beatinglikeadrum Posted May 15, 2018 Posted May 15, 2018 7 hours ago, Aurora said: I'm late but yes, the whole entry should be under 330 words to qualify for that star challenge. It's almost 100 words more than the Twitter challenge, so repeats being counted is relatively fair. By comparison, you wouldn't call a 3:30 song a 3:00 song because the last chorus repeats for 30 seconds, would you? As far as I remember in PH 10 in twitter challenge repeated choruses and Pre-chorouses didn't count though.
Galah Posted May 15, 2018 Author Posted May 15, 2018 4 minutes ago, beatinglikeadrum said: As far as I remember in PH 10 in twitter challenge repeated choruses and Pre-chorouses didn't count though. This is correct. This is where it differs from that challenge. 90 more words, no repeats allowed. i.e. if you have a 30 word chorus, and it repeats three times, that will count for 90 words of your 330 total, not 30 as it would in previous Twitter challenges.
Citrus Posted May 15, 2018 Posted May 15, 2018 Also keep in mind that the platinum challenges don't matter
Temporal Posted May 15, 2018 Posted May 15, 2018 I haven’t started writing and idk if I’m gonna be able to send this round don’t @ me
UFO Posted May 15, 2018 Posted May 15, 2018 (edited) RINGS OF SATURN Flower: Heliotrope, which represents eternal love. Hide contents HOOK You are scattered I'm so shattered Pieces of us Rings of Saturn VERSE The cold echoes of the dark matter Like nothing mattered, stars manufactured And all of my dreams were mindless movies But you were my first, the moon to embrace me Two broken stars made one supernova We formed these rings to complete the other We connected through hurt energy A meteor hit you from Jupiter Towards the corners of the Universe But I will find you like how life found the Earth HOOK You are scattered I'm so shattered Pieces of us Rings of Saturn CHORUS My pull Your push I keep on circling the Universe Other pieces To find I have your heart And our rings of Saturn are infinite And I shall wear them for eternity And I shall keep them using gravity I wish I were there like you're here with me VERSE The warm echoes of your light purple Everything's changed, no star compares to you And all of my dreams were mindless movies But you were my first, the story of my youth Two shining stars made one supernova We'll only ever die as one, not two In my heart you're still in orbit In my mind you're still alive too I still believe in another universe With not just parts of you, but all of you HOOK You are scattered I'm so shattered Pieces of us Rings of Saturn CHORUS My pull Your push I keep on circling the Universe Other pieces To find I have your heart And our rings of Saturn are infinite And I shall wear them for eternity And I shall keep them using gravity I wish I were there like you're here with me BRIDGE All of my moons, all of these stars All of our rings are made of sparks of us Parts of you crushed floated my way My ice, your flame formed this beauty A river of us flowing from my core Deep within but you're further than before All of my moons, all of these stars All of our rings are made of sparks of us I may not be there, I may not be there But you're here with me, but you're here with me Rings of Saturn - eternal memories Like how the day leaves the sun for the moon In the eclipse the sun's blocked from the view But the sun will keep on shining And the sun has kept on shining CHORUS My pull Your push I keep on circling the Universe Other pieces To find I have your heart And our rings of Saturn are infinite And I shall wear them for eternity And I shall keep them using gravity I wish I were there like you're here with me HOOK You are scattered I'm so shattered Pieces of us Rings of Saturn Island - 5,836,000 [#14] // Rings of Saturn - 7,364,000 [#11] Edited May 15, 2018 by UFO
MattyTacos Posted May 16, 2018 Posted May 16, 2018 36 minutes ago, UFO said: RINGS OF SATURN Flower: Heliotrope, which represents eternal love. Hide contents HOOK You are scattered I'm so shattered Pieces of us Rings of Saturn VERSE The cold echoes of the dark matter Like nothing mattered, stars manufactured And all of my dreams were mindless movies But you were my first, the moon to embrace me Two broken stars made one supernova We formed these rings to complete the other We connected through hurt energy A meteor hit you from Jupiter Towards the corners of the Universe But I will find you like how life found the Earth HOOK You are scattered I'm so shattered Pieces of us Rings of Saturn CHORUS My pull Your push I keep on circling the Universe Other pieces To find I have your heart And our rings of Saturn are infinite And I shall wear them for eternity And I shall keep them using gravity I wish I were there like you're here with me VERSE The warm echoes of your light purple Everything's changed, no star compares to you And all of my dreams were mindless movies But you were my first, the story of my youth Two shining stars made one supernova We'll only ever die as one, not two In my heart you're still in orbit In my mind you're still alive too I still believe in another universe With not just parts of you, but all of you HOOK You are scattered I'm so shattered Pieces of us Rings of Saturn CHORUS My pull Your push I keep on circling the Universe Other pieces To find I have your heart And our rings of Saturn are infinite And I shall wear them for eternity And I shall keep them using gravity I wish I were there like you're here with me BRIDGE All of my moons, all of these stars All of our rings are made of sparks of us Parts of you crushed floated my way My ice, your flame formed this beauty A river of us flowing from my core Deep within but you're further than before All of my moons, all of these stars All of our rings are made of sparks of us I may not be there, I may not be there But you're here with me, but you're here with me Rings of Saturn - eternal memories Like how the day leaves the sun for the moon In the eclipse the sun's blocked from the view But the sun will keep on shining And the sun has kept on shining CHORUS My pull Your push I keep on circling the Universe Other pieces To find I have your heart And our rings of Saturn are infinite And I shall wear them for eternity And I shall keep them using gravity I wish I were there like you're here with me HOOK You are scattered I'm so shattered Pieces of us Rings of Saturn Island - 5,836,000 [#14] // Rings of Saturn - 7,364,000 [#11] I will find you like life found the Earth bIIIIIIITTTTCHHH
UFO Posted May 16, 2018 Posted May 16, 2018 1 hour ago, MattyTacos said: I will find you like life found the Earth bIIIIIIITTTTCHHH ajdhsajkfsaf THANK YOU SIS
Citrus Posted May 16, 2018 Posted May 16, 2018 5 hours ago, Temporal said: I haven’t started writing and idk if I’m gonna be able to send this round don’t @ me What a fat statement
RihsusChrist(ATG) Posted May 16, 2018 Posted May 16, 2018 @Aurora I sent you my entry Judges get ready to bop!
Kunst Posted May 16, 2018 Posted May 16, 2018 @swiftie13can u confirm if you got my entry ? unhealthy hook up cheating on my boyfriend kind of ****. inspired by a story i told in discord a whole ago
Xedretinz Lododnz Posted May 16, 2018 Posted May 16, 2018 me trying hard to think but can't think of anything me searching for nothing
Galah Posted May 17, 2018 Author Posted May 17, 2018 I have entries from the following: 1. beatinglikeadrum 2. Nait Phoenix 3. minho 4. Citrus 5. Obsession 6. SeanKevinMusic 7. RihsusChrist(ATG) 8. Overprotected 9. Kylie Jenner 10. UFO 11. Gastrodonatella 12. Xedredtinz Lododnz 13. Tsareena 14. PoKiTaurus There's just under an hour to submit before the deadline, there won't necessarily be a penalty for late submissions due to people still experiencing server issues and not seeing the challenge post/deadline the day it was posted, but please just make sure they're not too late! Round 4 is going to be make-or-break, so you want to be a part of this one... @Gastrodonatella@Corsola@Citrus@ceremonials@Temporal@Kylie Jenner@Achilles.@conatus@Kunst@minho@UFO@Obsession@OreGuy@PoKiTaurus@Speezy@Auburn@Tsareena@MattyTacos@r.e.m.@Nait Phoenix@Overprotected@beatinglikeadrum@Body Talk⠀@RihsusChrist(ATG)@SeanKevinMusic@Xedretinz Lododnz
Galah Posted May 17, 2018 Author Posted May 17, 2018 3 hours ago, Kunst said: @swiftie13can u confirm if you got my entry ? unhealthy hook up cheating on my boyfriend kind of ****. inspired by a story i told in discord a whole ago Please submit to me.
Kunst Posted May 17, 2018 Posted May 17, 2018 15 minutes ago, Aurora said: Please submit to me. just sent it to you britney, sweetie, i’m sorry
Speezy Posted May 17, 2018 Posted May 17, 2018 22 minutes ago, Aurora said: I have entries from the following: 1. beatinglikeadrum 2. Nait Phoenix 3. minho 4. Citrus 5. Obsession 6. SeanKevinMusic 7. RihsusChrist(ATG) 8. Overprotected 9. Kylie Jenner 10. UFO 11. Gastrodonatella 12. Xedredtinz Lododnz 13. Tsareena 14. PoKiTaurus There's just under an hour to submit before the deadline, there won't necessarily be a penalty for late submissions due to people still experiencing server issues and not seeing the challenge post/deadline the day it was posted, but please just make sure they're not too late! Round 4 is going to be make-or-break, so you want to be a part of this one... @Gastrodonatella@Corsola@Citrus@ceremonials@Temporal@Kylie Jenner@Achilles.@conatus@Kunst@minho@UFO@Obsession@OreGuy@PoKiTaurus@Speezy@Auburn@Tsareena@MattyTacos@r.e.m.@Nait Phoenix@Overprotected@beatinglikeadrum@Body Talk⠀@RihsusChrist(ATG)@SeanKevinMusic@Xedretinz Lododnz Another minor edit and I’m ready to send I rihfuse to come this far to fall again. I don’t want to fall for it now
Galah Posted May 17, 2018 Author Posted May 17, 2018 9 minutes ago, Kunst said: just sent it to you britney, sweetie, i’m sorry Received, thanks! 1 minute ago, Speezy said: Another minor edit and I’m ready to send I rihfuse to come this far to fall again. I don’t want to fall for it now
Galah Posted May 17, 2018 Author Posted May 17, 2018 15. Kunst 16. Speezy 17. Temporal 18. Achilles. 19. Auburn And with that, the deadline is up. Entries will still be accepted over the next 24 hours, but please try to get them in as soon as possible. The server seems to be somewhat stable this week, so hopefully we can host a proper results show.
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