Hug Posted January 28, 2017 Share Posted January 28, 2017 3 minutes ago, ughgabriel said: @Hugamari Not really a question, I just want to say that I get what you're saying but this has actually been the most personal song of mine this season BUT your comments do make sense since my therapist has told me that I have trouble acknowledging my emotions so there's something to work on! But thank you! I always get this wrong. I tried clocking the forced tea on Dylobs, and now the impersonal tea on you. I should stop making such bold claims. I'm glad you didn't react badly to it, though. You're so nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintWest Posted January 28, 2017 Share Posted January 28, 2017 (edited) 31 minutes ago, Hugamari said: @SaintWest - Numbers Boy Girl, you must’ve really took what I (and the other judges) said to heart, because I love this. I think the gimmick is cute enough to make me remember it, and it’s really catchy for words with no rhymes. That SNATCHED meter YES. You definitely were a case of simplicity gone right this week. Love it! I'm shook. Thank you so much. I really, really, really tried to take what you guys said and apply it to this week. Would not have been possible wthout literal angel @ughgabriel though. Edited January 28, 2017 by SaintWest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted January 28, 2017 Author Share Posted January 28, 2017 7 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: ughSAINTbriel is the sweetest user in this thread True n im Number 2! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintWest Posted January 28, 2017 Share Posted January 28, 2017 9 minutes ago, Corsola said: Wish me luck on doing the same next week! I mean idk if I'll be eliminated or not but I'm prepared for the worst and since the comeback round will be open one more round Pears said I'm just gonna try to apply EVERYTHING I've learned since I think I finally realize what works for me and what I should do (or at least I hope so) Sis, we'll still see if I'm safe. But I feel you. My inbox is open, so the moment the new challenge is posted, PM me and I'll help you brainstorm or review anything you want. 11 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: ughSAINTbriel is the sweetest user in this thread Das me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted January 28, 2017 Share Posted January 28, 2017 :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintWest Posted January 28, 2017 Share Posted January 28, 2017 3 minutes ago, Corsola said: nn thanks sis! Let me just leave this thread since I'm a trainwreck irl and I'm gonna meltdown anywhere I go so I certainly won't let it be here (not cause of my song that'd be a mess) Everything ok? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted January 28, 2017 Author Share Posted January 28, 2017 13 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: If not me who Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UFO Posted January 28, 2017 Share Posted January 28, 2017 (edited) Honestly don't know what the response will be to my song. It should be interesting tho. I wasn't planning on writing anything at all Although I will say that I am very very pleased with what I managed to come up with. Edited January 28, 2017 by UFO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted January 28, 2017 Share Posted January 28, 2017 @Hugamari can you expand on mine a bit The chess metaphor was supposed to be the overall metaphor of the song, like her choosing between the son or the husband. Whatever she does, she's still losing someone. That is sorta the whole concept of zugzwang. So while I don't explicitly state it besides in verse one and the bridge I thought it was sorta... implied? Maybe not Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UFO Posted January 28, 2017 Share Posted January 28, 2017 (edited) Bridge the Gap VERSE ONE When I was faced with obstacles He settled my turbulence Even when I changed directions He carried me like the wind He seeped into my mind, let go I knew I wasn't his to keep VERSE TWO He always treated me like pearls I was finally cherished Like I was valuable enough As if I was his diamond I thought I was his only one But sadly there was anotherCHORUS I can't have him even in my dreams Cause the reality's a nightmare As much as I would like to pretend I will never be close enough to bridge the gap All we have between us is distance There's nothing that will erase the truth Even if I found a way inside I will never find the right tools to bridge the gap VERSE THREE When I faced the consequences I broke so delicately He opened me up, tore me down But it was my fault I fell He treated me like a goddess But I was alone in heaven VERSE FOUR If only I didn't crumble And let him relieve my wounds Maybe it would have been better If I suffered from afar Away from his talent to give Everything that I still neededCHORUS I can't have him even in my dreams Cause the reality's a nightmare As much as I would like to pretend I will never be close enough to bridge the gap All we have between us is distance There's nothing that will erase the truth Even if I found a way inside I will never find the right tools to bridge the gap BRIDGE I have to resist, though you lifted me I must fly by myself without needing your wings I was used to running on the cracked earth But I must stop chasing what isn't mine I have to build a bridge within myself To finally move on and walk away CHORUS I can't have him even in my dreams Cause the reality's a nightmare As much as I would like to pretend I will never be close enough to bridge the gap All we have between us is distance There's nothing that will erase the truth Even if I found a way inside I will never find the right tools to bridge the gap To bridge the gap 17 hours ago, ughgabriel said: I want to post mine but I can't use the hidden content tag on mobile so. http://pastebin.com/gQe2Bywr it's about a lack of self love and how you've hurt yourself in the past what kind of slay is this a;l/fkasglj so great, I love it. Edited January 28, 2017 by UFO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted January 28, 2017 Share Posted January 28, 2017 I'm thirsty for reviews Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Temporal Posted January 28, 2017 Share Posted January 28, 2017 1 hour ago, ughgabriel said: Sleep paralysis is so intriguing and interesting, it happened to me once. I remember I was a little frightened, I tried to get up but I couldn't. Then I tried shouting my brother's name for help and not a bit of sound came out of my mouth, I tried to scream and nothing. So I tried to relax and fell asleep again. Then when I woke up at morning I had a sore throat + raspy voice I've had it dozens and dozens of times, including like, yesterday. It used to terrify me when I was a child cause I had no idea how to explain it. Let me write a sing about it (poor Hug) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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ughgabriel Posted January 28, 2017 Share Posted January 28, 2017 1 hour ago, Hugamari said: I always get this wrong. I tried clocking the forced tea on Dylobs, and now the impersonal tea on you. I should stop making such bold claims. I'm glad you didn't react badly to it, though. You're so nice. Well I can't be mad about it, I know it's your job to help us go further and point out the flaws. I know it's nothing personal 1 hour ago, SaintWest said: I'm shook. Thank you so much. I really, really, really tried to take what you guys said and apply it to this week. Would not have been possible wthout literal angel @ughgabriel though. It was all your work, baby! You are responsible of your success 1 hour ago, Gastrodonatella said: ughSAINTbriel is the sweetest user in this thread 28 minutes ago, UFO said: what kind of slay is this a;l/fkasglj so great, I love it. Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swiftie13 Posted January 28, 2017 Share Posted January 28, 2017 question, did my entry come with the italicized letters asking for a friend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UFO Posted January 28, 2017 Share Posted January 28, 2017 (edited) 4 minutes ago, ughgabriel said: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! No problem! Lol I've actually been meaning to binge-watch Black Mirror for the longest time, thanks for the reminder I guess Edited January 28, 2017 by UFO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swiftie13 Posted January 28, 2017 Share Posted January 28, 2017 Black Mirror, the show, is crazzzzy. I love it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Temporal Posted January 28, 2017 Share Posted January 28, 2017 7 minutes ago, swiftie13 said: question, did my entry come with the italicized letters asking for a friend Yes working on rihviews now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Jackson Posted January 28, 2017 Share Posted January 28, 2017 is the best new emoji don't @ me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Temporal Posted January 28, 2017 Share Posted January 28, 2017 :ludicolo: was robbed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UFO Posted January 28, 2017 Share Posted January 28, 2017 4 minutes ago, swiftie13 said: Black Mirror, the show, is crazzzzy. I love it. I watched only the first 30 seconds of the premiere and I already fell in love with it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kelp Posted January 28, 2017 Share Posted January 28, 2017 I wasn't able to make plans tonight so https://www.dubtrack.fm/join/platinumhitz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted January 28, 2017 Share Posted January 28, 2017 I'm still pressed about :guitar:, :vocals:, and :bounce: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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