fountain Posted July 6, 2017 Author Posted July 6, 2017 #14 OreGuy 4.25 5 6.825 5.2 1.75 4.36 AVG: 4.564166667 Thank you for playing this season! While I often have had trouble understanding your entries, I love that you stick true to yourself and your own style regardless. In your entry this round, I really, really adored the lyric “sometimes I wonder why we met if we’re just bound to say goodbye”. It was beautiful. Thanks for keeping the game interesting, I hope you have enjoyed playing! @OreGuy
Bandito Posted July 6, 2017 Posted July 6, 2017 1 minute ago, keshaspearsxo said: #15 RihsusChrist(ATG) 6.175 3.725 0.75 7.15 5.25 3.36 AVG: 4.401666667 Thank you for playing this season! You were a contestant who definitely kept us on our toes. There is quite literally no knowing what you will ever submit, and I have to say I love that. Asian Delight is proof of this, and personally, as I am part asian, I had to give the entry a 10 to show pride. Hope you’ve enjoyed everything! @RihsusChrist(ATG) Idk why but I screamed
Jackson Posted July 6, 2017 Posted July 6, 2017 2 minutes ago, Lane Boy said: Oh really? I didn't see that from this round. Jk, man. I most likely will compete. I just hate writing the same stuff over and over. Like, I hated my last song and wanted to write something upbeat and happy, but I also really wanted to try and tie a bow around that depressing stuff of this season. I would LOVE to write happy party or love songs but I guess I'm not at that phase of my life atm. Hopefully this semester at college can help me in terms of finding new themes to write about. My advice would be to not rush into it and do a complete 180 from dark songs to party/fluffy songs. A song can still be "happy" without feeling emotionally void or purposeless. Dark songs are my forte as well, but when I do happy songs I like to have them rooted in nostalgia or hope after coming out of darkness or something that still feels genuine and familiar without getting too repetitive
Hug Posted July 6, 2017 Posted July 6, 2017 Just now, Temporal said: 0 but I'm eating a weed brownie tomorrow methinks I had a friend who injected weed via brownie once. He instantly went into cardiac arrest and died from dying. Not even once.
fountain Posted July 6, 2017 Author Posted July 6, 2017 1 minute ago, Lane Boy said: Idk why but I screamed it's all true!
fountain Posted July 6, 2017 Author Posted July 6, 2017 #13 beatinglikeadrum 4.325 5.25 5.775 6.625 3.5 4.5 AVG: 4.995833333 Thank you for playing this season! Your writing has been very interesting for me to see over the weeks. I think you have a lot of potential, I can always feel a lot of thought in your entries, I just think you have trouble getting the words to come out perfectly, which is understandable. I feel the same way about 1 Stone, you put a lot of good thought into the song, but it definitely needs more technical work. I hope in the future you choose to play again and that hopefully we can help you continue to improve by looking at technicalities. Hope you have enjoyed playing. @beatinglikeadrum
fountain Posted July 6, 2017 Author Posted July 6, 2017 #12 mxtthewdelrey 2.925 6.525 6.025 3 7.55 7.2 AVG: 5.5375 Thank you for playing this season! You are by far one of the most unique writers here, regardless of what anybody has to say, your songs always manage to evoke some response from the reader, and well, that shows you are doing a good job certainly! I had a lot of fun writing my part for Thinking About Legmeat 3THREE, which is a beautiful song by the way, however since it was written for another game and featured collaborators, despite receiving three 10’s I must kill you for cheating. Therefore, you have now become the ghost competitor of Platinum Hit 10.5 and will haunt it forevermore. @mxtthewdelrey
fountain Posted July 6, 2017 Author Posted July 6, 2017 Just now, Hug said: Omg slay Mxtt <3 <3 may he RIP
fountain Posted July 6, 2017 Author Posted July 6, 2017 Just now, Corsola said: I said it was a serious MOMENT. You're literally so ****ing annoying can y'all stop fighting we just witnessed a death
fountain Posted July 6, 2017 Author Posted July 6, 2017 Just now, Gastrodonatella said: you could split hairs on sasha velour's head she could split hairs on my freshly shaven balls!
fountain Posted July 6, 2017 Author Posted July 6, 2017 #11 Auburn 7.075 7.175 6.45 5 8.5 0 AVG: 5.7 Thank you for playing this season! It’s a shame you didn’t submit for the final, but regardless I hope you really enjoyed playing and hopefully choose to again in the future! Despite getting a 0 for the non submission, you’re still all the way at #11 so slay. @Auburn
Hug Posted July 6, 2017 Posted July 6, 2017 Oop slay Auburn, the average even with the 0 Y'all who made it to the Top 10, slay us <3 <3 <3
Aurora Posted July 6, 2017 Posted July 6, 2017 Auburn letting someone else in the Top 10 with that 1-5 punch.
fountain Posted July 6, 2017 Author Posted July 6, 2017 The Top 10! @Gastrodonatella @Glassmouth @Hug @Lane Boy @Tsareena @FCKNAmbrosia @UFO @SaintWest @funnellegs @Nait Phoenix
fountain Posted July 6, 2017 Author Posted July 6, 2017 #10 Tsareena 3.85 6.6 7.525 7.35 6.65 5 AVG: 6.1625 Thank you for playing this season! It’s pretty awesome to know that before this game, you had never written a song, didn’t know anything about it and after some pressure decided to join. I can quite confidently say now, you’ve definitely learnt how to write and I hope you are happy about that! The metaphor of John Hancock itself is really funny and well thought up, I enjoyed that aspect of the song a lot. I hope in the future you may participate again because while you have come very far this season, I think you can only improve much more! I hope you enjoyed playing and congrats on top 10! @Tsareena
Aurora Posted July 6, 2017 Posted July 6, 2017 Congrats Tsareena! It's always nice to see new blood slaying.
Jackson Posted July 6, 2017 Posted July 6, 2017 @Tsareena sorry for being so mean to you this round, I hope you aren't turned away from season 11 because of that I promise I'm more helpful in a full season setting
Temporal Posted July 6, 2017 Posted July 6, 2017 12 minutes ago, Hug said: I had a friend who injected weed via brownie once. He instantly went into cardiac arrest and died from dying. Not even once. SCREAMING at Mxtt snatching a 7.2 even with a 1
fountain Posted July 6, 2017 Author Posted July 6, 2017 #9 Nait Phoenix 5.475 7.225 9.325 6.5 5.65 5.08 AVG: 6.5425 Thank you for playing this season! Congrats on #9. I think you did yourself proud this season, particularly with Black Pages, this is one of the highest scoring songs of the entire season and was such a slay and proved your power as a writer. As for my opinion of Amber, I think it was a cute song, but probably something better to be heard than the be read. That’s something I enjoy about your songs, though, knowing your background as a writer and producer I feel that, moreso than a lot of other entries, your songs are actually “alive” in a sense. Hope you enjoyed playing! @Nait Phoenix
ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted July 6, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted July 6, 2017 yas. I'm glad I participated in this. Really got the creative juices flowing
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