Temporal Posted January 31, 2017 Posted January 31, 2017 2 minutes ago, swiftie13 said: STOP SUPPORTING SNAKE. NOW. Let me buy I Dont Wanna Live Forever
Aurora Posted January 31, 2017 Posted January 31, 2017 I'm at work so I can't really comment on much but I'm glad I made it another week and nobody was eliminated. Congrats to @UFO as well on the successful comeback! This challenge sounds exciting, I'll have to wait until I get home to read through everything and make a decision but I'm liking the sound of the Zayn one.
fountain Posted January 31, 2017 Author Posted January 31, 2017 54 minutes ago, ceremonials said: probably because they were all above you, besides robbed hymn Edge of Winter @keshaspearsxo whats ya name Salsasip
ughgabriel Posted January 31, 2017 Posted January 31, 2017 41 minutes ago, Jackson said: come in dub gays! I'll be there in an hour! Glad I still have an 8 average! I love this challenge! Will start working on my song tonight nn A guy at school asked me why did I keep playing with his heart when all I did was invite him to my house to play Resident Evil 4 and cancelled. Messy
Temporal Posted January 31, 2017 Posted January 31, 2017 10 minutes ago, ceremonials said: the failed @ I didn't wanna @ her, hoe. Cupid's a busy girl, prostituting to the other mods and whatnot.
Cupid Posted January 31, 2017 Posted January 31, 2017 Mines the moon one obviously! Part of my judging will include whether you fit the description. I like to think I left it vague enough for a lot of creativity though, excited to see what yall do.
fountain Posted January 31, 2017 Author Posted January 31, 2017 And I'm Fat Rat Records. Temp is Angry Moms Records but I came up with that one too so if you want anything clearing up just ask!
swiftie13 Posted January 31, 2017 Posted January 31, 2017 https://www.buzzfeed.com/elliewoodward/how-taylor-swift-played-the-victim-and-made-her-entire-caree?utm_term=.ljmREPz6z#.qdBbKwqlq only the swiftikas will say it's fake
ceremonials Posted January 31, 2017 Posted January 31, 2017 shout out to my ex, you're really quite the man you showed me heartbreak and that made me who i am here's to my ex, hey, look me at now well i'm all the way up, i swear you'll never, you'll never bring me down this bop
SaintWest Posted January 31, 2017 Posted January 31, 2017 19 hours ago, Temporal said: @SaintWest Okay looking back at your song again, I liked the idea behind using the numbers in the verses as it fit your theme - I love seeing that kind of parallelism - however, the verses themselves felt choppy because each line didn't flow into the next (the first verse, in particular, being the worst, the second being much better). You were bouncing from all of these different ideas to get the numbers to work, and "four more healing midnight dates" for example is a bit extra? That one instance in particular sticks out because of the double adjective. The repetition of "numbers" in the chorus is cute for a Pop song, but it kind of reduced the more serious aspect of the song that you put forth in the verses, and wasn't your best use of space in a lyric contest. I also would've liked to see a more distinct writing style, because there wasn't a lot of nuance with this and blended more into the background whereas other songwriters here - both new and old - have seemingly developed more into their own. I think you're still searching a bit. cc: @ceremonials ha fat ass Thanks, sis! I'm actually not too upset about the last part because I think it's still good that I'm still searching for my voice in this competition. My normal writing style outside of the competition really doesn't work here (my R1 entry being proof), and I'm pretty proud of myself for being able to stay in this competition so long, among veteran players. My goal isn't to win or place any higher than I already have. I'm just really wanting to make it as far as I can. Hoping I can at least end on a high note. 19 hours ago, Jackson said: Some tea! R1 R2 R3 R4 R5 avg Jackson 8.25 8.25 9.125 8.27 9 8.579 ughgabriel 6.95 8.775 8.1 8.88 7.95 8.131 ceremonials 8.325 8.375 8.1 7.75 7.438 7.9976 8thPrince 7.125 7.5 6.95 7.83 9 7.681 Achilles. 8 6.825 8.775 6.3 7.863 7.5526 Aurora 7.375 8.4 5.35 8.83 6.488 7.2886 SaintWest 5 7.875 6.45 6.48 7.825 6.726 TheCheetahWings 6.95 6.575 5.475 8.67 5.425 6.619 Kunst 6.25 7.675 6.45 6.2 6.263 6.5676 funnellegs 6.125 6 6.475 6 8.2 6.56 Corsola 5.975 7 6.35 8.07 5.375 6.554 Auburn 6.25 6.75 8.025 4.45 5.55 6.205 UFO 6.075 5.75 6.475 4.78 7.625 6.141 jpow 6.25 6.875 6.35 5.43 5.2 6.021 Gladion 5.325 5.425 6.825 5.4 5.788 5.7526 MattyTacos 5 7.25 5.475 4.5 4.738 5.3926 Not this being my first season and averaging in the top 10.
fountain Posted January 31, 2017 Author Posted January 31, 2017 2 hours ago, ceremonials said: shout out to my ex, you're really quite the man you showed me heartbreak and that made me who i am here's to my ex, hey, look me at now well i'm all the way up, i swear you'll never, you'll never bring me down this bop Legendary song
funnellegs Posted January 31, 2017 Posted January 31, 2017 2 hours ago, ceremonials said: shout out to my ex, you're really quite the man you showed me heartbreak and that made me who i am here's to my ex, hey, look me at now well i'm all the way up, i swear you'll never, you'll never bring me down this bop You better stan
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