ATRL Moderator khalyan Posted January 30, 2017 ATRL Moderator Posted January 30, 2017 come here @keshaspearsxo
ughgabriel Posted January 30, 2017 Posted January 30, 2017 I think I'll miss results since I'll be at school :(
ughgabriel Posted January 30, 2017 Posted January 30, 2017 What's your line, though? That I'm fine, oh, heard that befoooore
fountain Posted January 30, 2017 Author Posted January 30, 2017 5 hours ago, SaintWest said: I'll take ok. I was trying to find a middle ground on this one. Your last review of my song was basically that it was trying to be too metaphorical, and I cluttered it up with a lot of unnecessary imagery that made the story all over the place and confusing. You also had a problem in earlier rounds with my lack of originality. With Numbers Boy, I was trying to find a unique, but simple concept that wasn't overly metaphorical and one theme I could stick with throughout to focus my writing. The numbers bit was definitely a gimmick, but I wasn't intending for it to be chidlike. I was worried about trying to do too much or really reach for a theme because I think that's what kills me every round. I definitely wasn't going for something super deep like Breathe Me, but I was hoping for a little more of a punch than The Greatest. Nonetheless, thanks. You definitely succeeded in terms of originality and being more polished in your entry. Sorry if it sounds nit picky though
fountain Posted January 30, 2017 Author Posted January 30, 2017 1 hour ago, Corsola said: Well he always says results will be at night for the US then doesn't actually post them until like 5am EST I'm bad at maths
fountain Posted January 30, 2017 Author Posted January 30, 2017 Anyway ya I'm gonna do them now help me spam few ppl who r here
Jackson Posted January 30, 2017 Posted January 30, 2017 2 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: I'm bad at maths When r results
Jackson Posted January 30, 2017 Posted January 30, 2017 @Temporal @Tymps. @Gladion @ceremonials @Hugamari @ughgabriel @Corsola @Aurora @swiftie13 @MattyTacos idk who else
ughgabriel Posted January 30, 2017 Posted January 30, 2017 @ceremonials and @Jackson are my main hoes so I'll summon 'em
Jackson Posted January 30, 2017 Posted January 30, 2017 Just now, ughgabriel said: @ceremonials and @Jackson are my main hoes so I'll summon 'em
Jackson Posted January 30, 2017 Posted January 30, 2017 Just now, ceremonials said: what results now!
Hug Posted January 30, 2017 Posted January 30, 2017 Scream, I'm just about to head out with my mom. If results are finished before I'm back, the winner of the round can @ me to change the Songwriter's Thread title if they'd like, or I'll try to remember it myself.
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