Temporal Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 1 minute ago, Ventitonic said: Carly Rae Jepsen ruined songwriting for me No one will come close so why even try Honestly same, spill that t
Hug Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 The way Drowned In Neon, imo, would've done better on this challenge than last week's. Oh well.
Ventitonic Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 We truly lost out on Rose Mulet not participating in PH Songwriting, self produced QUEEN! She doesn't do her own vocals because shes the age Calvin, David Guetta, etc etc so much talent nnn the dramatics
Ventitonic Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/581263597/11475064?token=0b253bdc NOT a kickstarter GaggggIng'T
Speezy Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 11 minutes ago, Ventitonic said: https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/581263597/11475064?token=0b253bdc NOT a kickstarter GaggggIng'T TLC is shook
ONIKACRAZY Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 OMFG I forgot to polish my song and I have to submit now cause I'm about to go out. Wish me luck
Glassmouth Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 38 minutes ago, Lane Boy said: Anyone want to critique mine? I like the concept and execution but I'd love another opinion to see whether it's actually good or not. lemme read you 2 hours ago, ceremonials said: Like slant rhymes? Mhmm, I don't know, maybe, yeah
Hug Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 58 minutes ago, Lane Boy said: Anyone want to critique mine? I like the concept and execution but I'd love another opinion to see whether it's actually good or not. If you're still looking for opinions, I have an open PM box.
ceremonials Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 Are we sharing ours? Let me since I had nothing to showcase last round. Ceremonials - "Territories (EP)" 01 Pussypear (buzz single + Areola remix) 02 03 04 05 Currents 06 Japanese Bonus Tracks: 01 Endless Night 02 Retrograde 03 No Sun on the Horizon Currents Verse 1 You were dancing with the edge, and your feet were hanging free You whispered something softly as you turned and glanced at me Your breaths were growing shallow and your words were even lighter You were treading for so long and you must have been so tired But still you leaned in closer and I tried to read it from your lips How did we end up here? Why did it end like this? Chorus You took the final step and somehow I could finally breathe I knew somehow that without me, you could finally be free And the moon swam down with you, it's rays all silvered as you sank And time and again faith is broken by the crashing of the waves Verse 2 I sat where you were sitting, waiting for the moon to come back up I stood there, throwing pebbles, and staring straight into the sun Were you sitting there next to me, when the sun had finally set? Did you think that I would leave you? Did you think that I'd forget? I couldn't leave the ocean. I couldn't even leave that spot. I could only sit back, paralyzed, searching for what I never lost. Chorus You took the final step and your hands reached out for me You told me not to follow, but that you'd wait for me And the moon swam back up, its rays reflecting on the waves And everything was blue again, the sky on the brink of day Outro Now we're drifting away, dissolving into the changing tides And I'm calling out your name as the sun fades below our eyes But tonight the waves are calm and the moon won't rise again And our currents have found each other. This time we won't have to pretend.
Witch Privilege Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 OMG. I totally forgot to finish my song. Dammit. I'll probably just submit tomorrow. Sorry!
ceremonials Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 6 minutes ago, Corsola said: Here's mine Fire Entry Hide contents I'm too drained to write I hate my life Burn all my work in a blaze Here you go gays I made this a fire entry Now give me a 10 Wig in Ultra Space
Hug Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 [The yet to be titled 10.5 EP, order not final] 1. 'Drowned in Neon' 2. 'Candle' 3. ... 4. ... 5. ... 6. ... The Seasons Deluxe Edition 7. 'Yozakura' 8. 'June Bugs' 9. 'Fireflies [interlude]' 10. 'Autumn's Tears' 'Candle' by Hug Spoiler [Verse 1] You’ve not come home since yesterday But you’ll come back and be okay A parent knows these things You’ll enter the door, give me a hug I’ll wrap you up in all my love A parent knows these things [Refrain] I’ll light a candle tonight I hope it keeps you warm Wherever you are [Verse 2] You’ve not come home, it’s been a week But you’ll come back and stay with me A parent knows these things You’ll give me a call, say you’re alright I’ll be so happy, I could cry A parent knows these things [Refrain] I’ll light a candle tonight I hope it keeps you warm Wherever you are [Verse 3] You’ve not come home, it’s been a month So please come back, enough’s enough I only want my child Just give me a sign...anything I promise that I’m not angry I only want my child [Refrain] I’ll light a candle tonight I hope it keeps you warm Wherever you are [Verse 4] You’ve not come home, a year to date I’m wishing you a happy birthday I only want my child I got you a gift, it’s on your bed Won’t you come home and open it? I only want my child [Refrain] I’ll light 12 candles tonight I hope you’ll make a wish Wherever you are [Outro] You haven’t came home, I got a call I shouldn’t have looked at the phone at all Cause I knew it wasn’t you It was a man who described a child With features I’ve not seen in awhile And I hoped it wasn’t you ...but it was you
ceremonials Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 4 minutes ago, Hug said: [The yet to be titled 10.5 EP, order not final] 1. 'Drowned in Neon' 2. 'Candle' 3. ... 4. ... 5. ... 6. ... The Seasons Deluxe Edition 7. 'Yozakura' 8. 'June Bugs' 9. 'Autumn's Tears' 'Candle' by Hug Reveal hidden contents [Verse 1] You’ve not come home since yesterday But you’ll come back and be okay A parent knows these things You’ll enter the door, give me a hug I’ll wrap you up in all my love A parent knows these things [Refrain] I’ll light a candle tonight I hope it keeps you warm Wherever you are [Verse 2] You’ve not come home, it’s been a week But you’ll come back and stay with me A parent knows these things You’ll give me a call, say you’re alright I’ll be so happy, I could cry A parent knows these things [Refrain] I’ll light a candle tonight I hope it keeps you warm Wherever you are [Verse 3] You’ve not come home, it’s been a month So please come back, enough’s enough I only want my child Just give me a sign...anything I promise that I’m not angry I only want my child [Refrain] I’ll light a candle tonight I hope it keeps you warm Wherever you are [Verse 4] You’ve not come home, a year to date I’m wishing you a happy birthday I only want my child I got you a gift, it’s on your bed Won’t you come home and open it? I only want my child [Refrain] I’ll light 12 candles tonight I hope you’ll make a wish Wherever you are [Outro] You haven’t came home, I got a call I shouldn’t have looked at the phone at all Cause I knew it wasn’t you It was a man who described a child With features I’ve not seen in awhile And I hoped it wasn’t you ...but it was you Girl the COPYING The song is great though, my hole is quivering a bit
fountain Posted May 28, 2017 Author Posted May 28, 2017 Does anybody have any good relaxing music recommendations? Something to hopefully ease anxiety and such
Glassmouth Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 Just now, keshaspearsxo said: Does anybody have any good relaxing music recommendations? Something to hopefully ease anxiety and such like singer-songwriter stuff or just instrumental stuff?
Hug Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 Just now, ceremonials said: Girl the COPYING The song is great though, my hole is quivering a bit You're right I did copy you. Mostly because I realized I had a song for Spring, Summer, and Fall.
ceremonials Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 Just now, keshaspearsxo said: Does anybody have any good relaxing music recommendations? Something to hopefully ease anxiety and such Tycho (the artist me and Jackson used for the Insturmental Challenge last season) has really calming music. Maybe it's just me n but I find the no words and just the atmosphere of it v soothing
fountain Posted May 28, 2017 Author Posted May 28, 2017 Just now, Glassmouth said: like singer-songwriter stuff or just instrumental stuff? Either really. Just something that gives you a relaxed, everything is gonna be okay kind of feeling
ceremonials Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 Just now, Hug said: You're right I did copy you. Mostly because I realized I had a song for Spring, Summer, and Fall. Put The Edge of Winter on there to complete the cycle
Glassmouth Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 Just now, keshaspearsxo said: Either really. Just something that gives you a relaxed, everything is gonna be okay kind of feeling Sibylle Baier's Colour Green - relaxing folksy stuff Brian Eno - Small Craft on a Milk Sea - instrumental ambient music Tim Hecker - Love Streams - instrumental electronic
fountain Posted May 28, 2017 Author Posted May 28, 2017 3 minutes ago, ceremonials said: Tycho (the artist me and Jackson used for the Insturmental Challenge last season) has really calming music. Maybe it's just me n but I find the no words and just the atmosphere of it v soothing Just now, Glassmouth said: Sibylle Baier's Colour Green - relaxing folksy stuff Brian Eno - Small Craft on a Milk Sea - instrumental ambient music Tim Hecker - Love Streams - instrumental electronic Thank you !
Hug Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 Edited my track list because I realized I had both June Bugs and Fireflies, and the Fireflies song works to bridge the concepts between June Bugs and Autumn's Tears
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