Guero Posted June 18, 2019 Posted June 18, 2019 1 hour ago, Yvess said: Thanks @Speezy 2/5 critiques in well @Sabbath @Element
Sabbath Posted June 18, 2019 Posted June 18, 2019 27 minutes ago, Guero said: well @Sabbath @Element im on it
ATRL Moderator Element Posted June 18, 2019 ATRL Moderator Posted June 18, 2019 very strong submissions across the board this round
Yvess Posted June 18, 2019 Author Posted June 18, 2019 Element submitted his critiques already 3/5 CRITIQUES IN
thecptz Posted June 18, 2019 Posted June 18, 2019 4 minutes ago, Element said: very strong submissions across the board this round TYC (type your critiques)
Yvess Posted June 18, 2019 Author Posted June 18, 2019 @Speezy'S CRITIQUES TEAM ELEMENT Mentor: @Element Members: @Solarie @Not Like The Movies @kiiwii @Guero @PoKiTaurus Guero - Ariana Grande Bloodline (LUDUS) Spoiler Speezy: Guero - Arianae Grande Hits the spot pretty well. She just wants to let her coochie get pulverized and enjoy it and move on and let the next guy do it. But while they may fall in love, shes the one having fun toying with them kiiwii - Katy Perry Double Rainbow (STORGE) Spoiler Speezy: kiiwii - Katy Perry Girl what was you drinking when you sent this. Storge to me is something between family-TO-family or cousins…rarely in a partner. It’s sort of like “I’ll love you no matter what you do” I can only give you points on sending in a entry and The song at least touching the “Happiness” , and of Storge. The reason you got the score you did because it lacked “togetherness (activities), familiarity” and had some type of Mania/Agape vibe to it. Not Like The Movies - Janelle Monae Can't Live Without Your Love (MANIA) Spoiler Speezy: Not Like The Movies - Janelle Monae Wow this is really good. It has that stalker vibe that Mania has. How he can treat her any type of way and shell still be in love. But my only issue is that it lacks madness/ controlling that Mania has PoKiTaurus - Mariah Carey I'll Be There (AGAPE) Spoiler Speezy: PoKiTaurus - Mariah Carey Well talent pulled through. This was a cute entry. Its reassuring that she’ll be then whenever and what ever happens in his life. But this is borderline Mania as well from the lines “Build my world of dreams around you,” and ” Togetherness, well it's all I'm after,” Solarie - Avril Lavigne Don't Stop (EROS) Spoiler Speezy: Solarie - Avril Lavigne Honestly this is a reverse Conchita Wurst experience. It lacks on sexual nature but expands on the “I want you” side of EROS xoxo
Yvess Posted June 18, 2019 Author Posted June 18, 2019 @Speezy'S CRITIQUES TEAM SABBATH Mentor: @Sabbath Members: @KatyCatPH @Psycho @thecptz @Alena @PinkBox Alena - Selena Gomez Cologne (MANIA) Spoiler Speezy: Alena - Selena Gomez This definitely channels Mania. I think shes crazy about her past lover in this one and cant go over it. This straddles the madness of Mania and psycho path part. It tells a story and tackles Mania a bit better than Janelle KatyCatPH - Taylor Swift Breathless (AGAPE) Spoiler Speezy: KatyCatPH - Taylor Swift This is very solid, I don’t think anyone could go very wrong with this flavor. Its accepting with open arms.Speezy: Psycho - Lady Gaga Pokerface (LUDUS) Spoiler Psycho - Lady Gaga Shes basically saying that shes having sex for fun and WONT Lie. {SEE BRIDGE} The song is very cute but it takes a listener and investigator to notice this is a sex bop Pinkbox - Hymne à l'Amitié (STORGE) Spoiler Speezy: Pinkbox – Celine Dion Yes friends are all we have when we run from our family or spouses. It’s a friendly song but it lacks some sort of love-ish. Like “ I love how you make dumb ass mistakes but I’m not cutting you off” thecptz - Kacey Musgraves Family is Family (STORGE) Spoiler Speezy: thecptz - Kacey Musgraves This is more like Storge than your counterpart/Storge Rival Katy. This touches on how family is your family no matter what and sometime you gotta love them no matter what. It does lack the love aspect though that Katy’s had xox
ATRL Moderator Element Posted June 18, 2019 ATRL Moderator Posted June 18, 2019 Wow speezy is hard to please this round
Yvess Posted June 18, 2019 Author Posted June 18, 2019 1 minute ago, Element said: Wow speezy is hard to please this round yes he is!
thecptz Posted June 18, 2019 Posted June 18, 2019 15 minutes ago, Yvess said: It does lack the love aspect though that Katy’s had huh
Speezy Posted June 18, 2019 Posted June 18, 2019 14 minutes ago, Element said: Wow speezy is hard to please this round No one got sabotaged about 9/10 got equal or above 7 .
Yvess Posted June 18, 2019 Author Posted June 18, 2019 @Element's CRITIQUES TEAM SPEEZY Mentor: @Speezy Members: @Loyalty @Boys @Queen Conchita @Touch It Boys - Britney Spears Scary (MANIA) Spoiler Element: Boys Freaking fantastic. The theme pervades the entire song lyrically, and shows that not only does she feel this obsessive way, but she wants to bring her object of affection down into the dark place with her. She feels that she needs this man to suffer from insanity in the same way. Finally, even though we aren’t judging it, the production has pacing and instrumentation that drive home her maniacal tendencies. Loyalty - Christina Aguilera Falling In Love Again (LUDUS) Spoiler Element: Loyalty On the bright side, there are definitely lyrics that hint at ~ludus~ in this song. She suggests that many men come to her, but if they get burned, it’s not her fault. Love is a game to her… but then we get into the negatives. I don’t feel as if she’s necessarily seeking out this conquest and purposefully trying to play the game. It seems as if it just happens and she actually does fall in love with them at times? Whereas ludus might be a bit more uncommitted and surface level, this song suggests more depth to the relationships. I don’t get the sense of flirting, fun, and euphoria that we are looking for. And yes, after awhile, it gets very repetitive with the lyrics. If she had provided more descriptive and specific examples throughout the song, I think this entry would have been much stronger. Queen Conchita - Conchita Wurst Out of Body Experience (EROS) Spoiler Element: Queen Conchita This is pretty good. I wish it could have been a bit more aggresively dirty to drive home the erotic theme, but Conchita definitely has enough metaphors and suggestive lines throughout the song to make it fit. Touch It - Beyonce Die With You (AGAPE) Spoiler Element: Touch It I think that this is a beautiful song that sums up the idea of agape pretty well, if not a bit metaphorically. Some of the lines are so powerful -- like how she describes not needing certain parts of her body unless they can help her love in some way. This song definitely feels like she is on a higher spiritual plane with her husband. I would have liked to see a few less “if” statements, and more tangible, factual declarations of her sacrifices. XOXO
Solarie Posted June 18, 2019 Posted June 18, 2019 Why can't I see Speezy's critiques for Team Sabbotage?
thecptz Posted June 18, 2019 Posted June 18, 2019 1 minute ago, Solarie said: Why can't I see Speezy's critiques for Team Sabbotage? well i can see them
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