Fenrir Posted February 28, 2017 Posted February 28, 2017 1 hour ago, Alesus said: when are results? Doing my scores now and then I'll post results and the next round.
Cantaloupe. Posted February 28, 2017 Author Posted February 28, 2017 7 minutes ago, Fenrir said: Doing my scores now and then I'll post results and the next round.
LiMe Posted February 28, 2017 Posted February 28, 2017 It's interesting that @Fenrir is the first to see all the entries, but is generally the last one to score them.
Cantaloupe. Posted February 28, 2017 Author Posted February 28, 2017 Just now, LiMe said: It's interesting that @Fenrir is the first to see all the entries, but is generally the last one to score them.
Fenrir Posted February 28, 2017 Posted February 28, 2017 5 minutes ago, LiMe said: It's interesting that @Fenrir is the first to see all the entries, but is generally the last one to score them. I like to score them all at once and don't want to score it just to have someone resubmit it with some changes. Plus I'm generally busy around the time entries are due so I don't end up scoring until the last possible minute.
SaintWest Posted February 28, 2017 Posted February 28, 2017 (edited) 1 hour ago, Cantaloupe. said: What's that? 1 hour ago, Bellerophon said: True SaintWest ha impact! Edited February 28, 2017 by SaintWest
LiMe Posted February 28, 2017 Posted February 28, 2017 6 minutes ago, Fenrir said: I like to score them all at once and don't want to score it just to have someone resubmit it with some changes. Plus I'm generally busy around the time entries are due so I don't end up scoring until the last possible minute. The excuses That's understandable though.
Cantaloupe. Posted February 28, 2017 Author Posted February 28, 2017 Just now, SaintWest said: My impact. Slay.
Fenrir Posted February 28, 2017 Posted February 28, 2017 Melon Spoiler Urb - so good. would have been so much better without the awful shadow though. How many times do LiMe and I have to drag drop shadows before y'all stop? 8.5/10 Diva - Love the aquatic theme. Some spots are a bit messy but I don't think you could fix them where you're at now. Maybe with more practice though, which is why I'm glad you're still in the competition. 8/10 Hurem - this is lowkey cheating. I wish you would've done something to the other heads too. 7/10 Phoe - a slay, right up until you get to the cartoon blood. The Urban of this round. 7/10 Flavs - wtf. get your foot off my neck. only two things I can find wrong: the image has a weird quality? idk. and I wish you would've given her more ~alien features. 9/10 Rian - Super cute, I love it. There's some spots near the hairline where the green skin fades though and some random green in the hair over her left shoulder. Everything else looks top-notch. 9/10 Belle - This is giving werewolf, not alien. So I'm not sure what you ended up going with.. The hair cutout isn't the cutest. + there's no effects on her. If you had more time, it could've evolved into something really great though. 6/10 Sabbath - 5/10 Bad Things - The wrinkles. She looks like a little old green lady to me. There's some green in the hair, and some scalp that isn't green. The hair cutout is giving me a halo effect. The wittle nose sent me. 5/10 SaintWest - Avatar is so iconic. I, myself, submitted a Na'vi edit in season 2 of this game. It didn't look like this though.. The blurry-edged, super-sharpened dreads. Her shoulder being dislocated. LOVE the eyes though. 5/10 Alesus - First glance, I was snatched. Upon further inspection, I'm slightly less snatched. Love the eyes, the skin effect, the lips, and the background color. The nose area is really messy though, and the white dots kind of look like they're floating there instead of actually on her. There's also some spots of skin around the sweater that aren't purple. 7.5/10 LiMe Spoiler Urban - 8.5/10 - Impressive entry. The shadow I’m not keen on – if you wanted to change the background, a gradient backdrop would have been a better alternative (or move her to the left side of the image and have a space background, so that it appears like she is gazing out into space). Also I know you’ve done a lot of changes, but I feel more could have been done, maybe some interesting patterning on her skin to make her feel even more like an alien – and furthermore changing her clothes to something more futuristic. DivaCup - 8/10 - Solid effort. However I’m not sure if I like it – Firstly the textures on her skin has made it lose its form/shadows (especially around the shoulder area), and consequently makes her skin appear flat. Also the colouring of the eyes and lips don’t mix well with the image, I feel like you wanted them to stand out, but a more analogic colour (purple) would have suited the image better. Hurem - 6/10 - Definitely the wrong image choice, when you look at the before and after – it emphasizes that not much has been done, even though work has been put into the central face. Also it would have been difficult to alter the other faces with all that hair… at the very least you could have used the full image and altered her body/clothing as well. Phoenix - 6/10 - Overall this entry feels very cartoonish, the blood, the blurry/lifeless looking eyes, and even the vampire tooth looks weird. Not a fan of the black and white either. If you had fixed those issues it would have been a great entry. That being said, I honestly think you should have taken this entry in a more unique direction. I don’t know if you’ve watched Teen Wolf, but they have some interesting looking were-creatures, I think a were-jaguar would have been so beautiful in corporation with Leona – and just as sensual as a vampire. Here’s some images for reference of what I’m talking about: But I know you had trouble with this round. Flavs - 8/10 - Very nice! Though I wish more was altered other than the colouring, and adding a background?? Rian - 8.5/10 - I actually love it. Maybe more could have been done??? But it feels very contemporary – as though aliens exist and are going to school - and that this is the portrait from her school photo day. Belle - 6/10 - I’m guessing she’s a werewolf? Anyway the cutting and the colouring isn’t the greatest. Also you could have taken this idea even further, by adding fur patches along her arms and cheek/jaw area – It also would have been nice to see her hair extended into a long and voluminous mane – and altering her thumb nail into a claw. It’s all about the little details. Sabbath - 5/10 - Toooooo green, and the colouring isn’t the best (some edges of skin still normal colour, and doesn’t blend smoothly into the hair). The antenna’s look unrealistic – and doesn’t even join into the head properly. Also would have liked to have seen some modification to her facial features. Bad Things - 6/10 - It’s not a very appealing image. The colours you used are too pastel-like, and the overall execution isn’t good. I also think a different image of Selena would have been better. SaintWest - 7.5/10 - The eyes are my favourite element of this piece, nicely done! My only real issues are that the hair could have used a bit more work on. The background should be greener, so that she stands out more – also that orange/red part in the background is a bit distracting and should have been edited out – and lastly, the Harlow logo wasn’t needed. Alesus - 6.5/10 - I see the start of what could have been a really great entry – But it’s all thrown together at the last minute, so I’m not going to critique it properly. Fenrir Spoiler Urban - 9.5/10 - You already know how I feel about your entry so I’ll keep it short. The ears still kinda lowkey bug me but this is great and I still love that you kept her with a natural skin tone instead of changing it to some funky color. And I don’t mind the drop shadow ddd DivaCup - 8.5/10 - Our little Diva’s growing up :’( I think this is a solid effort and probably my favorite entry of yours so far. You’ve definitely come a long way since Round 1. No real complaints about this outside of what LiMe has already mentioned. Hurem - 7.5/10 - Nice work on the one face/neck. I would’ve liked to have seen you use the entire photo and maybe change her skin texture, trade the lower half of her body for a horse’s (think minotaur), or even just made her look succubus-y. I don’t think you needed to touch the other faces but I feel like more could’ve been done. Phoenix - 8/10 - The blood is my only real complaint with this. Otherwise I like what you did with her eyes and you did a nice job with her teeth. Flavs - 9/10 - Even though the bulk of what you had to do was just coloring I’m still slayed by this. Rian - 8.5/10 - Can’t say I have any real complaints about this. Belle - 7/10 - I like the direction you were going with, but as LiMe said the small details are what make an entry even better. Some light fur and at least a long claw-like nail on her thumb would’ve done a lot for this. Sabbath - 5/10 - This was … ok. The coloring is a definitely a biT messy (specifically the hairline and her lips) and the antennas aren’t the best, but I think if you had toned down the green a little bit, gotten rid of the antennas, and just played with her facial structure this would’ve turned out a lot better. Bad Things - 6/10 - See Melon’s critique. SaintWest - 8/10 - I definitely appreciate all the work you put into this (especially having to create the hair yourself). I loved just about everything about this and the only two issues I had were the hair and her shoulder. Her shoulder looks off and the hair looks obviously fake. I think you could’ve made her bald and that would’ve worked out a little better imo. Alesus - 7.5/10 - Definitely think this was an awesome start but like Melon said, the nose area and the white dots are two of the “big” problems with this. Plus you forgot to color her ear purple. I know you did this very last minute but I do think this was a really good start. Scores/Results Spoiler 1. URBAN - 8.83 2. Flavs - 8.67 2. Rian - 8.67 4. DivaCup - 8.17 5. Alesus - 7.17 6. Phoenix 7.0 7. Hurem - 6.83 7. SaintWest - 6.83 9. Belle - 6.33 10. Bad Things - 5.67 11. Sabbath - 5.0 Eliminated Spoiler @Jonathan for failing to submit an entry. Everyone else will be safe this week. @URBAN @Hurem @Bad Things @DivaCup @Bellerophon @Sabbath @Rian. @SaintWest @Flavs97 @Phoenixstar @Alesus @Latch @LiMe @Cantaloupe.
Golden Hour Posted February 28, 2017 Posted February 28, 2017 Drag me sisters! No but let me step my game up for real this next round... Urbese isn't safe!
Cantaloupe. Posted February 28, 2017 Author Posted February 28, 2017 Wait why are the smileys in my post all wonky?
Sabbath Posted February 28, 2017 Posted February 28, 2017 A perfect 5.0, not everyone has that I just wanna thank Jonathan for saving me like that, the true MVP. I will do everything on time now, I swear
Fenrir Posted February 28, 2017 Posted February 28, 2017 Just now, Cantaloupe. said: Wait why are the smileys in my post all wonky? Because I copy/paste everyone's scores/critiques into Google Docs so I can easily format and copy/paste it here?
Golden Hour Posted February 28, 2017 Posted February 28, 2017 1 minute ago, Sabbath said: A perfect 5.0, not everyone has that I just wanna thank Jonathan for saving me like that, the true MVP. I will do everything on time now, I swear Mte
Cantaloupe. Posted February 28, 2017 Author Posted February 28, 2017 Just now, Sabbath said: A perfect 5.0, not everyone has that I just wanna thank Jonathan for saving me like that, the true MVP. I will do everything on time now, I swear Just now, Fenrir said: Because I copy/paste everyone's scores/critiques into Google Docs so I can easily format and copy/paste it here? The sabotage!
Bellerophon Posted February 28, 2017 Posted February 28, 2017 Yeah my entry sucked a lot. I couldn't find any inspiration and I rushed
DivaCup Posted February 28, 2017 Posted February 28, 2017 @LiMe this was actually going to be my original body color but i didn't want it to look too avatar-ish [this was before it was announced that it could be any monster/creature] oh well @Cantaloupe. what spots were messy? you corresponded with me via PM and told me my stars were in front of the moon i fixed some stuff
Golden Hour Posted February 28, 2017 Posted February 28, 2017 Just now, Fenrir said: Who's ready for Round 5? Me bitch. Let my ass get to work right away
Cantaloupe. Posted February 28, 2017 Author Posted February 28, 2017 Just now, Fenrir said: Who's ready for Round 5? I'm going to get dragged again.
Sabbath Posted February 28, 2017 Posted February 28, 2017 1 minute ago, Fenrir said: Who's ready for Round 5? Post it
Sabbath Posted February 28, 2017 Posted February 28, 2017 Just now, Cantaloupe. said: I'm going to get dragged again. oh wow
LiMe Posted February 28, 2017 Posted February 28, 2017 Just now, DivaCup said: @LiMe this was actually going to be my original body color but i didn't want it to look too avatar-ish [this was before it was announced that it could be any monster/creature] oh well I was fine with the skin-tone, it was just the colour of the lips and eyes that I wasn't so keen about. That's all.
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