SaintWest Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 17 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: me when i land my number 1 with this sia ass entry fixed
beatinglikeadrum Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 Not me making my first Top 10 by writing a freestyle song just to send entry. Even though there were like 10 ppl who didn't submit
Hug Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 Okay so I have received generally positive reviews for my draft so far. I will be working on some things based on feedback, but I feel accomplished having something tangible. My meltdowns are cancelled for now. EDIT: Half an hour later...I think I'm done touching it for now. Will look at it again after I've had some rest, but generally I feel good about this one!
RihsusChrist(ATG) Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 (edited) 48 minutes ago, beatinglikeadrum said: Not me making my first Top 10 by writing a freestyle song just to send entry. Even though there were like 10 ppl who didn't submit A Top 10 is a Top 10 We got us a bit of lyrical skillz, boi Edited June 16, 2017 by RihsusChrist(ATG)
beatinglikeadrum Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 43 minutes ago, RihsusChrist(ATG) said: A Top 10 is a Top 10 We got us a bit of lyrical skillz, boi Sis, there's a pattern here. When we flop, we flop together. When we slay we slay together.
Galah Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 3 hours ago, SaintWest said: adfghk yes. it was about a straight boy I fell in love with midsummer who i eventually had to walk away from because i was falling in too deep and i didn't want to wait until i crashed. i'm living for the parallels. straight boys really do give us gorls the drive to produce quality material! 3 hours ago, ceremonials said: True! y'all just wait for the finale shh
ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted June 16, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted June 16, 2017 no. 8. I know the no. of entries are reducing so I'm glad I've been able to write something for each round. Let me share what I had "Scarlet Games" By Tsareena Spoiler [Verse 1] We’re at the bowling alley I lied about never doing this before See, I do a different type of bowling No pins or ball needed when you play with hearts See I first came to the alley at sixteen With a friend I'd known for long He said he wanted more for us I knew I didn't but still played along Played for a bit but then I got bored I had to end it, knew it was wrong So I sang my siren song [Chorus] And I went bowling No pins and ball needed when you play with hearts Knocked him down with a strike And watched his pieces get swept away [Verse 2] You're still here tying your laces I've told you a tale but you're not phased I'm warning you sailor of my siren song Sail away! It's not too late See I bowled again at seventeen This time I killed two with one stone I did it again with a different play I danced with his best friend in his face Played for a bit but he held on too tightly I had to end it, knew it was wrong He had it coming all along [Chorus] And I went bowling No pins and ball needed when you play with hearts Knocked him down with a strike And watched his pieces get swept away [Verse 3] We're at the alley and you're laughing now My tales are amusing you say But you think my tale is twisted That I'm not the femme fatale I think I am See I bowled again after my teens Had my eyes set on a third Thought this would be different We played for a bit his moves so perfect Till he tried to make me a puppet I had to end it, knew it was wrong So I sang my siren song [Chorus] And I went bowling No pins and ball needed when you play with hearts Knocked him down with a strike And watched his pieces get swept away [Verse 4] I haven't been playing with unrelated hearts They were peas in a pod till I came along With my ways I drove them apart The Yoko to their Beatles is how I’m known We've been dancing all along But you haven't let go I've told you of my deeds But you say I'm not the wrecker I thought I was I'm scared for you of my siren ways But you're still here Saying you'd never let go [Chorus 2] And we are bowling Pins and ball needed we don’t play with hearts Knocked me down with your love And watched my feet get swept away so many options for the next round. If I have time I'll try them all and see what I like best
SaintWest Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 7 hours ago, Aurora said: another week, another #1 I didn't ask for #notmy#1
Hug Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 Never in my life have I fell for a straight boy. I haven't fell for a gay one, neither, so generally I'm just not a loving person.
fountain Posted June 16, 2017 Author Posted June 16, 2017 26 minutes ago, Hug said: Never in my life have I fell for a straight boy. I haven't fell for a gay one, neither, so generally I'm just not a loving person. This is the life I need. This is the life I deserve
Glassmouth Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 This is the most difficult challenge for me already, I need some help, sisters, anyone that could assist me? I want different points of view
fountain Posted June 16, 2017 Author Posted June 16, 2017 There is a guest judge next round for the final who could it be the final is v simple v easy btw
ceremonials Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 9 hours ago, Aurora said: another week, another #1 I didn't ask for #notmy#1 STAY AWAY FROM ME + MY TASTE YOU ARE SICK TRYING TO RENT A POST NEXT TO ME TO STALK ME. LEAVE ME ALONE!!!
Bandito Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 Oh wow, I didn't realize the season is almost over.
ceremonials Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 1 hour ago, keshaspearsxo said: There is a guest judge next round for the final who could it be the final is v simple v easy btw I wonder...:
Hug Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 31 minutes ago, Temporal said: so who is choosing my superior challenge Not me. I was daring and sent for the Dr. Luke challenge! (I sent btw) Wait, that means I need to update my sig
Hug Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 I just realized my song title could draw comparisons to Highway Don't Care, but PH Don't Care about Country Taylor I don't think.
ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted June 16, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted June 16, 2017 35 minutes ago, Temporal said: so who is choosing my superior challenge not me. I can't think of writing a sequel to another song. It'll either draw too heavily from the song or barely be related to it
SaintWest Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 47 minutes ago, Temporal said: so who is choosing my superior challenge sure let me write a sequel to any sia song ever that should be easy
fountain Posted June 16, 2017 Author Posted June 16, 2017 2 hours ago, Lane Boy said: Oh wow, I didn't realize the season is almost over. Yes :( but PH11 will be here in August, a full season!
fountain Posted June 16, 2017 Author Posted June 16, 2017 1 hour ago, ceremonials said: I wonder...: If u are trash? That u have no talent? Both are true facts 28 minutes ago, Hug said: Not me. I was daring and sent for the Dr. Luke challenge! (I sent btw) Wait, that means I need to update my sig Wow im already winning, poor the rest of the judges HA
Glassmouth Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 I might change and go for gabriel's challenge, again, but the idea I have for the Dr Luke Challenge is as good as the one I have for the former self portrait challenge this is so hard already
ceremonials Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 32 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: If u are trash? That u have no talent? Both are true facts Wow im already winning, poor the rest of the judges HA then STOP giving me 10s
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