Remmy Posted May 30, 2022 Posted May 30, 2022 congrats to Jackson and everyone else that snapped love seeing that you did ELIO justice... just hoping Element didn't rig it because he met her! (and she lied to him )
diamondsky Posted May 30, 2022 Posted May 30, 2022 (edited) Congrats to the top three! Edited May 30, 2022 by ☆lex
Tylerbv Posted May 30, 2022 Posted May 30, 2022 my song btw - very carrie underwood influenced --- ---verse 1--- sarah was a lost girl living in a trailer park love was a luxury she never could afford her parents said one child to neglect ain't enough so they went ahead and had two more little baby anna was the youngest of the three with a smile that could light up a room mama and papa only came around for money so sarah took care of anna and her brother too ---chorus--- in a cold world her heart kept her siblings warm but they'd never know some days sarah wishes she was never born she keeps her head held high so they'll never know she's broken nobody sees her cry nobody knows she's hoping hoping for a change hoping for a chance hoping that she can get out of this world but she's still just a girl she'll fight this battle every day cause they're her reason to stay ---verse 2--- mama and daddy are back home for the night throwing bottles and screaming again playing psychological warfare, but nobody wins all they do is use their babies as weapons sarah doesn't wanna leave but her job is calling so she says "little brother take care of anna" "i'll be working late but don't you hesitate to call me if something's the matter" ---chorus--- in a cold world her heart kept her siblings warm but they'd never know some days sarah wishes she was never born she keeps her head held high so they'll never know she's broken nobody sees her cry nobody knows she's hoping hoping for a change hoping for a chance hoping that she can get out of this world but she's still just a girl she'll fight this battle every day cause they're her reason to stay ---verse 3--- she can't get them out of her mind as she works overtime to earn enough to get them something special she rushes home to see 'em, with gifts in hand she prayed the gifts would make their hearts full she opens the door, and nobody's there she's worried, but knows they'd never go far but embracing her brother behind the couch she finds baby anna, bruises on her arms ---chorus--- in a cold world her heart kept her siblings warm but they'd never know some days sarah wishes she was never born she keeps her head held high so they'll never know she's broken nobody sees her cry nobody knows she's hoping hoping for a change hoping for a chance hoping that she can get out of this world but she's still just a girl she'll fight this battle every day cause they're her reason to stay ---bridge--- sarah never felt the way she felt that day she called mama and daddy "please come home" sent anna and her brother to a nice hotel saying, "i'll be there soon, you won't be alone" she promised money and drugs to her parents though when they came, they didn't find none when they opened the door, just standing there they saw sarah, aiming her loaded gun ---bridge outro--- she had a smile on her face they'd never hurt her reasons to stay again sarah sent them away but lord knows, she didn't send them to heaven ---outro--- the world's a little bit warmer now she finally got her siblings out of that place sarah knew from now on there'd be no more bruises on anna's face and that's her reason to stay
fountain Posted May 30, 2022 Author Posted May 30, 2022 (edited) I might have to give a listen to Elio after this now and see what the hype is Any recommendations from those that are familiar with her? Edited May 30, 2022 by fountain
fountain Posted May 30, 2022 Author Posted May 30, 2022 Since Jackson already posted his song I’ll repost the link in case anybody hasn’t seen it and wants to read https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GQ5Xx3uzBucfG3M5z3vgS5I8kpCwU5HfWl6JUFXQY3g/edit
Jackson Posted May 30, 2022 Posted May 30, 2022 i’ve been offline all day and just saw this thank you judges! it was such a fun song to write so i’m glad that translated to a #1
Jackson Posted May 30, 2022 Posted May 30, 2022 7 minutes ago, fountain said: I might have to give a listen to Elio after this now and see what the hype is Any recommendations from those that are familiar with her? Jackie Onassis is her best song, but Charger and Superimpose are also standouts
Jackson Posted May 30, 2022 Posted May 30, 2022 3 hours ago, Element said: OMG shut up at you doing Elio @Jackson I love her sm. Went to her show a few weeks ago and met her afterwards!! She's so nice. i remember talking to you about her like a year ago but that’s not even why i chose her - i came up with the concept of this song a couple months ago after listening to superimpose and this challenge was the perfect opportunity to finally write it
Augmented Posted May 30, 2022 Posted May 30, 2022 Another tie Anyway yay thank you so much judges, glad I showed a bit of improvement! This next challenge tho at least I will be tying for last place if this is anything to go by
OreGuy Posted May 30, 2022 Posted May 30, 2022 1 hour ago, Aurora said: #16 is so, so close to Top 15! I really hope this doesn't bring you down... Reveal hidden contents ? @OreGuy with a score of 7.267 for “Ways to Bring You Down”. ? That's what I call growth. Keep on climbing up the ladder and we'll see you in the Top 10 in no time! 1 hour ago, fountain said: @OreGuy another great, solid score for you ready to see what you serve for round 3! oh whew she's serving a slow climb but a steady climb thanks to both of you
Hug Posted May 30, 2022 Posted May 30, 2022 Well...I have 211 words of whatever it is I'm writing so far
fountain Posted May 30, 2022 Author Posted May 30, 2022 5 minutes ago, Hug said: Well...I have 211 words of whatever it is I'm writing so far Add one more quick
Galah Posted May 30, 2022 Posted May 30, 2022 1 hour ago, Aurora said: Full rankings table will be coming after I participate in Let's Spoon. Congrats everyone! Thanks for another amazing round, and good luck with the current one. Not me winning chile- results table coming!
Hug Posted May 30, 2022 Posted May 30, 2022 4 minutes ago, fountain said: Add one more quick I quickly added two more specifically for this reason
fountain Posted May 30, 2022 Author Posted May 30, 2022 Just now, Hug said: I quickly added two more specifically for this reason
Galah Posted May 30, 2022 Posted May 30, 2022 Rank Writer Song Title Score 1 @Jackson “DEEPFAKE” 8.9 2 @8thPrince “Fraternite” 8.767 3 @Euterpe “Candlelight” 8.7 4 @hurricane326 “Into the Blue” 8.267 5 @Achilles. “A Long Time Coming” 8.2 @JoeAg “Woman in the Charmed Garden” 7 @GentleDance “They Just Had to Tell Me” 8.067 8 @Prisoner “Drift Away” 7.933 9 @Arrows “Out Of The Blue” 7.867 10 @Tylerbv “Reason to Stay” 7.667 11 @Augmented “Keeps You Talkin” 7.633 @Hug “Hug” 13 @EpicSongFan “Feeling You” 7.567 14 @DatChickDoe “Blue Is How I Live Without You” 7.333 15 @Julia Fox “No Woman Is No Art” 7.3 16 @OreGuy “Ways to Bring You Down” 7.267 17 @mxtthewdelrey “you cheat, you lose” 7.167 18 @Legend E “Talk of the Town” 7.133 19 @Remmy “Don't Let a Man Tell You What to Do” 7.1 20 @Lorenzo22 “Teenage Love Story” 6.8 21 @☆lex “Nights on the Run” 6.767 @Jessie “Ecstasy All Night” @RobDeWittBukater “Password” 24 @TruGemini “Zone” 6.6 25 @Better Mistakes “Dancing With My Tears” 5.767 26 @Insanity “Just Try” 5.233 27 @D e v o n “Session 32” 5.167 28 @boubour “Lonely” 4.667
ATRL Moderator Element Posted May 30, 2022 ATRL Moderator Posted May 30, 2022 55 minutes ago, Jackson said: Jackie Onassis is her best song, but Charger and Superimpose are also standouts Agreed! Jackie is just pop excellence. My current top 10 from her: Jackie Onassis Superimpose Vitamins @elio.irl Charger When U Saw Love My Friends Online Read The Room I LUV MY BRAIN! Hurts 2 Hate Somebody FYI @fountain
ATRL Moderator Element Posted May 30, 2022 ATRL Moderator Posted May 30, 2022 44 minutes ago, Jackson said: i remember talking to you about her like a year ago but that’s not even why i chose her - i came up with the concept of this song a couple months ago after listening to superimpose and this challenge was the perfect opportunity to finally write it That's so iconic! Your creative mind... About a year ago, she posted an email on her stories where ppl could send her songs for recording. I actually took it down in case I needed it one day... and I guess that day has come. I'll send it to u
Jackson Posted May 30, 2022 Posted May 30, 2022 38 minutes ago, Element said: That's so iconic! Your creative mind... About a year ago, she posted an email on her stories where ppl could send her songs for recording. I actually took it down in case I needed it one day... and I guess that day has come. I'll send it to u ooh that's actually really cool of her to do. ready for DEEPFAKE to make it onto Elio's Inferno: The Re-Up
fountain Posted May 30, 2022 Author Posted May 30, 2022 47 minutes ago, Aurora said: Rank Writer Song Title Score 1 @Jackson “DEEPFAKE” 8.9 2 @8thPrince “Fraternite” 8.767 3 @Euterpe “Candlelight” 8.7 4 @hurricane326 “Into the Blue” 8.267 5 @Achilles. “A Long Time Coming” 8.2 @JoeAg “Woman in the Charmed Garden” 7 @GentleDance “They Just Had to Tell Me” 8.067 8 @Prisoner “Drift Away” 7.933 9 @Arrows “Out Of The Blue” 7.867 10 @Tylerbv “Reason to Stay” 7.667 11 @Augmented “Keeps You Talkin” 7.633 @Hug “Hug” 13 @EpicSongFan “Feeling You” 7.567 14 @DatChickDoe “Blue Is How I Live Without You” 7.333 15 @Julia Fox “No Woman Is No Art” 7.3 16 @OreGuy “Ways to Bring You Down” 7.267 17 @mxtthewdelrey “you cheat, you lose” 7.167 18 @Legend E “Talk of the Town” 7.133 19 @Remmy “Don't Let a Man Tell You What to Do” 7.1 20 @Lorenzo22 “Teenage Love Story” 6.8 21 @☆lex “Nights on the Run” 6.767 @Jessie “Ecstasy All Night” @RobDeWittBukater “Password” 24 @TruGemini “Zone” 6.6 25 @Better Mistakes “Dancing With My Tears” 5.767 26 @Insanity “Just Try” 5.233 27 @D e v o n “Session 32” 5.167 28 @boubour “Lonely” 4.667
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