fountain Posted February 22, 2017 Author Posted February 22, 2017 "I just asked for some advice in my reviews" ehdhhdjd
funnellegs Posted February 22, 2017 Posted February 22, 2017 4 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: What was your question to the judges @ughgabriel and if anybody else wants to ask something do it now before I review @Aurora @Jackson @Corsola @8thPrince @funnellegs @SaintWest Umm could you possibly identify something you may have noticed in my songs that you think could be fixed to take my songs to the next level? I know my chorus writing is weak so far but just anything else you may have picked up on.
Truffle. Posted February 22, 2017 Posted February 22, 2017 when does platinum hit 11x start asking for a friend
Hug Posted February 22, 2017 Posted February 22, 2017 Just now, Truffle. said: when does platinum hit 11x start asking for a friend There's probably another month and a half of this, then we take like a 3 month break, so probably around the summer!
Truffle. Posted February 22, 2017 Posted February 22, 2017 Just now, Hug said: There's probably another month and a half of this, then we take like a 3 month break, so probably around the summer! great, thanks!
ughgabriel Posted February 22, 2017 Posted February 22, 2017 9 minutes ago, Hug said: Oh, and as for Gabe. I legit can't think of anything except maybe sit on your songs a bit longer so you can make some fixes to your entry. Just small ones that would elevate your work further. I've always found your entries to be enjoyable (except for Prologue/Epilogue just because it was way too long, but the attempt at being different was appreciated, at least) Ok this is helpful! I've thought about it too, to give myself a time to read it and see if I can do some changes. So yeah I'll do that this week definitely, thank you
Hug Posted February 22, 2017 Posted February 22, 2017 Okay, since some people are asking, I figure I may as well say one thing I think would be important for every contestant left to work on or experiment with. @8thPrince - I don't ****ing know, you're killing it. Maybe try using unconventional structures. @Aurora - Put down that thesaurus. @Corsola - Keep working on polishing your entries. You've improved a lot, but I agree with what Citrus said (even though I've gave similar advice before) @funnellegs - Same as Corsola, but also try being more bold in your subject matter. You've never gone too far out of your element, and it could be a challenging and rewarding experience for you. @Jackson - Try something reflective and introspective @SaintWest - Don't let Gastrodonatella near your entries again @ughgabriel - Well I already gave you yours
Hug Posted February 22, 2017 Posted February 22, 2017 Just now, ceremonials said: Trag Gastrodon The way I forgot you, but I gave you a whole essay so
fountain Posted February 22, 2017 Author Posted February 22, 2017 I 5000% agree with Hug about Jackson but my review is gonna be about that
ceremonials Posted February 22, 2017 Posted February 22, 2017 Just now, Hug said: The way I forgot you, but I gave you a whole essay so yeah i figured that was why
funnellegs Posted February 22, 2017 Posted February 22, 2017 7 minutes ago, Hug said: Okay, since some people are asking, I figure I may as well say one thing I think would be important for every contestant left to work on or experiment with. @8thPrince - I don't ****ing know, you're killing it. Maybe try using unconventional structures. @Aurora - Put down that thesaurus. @Corsola - Keep working on polishing your entries. You've improved a lot, but I agree with what Citrus said (even though I've gave similar advice before) @funnellegs - Same as Corsola, but also try being more bold in your subject matter. You've never gone too far out of your element, and it could be a challenging and rewarding experience for you. @Jackson - Try something reflective and introspective @SaintWest - Don't let Gastrodonatella near your entries again @ughgabriel - Well I already gave you yours Thanks @Hug if I get through, im really going to try and deliver something great next round.
Jackson Posted February 22, 2017 Posted February 22, 2017 8 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: I 5000% agree with Hug about Jackson but my review is gonna be about that I did that last week and you dragged it
fountain Posted February 22, 2017 Author Posted February 22, 2017 for the record this is what the doc looks like. WHERE is the room for confusion! i put those ---------------------------------------------- after/before every entry
fountain Posted February 22, 2017 Author Posted February 22, 2017 1 minute ago, Jackson said: I did that last week and you dragged it i already explained why, you had no chorus worth merit, no pre chorus, and no substantial bridge (just a third verse) so i was kinda left with a lukewarm reception to just those 3 verses, anyway..
Jackson Posted February 22, 2017 Posted February 22, 2017 4 minutes ago, keshaspearsxo said: i already explained why, you had no chorus worth merit, no pre chorus, and no substantial bridge (just a third verse) so i was kinda left with a lukewarm reception to just those 3 verses, anyway.. you never actually told me why you didn't like my chorus, even after I asked you specifically and idk why a bridge is necessary when that third verse basically functioned as a bridge, showing a resolution of the chorus and twisting the meaning in the final chorus
fountain Posted February 22, 2017 Author Posted February 22, 2017 Just now, Jackson said: you never actually told me why you didn't like my chorus, even after I asked you specifically and idk why a bridge is necessary when that third verse basically functioned as a bridge, showing a resolution of the chorus and twisting the meaning in the final chorus i felt like it could've used one because the verses were pretty repetitive, some kind of change would've been interesting. but i liked the verses themselves anyway. the song in general could've just been MORE with the lack of bridge and the chorus which was for me way too simple and didnt really have a place in the song.
Jackson Posted February 22, 2017 Posted February 22, 2017 DYING at 3/3 judges thinking Aurora wrote his song about Mexico
Hug Posted February 22, 2017 Posted February 22, 2017 1 minute ago, Jackson said: DYING at 3/3 judges thinking Aurora wrote his song about Mexico I didn't
Jackson Posted February 22, 2017 Posted February 22, 2017 30 minutes ago, Hug said: @Jackson - Try something reflective and introspective More on this though, I'm a little confused because I've done this in 3 rounds already (For the Gods, Island, and Bottle) which happen to be the entries that 1+ judges have sabotaged . Unless you mean something else by reflective and introspective
Jackson Posted February 22, 2017 Posted February 22, 2017 1 minute ago, keshaspearsxo said: 3/3?? maths where?? OK but YOU'RE one to talk on math skills
Hug Posted February 22, 2017 Posted February 22, 2017 Just now, Jackson said: More on this though, I'm a little confused because I've done this in 3 rounds already (For the Gods, Island, and Bottle) which happen to be the entries that 1+ judges have sabotaged . Unless you mean something else by reflective and introspective Talk about your insecurities or fears or something, rather than past relationships or religion because I don't need more religious songs.
Jackson Posted February 22, 2017 Posted February 22, 2017 2 minutes ago, Hug said: Talk about your insecurities or fears or something, rather than past relationships or religion because I don't need more religious songs. All of my insecurities and fears have to do with religion and relationships though is this what you felt like when we tried to make you write an angry song last season?
Hug Posted February 22, 2017 Posted February 22, 2017 2 minutes ago, Jackson said: All of my insecurities and fears have to do with religion and relationships though is this what you felt like when we tried to make you write an angry song last season? gfgycdbhj yes, when I have never sought vengeance in my life.
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