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1 hour ago, Lane Boy said:

Anyone wanna give my tune a quick critique when I finish writing the last two verses?

 

Any hennies that still wanna give me a quick assist?

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Ok I'm submitting now! :alexz3:

 

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DEATH LULLABY

 

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Your ashes in my womb imitate lost butterflies

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21 minutes ago, UFO said:

DEATH LULLABY

 

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Your ashes in my womb imitate lost butterflies

Your aesthetic this season slays

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Just now, keshaspearsxo said:

Your aesthetic this season slays

Thank you! :heart2::weeps:  I try :fan:  :eli:

 

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seasonal affective disorder (s.a.d.) is a type of depression that's related to changes in the season. seasonal affective disorder often starts in the fall and may continue into the winter months. symptoms include fatique, depression, hopelessness, and social withdrawal. 

 

 
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Paraiba Tourmaline

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11 minutes ago, SaintWest said:

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@swiftie13 his impact

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PLAYGROUND GAMES

 

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We were always playing playground games

You'd hide and have me to seek you out

Now the playground's up in flames

But you're nowhere to be found...

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53 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said:

@swiftie13 his impact

Who? I'm sorry, I don't know her. 

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Sorry. I've not been able to write anything this week. :( 

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Sorry. I've not been able to write anything this week. :( 

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my song is a MESS but I at least submitted x

 

 

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18 minutes ago, ceremonials said:

my song is a MESS but I at least submitted x

 

 

+1

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6 hours ago, SaintWest said:

Who? I'm sorry, I don't know her. 

A legend but it's okay, I know you're not familiar with that concept.

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Sorry I didn't submit this round. My fave had mental breakdown. I had to be there for her this time.

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I passed out while I was writing my song :skull: 

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9 hours ago, SaintWest said:

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Save As Draft, its impact.

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ANOREV

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Ok at this round being a flop with only like 10 entries after y'all served a slay last round. Rats

 

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2 hours ago, FCKNAmbrosia said:

ANOREV

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Is this is a reverse Romeo and Juliet situation with that title? :cupid: 

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2 hours ago, Aurora said:

Save As Draft, its impact.

First thing I thought of when he asked me to critique it! A combo of SAD and Prism imagery, what a slay!

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40 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said:

Ok at this round being a flop with only like 10 entries after y'all served a slay last round. Rats

 

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At least my top ten streak is still in place!

King of consistency? I think YES

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