UFO Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 @Hug I'll ask you because I feel more comfortable talking to you than other mods. Do threadbans ever get lifted?
Hug Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 Just now, UFO said: @Hug I'll ask you because I feel more comfortable talking to you than other mods. Do threadbans ever get lifted? It really...depends on the severity. By default, they last two weeks. If two weeks pass and it doesn't get lifted, make a post in HQ or send a HR.
UFO Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 11 minutes ago, Hug said: It really...depends on the severity. By default, they last two weeks. If two weeks pass and it doesn't get lifted, make a post in HQ or send a HR. Thank you! I'll just wait it out. nn at least it wasn't her album thread.
ultraviolence.xx Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 33 minutes ago, Corsola said: me reading ur song
ultraviolence.xx Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 25 minutes ago, UFO said: THANK YOU @ultraviolence.xx I really need this right now! also had to google some words but YAS, king of maximalism!!!! you're reminding me of the great sis @Meowster, making my song sound much better than it actually is THANK YOU yes! I try to stick to a central metaphor as much as possible and I was WAY worse with that in the past, but I still love veering out here and there into other imagery. omg STAN "And my thoughts kept rising / And my heart kept hunting / And the waves kept charging" I love that part too. and I love the lyric you chose! not gonna lie, writing the bridge made me VERY emotional. ahh i'm so glad you liked it! yeah, the bridge felt very raw. glad you slayed!
ultraviolence.xx Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 26 minutes ago, Auburn said: @ultraviolence.xx thank u for the lovely review you're welcome! thank you for the lovely song
MattyTacos Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 (edited) 1 hour ago, UFO said: I'm lowkey upset ATRL is way too conservative and restricting in my opinion, and there's literally SO many people being messy. ajfasfakajs hopefully I'm not the only one thread-banned because that's seriously crappy. Like people literally posted that they're happy Avicii's death is not affecting Ari's comeback single and I'm the one who gets thread-banned for posting this pic of Frankie: That's...messy Let me confront the base and see whats up someone who really hates frankie prolly did it also i have no clue what flower im using nnn Edited April 21, 2018 by MattyTacos
ultraviolence.xx Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 5 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: we got like 75 pages from round 1 and now we're on round 2 and hurricane discord killed the ratings even my late reviews couldn't save them
ultraviolence.xx Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 Just now, swiftie13 said: My reviews having no ratings honestly i didn't even know you posted them dkjahsdf i never saw them
Citrus Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 Me snatching a Top 3 hit with an experimental R&B influenced breakup song. Lemme call Tamar and Babyface for this flower round.
ultraviolence.xx Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 1 minute ago, Citrus said: Me snatching a Top 3 hit with an experimental R&B influenced breakup song. Lemme call Tamar and Babyface for this flower round. me still nutting at verse 2
Hug Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 I can't believe I finished my song before basically every contestant
ultraviolence.xx Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 1 minute ago, Hug said: I can't believe I finished my song before basically every contestant aksjdhf i'm about to read it
Kylie Jenner Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 Is there someone I can send the first draft of my song to x
beatinglikeadrum Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 I think I'm gonna take a risk with rhythm of the song. I'm gonna try this thing when in one line you end the sentence/thought and begin other. Lorde style.
Citrus Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 23 minutes ago, ultraviolence.xx said: me still nutting at verse 2 Baby you need to edge more
ultraviolence.xx Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 7 minutes ago, Citrus said: Baby you need to edge more im edging through the first two stanzas and then in the chorus i lose it a little and then BAM v2: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VLnWf1sQkjY
Alesus Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 2 hours ago, ultraviolence.xx said: U MAGAZINE THIS WEEK'S TRACK REVIEWS This post rounds up our reviews of the final quarter of this week's chart debuts. For earlier quarters, check previous digital issues. @Alesus – "Void" Hide contents alesus debuts with “void (veer off into darkness).” okay i’m slain right off the bat by some of these images. you clearly have a love of wordplay that comes through in the way you write. fractals and flames and murky water, whew. i liked that you capitalized Mother in the chorus, gave it sort of a superlative feeling, but that cap was missing in the verse and it would’ve been cool to have them both. the main issue with this song is it feels more poem-y than song-y; it needs a more rigid syllable structure. my wig is already levitating imagining you bring this level of imagery and concept to a song with stronger meter. (also +2,000,000PHU for the lana reference “i will never sing again,” unless it wasn’t intentional, in which case no score increase.) favorite part: “fractals burst through the twilight”; “time is dead and all is hurting”; “let go, forget, be still / journey quietly into the night” Thanks for the feedback! I definitely will spend more time on my next entry so everything is cohesive. I think I focused on the imagery a bit too much with Void, therefore neglecting my meter and the overall story. And of course I stan for the legendary Swan Song. Truly an album highlight
ultraviolence.xx Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 1 minute ago, Alesus said: Thanks for the feedback! I definitely will spend more time on my next entry so everything is cohesive. I think I focused on the imagery a bit too much with Void, therefore neglecting my meter and the overall story. And of course I stan for the legendary Swan Song. Truly an album highlight you're welcome! can't wait to see! and whew!
MattyTacos Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 41 minutes ago, Body Talk⠀ said: does someone wanna read mine and give feedback before i possibly ruin my chances of going further? ddd Sure sis, we on another mentality
ultraviolence.xx Posted April 22, 2018 Posted April 22, 2018 i just wanna break up all your **** call your mama phone, let her know that she raised a bitch then dial tone, click
UFO Posted April 22, 2018 Posted April 22, 2018 (edited) ISLAND UFO Spoiler INTRO I learned to never let go of me Even when the sun burned And the waves kept charging VERSE Pretty faces took over my dreams Ugly hearts that I could never see It was all superficial, not concrete Everybody be faking, fooling me And I was tempted by the sweet air That I couldn’t taste the salty water VERSE I never realised who they truly are ‘Til they got what they want, ruined my heart I wish I stormed their clouds, destroyed their stars I wish I rained them down and drowned their lungs But they were already scattered and gone And I was still very shattered and lost CHORUS I learned to never let go of me Even when the sun burned And the waves kept charging Island, with no one out there at sea Alone, I fought with myself I saw myself differently And my thoughts kept rising And my heart kept hunting And the waves kept charging Island, with no one out there at sea I learned I was my own rescue team VERSE They broke away and left me here to bleed But it’s not about them it’s about me Isolation’s now my territory With anguish I created a new scene Air is not as sweet, the earth spins slower My mind remembers but my heart’s freer CHORUS I learned to never let go of me Even when the sun burned And the waves kept charging Island, with no one out there at sea Alone, I fought with myself I saw myself differently And my thoughts kept rising And my heart kept hunting And the waves kept charging Island, with no one out there at sea I learned I was my own rescue team BRIDGE It hurts to be your own worst enemy And to cast yourself away When you’ve already been stranded You’ve been deserted, damaged You’ve been abandoned by the world You’ve been convinced you don’t deserve For once to cry with a smile on your face Instead of hiding away You’re always hiding away It hurts to be your own worst enemy When you’ve already been stranded Deserted, damaged, abandoned No more hiding away CHORUS I learned to never let go of me Even when the sun burned And my thoughts kept rising And my heart kept hunting And the waves kept charging And the waves kept charging Island, with no one out there at sea Island, with no one to bring me peace And the birds kept calling As they all kept flying And my heart kept wanting To be free I learned I was my own rescue team I learned to never let go of me Edited April 22, 2018 by UFO
Hug Posted April 22, 2018 Posted April 22, 2018 If I end up not doing reviews this week...or ever again...y'all know why...
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