Aurora Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 45 minutes ago, FCKNAmbrosia said: Kinda thinking about writing a diss song for this challenge here for it, Swish Swish got all the girls inspired, myself included.
ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted May 24, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted May 24, 2017 Just now, Hug said: Yes Who is she?
Hug Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 Just now, Tsareena said: Who is she? It's a literary device to basically paint a picture with your words.
ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted May 24, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted May 24, 2017 4 minutes ago, Hug said: It's a literary device to basically paint a picture with your words. interesting. Thanks
funnellegs Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 (edited) Yaaas I'm excited for this challenge. Also I submitted my second to last piece of coursework for my masters. One more due in September and then I'm free! Glad I can focus on this now as last week was so hard Edited May 24, 2017 by funnellegs
Hug Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 2 hours ago, Tsareena said: interesting. Thanks Why tf you got your wall messages disabled? :( I wanted to tell you that if you wanted any help or for someone to read what you have, I will gladly do so! <3
ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted May 24, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted May 24, 2017 6 minutes ago, Hug said: Why tf you got your wall messages disabled? :( I wanted to tell you that if you wanted any help or for someone to read what you have, I will gladly do so! <3 I just fixed it. Didn't know how to turn that on. I'll come to you when I have a draft
Hug Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 4 hours ago, Buyonce1814 said: Also here's my Round 1 entry: Revisitation The Cover: The Song: Walking through the hands of time Revisiting a former life I’m not that kid I used to hate to be. Nostalgia has me satisfied All those times I wanted to die Melancholic clouds are fleeing, I'm free. Life gave me wings then stole the sky Crippled by day, sodomised by night Uncertain and wholly dissatisfied. Ensnared in a coffin, buried alive An endless tunnel with no end light Still, barren, swallowed and mummified Though hope had flailed like ancient scribes And diffidence rose with Nazi vibes My soul was a victim of my demise. But now I rise from the tombs Like the wolves look towards the moon Like a seedling grows new petals at spring. And the clouds scatter and dissipate. Hate deflates and disintegrates My soul and life again entwined in bloom No more tripping over pensive tombstones No more wars with ghosts of the past No more fretting over raging hormones The sun illuminates the grave at last And I awaken. I meant to reply to this for a while, saying "Life gave me wings, then stole the sky" made me gasp. A COUPLET if I've ever seen one.
Buyonce1814 Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 8 minutes ago, Hug said: I meant to reply to this for a while, saying "Life gave me wings, then stole the sky" made me gasp. A COUPLET if I've ever seen one. If only I could write more throughout
Buyonce1814 Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 8 minutes ago, Hug said: I meant to reply to this for a while, saying "Life gave me wings, then stole the sky" made me gasp. A COUPLET if I've ever seen one. If only I could write more throughout
fountain Posted May 24, 2017 Author Posted May 24, 2017 5 hours ago, mxtthewdelrey said: It's my own photography so thank you very much and I loved the positive review, it meant a lot! I will try to be a bit less enigmatic in my songs and see how it works out I was gonna ask you if it was ? It has that vibe. I love it! 3 hours ago, Tsareena said: Imagery " Imagery is the name given to the elements in a poem that spark off the senses. Despite "image" being a synonym for "picture", images need not be only visual; any of the five senses (sight, hearing, touch, taste, smell) can respond to what a poet writes. Examples of non-visual imagery can be found in Ken Smith's 'In Praise of Vodka', where he describes the drink as having "the taste of air, of wind on fields, / the wind through the long wet forest", and James Berry's 'Seashell', which puts the "ocean sighs" right in a listener's ear. A poet could simply state, say, "I see a tree", but it is possible to conjure up much more specific images using techniques such as simile ("a tree like a spiky rocket"), metaphor ("a green cloud riding a pole") or synechdoche ("bare, black branches") - each of these suggests a different kind of tree. Techniques, such as these, that can be used to create powerful images are called figurative language, and can also include onomatopoeia, metonymy and personification." Found this online.
Auburn Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 I love when you're not really thinking about PH and then a really good idea comes into your head for your song
UFO Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 37 minutes ago, Auburn said: I love when you're not really thinking about PH and then a really good idea comes into your head for your song Yesssss!!!! this happens to me ALL the time. I'll literally be in bed ready to go to sleep and then a thought pops in my mind, it usually happens in the shower the most tho nnn
FCKNAmbrosia Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 "Dance of the Dragons and the Epitaph of Medieval *****s" is coming!!! Prepare your wigs to be burnt
Hug Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 I hope to start writing tomorrow. I want to avoid Dark, Grass, Water, and Fairy types because I think Dark will be too overdone, I've done Grass before, and my song last round, imo, was a mix of Water and Fairy. Need to keep it diverse! I have ideas for Fire and Ghost right now, so it'll be interesting to see where I go.
Hug Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 Less is more, especially in this competition. Just a friendly reminder to anyone who wants to be ARTPOP.
Jackson Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 1 minute ago, Hug said: Less is more, especially in this competition. Just a friendly reminder to anyone who wants to be ARTPOP. as the winner of last season I respectfully disagree
Hug Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 Just now, Swish Swish said: as the winner of last season I respectfully disagree Okay well as a judge last season, I agree with what I said. You can bet I gave your ass a 6 and didn't real half your song if you were serving essay thesis. Use your words better!
fountain Posted May 24, 2017 Author Posted May 24, 2017 5 minutes ago, Swish Swish said: as the winner of last season I respectfully disagree Dear god please change your name back
Hug Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 1 minute ago, Gastrodonatella said: this LASH anyway i write for me not for the judges and there's also nothing wrong with a song being long and having a lot of lyrical content so i'll take my 6 and you can keep listening to 2:30 kpop songs Not to be that girl, but the girl in your avi sold her soul to make generic pop music that flopped to high heavens despite having some of the most immense promo an artist could ask for.
Jackson Posted May 24, 2017 Posted May 24, 2017 1 minute ago, keshaspearsxo said: Dear god please change your name back eventually
fountain Posted May 24, 2017 Author Posted May 24, 2017 1 minute ago, Swish Swish said: eventually Before the final plz
Recommended Posts