Bandito Posted June 13, 2017 Posted June 13, 2017 1 hour ago, Lane Boy said: Anyone wanna give my tune a quick critique when I finish writing the last two verses? Any hennies that still wanna give me a quick assist?
UFO Posted June 13, 2017 Posted June 13, 2017 (edited) DEATH LULLABY Your ashes in my womb imitate lost butterflies Edited June 13, 2017 by UFO
fountain Posted June 13, 2017 Author Posted June 13, 2017 21 minutes ago, UFO said: DEATH LULLABY Your ashes in my womb imitate lost butterflies Your aesthetic this season slays
UFO Posted June 13, 2017 Posted June 13, 2017 Just now, keshaspearsxo said: Your aesthetic this season slays Thank you! I try
SaintWest Posted June 13, 2017 Posted June 13, 2017 (edited) Quote seasonal affective disorder (s.a.d.) is a type of depression that's related to changes in the season. seasonal affective disorder often starts in the fall and may continue into the winter months. symptoms include fatique, depression, hopelessness, and social withdrawal. Edited June 13, 2017 by SaintWest
RihsusChrist(ATG) Posted June 13, 2017 Posted June 13, 2017 1 hour ago, keshaspearsxo said: 3 or so hours @ONIKACRAZY @Corsola @Auburn@ICEY @Pecinta Mariah @UFO @8thPrince @RihsusChrist(ATG) @beatinglikeadrum@Buyonce1814 @Lane Boy @ceremonials @Cupid I just sent mine in, Pears!
fountain Posted June 13, 2017 Author Posted June 13, 2017 11 minutes ago, SaintWest said: @swiftie13 his impact
Bandito Posted June 13, 2017 Posted June 13, 2017 PLAYGROUND GAMES We were always playing playground games You'd hide and have me to seek you out Now the playground's up in flames But you're nowhere to be found...
SaintWest Posted June 13, 2017 Posted June 13, 2017 53 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: @swiftie13 his impact Who? I'm sorry, I don't know her.
Buyonce1814 Posted June 13, 2017 Posted June 13, 2017 Sorry. I've not been able to write anything this week. :(
Buyonce1814 Posted June 13, 2017 Posted June 13, 2017 Sorry. I've not been able to write anything this week. :(
Nait Phoenix Posted June 13, 2017 Posted June 13, 2017 18 minutes ago, ceremonials said: my song is a MESS but I at least submitted x +1
swiftie13 Posted June 13, 2017 Posted June 13, 2017 6 hours ago, SaintWest said: Who? I'm sorry, I don't know her. A legend but it's okay, I know you're not familiar with that concept.
beatinglikeadrum Posted June 13, 2017 Posted June 13, 2017 Sorry I didn't submit this round. My fave had mental breakdown. I had to be there for her this time.
Auburn Posted June 13, 2017 Posted June 13, 2017 pobxjofkgbmkomxb I passed out while I was writing my song
Aurora Posted June 13, 2017 Posted June 13, 2017 9 hours ago, SaintWest said: Save As Draft, its impact.
fountain Posted June 13, 2017 Author Posted June 13, 2017 Ok at this round being a flop with only like 10 entries after y'all served a slay last round. Rats
Bandito Posted June 13, 2017 Posted June 13, 2017 2 hours ago, FCKNAmbrosia said: ANOREV Is this is a reverse Romeo and Juliet situation with that title?
Bandito Posted June 13, 2017 Posted June 13, 2017 2 hours ago, Aurora said: Save As Draft, its impact. First thing I thought of when he asked me to critique it! A combo of SAD and Prism imagery, what a slay!
Bandito Posted June 13, 2017 Posted June 13, 2017 40 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: Ok at this round being a flop with only like 10 entries after y'all served a slay last round. Rats At least my top ten streak is still in place! King of consistency? I think YES
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