tournament Ultimate TABS S1 : The Ultimate TABS is BEYONCE (Touch It)

[Yvess]

2 minutes ago, Element said:

EP cover 0???? Tinashe should have an 8 from speezy

on the scorecard, i made it an 8.

 i just didnt get ot edit it bec it was a long time ago since i received his critiwues and i forgot i have to edit the scores on the announcement post, bnut odnt worry... the scores of speezy for covers and titles are all adjusted to the "formality" score

[Sabbath]

1 minute ago, Overprotected said:

I thought the idea was cool but cool doesn't get you a 3!

[Element]

Just now, Yvess said:

on the scorecard, i made it an 8.

 i just didnt get ot edit it bec it was a long time ago since i received his critiwues and i forgot i have to edit the scores on the announcement post, bnut odnt worry... the scores of speezy for covers and titles are all adjusted to the "formality" score

Ok good!!! This was just a test to see if we read the posts I see

[Yvess]

ELEMENT

EriKills - Tinashe

10

N/A = MENTOR

8

7

8.333333333

SABBATH

Invisibility - Madonna

10

8.5

7

N/A = MENTOR

8.5

a proof that in the scorecards sheet, it is adjusted. thanks

[Sabbath]

ok but the audience wants to know why @Speezy gave it a zero a kii

[Yvess]

Just now, Element said:

Ok good!!! This was just a test to see if we read the posts I see

 

yeah! thanks! IKnowYouCare.mp3 

[Sabbath]

7 minutes ago, Yvess said:

One minute I felt like I wanted to be Free next minute I felt like beating a bitch up and going to jail.

what's more freeing that beating a bitch up

[Overprotected]

1 minute ago, Sabbath said:

I thought the idea was cool but cool doesn't get you a 3!

Obese, glad I got one of your own killed

[Yvess]

C R I T I Q U E S  + S C O R E S

@Solarie

Solarie - Avril Lavigne & Elvis Presley - I Love You Tender

"LOVE"

Spoiler

Yvess - Solarie - 10

Title: 1/1

Cover: 1/1

Tracklist: 5/5

Explanation: 3/3

This is a solid EP for LOVE, the title is a kii but it is fine, the tracklist is flawless and I guess you used the explanation part so well.

Kudos because you did this kinda odd pairing work well to your favor.

 

Sabbath: Solarie - 8

Title: 1

Cover: 1 (It looks so well made btw)

Tracklist - 3/5:

The first Elvis song fits the theme, obviously, but I just wish the lyrics were more…MORE, you know, especially compared to the second track (Avril’s) where she’s so descriptive about her feelings. Can’t Help… is better and I think we all expected this choice (not a bad thing) and yeah, it’s definitely a classic. Wish it wasn’t as repetitive but I like the lyrics more than the ones in Love Me Tender. The second Avril song is again way stronger than the second Elvis song. I didn’t know this song but I actually enjoyed it a lot, the lyrics are very well written and get the Love theme across very nicely. 

Overall, I think this is nice but the Avril songs pretty much carried the EP because the Elvis songs were very basic lyric-wise.

 

Explanation - 3/3: Yeah, the explanation makes sense to me. And I agree the four songs feel “true” and be played at weddings. I get where you’re coming from even if the Elvis songs didn’t do that much for me compared to Avril’s.

 

Speezy - Solarie –  10
EP Cover : 1 | Tracklist 5 | Explanation: 3 |Title: 1
 Honestly I really don’t have complaints to be honest. Your explanation for the tracklisting and organization was spot on and I couldn’t see any flaws in your song choice. Love is one basic ass title but other than that  Slay I guess
 
 

[Sabbath]

Just now, Overprotected said:

Obese, glad I got one of your own killed

lemme just give you a 0 next round without seeing your entry

 

@Yvess

Sabbath: Overprotected - 0

pls take note ?

omg fastest judge award goes to...

[Yvess]

C R I T I Q U E S  + S C O R E S

 @PinkBox

PINKBOX - CÉLINE DION + ROBBIE WILLIAMS - Don't Surrender

"EMPOWERMENT"

Spoiler

Yvess - Pinkbox - 10

Title: 1/1

Cover: 1/1

Tracklist: 5/5

Explanation: 3/3

The title is kinda meh but it is fine. slay. slay. slay. slay. slay at the Celine tracks for the Robbie ones, I only liked one but I can tolerate the other one. I swear if you paid dust again to THAT'S THE WAY IT IS, I will literally call the cops. 

 

Element: PinkBox - 9/10

EP Title + Names - 1/1

EP Cover - 1/1

EP Tracklist - 4/5 - Okay let’s take this track by track. I get what you’re trying to accomplish with “I Will Talk” and I feel that the sweeping instrumental/melody is absolutely on point. Lyrically it’s solid -- I definitely enjoyed the line where he says he’d take back the rights/money to his books and movies. “The Power of the Dream” is absolutely phenomenal for this theme. The lyrics and composition really scream empowerment anthem. “Better Man” is another fair choice… probably the weakest on the EP to represent the theme. BUT THEN we get to one of my FAVORITE SONGS EVER. I love That’s The Way It is so much and it works really well for this theme ugh Celine is really an empowering queen isn’t she. That damn key change at the end. My wig! 

Explanation - 3/3 - Very in-depth and creative descriptions! I liked your interpretation of the theme. You crafted a believable narrative and united everything with a consistent sound as well. Great work.

 

Speezy - PINKBOX – 10
EP Cover : 1| Tracklist 5 | Explanation: 3 |Title: 1
Really good explanation, Cover could’ve been 1 photo. The tracklist is perfect and I’m currently going through a slight decline in my life and these songs did come through
Cute title
 

 

Edited August 27, 2019 by Yvess

[Yvess]

celine gets a 10 from speezy ok xoxox

[EriKills]

The Speezytage I- 

 

 

He really tried iT.

[Sabbath]

I CAN'T stand it even if it's my own team

[Yvess]

C R I T I Q U E S  + S C O R E S

 @Guero 

Guero - Ariana Grande + Bob Marley - Champagne Jammin'

"FUN" 

Spoiler

Yvess - Guero - 7

Title: 1/1

Cover: 1/1

Tracklist: 4/5

Explanation: 1/3

This EP kinda made me feel like you had a rough time but I guess you still kinda pulled through. The tracklist is not that stellar but I can see why you chose it. Did it work though? Hmmmm. The explanation was kinda a letdown, The deadline was for four days and it seems like it was a bit rushed or you just forgot that the explanation this time holds a huge percent in the scoring. 

 

Sabbath: Guero - 5.5

Title: 1

Cover: 1

Tracklist - 2: I wasn’t expecting Pink Champagne #shook. The song itself it’s pretty meh, it sounds kinda childish even, I get the lyrics about partying and stuff but I feel like it falls a little short. Funky Reggae Party I like better, it has the right vibe and the lyrics paint this image of a fun party better than the Ari song, it even says that no boring farts are allowed kii. 

I don’t think successful fits the theme at all :dead banana: like yeah, she says she’s having fun but the song itself isn’t about the fun she’s having but about being proud of her accomplishments. Lastly, from jamming, I get that jamming brings him joy and it’s something he likes to do so that’s fun but it’s kind of a stretch. 

 

Explanation - 1.5: The explanations are fine, I wish you pulled a Solarie and did an “overall explanation” of your concept that helped put everything together. Overall the entire entry is kinda underwhelming.

 

Speezy – Guero -  7.5
   EP Cover : 1| Tracklist 4 | Explanation: 1.5 |Title: 1
Girl…GIRL. First the cover was cute but I was expecting a single cover like what majority of your competition did. Even a photo of a beer could’ve got you the full point.  Next issue is Succesful, At one point in my stan career I did support Ariane but Succesful does not fit in here in my opinion. 7 Rings could’ve worked. Your explanation was cute but what you could’ve done is explained your cover a bit.

 

 

[Element]

6 minutes ago, Sabbath said:

ok but the audience wants to know why @Speezy gave it a zero a kii

He didn’t like the pictures!!!

[Yvess]

3 minutes ago, Sabbath said:

lemme just give you a 0 next round without seeing your entry

 

@Yvess

Sabbath: Overprotected - 0

pls take note ?

omg fastest judge award goes to...

BITCHHHHH!  

*accepts it*

[Yvess]

Speezy tried to go risque route ala Sabbath  

[EriKills]

Not a 19 total points, even Pinkbox’s score being OBESE

[Yvess]

C R I T I Q U E S  + S C O R E S

@Touch It 

TOUCH IT - BEYONCE + BRUNO MARS - Vanilla vs. Kinky

"SEX"

Spoiler

Yvess - Touch It - 10

Title: 1/1Cover: 1/1

Tracklist: 5/5

Explanation: 3/3

The swift submission is very commendable. You had it so easy in this round but you didnt let that make you complacent because you were able to send in a solid entry. SLAY THAT TRACKLIST! It is screaminggggg sex!

All eyes are on you since Day 1 and you are proving to us why you are the girl to beat.

 

Sabbath: Touch It - 10

Title: 1

Cover: 1

Tracklist: 5 - goodbye, i don’t think you need the critique, you nailed this, i love the concept, i love the songs, have a good day.

Explanation: 3- goodbye, i don’t think you need the critique, you nailed this, i love the concept, i love the songs, have a good day.

 

Element: Touch It - 10/10

EP Title + Names - 1/1

EP Cover - 1/1

EP Tracklist - 5/5 - YES to all four songs. You really made out so well with these two artists for this challenge!

Explanation - 3/3 - I think you did a good job explaining the inclusion of all the songs in this EP. You walked us through multiple sides of sexual experiences.

[Yvess]

1 minute ago, EriKills said:

Not a 19 total points, even Pinkbox’s score being OBESE

BIIIIITTTTCCCCHHHH..... it's early in the morning here  

[Sabbath]

Obesebox losing the immunity to his own ex-teammate

that's what you get for saying spizza4ever, BITCH! @PinkBox

[Yvess]

Bottom Tier

6	SABBATH	KatyCatPH - Taylor Swift	7.66	not safe
7	SPEEZY	Overprotected - Björk	7.16	not safe
8	ELEMENT	Guero - Ariana Grande	6.66	not safe

[Invisibility]

11 minutes ago, Yvess said:

 

ELEMENT

EriKills - Tinashe

10

N/A = MENTOR

8

7

8.333333333

SABBATH

Invisibility - Madonna

10

8.5

7

N/A = MENTOR

8.5

a proof that in the scorecards sheet, it is adjusted. thanks

Just arrived but thanks for this post I was about to ask for clarification of why I had a 6.5 from Speezy when the sum gave 7

Quick legend

[Sabbath]

2 minutes ago, EriKills said:

Not a 19 total points, even Pinkbox’s score being OBESE

it's 29 not 19 you DUMB CLOWN

Erikills: dumb pig

Pinkbox: loser whale

 

luv this round!