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3 minutes ago, Corsola said:

Tides

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intro

Brought up in the arms of a volcano

But each eruption shoved me to the coast

I was scared to walk on the lava at my feet

So I ended up tripping and fell in the sea

The tides carried me but I had nowhere to go

So I thought of sinking in to a permanent home

 

verse one

Though my feet almost touched the ocean floor

Now I feel them trace a new island shore

I'll no longer let myself be submerged

Even if I hear eruptions occur

 

chorus

When I felt the lava push me away

The tides caressed me with their embrace

I dove in hoping it would douse my burning heart

But none of the water could wash away the marks

So I swam to the shore and vowed that day

That I won't be drenched by any more waves

 

verse two

I hide myself on top of the mountain

So I don't face eruptions that happen

There aren't any tides that can reach me up here

So I can live my life without any fear

 

chorus

When I felt the lava push me away

The tides caressed me with their embrace

I dove in hoping it would douse my burning heart

But none of the water could wash away the marks

So I swam to the shore and vowed that day

That I won't be drenched by any more waves

 

bridge

Though the eruptions can't hurt me anymore

There's still a world that I wish I could explore

But I must wait for this volcano to cease

So that I can finally live my life in peace

Then I know I will sail the tides

Instead of fearing that I'll drown inside

 

chorus

When I felt the lava push me away

The tides caressed me with their embrace

I dove in hoping it would douse my burning heart

But none of the water could wash away the marks

So I swam to the shore and vowed that day

That I won't be drenched by any more waves

 

The second chapter of my personal life about my abusive mom :cm: I might go back to polish this song better sometime but I still like it

 

Though Drip Drop focuses a lot more on my mom while Tides focuses more on the despair associated with her actions and how I cope

A CONCEPT! It made me so emotional :cries: I wanna share my song too but it's way too personal for me and it makes me nervous

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Posted

mess, not Hug's entry being called Big Brother :ahh:cackling at this whole scenario and the fact I convinced the entire Big Brother thread that an ATRLer was on. no one tell them :fan:

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My feminism / sexual empowerment anthem is here hennies. :cm: 

 

Altar (Get On It)

 

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Verse I:

Growing up, everyone was always trying to give a heads up

Parents and priest would come to me and say

“Keep yourself pure and never give your body up

Or hell would be the place you’d soon call home”

I always asked what I would get a say about

Yet, I never got an answer from them


Pre-Chorus:

When I met you, I thought you were different

That love was finally going to be a two-way street

But after a couple dates, you showed your true colors

And it turns out you’re just like all the others

 

Chorus:

You think you can get up on me

Well, I’m gonna have to stop you there (ooh yeah, cause I got the power)

Watch me step onto my altar

Taking back power over my life

Confess your love and say it will not falter

Now bow and show the depth of your devotion

If you want to visit true paradise,

Let me get on the altar

 

Verse II:

My body was like communion to you

You were always looking to praise and pleasure yourself

However, you made one mistake didn’t ya?

Because just like wine, I get stronger over time.

 

Chorus:

You think you can get up on me

Well, I’m gonna have to stop you there (ooh yeah, cause I got the power)

Watch me step onto my altar

Taking back power over my life

Confess your love and say it will not falter

Now bow down and show the depth of your devotion

If you want to get on it

You’ve got to let me get on the altar

 

Bridge:

Two years later, here we are

I wear white while you wear black

Standing together

With our hands intertwined

You said you wanted to bring me to the altar

But this wasn’t what I had in mind

You’ve changed for the better but

If we’re gonna do this, I have one thing to ask

To see if you are still the man

I found hiding behind the mask

 

Chorus:

You think you can get up on me

Well, I’m gonna have to stop you there (ooh yeah, cause I got the power)

Will you let me step onto my altar

And take back control over my life

Confess your love and say it will not falter

Now bow down and show the depth of your devotion

If you want to get on it

You’ve got to let me (will you let me?)

You’ve got to let me (will you let me?)

You’ve got to let me (will you let me?)

Get on the altar

Posted
2 minutes ago, Lane Boy said:

My feminism / sexual empowerment anthem is here hennies. :cm: 

 

Altar (Get On It)

 

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Verse I:

Growing up, everyone was always trying to give a heads up

Parents and priest would come to me and say

“Keep yourself pure and never give your body up

Or hell would be the place you’d soon call home”

I always asked what I would get a say about

Yet, I never got an answer from them


Pre-Chorus:

When I met you, I thought you were different

That love was finally going to be a two-way street

But after a couple dates, you showed your true colors

And it turns out you’re just like all the others

 

Chorus:

You think you can get up on me

Well, I’m gonna have to stop you there (ooh yeah, cause I got the power)

Watch me step onto my altar

Taking back power over my life

Confess your love and say it will not falter

Now bow and show the depth of your devotion

If you want to visit true paradise,

Let me get on the altar

 

Verse II:

My body was like communion to you

You were always looking to praise and pleasure yourself

However, you made one mistake didn’t ya?

Because just like wine, I get stronger over time.

 

Chorus:

You think you can get up on me

Well, I’m gonna have to stop you there (ooh yeah, cause I got the power)

Watch me step onto my altar

Taking back power over my life

Confess your love and say it will not falter

Now bow down and show the depth of your devotion

If you want to get on it

You’ve got to let me get on the altar

 

Bridge:

Two years later, here we are

I wear white while you wear black

Standing together

With our hands intertwined

You said you wanted to bring me to the altar

But this wasn’t what I had in mind

You’ve changed for the better but

If we’re gonna do this, I have one thing to ask

To see if you are still the man

I found hiding behind the mask

 

Chorus:

You think you can get up on me

Well, I’m gonna have to stop you there (ooh yeah, cause I got the power)

Will you let me step onto my altar

And take back control over my life

Confess your love and say it will not falter

Now bow down and show the depth of your devotion

If you want to get on it

You’ve got to let me (will you let me?)

You’ve got to let me (will you let me?)

You’ve got to let me (will you let me?)

Get on the altar

Katy is shook :jonny3:

Posted (edited)
1 hour ago, keshaspearsxo said:

Entries:

Hug - Big Brother - 776 Records

Gastrodonatella - Moonbeam Bridge - Angry Mom Records

Beatinglikeadrum - Love Song - Red Rose Records

ICEY - Polaroid - 776 Records

Pecinta Mariah - One Romance Story - 776 Records

Funnellegs - Orbital

FCKNAmbrosia - King of the Weekends / Good Mourning - 776 Records

ONIKACRAZY - Mother Nature - Orbital

OreGuy - Written in Scriptures - Red Rose Records

Glassmouth - Rose Coloured Pavement - Orbital

Nait Phoenix - Black Pages - 776 Records

UFO - Sad Clown - 776 Records

Mxtthewdelrey - Plymouth (My Talk With Annie) - Red Rose Records

Tsareena - Limbo - Angry Mom Records

Buyonce1814 - Sinful Bliss - Red Rose Records

Corsola - Tides - Orbital

Lane Boy - Altar (Get On It) - Red Rose Records

Auburn - Gone - Orbital

8thPrince - Nowhere - Angry Mom Records

SaintWest - Midsummer - Angry Mom Records

 

wow look at 8th topping me like that. :-*

 

the fact that only talent submits to angry mom record :clap3: 

Edited by SaintWest
Posted

Oh ok let me stole the momentum and post my song

 

KING OF THE WEEKENDS/ GOOD MOURNING 

 

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VERSE 1

While brains and alcohol are at war

Hearts and music sway on the dancefloor.

Out of air so I inhale your cigar’s smoke

To surpass my lungs needs, like coke.

(Drowning in illusion)

 

Tell me why the ring feels like quicksand

As I thought we’re stepping on safe land

And why you got me blind, deaf and trapped

When the lights, bass and drinks should’ve done that.

(Drowning in confusion)

 

PRE-CHORUS

And my senses tell me I should leave

But it feels so good in your arms heat.

I know you’re not a man I should believe

But every promise you’ve made sounds so sweet.

 

CHORUS

You’re the killer king of the weekends,

Ain’t no man like me you haven’t wasted.

What happens with me when the rave ends?

Will I be lone, crying and tainted?

You’re the king of heartbreaking events,

Ain’t no lips like mine you haven’t tasted.

Every chance of putting up a defence

Against you is hopeless, it’s faded.

 

 VERSE 2

You’ve been knowing lies sound better than truth

So you’ve replaced your mind with the Vermouth.

You’re the fiercest king of the downtown scenes

So you know how to disguise lies into dreams.

(Drowning in illusion)

 

Modern Midas, my tights longed for your touch,

Never thought fool’s gold could shine so much.

Your kiss felt like a poisoned snake bite, 

Will I die like Cleopatra tonight?

(Drowning in confusion)

 

PRE-CHORUS

And my senses tell me I should leave

But it feels so good in your arms heat.

I know you’re not a man I should believe

But every promise you made sounds so sweet.

 

CHORUS

You’re the killer king of the weekends,

Ain’t no man like me you haven’t wasted.

What happens with me when the night ends?

Will I be lone, crying and tainted?

You’re the king of heartbreaking events,

Ain’t no lips like mine you haven’t tasted.

Every chance of putting up a defence

Against you is hopeless, it’s faded.

 

BRIDGE

Drowning in illusion,

In the bright neon flood.

Drowning in confusion,

In the mourning sun blood.

Lust and pleasure fade,

Morning kills the rave

As regrets invade

My innocence grave.

Drowning in illusion,

In the bright neon flood.

Drowning in confusion,

In the mourning sun blood.

 

 

INTERMISSION

Voice 1

Good mourning darling

Hope you won’t mind black laces

Voice 2

 First and foremost, I would like to thank each and every one of you for your support

Voice 3

You’ve never looked so beautiful

Voice 4

Such an angel

Voice 5

Because he’s not there

Voice 6

I wish these flowers would stay colorful and pretty forever

Voice 7

Let me light a candle for you. It must be dark there

 

VERSE 3

Never thought the morning light could be so weak

And the sun’s kiss would feel so bitter and bleak.

The image of you is reflecting in my mind

Like in a broken mirror, it’s undermined.

 

PRE-CHORUS 2

I knew you would leave, but I wish I was wrong;

You stole my soul and left my body dead and cold.

It is impossible for a corpse to write a song

But that’s what I’m doing, here, covered in mold.

 

HOOK

 Instead of greeting my morning

You gave me a good mourning;

Tell me how could those dead eyes cry

When their blue already colored the sky?

 

VERSE 4

Never thought ecstasy could turn into agony

In a world of dreams, far away from reality,

Next to who I believed it was a fallen angel

But it turned out to be a disguised, lethal danger.

 

PRE-CHORUS 2

I knew you would leave, but I wish I was wrong;

You stole my soul and left my body dead and cold

It is impossible for a corpse to write a song

But that’s what I’m doing, here, covered in mold.

 

HOOK

 Instead of greeting my morning

You gave me a good mourning;

Tell me how could those dead eyes cry

When their blue already colored the sky?

 

OUTRO

You wished me a good mourning

At my own funeral.

How can a ghost cry in the morning ?!

It is humorous…

 

Posted
1 hour ago, keshaspearsxo said:

Entries:

Hug - Big Brother - 776 Records

Gastrodonatella - Moonbeam Bridge - Angry Mom Records

Beatinglikeadrum - Love Song - Red Rose Records

ICEY - Polaroid - 776 Records

Pecinta Mariah - One Romance Story - 776 Records

Funnellegs - Letter to a God - Orbital

FCKNAmbrosia - King of the Weekends / Good Mourning - 776 Records

ONIKACRAZY - Mother Nature - Orbital

OreGuy - Written in Scriptures - Red Rose Records

Glassmouth - Rose Coloured Pavement - Orbital

Nait Phoenix - Black Pages - 776 Records

UFO - Sad Clown - 776 Records

Mxtthewdelrey - Plymouth (My Talk With Annie) - Red Rose Records

Tsareena - Limbo - Angry Mom Records

Buyonce1814 - Sinful Bliss - Red Rose Records

Corsola - Tides - Orbital

Lane Boy - Altar (Get On It) - Red Rose Records

Auburn - Gone - Orbital

8thPrince - Nowhere - Angry Mom Records

SaintWest - Midsummer - Angry Mom Records

 

 

Posted
41 minutes ago, Corsola said:

verse 2 :ahh: 

What's so funny henny? :cm: 

Posted
44 minutes ago, FCKNAmbrosia said:

Katy is shook :jonny3:

:ahh: 

Posted
36 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said:

a lot :smile:  

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you should start a fight 

 

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Posted

I wish I wrote a song called Rose Coloured Pavement @Glassmouth it is art

Posted
16 minutes ago, mxtthewdelrey said:

I wish I wrote a song called Rose Coloured Pavement @Glassmouth it is art

I hope the judges like the song as much as they like the title too

 

my psychodelic upbeat anthem for the wasted girls and high guys must be respected

 

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Posted
28 minutes ago, Glassmouth said:

you should start a fight 

 

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the only fight @Gastrodonatella is allowed to have with somebody is one with me :fish2:  but not until later in the season after my meltdown :fish2: 

Posted (edited)
Just now, SaintWest said:

the only fight @Gastrodonatella is allowed to have with somebody is one with me :fish2:  but not until later in the season after my meltdown :fish2: 

I don't care who fights who. just fight.

 

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Edited by Glassmouth
Posted

I wish I would've thrown something together but oh well! Perched for he next round.

Posted
5 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said:

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wow this is a great candid of 8th walking into the dh thread every round during results last season 

Posted
2 hours ago, FCKNAmbrosia said:

Oh ok let me stole the momentum and post my song

 

KING OF THE WEEKENDS/ GOOD MOURNING 

 

tumblr_nr4olw1xYb1u7lp3xo1_500.gif

 

 

VERSE 1

While brains and alcohol are at war

Hearts and music sway on the dancefloor.

Out of air so I inhale your cigar’s smoke

To surpass my lungs needs, like coke.

(Drowning in illusion)

 

Tell me why the ring feels like quicksand

As I thought we’re stepping on safe land

And why you got me blind, deaf and trapped

When the lights, bass and drinks should’ve done that.

(Drowning in confusion)

 

PRE-CHORUS

And my senses tell me I should leave

But it feels so good in your arms heat.

I know you’re not a man I should believe

But every promise you’ve made sounds so sweet.

 

CHORUS

You’re the killer king of the weekends,

Ain’t no man like me you haven’t wasted.

What happens with me when the rave ends?

Will I be lone, crying and tainted?

You’re the king of heartbreaking events,

Ain’t no lips like mine you haven’t tasted.

Every chance of putting up a defence

Against you is hopeless, it’s faded.

 

 VERSE 2

You’ve been knowing lies sound better than truth

So you’ve replaced your mind with the Vermouth.

You’re the fiercest king of the downtown scenes

So you know how to disguise lies into dreams.

(Drowning in illusion)

 

Modern Midas, my tights longed for your touch,

Never thought fool’s gold could shine so much.

Your kiss felt like a poisoned snake bite, 

Will I die like Cleopatra tonight?

(Drowning in confusion)

 

PRE-CHORUS

And my senses tell me I should leave

But it feels so good in your arms heat.

I know you’re not a man I should believe

But every promise you made sounds so sweet.

 

CHORUS

You’re the killer king of the weekends,

Ain’t no man like me you haven’t wasted.

What happens with me when the night ends?

Will I be lone, crying and tainted?

You’re the king of heartbreaking events,

Ain’t no lips like mine you haven’t tasted.

Every chance of putting up a defence

Against you is hopeless, it’s faded.

 

BRIDGE

Drowning in illusion,

In the bright neon flood.

Drowning in confusion,

In the mourning sun blood.

Lust and pleasure fade,

Morning kills the rave

As regrets invade

My innocence grave.

Drowning in illusion,

In the bright neon flood.

Drowning in confusion,

In the mourning sun blood.

 

 

INTERMISSION

Voice 1

Good mourning darling

Hope you won’t mind black laces

Voice 2

 First and foremost, I would like to thank each and every one of you for your support

Voice 3

You’ve never looked so beautiful

Voice 4

Such an angel

Voice 5

Because he’s not there

Voice 6

I wish these flowers would stay colorful and pretty forever

Voice 7

Let me light a candle for you. It must be dark there

 

VERSE 3

Never thought the morning light could be so weak

And the sun’s kiss would feel so bitter and bleak.

The image of you is reflecting in my mind

Like in a broken mirror, it’s undermined.

 

PRE-CHORUS 2

I knew you would leave, but I wish I was wrong;

You stole my soul and left my body dead and cold.

It is impossible for a corpse to write a song

But that’s what I’m doing, here, covered in mold.

 

HOOK

 Instead of greeting my morning

You gave me a good mourning;

Tell me how could those dead eyes cry

When their blue already colored the sky?

 

VERSE 4

Never thought ecstasy could turn into agony

In a world of dreams, far away from reality,

Next to who I believed it was a fallen angel

But it turned out to be a disguised, lethal danger.

 

PRE-CHORUS 2

I knew you would leave, but I wish I was wrong;

You stole my soul and left my body dead and cold

It is impossible for a corpse to write a song

But that’s what I’m doing, here, covered in mold.

 

HOOK

 Instead of greeting my morning

You gave me a good mourning;

Tell me how could those dead eyes cry

When their blue already colored the sky?

 

OUTRO

You wished me a good mourning

At my own funeral.

How can a ghost cry in the morning ?!

It is humorous…

 

wow :smitten2: love this !!

Posted
26 minutes ago, ceremonials said:

I wish I would've thrown something together but oh well! Perched for he next round.

You're a mess

Posted (edited)

The more I play DH the more I realize songs about clubs and songs with religious themes really are the go-to. 

Edited by SaintWest
Posted
2 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said:

You're a mess

Thanks <3

 

The way my brain can only handle writing a decent sing every other week :gaycat3: besides the iconic 1-2-3 punch of No Sun on the Horizon, Endless Night and The Edge of Winter of course.

 

Posted (edited)
5 hours ago, FCKNAmbrosia said:

those titles tho :jonny3: Can't wait to hear @OreGuy's "written is scriptures", @UFO's "Sad Clown" and @Lane Boy's "Altar" because the titles alone snatched me

omg thanks. Hope it does well. Can't wait to hear yours too sis 

Edited by OreGuy
Posted

Oh damn, I done forgot about this game... :katie:

@keshaspearsxo

I still got time to send something in?

Posted
10 hours ago, SaintWest said:

The more I play DH the more I realize songs about clubs and songs with religious themes really are the go-to. 

I can't believe I invented clubbing

Posted

I love that there's a good, almost even mix of all the labels. :clap3: Will try to get some of these done tonight even though I've just had a big day at work and I'm back at it again tomorrow morning. :rip: 

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