Bandito Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 18 minutes ago, Aurora said: I did pick up on a lot of them but honestly I'd be lying if I said I tried to count them all. Here are all the references: Tag (You're It) Ghost In The Graveyard (@ughgabriel ) Swing Trampoline See-Saw Truth or Dare Slide Simon Says Tug of War King of the Hill Red Light, Green Light
fountain Posted June 16, 2017 Author Posted June 16, 2017 19 minutes ago, ughgabriel said: Cause even a broken clock is right twice a day wait is this true? @ceremonials
Bandito Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 15 minutes ago, ughgabriel said: @Lane Boy - Playground Games Aw, I really enjoyed this. The first chorus is probably my favorite chorus from this round, it was so sweet and effective. It embodied the whole song and assembled the verses very well. I really like the flow in the story because everything felt so natural and the mention of children's games and symbols were very fitting for what the song was trying to represent and the feelings you were trying to convey! My only complain would be the ghost/graveyard mention because it felt out of place, but at the same time I don't know if it's a reference to a kids' game that I don't know of nn I can tell that your talent is outstanding. I don't know about your experience in songwriting but you have a very polished style that makes you stand out and do well throughout the challenges. Welcome, threat! Thanks, I really appreciate the comments you made! It's super sweet of you and I appreciate you understanding the concept! I just started writing songs in March, so I really am stunned at all of this! But yeah, the ghost in the graveyard line is a reference to the childhood game Ghost In The Graveyard! I don't know if it's super popular, but it was in rural Michigan!
Temporal Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 11 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: oh wait i just figured out what it means
ceremonials Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 14 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: oh wait i just figured out what it means
ceremonials Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 That line was what I wanted t build the song around tbh, it essentially means that a person can sometimes be right, by chance, for the wrong reason. And I thought that translated to the story I was trying to tell pretty well.
fountain Posted June 16, 2017 Author Posted June 16, 2017 9 minutes ago, ceremonials said: That line was what I wanted t build the song around tbh, it essentially means that a person can sometimes be right, by chance, for the wrong reason. And I thought that translated to the story I was trying to tell pretty well. i haven't read your song so i have no idea
Temporal Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 10 hours ago, Aurora said: please don’t do this again, please. wow lash
beatinglikeadrum Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 1 hour ago, ughgabriel said: @beatinglikeadrum - Story of the Birds so aside from the castle part I feel like you were consistent and commited to the metaphor you chose to use on this song and I feel like this has been your best song yet. Of course there some grammar issued but that's totally understandable, you really showed growth on your songwriting skills. There are still some issues, I was a little confused by the "dig my grave in the air", "i ain't eagle i could've cried", and some other lines. I just didn't get the meaning, logic or connection on these lines. But this was still a progress from your previous The higher you go the less oxygen you have. The same is when you going underground to for example see some caves. It's like digging the grave. It's not safe high and not safe down. Sometimes you just want to be average cause you feel comfortable with it or it's what you like. It's a little bit geeky metaphor.
Bandito Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 @keshaspearsxo, when are we getting your reviews henny? It's not like you to fall behind.
fountain Posted June 16, 2017 Author Posted June 16, 2017 17 minutes ago, Lane Boy said: @keshaspearsxo, when are we getting your reviews henny? It's not like you to fall behind. sdfghjkl i cant tell if you're being sarcastic or if you're just naive about my timing since you're new
Bandito Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 Just now, keshaspearsxo said: sdfghjkl i cant tell if you're being sarcastic or if you're just naive about my timing since you're new No sarcasm! Usually, you have reviews ready to go (or at least not taking this long).
OreGuy Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 thanks @Temporal and @ughgabriel for the reviews! Appreciated!
fountain Posted June 16, 2017 Author Posted June 16, 2017 7 minutes ago, Lane Boy said: No sarcasm! Usually, you have reviews ready to go (or at least not taking this long). im gonna be honest ya boi has depression and isn't really feeling like reviewing right now i may just be late and score instead and post reviews tomorrow cause im trash and im at peace with that
Bandito Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 7 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: im gonna be honest ya boi has depression and isn't really feeling like reviewing right now i may just be late and score instead and post reviews tomorrow cause im trash and im at peace with that Come through king of transparency! If you ever wanna talk when you feel down, let me know and I'd be glad to talk. I know I'm always wanting to rant to someone when I'm depressed, so yeah, hit a broski up!
Bandito Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 Mood rn. I remember sobbing to this as a kid (I still do today).
fountain Posted June 16, 2017 Author Posted June 16, 2017 1 minute ago, Lane Boy said: Come through king of transparency! If you ever wanna talk when you feel down, let me know and I'd be glad to talk. I know I'm always wanting to rant to someone when I'm depressed, so yeah, hit a broski up! i totally get those ranting periods too so feel free to rant to me too but i don't really feel that right now it's just like i wanna be invisible and disappear, like why couldn't i have been a snail or something with no brain?
Bandito Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 Just now, keshaspearsxo said: i totally get those ranting periods too so feel free to rant to me too but i don't really feel that right now it's just like i wanna be invisible and disappear, like why couldn't i have been a snail or something with no brain? I see, I get those periods as well. I guess I'm always in that mood, as I'm locked up in my bedroom blasting Belinda Carlisle.
fountain Posted June 16, 2017 Author Posted June 16, 2017 5 minutes ago, Lane Boy said: Mood rn. I remember sobbing to this as a kid (I still do today). why does it say video not available
Bandito Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 4 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: why does it say video not available idk, it's working for me right now.
fountain Posted June 16, 2017 Author Posted June 16, 2017 42 minutes ago, Temporal said: I've got four more reviews to do but eh sir
Temporal Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 2 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: sir Ma'am do not come for me when you probably can't name an entry
fountain Posted June 16, 2017 Author Posted June 16, 2017 10 minutes ago, Temporal said: Ma'am do not come for me when you probably can't name an entry i just want to get this over with so i can go lay in misery
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