swiftie13 Posted January 23, 2017 Posted January 23, 2017 HRJR - TO THE SUNFLOWERS Diamond Hit Charts Week Song Genre Peak Score Equivalent 1. "A Sunflower's Dance" Mexican Folk 03 8.025 My Other #3's 2. "Until" Pop 07 7.850 Hung Up 3. "Under the Same Moon w/Achilles." Folk 02 8.775 BeyAdmired --. "Ho Ho Ho" Holiday 03 6.350 CupcakKe 4. "Heartwater" Pop 11 6.480 Pigie ok removed the highlighter. Now where da fonts at?
Jackson Posted January 23, 2017 Posted January 23, 2017 The only solution I can think of would be to press remove format, then go into a word processor and manually add the fonts back in
fountain Posted January 23, 2017 Author Posted January 23, 2017 2 hours ago, swiftie13 said: eyes show Smash, 10/10, legendary
ughgabriel Posted January 23, 2017 Posted January 23, 2017 And if you complain once more you'll meet an army of me
Jackson Posted January 23, 2017 Posted January 23, 2017 1 minute ago, Temporal said: #MakeATRLBBCodeAgain RIGHT? If they're going to make everything CKCode they could at the very LEAST give us formatting options
fountain Posted January 24, 2017 Author Posted January 24, 2017 1 hour ago, ughgabriel said: And if you complain once more you'll meet an army of me I find this catchy
fountain Posted January 24, 2017 Author Posted January 24, 2017 14 minutes ago, swiftie13 said: #MAKEHOR#1FORTHEFIRSTTIME #WriteAGoodSongForTheFirstTime
Kelp Posted January 24, 2017 Posted January 24, 2017 https://www.dubtrack.fm/join/platinumhitz *runs away*
ughgabriel Posted January 24, 2017 Posted January 24, 2017 8 minutes ago, Jackson said: Hint for my song this week no 1 curry, join us https://www.dubtrack.fm/join/platinumhitz
fountain Posted January 24, 2017 Author Posted January 24, 2017 15 minutes ago, Jackson said: Hint for my song this week you're spicing your themes up? Slay me!
SaintWest Posted January 24, 2017 Posted January 24, 2017 @keshaspearsxo @Cupid @Hugamari @Temporal If you could give me 3 tips/things to work on/things you want to see me from this round, what would they be? I'm really trying to use ya'lls comments from the past weeks to improve, but I want to also hear what you'd suggest as of now.
Temporal Posted January 24, 2017 Posted January 24, 2017 18 minutes ago, SaintWest said: @keshaspearsxo @Cupid @Hugamari @Temporal If you could give me 3 tips/things to work on/things you want to see me from this round, what would they be? I'm really trying to use ya'lls comments from the past weeks to improve, but I want to also hear what you'd suggest as of now. I just want a higher attention to detail from you. Make sure that every line and image is useful for the entire song and isn't just taking up space. Make sure that your imagery isn't so sporadic as well.
swiftie13 Posted January 24, 2017 Posted January 24, 2017 Spoiler My sing this week will be my first #1, I guarantee it why are you guys even trying anymore
SaintWest Posted January 24, 2017 Posted January 24, 2017 8 minutes ago, swiftie13 said: Hide contents My sing this week will be my first #1, I guarantee it why are you guys even trying anymore miranda?
Tylerbv Posted January 24, 2017 Posted January 24, 2017 4got this existed is dylobs out yet cba to check
fountain Posted January 24, 2017 Author Posted January 24, 2017 1 hour ago, SaintWest said: @keshaspearsxo @Cupid @Hugamari @Temporal If you could give me 3 tips/things to work on/things you want to see me from this round, what would they be? I'm really trying to use ya'lls comments from the past weeks to improve, but I want to also hear what you'd suggest as of now. stick to one key theme for your imagery to make your entry more focused and polished more unique concepts, your last song wasn't bad but the concept of your mind not being at ease is charted territory, it's the more unique and interesting concepts which generally get the higher scores - you could do this by either developing a clear narrative in an entry, or tackling something which is rarer to be talked about than things such as doubt, strength and survival a bit more individuality as to stand out, in your last entry you used a lot of generic devices (ashes, gasoline, porcelain, key, flames, chained, doubt, strength, survival, shore, sun, waves, wind, water - this kind of lends in to the above points too, if you look at this list you can kind of see it's rather scattered in terms of theme and standard in terms of concept)
Hug Posted January 24, 2017 Posted January 24, 2017 10 hours ago, Cupid said: I wanna drag hugas favs cuz I despise you tubers in general but especially the gay bait white bread mayonnaise pasty milky bar clouds, but I honestly have no idea who they are and yoghurt is the correct spelling? Ban yourself.
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