Hug Posted January 24, 2017 Share Posted January 24, 2017 Just now, Dylobs said: TFW Huga ignores your good advice I'm not in the game anymore LOL I can write what I want Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted January 24, 2017 Share Posted January 24, 2017 not our gay asses staying up til 6am wtf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dylobs Posted January 24, 2017 Share Posted January 24, 2017 TFW you forget Huga isn't in the game anymore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ughgabriel Posted January 24, 2017 Share Posted January 24, 2017 Which one is the better title? Black Mirror or Death Drive? help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hug Posted January 24, 2017 Share Posted January 24, 2017 Black Mirror, but gl explaining your title either way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceremonials Posted January 24, 2017 Share Posted January 24, 2017 Third Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ughgabriel Posted January 24, 2017 Share Posted January 24, 2017 Thanks! I will try to be very concise about it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ughgabriel Posted January 24, 2017 Share Posted January 24, 2017 Might as well change the album title to BM since Death Drive sounds like Need 4 Speed or some straight car racing videogame Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hug Posted January 24, 2017 Share Posted January 24, 2017 Wow, low-key impressing myself with me managing to not rhyme. Gonna share this song with you guys once its finished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hug Posted January 24, 2017 Share Posted January 24, 2017 Finished my draft! I'm going to hold off a bit, to see how I feel about it, before posting it here. I don't want to steer you guys on the wrong path. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hug Posted January 24, 2017 Share Posted January 24, 2017 @SaintWest I didn't forget about your question. I will be honest and say that your songs do not tend to stick around in my mind. I judge them, post my thoughts, and forget about them. Along with what pears and Temporal have suggested, I think being more adventurous, both in theme and word choice, will take you a long way, and you'd be surprised how far being memorable will take you. I do not know how much this helps you, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Auburn Posted January 24, 2017 Share Posted January 24, 2017 now is NOT a good time for writer's block Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Temporal Posted January 24, 2017 Share Posted January 24, 2017 I highkey need to ban myself when DH ends, I need an ATRL cleanse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintWest Posted January 24, 2017 Share Posted January 24, 2017 (edited) Thanks for all the suggestions, guys. I'm just tryna do better. Edited January 24, 2017 by SaintWest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATRL Moderator khalyan Posted January 24, 2017 ATRL Moderator Share Posted January 24, 2017 I was going to write about a woman in a polygamist relationship but I changed my mind lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintWest Posted January 24, 2017 Share Posted January 24, 2017 I wrote a song with the beginning letter of each verse being alphabetical. #help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swiftie13 Posted January 24, 2017 Share Posted January 24, 2017 school is really taking all my time and effort now, boys second. Still gonna submit a surefire #1 tho xoxo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swiftie13 Posted January 24, 2017 Share Posted January 24, 2017 slut Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted January 24, 2017 Share Posted January 24, 2017 1 hour ago, Temporal said: I highkey need to ban myself when DH ends, I need an ATRL cleanse. same gurl Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted January 24, 2017 Author Share Posted January 24, 2017 1 hour ago, swiftie13 said: school is really taking all my time and effort now, boys second. Still gonna submit a surefire #1 tho xoxo Plural ??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swiftie13 Posted January 24, 2017 Share Posted January 24, 2017 Pears slut shaming me when he's the master of polyamory pears x swigie pears x kunst pears x gabe pears x mitch pears x PLURAL #exposed #pearsisover #diamondhitisover #althoughitneverbegan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Posted January 24, 2017 Share Posted January 24, 2017 why are there no "Diamond Hit is Over" gifs in existence @swiftie13 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fountain Posted January 24, 2017 Author Share Posted January 24, 2017 11 minutes ago, swiftie13 said: Pears slut shaming me when he's the master of polyamory pears x swigie pears x kunst pears x gabe pears x mitch pears x PLURAL #exposed #pearsisover #diamondhitisover #althoughitneverbegan Why are you sexualising me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swiftie13 Posted January 24, 2017 Share Posted January 24, 2017 Let me make a DH is over gif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swiftie13 Posted January 24, 2017 Share Posted January 24, 2017 (edited) @keshaspearsxo @Jackson Edited January 24, 2017 by swiftie13 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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