LiMe Posted February 5, 2017 Posted February 5, 2017 1 hour ago, Cantaloupe. said: I don't know how this would work. We're getting ready to have the first elimination Well if there are any new members that want to join, then make it so they have until the end of Round 2 to do so + submit their entry. Idk though, it's up to you.
Cantaloupe. Posted February 5, 2017 Author Posted February 5, 2017 1 minute ago, LiMe said: Well if there are any new members that want to join, then make it so they have until the end of Round 2 to do so + submit their entry. Idk though, it's up to you. @Fenrir What do you think?
Rian. Posted February 5, 2017 Posted February 5, 2017 2 hours ago, Cantaloupe. said: I don't know how this would work. We're getting ready to have the first elimination Get him to submit asap and send his entry to the judges. Since it'll be only one entry the judging process will be quicK. We'll wait.
Cantaloupe. Posted February 5, 2017 Author Posted February 5, 2017 SaintWest - 4 Dom - 3 Hurem - 2 Belle - 4 maraj - 5 Alpha - 1 Jonathan - 3 Desire - 3 Diva - 3 Alesus - 4 marn - 2 Bad things - 2 phoenix - 2 rian - 4 lawliet - 2 sabbath - 5 urban - 5 devon - 3 Riri - 1 @Fenrir this is everyone. 34 minutes ago, Rian. said: Get him to submit asap and send his entry to the judges. Since it'll be only one entry the judging process will be quicK. We'll wait. I sent a PM. We'll see what happens.
Fenrir Posted February 5, 2017 Posted February 5, 2017 5 hours ago, URBAN said: 1-5 sis. 7 hours ago, Cantaloupe. said: @Fenrir What do you think? 7 hours ago, LiMe said: Well if there are any new members that want to join, then make it so they have until the end of Round 2 to do so + submit their entry. Idk though, it's up to you. If players are ok with it I'm open to it. I personally don't think it's fair that new members get to bypass the first challenge while a couple get eliminated. 5 hours ago, Cantaloupe. said: SaintWest - 4 Dom - 3 Hurem - 2 Belle - 4 maraj - 5 Alpha - 1 Jonathan - 3 Desire - 3 Diva - 3 Alesus - 4 marn - 2 Bad things - 2 phoenix - 2 rian - 4 lawliet - 2 sabbath - 5 urban - 5 devon - 3 Riri - 1 @Fenrir this is everyone. Saved!
Fenrir Posted February 5, 2017 Posted February 5, 2017 Working on my scores/comments now. Results & Round 2 posted this evening.
URBAN Posted February 5, 2017 Posted February 5, 2017 1 hour ago, Fenrir said: Working on my scores/comments now. Results & Round 2 posted this evening. Finally!
Fenrir Posted February 5, 2017 Posted February 5, 2017 15 hours ago, Lawliet said: 2 Girl, you didn't even submit anything for Round 1! anyways ... rihsults coming in the next 15 mins!
Fenrir Posted February 5, 2017 Posted February 5, 2017 Round Two: Results Melon Hide contents Bad Things - I like it. The gold effect is cute. I read it as "GS" first though. 7/10Hurem - Really great! The only thing I can see wrong is the hard edges on some of the letters (A's, Y). 8/10Sabbath - This is cute. I wish you would've made your own fur instead of using a furry font. That way the hairs wouldn't be uniform on the repeating letters. But you're a beginner, so I'll cut you some slack. 7/10Alesus - Really well executed. You took something (Van Halen's logo) and made it your own. 8/10Dom - Reminds me of a baseball logo. It's nice, I just don't see Lana in it. 7/10Desire - I wish you could've found a way to make it work without the drop shadow. I'm not a fan of them. I still like it though. 7/10Alpha - This looks very... 2000s to me. Which is fitting. Wish you would've submitted a larger version so I could see the detail though. 7/10Urban - I just... don't know what this is. It looks like a jacket patch to me. The technical skill is there, but I can't see this as a logo at all. 7/10SaintWest - My favorite of the bunch. I don't really see anything to critique except that it isn't centered. 9/10Marnie - This looks more like a poster than a logo. 5/10theycallmemaraj -Super cute. Very One More Time. 8/10Bellerophon - Really good for a beginner that said they didn't know what they were doing. 7.5/10Jonathan - Same as Belle. I wish maybe you would've made the cloud the color of her album cover, but.. oh well. 7.5/10Rian - Oh Rian.. It reminds me of this. The others you made were very Hunger Games as well. Please, please, please don't back yourself into a Hunger Games corner with Jennifer. 7/10Riri - Reminds me of the Air Force logo? idk. That white outline is not IT either. 5/10Devon - You ain't right for this. But thievery aside.. If the shadow effect was solid, I would have liked it better. 6/10DivaCup - I don't know whether to applaud you for making something very Mariah-esque, or dock points for making something that looks like a logo she's already used. 7/10Flavs - Really good. I only have technical complaints. The galaxy effect changes in the second one you sent. I wish it was the same for both. These are smaller complaints: the top where the J and S meet, there's a drop off. Also you clipped some of the letters by cropping. Just work on polishing your entries up and slay sis. 8/10Phoenix - Very MySpace, like I already told you. But Leona rose to fame in the MS era, so.. 7.5/10 LiMe Hide contents Bad Things - 7.5/10 - I like it a lot! Though I wonder if it would have been more creative to experiment with joining the S and the G. Either way, it’s a nice design. Hurem - 7/10 - I feel like this doesn’t capture the spirit of what Lady Gaga is all about. It’s very bland. (but I believe you didn’t realise round 1 had already started until there was only 2 days left, so I’ll give you some slack). Sabbath - 7/10 - Cute! I like the cat theme, but I feel you could have been more creative with this by creating a silhouette of a cat with the Katy Perry text – or at the very least, you could have exaggerated some of the cat features more (making the tail in the Y longer and fluffier at the end, and lengthening and thinning the whisker to be more whisker-like – and something more imaginative with the cat nose). But very good round 1 effort! Alesus - 7.5/10 - The Van Halen’s logo controversy aside, I’m more impressed with the shading; it’s very nice and gives a slight metallic feel. That said, I don’t think the B works with this design (also it should have been a capital B), and the tip of the H wasn’t needed. Dom - 7/10 - I’m getting a cookbook vibe from this, which is okay. The ‘ana’ and ‘del rey’ text could have curved along the lower part of the L better though. Desire - 6.5/10 - The pastel colour choice you used for the text compliments the paint stroke perfectly. My only real issue with the design is the drop shadows, they weren’t needed. Alpha - 6.5/10 - Your design is okay. I feel something more creative could have been done with the text and the image you used, as right now the design feels a bit lifeless – mostly due to the font choice. Urban - 7/10 - Honestly… This is a real eye sore. The intensity of the colours do not blend well together at all, and that circular border sends a message that this logo is meant to be used on the packaging of the Fudge Brownie and Cookie mix that you buy at your local supermarket. That said, I like how you incorporated her face, I just think it could have been used in a more creative way, along with the text. SaintWest - 8.5/10 - I really like it! There isn’t much I can say about it, just that it’s really annoying that it isn’t centered – and the letter within the text is a bit weird. Marnie - 5.5/10 - Yeah, it’s more of a poster than a logo. But logos can be hard to come up with, especially within a week. Good effort though, but try to be more creative in the next rounds. theycallmemaraj - 7/10 - The colours are nice and vibrant, though that white gradient or lens flare in the centre was not needed in my opinion. Bellerophon - 6/10 - I like it. The only change I would make is having the strike behind Tiffany run along and acts as the horizontal line in the letter A (hopefully you understand what I mean, and that way it would give the strike more of a purpose).Jonathan - 6.5/10 - I like the simple design and colour you’ve used – though I wish the cloud wasn’t so grey. Apart from that there are only minor issues and improvements that you could have been done to lift your design further – such as fixing the cloud being cropped a bit at the bottom. Also you could have played around with layering some parts of the cloud above the text to give depth and the illusion that the text is sitting on the cloud. Good first round effort though.Rian. - 6.5/10 - There’s just something about the circular border and the hard, bold text that isn’t gelling with me. I know you can do better.Riri - 5.5/10 - I don’t really understand what is going on here. You can do much better than this, and try to be more creative next time.DevonDreams - 6/10 - I’m not quite sure you fully understood what the task was asking for. But anyway… the font choice and colours are good; it just doesn’t look like a professional logo.DivaCup - 7/10 - I don’t like the colour of this – it could have been much more vibrant, especially with the use of colour butterfly wing patterns. I think that’s the direction you should have taken this design in. Font choice is nice though.Flavs97 - 8.5/10 - Very well made! My only issue is where the J and S meet.Phoenixstar - 6.5/10 - I love how you added those music notes in that bigger log- no not really. I mean, I like the musical theme you’ve got going on, but the design is too messy – and some of the notes and lines don’t join together smoothly. I also think the design could have benefited from a simpler concept, maybe only taking 1 of the music notes and incorporating it into the L.For example: You know what they say, sometimes less is more. Fenrir Hide contents Bad Things - 7.5/10 - I think this is a solid effort. My only complaint, like Melon and LiMe stated, is with the big S & G. Hurem - 6.5/10 - I could see Gaga using a font like that .. but the entry as a whole doesn’t feel very “Gaga”. Sabbath - 8/10 - I love this. It’s very Katy. My only complaint is I wish you would’ve explored some of the creative possibilities that LiMe had mentioned. Alesus - 7.5/10 - If Diva hadn’t posted the Van Halen logo I wouldn’t have even known you took inspiration from it. I do like that you made it your own and freshened it up a bit, but I am docking you slightly just because it’s not totally your design. Dom - 7/10 - This is cute. I can kind of see Lana using a variation of this. I wish “Del Rey” were curved along the L better though. Desire - 8/10 - I love the colors and the font selection. Alpha - 6.5/10 - As much as I want to say I love this, there’s something about this I don’t like and I can’t put my finger on it. I do like the graphic inside the font though. URBAN - 7/10 - The color intensity is a bit off putting. (Is she looking at the Sun? Is she going to a rave with that neon lipstick? I just .. ) Not sure that this would make a great logo but I think this was a cute design that could’ve worked with a few adjustments. SaintWest - 9/10 - My favorite entry this round. Solid effort and my only complaint is that it isn’t properly centered. Otherwise, awesome job! Marnie - 5.5/10 - This makes for a cute poster but as a logo .. not so much. theycallmemaraj - 7/10 - This is very cute. I love the colors you chose. Not a huge fan of the lens flare though. Bellerophon - 7.5/10 - Nice effort for a newbie. I would’ve like this more if the swoop had expanded to reach the same height as the Y and connect. Jonathan - 7/10 - Really cute design. The cloud being cropped at the bottom is the biggest thing for me here. I think this is cute and a good Round 1 effort. Rian. - 8/10 - I thought overall this was good. No major complaints here, though, like Melon said try not to back yourself into the Hunger Games corner with JLaw. Riri - 5.5/10 - Not really sure what’s going on with this. I don’t mind the white border on the top graphic portion but I HATE the white border on the text. I know you can do a lot better than this. Devon - 6.5/10 - Cute, I guess? And I feel like I’ve seen this before? DivaCup - 7/10 - I think this is cute. I like the butterfly and the font you used. Not a huge fan of the coloring though. Flavs97 - 9/10 - A solid entry. Only complaint is with the smaller logo where you can see where you cropped the pic in the tail of the “J” and the middle curve of the “S”. Phoenixstar - 8/10 - Very cute. I like how you made it a music theme and how you incorporated the music notes into the design. Results Hide contents Latch was unavailable this round so there were quite a few ties this round but the bottom and top were very clear. 1. SaintWest - 8.82. Flavs - 8.53. Alesus - 7.74. Bad Things - 7.34. Sabbath - 7.34. theycallmemaraj - 7.34. Phoenix - 7.38. Desire - 7.28. Rian. - 7.28. Hurem - 7.211. Bellerophon - 7.011. Dom - 7.0 11. URBAN - 7.011. Jonathan - 7.011. DivaCup - 7.016. Alpha - 6.717. Devon 6.218. Marnie - 5.318. Riri - 5.3 Eliminated: Devon, Marnie, and Riri I’m sorry but you have been eliminated. For not submitting anything - Lawliet, BYoncé, & Satan you have been eliminated as well. Congratulations to the rest of you for making it to the next round! Round 2 will be posted shortly! Hide contents @URBAN @Lawliet @M A R N ✮ @theycallmemaraj @ririfan21 @Hurem @Bad Things @DivaCup @Bellerophon @Sabbath @Alpha @Rian. @SaintWest @Desire @BYoncé @Flavs97 @Jonathan @Phoenixstar @DevonDreams @Dom @Alesus @Satan @Latch @LiMe @Cantaloupe.
Alpha Posted February 5, 2017 Posted February 5, 2017 daaamn i was close to get eliminated with my 16th place. thanks for the fair reviews, logos ain't my thing so I'm happy that I somehow made it to the next round
Bellerophon Posted February 5, 2017 Posted February 5, 2017 Congrats everyone! Spoiler I agree my design was kinda basic and I didn't expand on it, but I have 0 experience with making logos so this and the feedback was awesome for learning.
Sabbath Posted February 5, 2017 Posted February 5, 2017 11 minutes ago, Fenrir said: by creating a silhouette of a cat with the Katy Perry text this is actually what I wanted to do but didn't know how thanks judges
Jonathan Posted February 5, 2017 Posted February 5, 2017 I barely made it whew Appreciated the feedback
Hurem Posted February 5, 2017 Posted February 5, 2017 Woo Thanks for not ****ting over my entry Ready for round 2!
Fenrir Posted February 5, 2017 Posted February 5, 2017 Congratulations on making it to Round Two! For this round you will be taking an already existing album cover and recreating it to the best of your ability using your celebrity. The number you have all selected corresponds with the album that you will be using for this challenge. The main idea of this challenge is to try and recreate the aesthetic but with your celebrity in place of the actual singer. You are going to keep the title of the album the same, but if the album you are given has the artist's name on it (In the case of Dangerous Woman, Mind of Mine, and Joanne.) you will put your celebrity's name in place of theirs. So if your celebrity is Rihanna and you have been given Joanne then your album cover should have Rihanna / Joanne on it. Albums 1. Starboy 2. Dangerous Woman 3. Joanne 4. ANTI 5. Mind of Mine List of Assigned Albums SaintWest - 4 Dom - 3 Hurem - 2 Belle - 4 theycallmemaraj - 5 Alpha - 1 Jonathan - 3 Desire - 3 Diva - 3 Alesus - 4 Bad things - 2 Phoenix - 2 Rian - 4 Flavs - 1 Sabbath - 5 URBAN - 5 Example (Courtesy of Melon): As always, we're here to help guide you if you need it. PM your entries to me please. DEADLINE: FRIDAY (2/10) @ 10pm EST @URBAN @theycallmemaraj @Hurem @Bad Things @DivaCup @Bellerophon @Sabbath @Alpha @Rian. @SaintWest @Desire @Flavs97 @Jonathan @Phoenixstar @Dom @Alesus @Latch @LiMe @Cantaloupe.
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