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Posted
7 hours ago, Aurora said:

I'm late but yes, the whole entry should be under 330 words to qualify for that star challenge. It's almost 100 words more than the Twitter challenge, so repeats being counted is relatively fair. By comparison, you wouldn't call a 3:30 song a 3:00 song because the last chorus repeats for 30 seconds, would you?

As far as I remember in PH 10 in twitter challenge repeated choruses and Pre-chorouses didn't count though. 

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Posted
4 minutes ago, beatinglikeadrum said:

As far as I remember in PH 10 in twitter challenge repeated choruses and Pre-chorouses didn't count though. 

This is correct. This is where it differs from that challenge. 90 more words, no repeats allowed.

 

i.e. if you have a 30 word chorus, and it repeats three times, that will count for 90 words of your 330 total, not 30 as it would in previous Twitter challenges.

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Also keep in mind that

 

the platinum challenges

 

don't matter

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2 nd official cover

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I haven’t started writing and idk if I’m gonna be able to send this round don’t @ me

Posted (edited)

RINGS OF SATURN

Flower: Heliotrope, which represents eternal love.

 

ssi8hKM.png

 

  Hide contents

 

HOOK
You are scattered
I'm so shattered
Pieces of us
Rings of Saturn

 

VERSE
The cold echoes of the dark matter
Like nothing mattered, stars manufactured
And all of my dreams were mindless movies 
But you were my first, the moon to embrace me
Two broken stars made one supernova
We formed these rings to complete the other
We connected through hurt energy
A meteor hit you from Jupiter
Towards the corners of the Universe
But I will find you like how life found the Earth

 

HOOK
You are scattered
I'm so shattered
Pieces of us
Rings of Saturn

 

CHORUS
My pull
Your push
I keep on circling the Universe
Other pieces
To find
I have your heart
And our rings of Saturn are infinite
And I shall wear them for eternity
And I shall keep them using gravity
I wish I were there like you're here with me

 

VERSE
The warm echoes of your light purple
Everything's changed, no star compares to you
And all of my dreams were mindless movies
But you were my first, the story of my youth
Two shining stars made one supernova
We'll only ever die as one, not two
In my heart you're still in orbit
In my mind you're still alive too
I still believe in another universe
With not just parts of you, but all of you

 

HOOK
You are scattered
I'm so shattered
Pieces of us
Rings of Saturn

 

CHORUS
My pull
Your push
I keep on circling the Universe
Other pieces
To find
I have your heart
And our rings of Saturn are infinite
And I shall wear them for eternity
And I shall keep them using gravity
I wish I were there like you're here with me

 

BRIDGE
All of my moons, all of these stars
All of our rings are made of sparks of us
Parts of you crushed floated my way
My ice, your flame formed this beauty
A river of us flowing from my core
Deep within but you're further than before

All of my moons, all of these stars
All of our rings are made of sparks of us
I may not be there, I may not be there
But you're here with me, but you're here with me
Rings of Saturn - eternal memories
Like how the day leaves the sun for the moon
In the eclipse the sun's blocked from the view
But the sun will keep on shining
And the sun has kept on shining

 

CHORUS
My pull
Your push
I keep on circling the Universe
Other pieces
To find
I have your heart
And our rings of Saturn are infinite
And I shall wear them for eternity
And I shall keep them using gravity
I wish I were there like you're here with me

 

HOOK
You are scattered
I'm so shattered
Pieces of us
Rings of Saturn

 

 

Island - 5,836,000 [#14] // Rings of Saturn - 7,364,000 [#11]

 

Edited by UFO
Posted
36 minutes ago, UFO said:

RINGS OF SATURN

Flower: Heliotrope, which represents eternal love.

 

ssi8hKM.png

 

  Hide contents

 

HOOK
You are scattered
I'm so shattered
Pieces of us
Rings of Saturn

 

VERSE
The cold echoes of the dark matter
Like nothing mattered, stars manufactured
And all of my dreams were mindless movies 
But you were my first, the moon to embrace me
Two broken stars made one supernova
We formed these rings to complete the other
We connected through hurt energy
A meteor hit you from Jupiter
Towards the corners of the Universe
But I will find you like how life found the Earth

 

HOOK
You are scattered
I'm so shattered
Pieces of us
Rings of Saturn

 

CHORUS
My pull
Your push
I keep on circling the Universe
Other pieces
To find
I have your heart
And our rings of Saturn are infinite
And I shall wear them for eternity
And I shall keep them using gravity
I wish I were there like you're here with me

 

VERSE
The warm echoes of your light purple
Everything's changed, no star compares to you
And all of my dreams were mindless movies
But you were my first, the story of my youth
Two shining stars made one supernova
We'll only ever die as one, not two
In my heart you're still in orbit
In my mind you're still alive too
I still believe in another universe
With not just parts of you, but all of you

 

HOOK
You are scattered
I'm so shattered
Pieces of us
Rings of Saturn

 

CHORUS
My pull
Your push
I keep on circling the Universe
Other pieces
To find
I have your heart
And our rings of Saturn are infinite
And I shall wear them for eternity
And I shall keep them using gravity
I wish I were there like you're here with me

 

BRIDGE
All of my moons, all of these stars
All of our rings are made of sparks of us
Parts of you crushed floated my way
My ice, your flame formed this beauty
A river of us flowing from my core
Deep within but you're further than before

All of my moons, all of these stars
All of our rings are made of sparks of us
I may not be there, I may not be there
But you're here with me, but you're here with me
Rings of Saturn - eternal memories
Like how the day leaves the sun for the moon
In the eclipse the sun's blocked from the view
But the sun will keep on shining
And the sun has kept on shining

 

CHORUS
My pull
Your push
I keep on circling the Universe
Other pieces
To find
I have your heart
And our rings of Saturn are infinite
And I shall wear them for eternity
And I shall keep them using gravity
I wish I were there like you're here with me

 

HOOK
You are scattered
I'm so shattered
Pieces of us
Rings of Saturn

 

 

Island - 5,836,000 [#14] // Rings of Saturn - 7,364,000 [#11]

 

I will find you like life found the Earth :jonny5:bIIIIIIITTTTCHHH

Posted
1 hour ago, MattyTacos said:

I will find you like life found the Earth :jonny5:bIIIIIIITTTTCHHH

ajdhsajkfsaf THANK YOU SIS :heart2:  :jonny::jonny2: 

Posted
5 hours ago, Temporal said:

I haven’t started writing and idk if I’m gonna be able to send this round don’t @ me

What a fat statement 

Posted

@Aurora I sent you my entry

 

Judges get ready to bop!

Vintage GIF

Posted

Ok I have something wig! let me send :duca: 

Posted

me searching for ideas in my brain:

2n1eykh.jpg

Posted

Me searching for verses and a bridge

 

2n1eykh.jpg 

Posted

@swiftie13can u confirm if you got my entry ? 

 

unhealthy hook up cheating on my boyfriend kind of ****. inspired by a story i told in discord a whole ago :fan:

Posted

me trying hard to think but can't think of anything

Vintage GIF

 

me searching for nothing

2n1eykh.jpg

Posted

ok I tried so hard and sent @Aurora

Posted

I have entries from the following:

 

1. beatinglikeadrum

2. Nait Phoenix

3. minho

4. Citrus

5. Obsession

6. SeanKevinMusic

7. RihsusChrist(ATG)

8. Overprotected

9. Kylie Jenner

10. UFO

11. Gastrodonatella

12. Xedredtinz Lododnz

13. Tsareena

14. PoKiTaurus

 

There's just under an hour to submit before the deadline, there won't necessarily be a penalty for late submissions due to people still experiencing server issues and not seeing the challenge post/deadline the day it was posted, but please just make sure they're not too late! Round 4 is going to be make-or-break, so you want to be a part of this one...

 

@Gastrodonatella@Corsola@Citrus@ceremonials@Temporal@Kylie Jenner@Achilles.@conatus@Kunst@minho@UFO@Obsession@OreGuy@PoKiTaurus@Speezy@Auburn@Tsareena@MattyTacos@r.e.m.@Nait Phoenix@Overprotected@beatinglikeadrum@Body Talk⠀@RihsusChrist(ATG)@SeanKevinMusic@Xedretinz Lododnz

Posted
3 hours ago, Kunst said:

@swiftie13can u confirm if you got my entry ? 

 

unhealthy hook up cheating on my boyfriend kind of ****. inspired by a story i told in discord a whole ago :fan:

Please submit to me.

Posted
15 minutes ago, Aurora said:

Please submit to me.

just sent it to you

 

britney, sweetie, i’m sorry :dancehall2:

Posted
22 minutes ago, Aurora said:

I have entries from the following:

 

1. beatinglikeadrum

2. Nait Phoenix

3. minho

4. Citrus

5. Obsession

6. SeanKevinMusic

7. RihsusChrist(ATG)

8. Overprotected

9. Kylie Jenner

10. UFO

11. Gastrodonatella

12. Xedredtinz Lododnz

13. Tsareena

14. PoKiTaurus

 

There's just under an hour to submit before the deadline, there won't necessarily be a penalty for late submissions due to people still experiencing server issues and not seeing the challenge post/deadline the day it was posted, but please just make sure they're not too late! Round 4 is going to be make-or-break, so you want to be a part of this one...

 

@Gastrodonatella@Corsola@Citrus@ceremonials@Temporal@Kylie Jenner@Achilles.@conatus@Kunst@minho@UFO@Obsession@OreGuy@PoKiTaurus@Speezy@Auburn@Tsareena@MattyTacos@r.e.m.@Nait Phoenix@Overprotected@beatinglikeadrum@Body Talk⠀@RihsusChrist(ATG)@SeanKevinMusic@Xedretinz Lododnz

Another minor edit and I’m ready to send 

I rihfuse to come this far to fall again. I don’t want to fall for it now 

Posted
9 minutes ago, Kunst said:

just sent it to you

 

britney, sweetie, i’m sorry :dancehall2:

Received, thanks!

 

1 minute ago, Speezy said:

Another minor edit and I’m ready to send 

I rihfuse to come this far to fall again. I don’t want to fall for it now 

:duca:

Posted

15. Kunst

16. Speezy

17. Temporal

18. Achilles.

19. Auburn

 

And with that, the deadline is up. Entries will still be accepted over the next 24 hours, but please try to get them in as soon as possible. The server seems to be somewhat stable this week, so hopefully we can host a proper results show.

Posted

100 pages of talent. I cry.

 

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