Hug Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 Just now, swiftie13 said: Currently browsing: swiftie13 and 3 guests (4 total). rtcfyvgbhnjm bitch. Lemme just post that after all my reviews.
swiftie13 Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 1 minute ago, Hug said: rtcfyvgbhnjm bitch. Lemme just post that after all my reviews. I feel like I do this for nothing because they usually never inspire any deep conversation about writing which is what the Platinum Hit franchise is all about.
Jackson Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 2 minutes ago, swiftie13 said: Currently browsing: swiftie13 and 3 guests (4 total). Also @Aurora I accidentally stumbled upon your song last night, and WOW! BOP! I didn't know you could sing too
Hug Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 If you want to invoke a reaction, just say something negative about ceremonials and Jackson. They're the most vocal. Why do you think I haven't got off their necks in weeks.
Jackson Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 Another reminder that Austin chose his instrumental because I showed him the slay song I was using and he loved it so much he had to have one of his own
Jackson Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 1 minute ago, Hug said: If you want to invoke a reaction, just say something negative about ceremonials and Jackson. They're the most vocal. Why do you think I haven't got off their necks in weeks. BITCH! So the truth comes out. Cash me outside, how bout dah?
Hug Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 You'll never want to improve if I do nothing but praise you and I could do that easily.
Jackson Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 I see. So you're REALLY just sabotaging 8th. Here for it
Hug Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 Just now, Jackson said: I see. So you're REALLY just sabotaging 8th. Here for it The evil will defeat itself in time. You found me out.
funnellegs Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 Thanks for the review @swiftie13 I agree with the comments and if I get through I'm going to try and work on what you've said
Temporal Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 1 hour ago, swiftie13 said: one can never start campaigning too early
fountain Posted March 1, 2017 Author Posted March 1, 2017 2 hours ago, swiftie13 said: one can never start campaigning too early #SwigiePH12
Hug Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 Crayon on the wall that I cannot bear to wash Photos in the halls from a time forever gone Hand-prints in cement with our names underneath A swing near the fence still attached to the tree Pictures that you drew that I keep on the fridge People that we knew; birthdays that you’ll miss All these little things are pieces that I keep Of a girl who dreamed, of a girl who’s free The way those first four lines came to me instantly, but the last 4 took me forever. It's probably obvious, too.
ceremonials Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 3 hours ago, Hug said: If you want to invoke a reaction, just say something negative about ceremonials and Jackson. They're the most vocal. Why do you think I haven't got off their necks in weeks. Don't ever ****ing @ me again. You're ****ing rude and a terrible judge.
Hug Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 Just now, ceremonials said: Don't ever ****ing @ me again. You're ****ing rude and a terrible judge. I feel like you're being serious and using the gaycat to not be so serious sounding.
ceremonials Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 3 hours ago, Jackson said: Another reminder that Austin chose his instrumental because I showed him the slay song I was using and he loved it so much he had to have one of his own OK but A Walk > Epigram
ceremonials Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 9 minutes ago, Hug said: I feel like you're being serious and using the gaycat to not be so serious sounding. N I mean I'm p sure you gave me a 9 again this week so I can't complain
Hug Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 1 minute ago, ceremonials said: N I mean I'm p sure you gave me a 9 again this week so I can't complain Yes, you and Jackson tied for me and got the same 9+ score.
swiftie13 Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 I'll post hints later but two songs received a 10 from me and one other was close. None were below a 7. Excellent work.
Hug Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 Hi, I finished that song that I posted a bit of earlier. Thanks to my patented recycling method, it came fairly easy to me. I didn't want to make it too obvious what it was about, but the pieces are there. Quote [verse 1] Every morning, it’s the same I wake up in this house alone I walk right by your bedroom But I know that you’re not at home Every morning, it’s the same I prepare for the day ahead I pray that you forgive me Cause I know that I won’t forget [pre-chorus] How I didn’t get to save you How you must’ve been afraid How I let somebody take you I’m the only one to blame [chorus] Crayon on the wall that I cannot bear to wash Photos in the halls from a time forever gone Handprints in cement with our names underneath A swing near the fence still attached to the tree Pictures that you drew that I keep on the fridge People that we knew; birthdays that you’ll miss All these little things are pieces that I keep Of a girl who dreamed, who I hope’s at peace [verse 2] Every evening, it’s the same I walk into this house alone I look into your bedroom Though I know that you’re not at home Every evening, it’s the same I prepare for the night ahead I pray, somewhere, you’re dreaming Cause my nightmares won’t forget [pre-chorus 2] How I didn’t keep you with me How you must’ve felt betrayed By someone we thought was family I’m the only one to blame [chorus] Crayon on the wall that I cannot bear to wash Photos in the halls from a time forever gone Handprints in cement with our names underneath A swing near the fence still attached to the tree Pictures that you drew that I keep on the fridge People that we knew; birthdays that you’ll miss All these little things are pieces that I keep Of a girl who dreamed, who I hope’s at peace [bridge] I heard a thump, that Autumn night Right then my eyes had opened wide I hoped and prayed you were alright My worst fear had came to mind Was all too late, that Autumn night Your bedroom door was open wide And just like that, with no goodbye My worst fear had come to life [chorus] Crayon on the wall that I cannot bear to wash Photos in the halls from a time forever gone Handprints in cement with our names underneath A swing near the fence still attached to the tree Pictures that you drew that I keep on the fridge People that we knew; birthdays that you’ll miss All these little things are pieces that I keep Of a girl who dreamed, who I hope’s at peace
ceremonials Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 8 minutes ago, swiftie13 said: I'll post hints later but two songs received a 10 from me and one other was close. None were below a 7. Excellent work.
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