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Just now, ceremonials said:

look you impatient bitch

I'll pray for you Austin - you and that disgusting mouth of yours... God bless! :heart2: 

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Just now, Corsola said:

I hope you can continue to find a safe place mentally even after this is over! I would text you more often but I never know how to begin conversations ff

Thankfully I'm feeling pretty well at the moment, but thank you for always listening and being so supportive :heart2::heart2: 

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4 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said:

I forgot to mention, hosting has been such an amazing relief to me in my life in the past 9 months, you may not realise it but to me just coming and being a part of this little world of PH and escaping the real world has been really, really good. Having you all here with me, having something to put my energy and time into and feel like I've been giving back, it's been very important. So again, thank you all for taking part in this season, thank you to everybody who took part last season, and everybody who will continue to take part in future seasons. 

If you ever want to chat or talk about stuff, I'm here for ya sis! :hug: 

Posted
Just now, Corsola said:

I'M NOT BREAKING THE ****ING LAW...

 

octillery stans smh 

jwieuwnckd

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this profiling, i will not stand for it honey

Posted
2 minutes ago, Lane Boy said:

If you ever want to chat or talk about stuff, I'm here for ya sis! :hug: 

back at ya :heart2: 

Posted (edited)

Anyway goodnight 

 

17 minutes ago, ceremonials said:

hi here's a grammy's post

 

Rules

 

1. This is a submission period. Similar to how it works at the real Grammy's, you have to submit your material for nominations in order for it to be considered. This does not guarantee you will get a nomination, however. Simply PM me your submissions by July 11, 2017. 

 

2. You may submit up to two songs of your own, as well as one from another person. In this sense, you're both trying to secure your nominations, as well as further the chances of someone else who you believe deserves a nomination. You can chose to forego this though - for example, you could just submit one song from yourself and one from another person, or two songs from yourself and zero from another person. Or you could submit nothing. You're not required to submit for every category, but feel free to do so if you think you qualify.

 

3. Nominations will be announced next Wednesday, and a voting period will take place after. Some categories are judge-voted only, and some are contestant-voted only.

 

 Categories

 

Judge Voted

 

Song of the Season

Most Improved

Best Couplet

 

Contestant Voted

 

Favorite Contestant

Favorite Judge

Biggest Feud/Rivalry

Biggest Breakthrough

Most Iconic Moment

Best Title

Best Concept

Best Single Cover

Best Water Song

Best Astral Song

Best Dark Song

Best Romance Song

Biggest Tear Jerker

Biggest Snub

 

 

Do it x

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I'm submitting Ocean Lips for all, thanks x

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Vote Drowned in Neon best water song x

Posted
Just now, Hug said:

Vote Drowned in Neon best water song x

Currents is winning x

Posted

yall say this like im not going to rig it

 

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Posted
Just now, Corsola said:

We know. Rigging is the only way you can even be nominated

 

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is that why i had 16 last yeat?

 

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Posted (edited)
2 hours ago, keshaspearsxo said:

#4 UFO

 

7.8

8.525

7.1

5.75

7.5

8.1

AVG:

7.4625

 

Thank you for playing this season! Just looking at your chart here, you can see how consistent you’ve been *if we forget about that one song that everybody but me hated* and you even snatched yourself your first #1 this season so congratulations! Much like the rest of your entries, I really enjoyed your final entry, I thought it was a really interesting take on everything that was discussed in the thread. You’re kind of like the herpes of Platinum Hit, I kinda feel like I don’t need to tell you to play again because you will anyway, but I really hope you do, and I really hope you’ve enjoyed this season.

 

@UFO

Me peaking 5.5 seasons into my PH career, a Sia tea ajlfalgk :jonny:   I finally beat the Top 6 curse! :weeps:  :weeps: I still have a long way to go (I REALLY want to write a song with a 9+ average) and lot more to show but now I can finally say I made it to the Top 4, I'll be coming for that Top 3 spot next season :duca:  :duca:   :gaycat3: thank youuuuuuuuu :heart2:   and yaaaaas, STAN for herpes! :deadbanana2:  :skull:  :clap3:  

 

congrats @Hug @Lane Boy @SaintWest !!!!!!!! y'all slayed the **** out of this season and rightfully so! :alexz:  :hug:  :heart2:  I hope these mini-seasons become a regular thing aklfjaslkg they would look great on my flop resume :gaycat4:   also a kii @ me participating in every season for "longevity" ajlghljkdjlk TRUE :ahh:    :lmao: I guess that "longevity" finally paid off this season :'( 

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4 hours ago, keshaspearsxo said:

Round 6 rankings

 

At #2...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

@UFO

BITCH WTF 

 

I was really expecting to flop this round. My song was WAY too long (2 verses with three stanzas each lmfao), I literally brought in every metaphor and philosophical concept I could think of, and the flow was a MESS but wow .......... this is so special to me :weeps:  :weeps:  I REALLY was not expecting this, which had been my reaction this entire season. But ESPECIALLY this round I literally did everything I was supposed to AVOID. I wrote a long song, I brought in too many ideas, my flow was a 14-15-16-17 syllable mess for each stanza (I wonder if any of the judges noticed that fff, I did that to give it a sense of urgency and semi-deliberate rambling tone but it kinda ****ed with the flow :skull: ) I literally told myself idgaf if this song pulls down my average, it's the song I want to write and I knew it would be long af and all over the place but it was like I NEEDED to write it.

 

It was kind of the same situation with Sad Clown and Death Lullaby. Those two songs really brought my average down but I really felt as thought I NEEDED to write those songs. Sad Clown for my own personal catharsis, and Death Lullaby to give something like miscarriage a spotlight. I probably would've done a whole lot better this season if I stuck to more "safe" songs but I didn't want to do that and I'm glad I didn't! because that would be doing the opposite of everything I represent. 
 

I wrote Dear Whoever is Listening in under an hour because the words just kept flowing out of my mind. A literal stream of consciousness akfljsldkfa I barely edited my song :toofunny2: I did NOT expect it to reach #2. I'm so glad the judges enjoyed it, it's a REALLY special song to me for so many different reasons and I'm satisfied with it being my final song of the season :alexz3:

 

I went into this season wanting this to be my emotional outlet (my theme was Catharsis for a reason :gaycat4:) and I tried to improve my skills each week not caring about charts, trying to deliver something new each week and something that also fulfilled the challenge presented to me, but I'm really SHOCKED at the positive reception I've been getting this season. I've participated in a lot of seasons and usually I just scrape by or I'm just inconsistent, always falling short at the last obstacle, but I'm proud of the growth I managed to achieve this season :jonny: thank you everyone! :weeps:  :heart2: It's not the fact that I was Top 2 this round or whatever, it's the fact that people CONNECTED with my song and that's something that I have struggled with and hopefully - after this season - something I won't struggle with anymore.

 

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Seriously, thank you @keshaspearsxo @Aurora @Temporal @ughgabriel @Jackson I may be a mess at times :eli::fan:  but it all comes from a good place. Thank you for making this experience so wonderful :heart2:  and thanks everyone who participated this season, make sure you join PH11 in August to witness my Round 1 elimination lmfao get ready :duca:  :duca: 

 

also congrats on the #1 @Glassmouth :clap3:  :heart2:  :hug: it's your first #1, right? 

 

4 hours ago, SaintWest said:

@UFO and @Glassmouth!!!!!!! :jonny3:

Thanks sis :heart2:  :weeps:   

 

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Posted

A PH11 release date will be out within the next couple weeks, I'm just working one thing out before it's finalized :heart2: 

Posted (edited)

C A T H A R S I S

- the process of releasing, and thereby providing relief from, strong or repressed emotions.

- purgation.

 

TWO STRANGERS

 

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My heart feels... differently.

 

#6

 

Spoiler

 

VERSE

Our shadows walked together, holding hands

You’d look into my eyes, my spirit danced

You’d be there even after the sun set

You’d make all my night terrors disappear

But one night I woke up and I was scared

This repeated every night you weren’t there

I now hold myself to feel less alone

So be lonely with me, take my heart back home

 

PRE CHORUS

You led me blindfolded into a wonderland

You showed me a small glimpse, but made me blind again

And somehow everything feels more vivid in the dark

 

CHORUS

Two strangers, two silhouettes

One familiar picture

It follows me everywhere

Two strangers that look like us

But it’s so blurry, you’re out of focus

 

VERSE

My shadow returned back into the shade

With my vision gone, my hands searched for yours

No signs of sun anywhere, one black sky

The night-time stared at my eyes, so swollen

Frozen, my spirit never moved again

Staying dormant in my mind’s delusion

That first day we met I wore a blue dress

Now it’s all I wear, now it’s all I can wear

 

PRE CHORUS

Somehow everything hurts more vividly in the dark

 

CHORUS

Two strangers, two silhouettes

One familiar picture

It follows me everywhere

Two strangers that look like us

But it’s so blurry, you’re out of focus

 

BRIDGE

Like a bird you sang beautifully

Now you’re the cold silence

My heart beats, restlessly

Like a bird you took off with the wind

My eyes twitch, from weeping

My heart feels, differently

But I won’t change what you mean to me

Even if I’m not the one you need

 

CHORUS

Two strangers, two silhouettes

One familiar picture

You follow me everywhere

Two strangers that look like us

But it’s so blurry, you’re out of focus

 

I still wait here for the sun to rise

I don’t want your shadow to say goodnight

 

 

 

LET THE WATER FALL

 

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And I let the water fall... fall into me.

 

#1

 

Spoiler

 

VERSE

From a leaf, water droplets travelled down the stem

Then they dripped into my mouth like I’d been poisoned

Now the rush of waves inside of me makes more sense

From the licking of lips to every inch of skin

 

PRE-CHORUS

Rivers of movement glisten in my eyes

So I untighten, let you flow inside

 

CHORUS

In between the rocks and lily pads

You came crashing hard, crashing into me

In between the dry patches of land

You brought the power of the seven seas

Too scared to dive in, I try to swim back

But you pull me close away from the shore

And I let the water fall

And I let the water fall

Into me

 

VERSE

Never again, a mistake from your first hugging touch

Pull away, I can’t behave when your clouds sit above

Close to burst, I didn’t learn so educate my lust

Desert dry, your moon-lit tides caress every border

 

PRE-CHORUS

Rivers of movement glisten in my eyes

So I untighten, let you flow inside

 

CHORUS

In between the rocks and lily pads

You came crashing hard, crashing into me

In between the dry patches of land

You brought the power of the seven seas

Too scared to dive in, I try to swim back

But you pull me close away from the shore

And I let the water fall

And I let the water fall

Into me

 

BRIDGE

Now I’m breathing underwater

Unveiling my eyes to see the new Atlantis

There’s a lot to discover here

Particularly when it comes to you and I

Now I’m living like I’m water

No more restrictions, only free-flowing nature

Now we delve deeper and deeper

Now we delve deeper like two oceans together

 

CHORUS

In between the rocks and lily pads

You came crashing hard, crashing into me

In between the dry patches of land

You brought the power of the seven seas

Too scared to dive in, I try to swim back

But you pull me close away from the shore

And I let the water fall

And I let the water fall

And I let the water fall, fall

Into me

 

 

SAD CLOWN

 

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I crash-land into myself... again and again.

 

#12

 

Spoiler

 

VERSE

Bringing joy to others is my only dream

I choose to forget myself to be completely free

At first it was magical, the world paid attention

Cause I radiated with a different kind of me

Time froze on my watch when I walked in the room

Cause my voice would sing with a more acceptable tune

But beneath that mask my former self still grows

I tried everything to live as someone new

 

PRE-CHORUS

I walk on this tightrope, I try everything to not fall

So I won't have to face myself again and again

 

CHORUS

My pretty smile does not reflect

The ugliness blooming in my heart

I'm suffocated from inside

But what they see is a different show

I entertain them to join the crowd

I paint my face with a happy glow

Cause I don't want them to figure out

That in reality I'm a joke

I'm a sad clown

 

VERSE

Bringing joy to others did not bring mine

What remains inside is a caricature

I can't erase the mistakes of who I am

Even if when I look in the mirror I'm broken

What I see is an ordinary nothing

A simple shadow that fades and belongs in the background

Time stops not on my watch, now I face myself

I watch on as my reflection weeps and drowns

 

PRE-CHORUS

I fall off the tightrope, my eyes wet with jealousy

The magic vanishes, I crash-land into myself

Again and again

 

CHORUS

My pretty smile did not erase

The ugliness blooming in my heart

I suffocate from inside out

Cause what stayed hidden is now my show

Now it's only me, there is no crowd

I paint my face with a sadder glow

Cause I didn't need to figure out

That in reality I'm a joke

I'm a sad clown

 

BRIDGE

My imperfections merge into one sick image

An abomination

I'll never be able to be their jigsaw piece

I don't fit anywhere

I wish I loved myself

As much as I hate who I am cause they all loved

Someone else, never me

 

CHORUS

My pretty smile did not erase

The ugliness blooming in my heart

I suffocate from inside out

Cause what stayed hidden is now my show

Now it's only me, there is no crowd

I paint my face with a sadder glow

Cause I didn't need to figure out

That in reality I'm a joke

I'm a sad clown

 

 

DEATH LULLABY

 

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What have you done with my Sun? God if you're listening
My little ray of light... where are you hiding?

 

#13

 

Spoiler

 

VERSE

When I discovered a second pulse, bliss was reborn and started to flow

In my blood towards my mind, I wished to hold your tiny hands

From the edge of earth all the way to the moon, I had planned your lifetime

In my vision you grew up with your own happy family

I painted your bedroom with careless joy, but blood started to run down the walls

A deep kick in my gut, I only had you for three months

Collapsed in your pool of blood, I still wish to hold your tiny hands

 

CHORUS

My flickering flame of life was blown out inside

Your ashes in my womb imitate lost butterflies

They swirl, dance around, falling free, flowing deep in me

Your soul now incomplete echoes next to my heartbeat

We're beating as one, I hear you cry at night

Now all I can hear is your death lullaby

 

POST-CHORUS

What have you done with my Sun? God if you're listening

My little ray of light, where are you hiding?

 

VERSE

Fixated, I stare at your teddy bear in the corner, playing pretend

Curtains drawn, body freezes in the cold command of darkness

My joy left from my breath and turned the air in the room into poisoned gas

I inhale knowing well that the years with my son are only in dreams

Now nine months have passed since the cord broke, now I dress you in funeral clothes

Your wings caught in my cage, I don't want you to fly from the nest

But I let you go, I birth you into the arms of darkness

 

CHORUS

My flickering flame of life was blown out inside

Your ashes in my womb imitate lost butterflies

They swirl, dance around, falling free, flowing deep in me

Your soul now incomplete echoes next to my heartbeat

We're beating as one, I hear you cry at night

Now all I can hear is your death lullaby

Now all I can sing is your death lullaby

Words left me except for your death lullaby

 

BRIDGE

So tell me why you weren't able to breathe your first breath

So tell me what was your first word cause I couldn't hear it

I steal the stars from the night time hoping you're one of them

I search the locked room in my mind, are you waiting in there?

I was attached to your life by a cord of my love

But now the cord's invisible and there's nowhere to run

 

CHORUS

My flickering flame of life was blown out inside

Your ashes in my womb imitate lost butterflies

They swirl, dance around, falling free, flowing deep in me

Your soul now incomplete echoes next to my heartbeat

We're beating as one, I hear you cry at night

Now all I can hear is your death lullaby

Now all I can sing is your death lullaby

Words left me except for your death lullaby

 

POST-CHORUS

What have you done with my Sun? God if you're listening

My little ray of light, where are you hiding?

 

 

MAGIC TRICKS

 

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I now take a chance on possibility

Possibility... with you right next to me.

 

#8

 

Spoiler

 

VERSE

In my prison of thoughts I fought with a hundred demons all by myself

Wearing a crown of thorns I didn't think I needed someone else

Life's luck left my fingertips and temptation ran off with my magic tricks

In my dreamless world shadows devoured my imagination

 

Cause every day I played a losing game falling deeper by their rules

But as I fell you picked me up and we vanished to your magic show

Your scent filled me with a hunger for life to shuffle the script, flip the deck

No more Jokers now I've found my ace, a winning hand to end this war game

 

PRE-CHORUS

I was forced to ride this roundabout

But your magic showed me another way round

 

CHORUS

Your magic tricks my mind to believe in our escape

To a perfect paradise where love grows and illuminates

Your magic tricks the light to flow directly into my eyes

I look at you and instantly you're my King and I'm your Queen

My lover's gamble I risk it all, going all in for you

We're two of a kind, a perfect pair, a matching suit

 

VERSE

With some help from a fallen angel I can deal away with my devils

With nowhere left to bluff I find you in our utopia

Dystopian ruins cross my mind but they'll never trap me again

Even with every chance we could die we always roll the hard six (six six)

 

Cause with you I can never lie, we fold together and win each other

Even if this is all a guise just for tonight I'll live under your spell

Cause with you it can be a lie as long as you carry me to the end

You opened up the tunnel, discovering love beyond peripheral

 

PRE-CHORUS

I was forced to ride this roundabout

But your magic showed me another way round

 

CHORUS

Your magic tricks my mind to believe in our escape

To a perfect paradise where love grows and illuminates

Your magic tricks the light to flow directly into my eyes

I look at you and instantly you're my King and I'm your Queen

My lover's gamble I risk it all, going all in for you

We're two of a kind, a perfect pair, a matching suit

 

BRIDGE

For the longest time my heart was a full house

Filled with doubts and improbability

But tonight you show me how to breathe in the sound

Of losing control with you right next to me

I now take a chance on possibility

Possibility, with you right next to me

 

CHORUS

Your magic tricks my mind to believe in our escape

To a perfect paradise where love grows and illuminates

Your magic tricks the light to flow directly into my eyes

I look at you and instantly you're my King and I'm your Queen

My lover's gamble I risk it all, going all in for you

We're two of a kind, a perfect pair, a matching suit

 

I was forced to ride this roundabout

But your magic showed me another way round

 

 

DEAR WHOEVER IS LISTENING

 

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When I wake up the birds sing my nightmares back to me

I wish I could sleep myself away for eternity

I'd drift off to a land where time stops, a shattered hourglass

But my soul returns to the concrete world, my dreams... lost in the sand.

 

#2

 

Spoiler

 

VERSE

When I wake up the birds sing my nightmares back to me

I wish I could sleep myself away for eternity

I'd drift off to a land where time stops, a shattered hourglass

But my soul returns to the concrete world, my dreams lost in the sand

 

Night falls, I'm trapped under sheets with vodka by my side

Birds call, my figure revealed in the dark I'm paralysed

Tears drop, I look above but faith falls and I follow it down

Downstairs where my grandfather clock chimes back and forth, back and forth, back

 

Daylight rises, now my heartache has turned to breaking

This mind-locked feeling now feels more real than my surroundings

On my knees, it's like I'm praying to myself for the answers

I want to feel the Earth and feel it within, a yearned belonging

 

PRE-CHORUS

Feet are on the ground but somehow I can't feel the earth

Distorted sense of time, I wouldn't mind if the truth hurts

 

CHORUS

Dear whoever is listening, can we go back to where I began?

I don't want to live as someone else, all I want is to live alive

I don't want to feel false feelings, all I want is freedom from lies

I don't want to live your simulation like my life is never mine

I don't want to live your story with the ending already in mind

With the ending already in mind

 

VERSE

Kids cry on battlefields, we watch through televisions

I close my eyes to ease the pain, the birds are still screaming

I close my ears to feel sane, I know that won't change anything

I look towards the empty sky and there are no angels in sight

 

I want to sail my mind away but I'm stuck on Earth

My mind's a freak hurricane, it spirals and wrecks this world

No one is listening, we're all talking with our ears shut

We're only hearing what we want to, blindly killing each other

 

Forth and back, back and forth, the clock's leaving me behind

So I try to chase its hands but now night starts creeping back

Now what do I do when I'm searching for another world

Yet in this cold universe everything feels alien to me?

 

PRE-CHORUS

Feet are on the ground but somehow I can't feel the earth

Distorted sense of time, I wouldn't mind if the truth hurts

 

CHORUS

Dear whoever is listening, can we go back to where I began?

I don't want to live as someone else, all I want is to live alive

I don't want to feel false feelings, all I want is freedom from lies

I don't want to live your simulation like my life is never mine

I don't want to live your story with the ending already in mind

With the ending already in mind

 

BRIDGE

Lucid dreams come back to me

Release me from this stolen reality

Lucid dreams come back to me

Release me from this fate, these fading memories

Now what do I do as one person, weakened

By my perception, it's playing tricks on me

 

One person against this made-up universe

 

I controlled nothing but the imaginary

I loved nothing but what had been planned for me

And I'll finally sleep with nightmares ending

And I'll smile once again

It could change everything

And I'll finally die

Knowing that I lived for me

And I'll finally sleep, birds singing sweetly

 

CHORUS

Dear whoever is listening, can we go back to where I began?

I don't want to live as someone else, all I want is to live alive

I don't want to feel false feelings, all I want is freedom from lies

I don't want to live your simulation like my life is never mine

I don't want to live your story with the ending already in mind

Dear whoever is listening, can I write what happens at the end?

Dear whoever is listening, can we go back to where I began?

 

I don't want to live as someone else, all I want is to live alive

I don't want to feel false feelings, all I want is freedom from lies

I don't want to live your simulation like my life is never mine

I don't want to live your story with the ending already in mind

Dear whoever is listening, can I write what happens at the end?

Dear whoever is listening, oh, dear whoever is listening

Dear whoever is listening, can we go back to where I began?

Dear whoever is listening, can I write what happens at the end?

 

 

Dear whoever is listening, can we go back to where I began?
Dear whoever is listening, can I write what happens at the end?

 

The end.

 

 

 

Edited by UFO
Posted (edited)

Please consider me for the PH Grammys! :emofish: :heart2:   :weeps:

 

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Hopefully I get a nom for Best Single Cover aljkfnadlgkadlk

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Posted
1 hour ago, UFO said:

also congrats on the #1 @Glassmouth :clap3:  :heart2:  :hug: it's your first #1, right? 

yes, girl, my first :cries: I hope it's not the last one 

Posted
3 hours ago, ceremonials said:

Song of the Season

Most Improved

Best Title

Best Concept

Best Single Cover

Biggest Tear Jerker

i think i'll submit for these, but lemme think

Posted

@Jackson plz keep the emoji in the thread title theme going plz they look so cute

Posted

Oh and here was the tea on who was winning at the end of each round

 

R1: Hug

R2: Cupid

R3: 8thPrince

R4: SaintWest

R5: Lane Boy

R6: SaintWest 

 

:devil:

Posted
8 hours ago, keshaspearsxo said:

#13 beatinglikeadrum

 

4.325

5.25

5.775

6.625

3.5

4.5

AVG:

4.995833333

 

Thank you for playing this season! Your writing has been very interesting for me to see over the weeks. I think you have a lot of potential, I can always feel a lot of thought in your entries, I just think you have trouble getting the words to come out perfectly, which is understandable. I feel the same way about 1 Stone, you put a lot of good thought into the song, but it definitely needs more technical work. I hope in the future you choose to play again and that hopefully we can help you continue to improve by looking at technicalities. Hope you have enjoyed playing.

 

 @beatinglikeadrum

Thank you for everything. I don't know about my participation in the next season. I don't think like it.

 

And not me almost having the perfect score of 5. I blame Temporal.

Also, not me being the King Of The Huge...Expectations Even Though My English Skills Suck.

 

Posted

Europhessay's revival. :alexz: You did good again love. Can't wait to see what you do again next season. @UFO

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