tournament ? DIAMOND HIT ? Farewell / Next Season Announcement pg.328 ?

[ceremonials]

I fought the chicken was lovely

[khalyan]

I'm probably not gonna submit oh well   

[Jackson]

 

PHOTOPHOBIC

Diamond Hit Charts

 

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Week	Song	Genre	Peak	Pure Score
1.                                                  2.                                                  3.                                                  4.                                                  5.                                                  6.                                                  7.	"Welcome to My World" "For the Gods" "Vilomah" (with Citrus) "Lost At Sea (Island)" "Berlin" "Lilac Fields" "Bottle"	Alternative Country Alternative Rock Folk Folktronica Folk Alternative Country Acoustic	#2 #4 #1 #4 #1 #3 ?	8.25 8.25 9.125 8.27 9.0 8.05 ?

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[khalyan]

2 minutes ago, Corsola said:

 

I just have no inspiration

 

I still have that chorus that I wrote earlier today and I kinda like it but it's basic and it's not inspiring me to write anything else.  

[Jackson]

2 minutes ago, jpow said:

I just have no inspiration

 

I still have that chorus that I wrote earlier today and I kinda like it but it's basic and it's not inspiring me to write anything else.  

Keep trying! I was spending all morning trying to write dead end concepts and trash verses but as soon as something hit me it flowed really well  

 

LMK if you need any help  

[ceremonials]

#1 No Sun on the Horizon 8.325

#3 Endless Night 8.375

#3 The Edge of Winter 8.1

#4 Relic 

#7 The Times

#7 Zugzwang

#? Isabella

 

I don't remember have their scores ff. Jackson do you have that table w all our scores

 

[Achilles.]

45 minutes ago, jpow said:

I'm probably not gonna submit oh well   

I did not get eliminated for you to not submit.

 

 

But I think I'm not doing the comeback. I've been distracted by the Grammy pre-telecast.

[Jackson]

4 minutes ago, ceremonials said:

#1 No Sun on the Horizon 8.325

#3 Endless Night 8.375

#3 The Edge of Winter 8.1

#4 Relic 

#7 The Times

#7 Zugzwang

#? Isabella

 

I don't remember have their scores ff. Jackson do you have that table w all our scores

 

it's like a page or two after the round was posted 

[khalyan]

Just now, Corsola said:

Us is Regina Spektor's best song and if you don't agree you're ugly

 

i say that like anyone even cares about her

Its obviously Fidelity or Laughing With tho

[Jackson]

PHOTOPHOBIC

1. Welcome to My World

2. For the Gods

3. 

4.

5. Lilac Fields

6. Berlin

7. Island

8.

9. Vilomah (feat. Citrus)

10. Bottle

 

I like Gabe's idea so here's mine so far

[Jackson]

9 minutes ago, Corsola said:

I literally almost did a song called Bottle this round it was one of my 10000 ideas

 

 

ff I had so many ideas too, but I guess Peak and Radio Girl will have to wait  

[smholiv]

"Bottle" sounds interesting

 

Not sure if this is what you were going with,

but I've been playing around with an idea of the message in a bottle thing but its hard for me to get it.... not bad

[Jackson]

8 minutes ago, Corsola said:

Every single round I go through at LEAST 10 ideas it's such a kii  

Same. Everyone probably thinks I just sit down and whip out high scoring songs out of nowhere but it takes me forever to find a concept that WORKS. Then when I get that down everything else flows smoothly 

5 minutes ago, minho said:

"Bottle" sounds interesting

 

Not sure if this is what you were going with,

but I've been playing around with an idea of the message in a bottle thing but its hard for me to get it.... not bad

Yeah that's kinda the central motif of the song. I kinda played with the meaning where the "message" is something you put away and send to the back of your mind until the tides bring it back to the shore/surface 

[ughgabriel]

Can someone read mine? hihi

[ceremonials]

Sorry pears I've sent you like 30 drafts hdjdjxj but this one is final

[Jackson]

The Chainsmokers winning a grammy proves that talent does indeed sometimes win 

[khalyan]

My Do What U Want is coming   

[SaintWest]

23 minutes ago, ughgabriel said:

Can someone read mine? hihi

If you still need it, sure.

[ughgabriel]

Just now, SaintWest said:

If you still need it, sure.

Yes! Let me send

[SaintWest]

Sia recently registered a song called Bottle. Coincidence? I think not.

[fountain]

Fun fact I just exposed that Jackson copied my entry "Bottle" from two seasons ago, expect a 0 and our first shock elim xo

Edited February 12, 2017 by keshaspearsxo

[fountain]

GotSkill's Comments

Batch 1

 

01. keshaspearsxo – Bottle (Ecstasy) Your style is becoming so distinct and powerful. I suspect this started last season, but I can only compare to the last time I judged you last year, and I sense a huge artistic shift for the better. Your imagery was so vivid I could practically see shimmering blue waters in my mind . On the other hand, your sporadic rhyme scheme threw me off a bit and worked against your (always) flawless meter to disturb the flow more than I would have liked. In addition, I thought this song was too serene and calming to convey feelings of intense joy and happiness. I realize there’s a thin line between blissfully happy and ecstatically happy, but I felt a bit too much of the former in this.

 

 

Thanks, bro

[Jackson]

"distinct" "powerful" "vivid" "flawless" "serene" wow the acclaim! 

[khalyan]

let me use those words in my song

 

[fountain]

None of which your shoddy impearsonation will receive