Temporal Posted February 21, 2017 Posted February 21, 2017 Just now, Hug said: Wait let me do score hints ...and scores. I didn't do those yet actually hihi 1 omg same!
ceremonials Posted February 21, 2017 Posted February 21, 2017 Just now, Achilles. said: From ripping off Florence to ripping off me. Wow @ your decline. dont do yo self like that
Temporal Posted February 21, 2017 Posted February 21, 2017 3 minutes ago, Achilles. said: From ripping off Florence to ripping off me. Wow @ your decline.
Hug Posted February 21, 2017 Posted February 21, 2017 10 9 8.5 8 8 7.5 7 6.5 Scores not finalized but that's what I have right now Also, these aren't hints bc idk what to make them. Okay, found my hints. funnellegs - No F.U.N Aurora - Fire ughgabriel - AWAKE ceremonials - Chained To The Rhythm SaintWest - The One Corsola - Free Somebody Jackson - Fire 8thPrince - Pour Up completed unrelated to the hints, but https://www.last.fm/user/hugamariatrl go check out my last.fm
SaintWest Posted February 21, 2017 Posted February 21, 2017 (edited) 6 minutes ago, Hug said: 10 9 8.5 8 8 7.5 7 6.5 Scores not finalized but that's what I have right now 10 - 8thPrince 9 - Ceremonials 8.5 - ughgabriel 8 - Jackson 8 - funnellegs 7.5 - Corsola 7 - Aurora 6.5 - SaintWest Edited February 21, 2017 by SaintWest
Temporal Posted February 21, 2017 Posted February 21, 2017 7 minutes ago, swiftie13 said: Toveeeeeeeeee how was she
Temporal Posted February 21, 2017 Posted February 21, 2017 Just now, SaintWest said: 10 - 8thPrince 9 - Ceremonials 8 - ughgabriel 8 - funnellegs 7.5 - Corsola 7 - Aurora 6.5 - SaintWest poor Mascson
SaintWest Posted February 21, 2017 Posted February 21, 2017 2 minutes ago, Temporal said: poor Mascson oops
Jackson Posted February 21, 2017 Posted February 21, 2017 Idk what yall want from me, I'm out See ya next round
ughgabriel Posted February 21, 2017 Posted February 21, 2017 Just now, Jackson said: Idk what yall want from me, I'm out See ya next round mte but oh well
Temporal Posted February 21, 2017 Posted February 21, 2017 1 minute ago, Jackson said: Idk what yall want from me, I'm out See ya next round Want you to quit, obviously
SaintWest Posted February 21, 2017 Posted February 21, 2017 Ya'll can fuss all you want when you're at the bottom of the food chain, okay? Thanks!
Hug Posted February 21, 2017 Posted February 21, 2017 11 minutes ago, Hug said: 10 9 8.5 8 8 7.5 7 6.5 Scores not finalized but that's what I have right now Also, these aren't hints bc idk what to make them. Okay, found my hints. funnellegs - No F.U.N Aurora - Fire ughgabriel - AWAKE ceremonials - Chained To The Rhythm SaintWest - The One Corsola - Free Somebody Jackson - Fire 8thPrince - Pour Up completed unrelated to the hints, but https://www.last.fm/user/hugamariatrl go check out my last.fm bumping for hints
SaintWest Posted February 21, 2017 Posted February 21, 2017 3 minutes ago, Hug said: bumping for hints Did I not guess them correctly or
Hug Posted February 21, 2017 Posted February 21, 2017 1 minute ago, SaintWest said: Did I not guess them correctly or No, you're not last.
SaintWest Posted February 21, 2017 Posted February 21, 2017 2 minutes ago, Hug said: No, you're not last. 10 - 8thPrince 9 - Ceremonials 8.5 - ughgabriel 8 - Jackson 8 - funnellegs 7.5 - SaintWest 7 - Aurora 6.5 - Corsola
Hug Posted February 21, 2017 Posted February 21, 2017 Hi, I decided I was too harsh on someone so I'm giving them a new review. @Corsola - Afflected, Inc. Your topic, for starters, was very interesting. I wanted to see conceptual ideas in this round because it was practically begging for it, and you delivered. I actually wish that I hadn't seen the short film because it warped my perception of your entry. I basically saw it as a rhyming transcription of what took place, but the short film is not very blunt. It's actually very open in its perception, so this was you writing a song from how you perceived the film to be. I really enjoy people being inspired by works and making something of their own. I do think you maybe took a bit too much from it, and that's why my opinion leaned on the negative side, but judging you for things outside of your entry is admittedly biased and harsh. I want to touch on your word choice here: I actually REALLY appreciate it. I'm all for pushing the boundaries of what constitutes a rhyme, and to me, it makes things feel more natural when it's not so elementary, so choices such as "alterations/conversation" and "follow/models" were a positive for me. The thinner/trigger line was honestly a highlight to me, because it wasn't an expected rhyme, yet to me, makes perfect sense. The thing that irks me with this entry, though, is some times I don't like the way you presented an idea. It's been mentioned a couple times already in past reviews, but the "don't tell clients they'll lose their brain" part could've been expressed better. It's a good rule of thumb that if you feel the need to add an annotation at the end of your song telling people to not get the wrong idea about your line, that it's not a good line and should be changed. Also, let me touch on the bridge while we're here: there's a mention of "you" - so who is "you" in this song? In the short film, we're seeing Ms. Nervosa's story, but you mention her in the song first. Which affliction is "you"? That's something we don't see here, and I think it's important for the bridge, which is a huge turning point for the entry seeing as you reveal the twist from the short film there. You have a good concept and nothing is technically bad, but you executed some things in ways that I think sound better in your head than on paper...or on screen, I guess.
Hug Posted February 21, 2017 Posted February 21, 2017 11 minutes ago, SaintWest said: 10 - 8thPrince 9 - Ceremonials 8.5 - ughgabriel 8 - Jackson 8 - funnellegs 7.5 - SaintWest 7 - Aurora 6.5 - Corsola this is right, but is changing
Temporal Posted February 21, 2017 Posted February 21, 2017 I Miei Hints 8thPrince - Tre minuti e cinquantatré secondi Aurora - Quattro minuti e ventuno secondi Ceremonials - Quattro minuti e cinque secondi Corsola - Tre minuti e diciannove secondi Funnellegs - Quattro minuti e quattro secondi Jackson - Quattro minuti e dodici secondi SaintWest - Quattro minuti e otto secondi UghGabriel - Tre minuti e trentacinque secondi *Non garantisco che queste posizioni staranno*
Hug Posted February 21, 2017 Posted February 21, 2017 the way im not google translating that, just assume 8th is #1 and work from there
ughgabriel Posted February 21, 2017 Posted February 21, 2017 8thPrince - 3:54Aurora - 4:21Ceremonials - 4:05Corsola - 3:19Funnellegs - 4:04Jackson - 4:12SaintWest - 4:08UghGabriel - 3:35
ughgabriel Posted February 21, 2017 Posted February 21, 2017 Good thing spanish and italian are alike
Temporal Posted February 21, 2017 Posted February 21, 2017 3 minutes ago, ughgabriel said: 8thPrince - 3:54Aurora - 4:21Ceremonials - 4:05Corsola - 3:19Funnellegs - 4:04Jackson - 4:12SaintWest - 4:08UghGabriel - 3:35 Quote Tre minuti e cinquantatré secondi Quote cinquantatré Quote cinquantatré Quote cinquantatré flop spanish speaker
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