry, keep the videos coming king !
Kayseri Mantisi Posted May 30, 2022 Posted May 30, 2022 10 minutes ago, May said: listen .. out of context of this forum id have no issue w ur video , but i can’t take anything an atrler does seriously . to me i find the video funny bc i never thought about atrler’s actually functioning in real life .. im sorry 4 minutes ago, Illuminati said: My favorite part was the pov inside your laundry, keep the videos coming king !
Bosque Posted May 30, 2022 Posted May 30, 2022 10 minutes ago, Illuminati said: My favorite part was the pov inside your laundry, keep the videos coming king ! More shots like this should be included
Kavish Posted May 30, 2022 Posted May 30, 2022 It fits with the daily-life / minimalistic / aesthetic vlog community. Your music choices are soothing but try to lower the volume in future videos otherwise it can distract from what you are doing. You want the music to be a background relaxing tool, unless you are using music during transitions and time-lapses in which case it can be at the forefront. Overall you are on the right track with the editing, shots, and atmosphere. Keep going.
ninasayers Posted May 30, 2022 Posted May 30, 2022 The sad music the first 2 and a half or so minutes didn't really add anything to the video imo. The shot from inside the laundry was good, but at the end of it you could see that you looked at the camera and were going to grab it (or at least it looks like it), which kinda takes us out of the illusion a bit but, again, it was a nice shot. There are some shots which were also cool, and it's always nice to get many different angles. Overall i'd say it's a really cute video
KillingYourCareer Posted May 30, 2022 Posted May 30, 2022 It's important to know how to do your laundry, you should add some tips for your viewers! And I like the addition of a melancholic background music to emphasize the sensation of loneliness suggested by the title. Make sure to show us some pictures you've taken with your new camera in the next video. Keep it up, you're doing a great job!
Alyssa Edwards Posted May 30, 2022 Posted May 30, 2022 It's relaxing, i know some people LOVE this type of content. I think it's nice
tili33 Posted May 30, 2022 Posted May 30, 2022 *I would have called the video "Seeing my cozy small world through a new lens while enjoying my solitary living" **name drop the product in the description and/or tags not in the title ***drop the sad music, look for something neutral or on a happier note, or even ditch music all together and let your activities sound trigger the asmr crowd.
What_A_Mess Posted May 31, 2022 Posted May 31, 2022 Good video and nice camera work. Was the sad song in the beginning intentional? Just felt a bit sad because of it. If that was your goal then keep at it. If not, maybe change the music? The music in m other parts of the video were more neutral and Less depressing. Otherwise keep up the good work
AlanRickman1946 Posted June 1, 2022 Posted June 1, 2022 Overall I find the video interesting and I would watch a follow up video. Music -The sad music while pouring the Starbucks is a little funny. -The music can be a little softer so you can hear the ambient noises more clearly (E.g. bottle cap opening, liquid pouring). -The music could be neutral with some parts being happier and sadder but without the change being too jarring. Overall the music is a little too sad. Cinematography -The shot from inside the washing machine is a little funny because we obviously know you will remove the camera before starting the machine. Otherwise the scenes are fine. Title -The video title could also be changed to suit the current You Tube aesthetic of solitary living (not lonely), clean, minimalist, efficient.
Angelo Posted June 4, 2022 Author Posted June 4, 2022 On 5/30/2022 at 9:10 PM, Juanny said: this was really cute, i felt very relaxed and peaceful in the beginning. i liked when you were pouring coffee in the tumbler too ur good at choosing the music. i like when it changed to a guitar song when the photo appeared, very artsy Aw Thanks for noticing that! On 5/30/2022 at 9:21 PM, Kavish said: It fits with the daily-life / minimalistic / aesthetic vlog community. Your music choices are soothing but try to lower the volume in future videos otherwise it can distract from what you are doing. You want the music to be a background relaxing tool, unless you are using music during transitions and time-lapses in which case it can be at the forefront. Overall you are on the right track with the editing, shots, and atmosphere. Keep going. Noted. I will lower the volume next video. On 5/30/2022 at 9:25 PM, ninasayers said: The sad music the first 2 and a half or so minutes didn't really add anything to the video imo. The shot from inside the laundry was good, but at the end of it you could see that you looked at the camera and were going to grab it (or at least it looks like it), which kinda takes us out of the illusion a bit but, again, it was a nice shot. There are some shots which were also cool, and it's always nice to get many different angles. Overall i'd say it's a really cute video Thank you! On 5/30/2022 at 9:53 PM, KillingYourCareer said: It's important to know how to do your laundry, you should add some tips for your viewers! And I like the addition of a melancholic background music to emphasize the sensation of loneliness suggested by the title. Make sure to show us some pictures you've taken with your new camera in the next video. Keep it up, you're doing a great job! Thanks for the idea! Yeah it's nice to have continuity between videos. I'll do that!
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