Jackson Posted February 4, 2017 Posted February 4, 2017 1 minute ago, ceremonials said: Jackson stealing my colors concept that I stole from Halsey and Taylor, wow Am I shocked? No I haven't even read your song yet
SaintWest Posted February 4, 2017 Posted February 4, 2017 2 minutes ago, Tymps. said: Well this is RPDR Lip Sync Round But LMAO I transposed it so high and now my mouth is so dry from all the belting, I like never ever ever try to belt that high I think you posted another one of your songs before in dub once? I think you have a really nice voice. I'd love for you to sing a romantic ballad, I think you have a great voice for it.
Achilles. Posted February 4, 2017 Posted February 4, 2017 2 minutes ago, Jackson said: I haven't even read your song yet I saw that read notification tho.
UFO Posted February 4, 2017 Posted February 4, 2017 Record label: Birthright Ent. Blanket HOOK These hot chills got me shivering, quivering Got me withdrawing back under my blanket These devil whispers drift me back to your warmth Got me withdrawing back under my blanket VERSELike a lullaby your voice soothes the noises, noises I can't say goodbye cause I got no choices left This terrible vice exploits the palm of my conscience I should say goodbye but I can't resist you again CHORUSYou cradle my mind in this dream-like hypnosis Both your hands slip under and investigate me What I want becomes transparent but I don't mind Cause these sick thoughts are no longer, no longer mine VERSEBefore I can catch you, I have to suffer the worst You're never that easy, never right there when I want Even when I'm withdrawing, try to leave you behind I keep running back to that rush at the finish line CHORUS You cradle my mind in this dream-like hypnosis Both your hands slip under and investigate me What I want becomes transparent but I don't mind Cause these sick thoughts are no longer, no longer mine HOOK These hot chills got me shivering, quivering Got me withdrawing back under my blanket These devil whispers drift me back to your warmth Got me withdrawing back under my blanket BRIDGE Heart's so rough, want to lust Even though I know I shouldn't have you You shake my moral compass You make my common sense twist We are both attracted to this pipe dream I know I should call it quits But I still hear your screams in the darkness Stuck in this eternal one-way cycle Each thought leads me back to that finish line CHORUS You cradle my mind in this dream-like hypnosis Both your hands slip under and investigate me What I want becomes transparent but I don't mind Cause these sick thoughts are no longer, no longer mine HOOKThese hot chills got me shivering, quivering Got me withdrawing back under my blanket These devil whispers got me drifting back to your warmth Got me withdrawing back under my blanketBack to your warmth Back under my blanketBack to your warmthBack under my blanket BLANKET
Kelp Posted February 4, 2017 Posted February 4, 2017 19 minutes ago, SaintWest said: I think you posted another one of your songs before in dub once? I think you have a really nice voice. I'd love for you to sing a romantic ballad, I think you have a great voice for it. Thanks <3 I do have a song I could do more along those lines, but I spent so long on Vibeology. I suppose I could record something else though.
ATRL Moderator khalyan Posted February 4, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted February 4, 2017 Who wants to read my song?
Jackson Posted February 4, 2017 Posted February 4, 2017 53 minutes ago, Corsola said: Oh, I used colors too My song isn't based around colors though, if ceremonials wasn't a flop he would know lilac is a flower
fountain Posted February 4, 2017 Author Posted February 4, 2017 30 min @8thPrince @SaintWest @ceremonials @jpow https://www.timeanddate.com/countdown/generic?iso=20170204T235959&p0=136&msg=Round+6&ud=1&font=cursive
Aurora Posted February 4, 2017 Posted February 4, 2017 I'd share my song but I'm at work so I'll post it later when nobody's online k. Also slay Jackson your song reminds me a bit of Castle On The Hill, God Sheeran his impact.
Temporal Posted February 4, 2017 Posted February 4, 2017 1 minute ago, Corsola said: am i stupid or is there a new way to do collapse tags on newtrl? cause idk lol Spoiler spoiler tags, in the far right of the text box
SaintWest Posted February 4, 2017 Posted February 4, 2017 When the site is laggy when you're tryin to PM your entrih
Jackson Posted February 4, 2017 Posted February 4, 2017 16 minutes ago, jpow said: sent! mess i just responded to your PM 15 minutes ago, Aurora said: I'd share my song but I'm at work so I'll post it later when nobody's online k. Also slay Jackson your song reminds me a bit of Castle On The Hill, God Sheeran his impact. I've only heard that song once and didn't pay attention to the lyrics but it's Ed so I'm offended 10 minutes ago, ceremonials said: There's color imagery in it tho Hardly
SaintWest Posted February 4, 2017 Posted February 4, 2017 It's been an hour and it's still not letting me PM.
8thPrince Posted February 4, 2017 Posted February 4, 2017 I'm submitting but I'll be a teensy bit late.
ATRL Moderator khalyan Posted February 4, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted February 4, 2017 oh so I'm resubmitting real fast
ughgabriel Posted February 5, 2017 Posted February 5, 2017 Ok I sent an entry last night but woke up today and didn't feel like it was me so I did another in 2 hours which feels more me so I hope it's good enough
8thPrince Posted February 5, 2017 Posted February 5, 2017 My song Erased. Sorry @Aurora for not replying to you, ATRL was down by the time I got around to it Tee-hee, message me.
ATRL Moderator khalyan Posted February 5, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted February 5, 2017 Paranoia Spoiler Verse 1 Waking up to you not by my side Thoughts flood my head as to where and why Did he leave me? And not say goodbye? He’s just asleep on the couch, blissful and divine This manic mind that I have attained crazy with the views stuck in my brain Why am I like this? For something so tame Putting myself into moments of pain Pre Chorus Do I hold my heart like this for you? Or end it now and break yours too? Chorus Even though we both seem fine I’m paranoid that you might not be mine I’m paranoid this was a waste of time Even though we aren’t done yet I’m paranoid that we have nothing left I’m paranoid that it was over once we met Verse 2 Hearing your phone in the break of dawn Bring to me think that we might be done I know it’s a friend, I know there’s no harm But why do I imagine more going on? My mind is out of control at these thoughts And my confidence seemingly shot Why do I cry? At something I’m not can’t believe someone could love me at all Pre Chorus Do I hold my heart like this for you? Or end it now and break yours too? Chorus Even though we both seem fine I’m paranoid that you might not be mine I’m paranoid this was a waste of time Even though we aren’t done yet I’m paranoid that we have nothing left I’m paranoid that it was over once we met Bridge Why do I do this to myself? Placing myself in the depths of hell What do I have left to expect? Low at the thought of no one left Chorus Even though we both seem fine I’m paranoid that you might not be mine I’m paranoid this was a waste of time Even though we aren’t done yet I’m paranoid that we have nothing left I’m paranoid that it was over once we met
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