FCKNAmbrosia Posted May 27, 2017 Posted May 27, 2017 2 minutes ago, ceremonials said: Omg I only need a bridge
ceremonials Posted May 27, 2017 Posted May 27, 2017 1 minute ago, Swish Swish said: me reading a certain entry Read mine papi
fountain Posted May 27, 2017 Author Posted May 27, 2017 32 minutes ago, Jaxswim said: like, you stopped @ing me in the posts after the first round, I'm asking if you can do it again Oh, okay!
ceremonials Posted May 27, 2017 Posted May 27, 2017 Just now, Corsola said: I'll do this tho but my critiques will be be kinda short probably I snapped you hours ago asking for this
ceremonials Posted May 27, 2017 Posted May 27, 2017 Submitted! There's some thing I kinda wanted to change, but overall I'm pretty proud of myself for actually writing a song.
SaintWest Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 1 hour ago, Gastrodonatella said: because men are worthless and its always the girl who goes through the hard **** to be with some 6/10 guy with a slightly below average dick drag men for filth papito
Auburn Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 Yeah I'm gonna be late again prob LOL I have a few hours at the airport later so I'll finish it then
ceremonials Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 My entry was also heavily inspired by this LEGEND
fountain Posted May 28, 2017 Author Posted May 28, 2017 I never finished moon enough to get any of those
ceremonials Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 14 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: I never finished moon enough to get any of those Screaming at you buying it at all
fountain Posted May 28, 2017 Author Posted May 28, 2017 1 minute ago, ceremonials said: Screaming at you buying it at all A digital copy.. But still!
ceremonials Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 Can you believe the deadline is in three hours and we still don't have reviews?
ceremonials Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 Just now, keshaspearsxo said: A digital copy.. But still! Did the lack of psychic types trigger you
Glassmouth Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 Honestly I'm super worried about my entry because of the whole rhyme thing since they are kind of weird, I guess?
Temporal Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 25 minutes ago, ceremonials said: My entry was also heavily inspired by this LEGEND A sex goddess
ceremonials Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 1 minute ago, Glassmouth said: Honestly I'm super worried about my entry because of the whole rhyme thing since they are kind of weird, I guess? What do you mean
Glassmouth Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 2 minutes ago, ceremonials said: What do you mean Like, the song has structure but I may have put it in a weird way, I don't know how to explain it, it's a lot different than the song I sent last round where the rhymes were a lot more obvious, I think, It was pretty much an experiment that somehow worked for me, I suppose
fountain Posted May 28, 2017 Author Posted May 28, 2017 20 minutes ago, ceremonials said: Did the lack of psychic types trigger you Absolutely there was no Meowstic to save this game from sucking
ceremonials Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 20 minutes ago, Glassmouth said: Like, the song has structure but I may have put it in a weird way, I don't know how to explain it, it's a lot different than the song I sent last round where the rhymes were a lot more obvious, I think, It was pretty much an experiment that somehow worked for me, I suppose Like slant rhymes?
Bandito Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 Anyone want to critique mine? I like the concept and execution but I'd love another opinion to see whether it's actually good or not.
Ventitonic Posted May 28, 2017 Posted May 28, 2017 Carly Rae Jepsen ruined songwriting for me No one will come close so why even try
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