tournament ? PLATINUM HIT 10.5 ? Farewell pg.220 / Grammys pg.221 ?

[Aurora]

I'm working on a new song, it's called "The Forest"

Here I lay in the forest
Underneath branches made of wood
The rain came pouring down
And I felt so misunderstood

I took shelter from my riverbed
Wide awake, I closed my eyes
I lay down in the riverbed 
My riverbed of lies

Oh, oh, oh
Yeah, yeah, yeah
Baby
Ow!

In the forest where we begin
I see butterflies flying high
But soon the sun melts their wings
And so they die

And I die
In my riverbed
In my riverbed of lies
I was born to die

 

what is this beautiful creation i don't even remember writing omg

[Jackson]

26 minutes ago, Aurora said:

it was a reference to a very old season of platinum hit btw https://classic.atrl.net/forums/showthread.php?t=699839&page=288

wow did i just smell a link to the best season of PH?

[Aurora]

1 hour ago, Swish Swish said:

wow did i just smell a link to the best season of PH?

that was a link to S6 not S8

[Buyonce1814]

Anyone want to read what I have so far? I'll most likely scrap it but it'd be nice to hear from someone nn

[ONIKACRAZY]

1 hour ago, Buyonce1814 said:

Anyone want to read what I have so far? I'll most likely scrap it but it'd be nice to hear from someone nn

I can if you'd like 

[Hug]

41 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said:

im prepared for my 21/28 placement but its okay bc i like my song and thats rly all that matters 

Thinking all 28 people will be submitting this round is generous  

[Hug]

Hi does anyone want to see my fire entry

[Tsareena]

1 minute ago, Hug said:

Hi does anyone want to see my fire entry

Me 

[Hug]

Just now, Tsareena said:

Me 

Ok lemme send you a PM

[Buyonce1814]

33 minutes ago, Hug said:

Hi does anyone want to see my fire entry

Yes please

[Cupid]

I have an idea, I'm gonna work on it tonight! 

I'm a bit scared though I'm not sure it's the usual type of song for this challenge. Hoping the judges appreciate me being liberal with the challenge. 

[Hug]

Yes, I too took a bit of creative liberty with the challenge.

[SaintWest]

2 hours ago, Hug said:

Hi does anyone want to see my fire entry

My PM's legs are spread wide open for your entry.  

[Hug]

The more I think of it, the more I feel like my song this would be the backstory behind "Drowned in Neon", and why they're trying to forget their problems in the first place.

 

Season-wide story incoming?

[Hug]

A simple cover for a simple song

 

 

[Ventitonic]

my water type song

 

Squirtle

 

lets stain the sheets with oil

make me your painting, let your body be the brush

feel your bristles all along

trailing from my navel to your back

draw me in your love

 

squirt, squirtle squirt, squirt squirt squirt squirt squirt

 

liberate me with your palette beyond the colours of the sun

leave my face scarlet from the pleasure of your tongue

smudge the lines between all the fluids of our fun

 

squirt, squirtle squirt, squirt squirt squirt squirt squirt

 

 

 

 

 

Edited May 26, 2017 by Ventitonic

[SaintWest]

5 minutes ago, Ventitonic said:

my water type song

 

Squirtle

 

lets stain the sheets with oil

make me your painting, let your body be the brush

feel your bristles all along

trailing from my navel to your back

draw me in your love

 

squirt, squirtle squirt, squirt squirt squirt squirt squirt

 

liberate me with your palette beyond the colours of the sun

leave me blushing from the pleasure of your tongue

smudge the lines between all the fluids of our fun

 

squirt, squirtle squirt, squirt squirt squirt squirt squirt

 

 

 

 

 

if anybody dragged a damn bristley brush down my naked body they'd get a swift bristley kick to the face tyvm

[Glassmouth]

13 minutes ago, Ventitonic said:

my water type song

 

Squirtle

 

lets stain the sheets with oil

make me your painting, let your body be the brush

feel your bristles all along

trailing from my navel to your back

draw me in your love

 

squirt, squirtle squirt, squirt squirt squirt squirt squirt

 

liberate me with your palette beyond the colours of the sun

leave my face scarlet from the pleasure of your tongue

smudge the lines between all the fluids of our fun

 

squirt, squirtle squirt, squirt squirt squirt squirt squirt

 

 

 

 

 

a poetic sex bop, I'm in danger 

[Witch Privilege]

Oh ****. I should really start writing. I have a couple ideas, so I'm just going to run with a couple of them, and whichever one pans out better, I'll send in.

 

I did psychic last time, but I really want to do it again. It's my favorite type.

[fountain]

2 hours ago, Witch Privilege said:

Oh ****. I should really start writing. I have a couple ideas, so I'm just going to run with a couple of them, and whichever one pans out better, I'll send in.

 

I did psychic last time, but I really want to do it again. It's my favorite type.

Well they do say psychic types always win!

[Speezy]

My basic entry amount to be deliveredT  

I tried to water the scenery down so it won't come off as forced 

[Hug]

22 hours ago, Aurora said:

I'm working on a new song, it's called "The Forest"

Here I lay in the forest
Underneath branches made of wood
The rain came pouring down
And I felt so misunderstood

I took shelter from my riverbed
Wide awake, I closed my eyes
I lay down in the riverbed 
My riverbed of lies

Oh, oh, oh
Yeah, yeah, yeah
Baby
Ow!

In the forest where we begin
I see butterflies flying high
But soon the sun melts their wings
And so they die

And I die
In my riverbed
In my riverbed of lies
I was born to die

 

what is this beautiful creation i don't even remember writing omg

I meant to tell you how much this moved me, but I've spent the last 22 hours crying because this was beautiful.

[UFO]

Almost done!   just need to add a few finishing touches to the sensuality

[UFO]

22 hours ago, Aurora said:

I'm working on a new song, it's called "The Forest"

Here I lay in the forest
Underneath branches made of wood
The rain came pouring down
And I felt so misunderstood

I took shelter from my riverbed
Wide awake, I closed my eyes
I lay down in the riverbed 
My riverbed of lies

Oh, oh, oh
Yeah, yeah, yeah
Baby
Ow!

In the forest where we begin
I see butterflies flying high
But soon the sun melts their wings
And so they die

And I die
In my riverbed
In my riverbed of lies
I was born to die

 

what is this beautiful creation i don't even remember writing omg

wait bitch I just saw this   Wooden Branches (Where We Begin) her impact

screaming @ riverbed. beautiful song tho  

 

Edited May 27, 2017 by UFO

[Speezy]

7 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said:

 

 nnn bye I did water like last season 

but it is the trio of Kings in my type ranks

Edited May 27, 2017 by Speezy