Alesus Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 #19 Not a bad debut. Certainly leaving avant-gardism dead in the ditch though
touya kinomoto Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 Just now, beatinglikeadrum said: Kunst's song is so chill and has this magic at the same time. When will I ? I agree. Kunst did THAT no? And Will @Gastrodonatella
ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted April 21, 2018 ATRL Moderator Posted April 21, 2018 Not top 10. I love God
Kunst Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 3 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: not that anybody asked besides maybe katycat but this is my song The Gallery Hide contents Verse 1 You held me like a picture frame A moment time could not erase The Earth spun on, but we grew still Immortal in the frame we built Mona Lisa, Starry Night None compared to how we shined But over time our colors grayed And all our luster dimmed with age Chorus The halls are lined with effigies They’re crafted in our memory Our image etched in tapestries We’re hanging in the gallery Verse 2 A temple built inside my mind That’s sheltered from the hands of time Where I preserve each bit and piece Of all the distant memories The days feel slow, but life moves fast It’s been some years since we spoke last I trace your shape in silhouettes To make sure that I don’t forget Chorus The halls are lined with effigies They’re crafted in our memory Our image etched in tapestries We’re hanging in the gallery Bridge These memories call out to me They find me in my every dream Reminding me of all the pain Reminding me of better days Of diamond rings and golden hearts Of hands that couldn’t stay apart Of lovers’ names carved into trees Of visiting the gallery Chorus The halls are lined with effigies They’re crafted in our memory Our image etched in tapestries We live on in the gallery holy wow that bridges had me snapping
beatinglikeadrum Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 (edited) @Gastrodonatella serving Mariah's level of vocabulary in the chorus Edited April 21, 2018 by beatinglikeadrum
Achilles. Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 2 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: A moment time could not erase I can’t read this line without thinking about My Immortal. But this is awesome! ——— And maybe it’s just knowing what inspired Kunst, but I swear I can hear Sufjan singing that.
ultraviolence.xx Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 1 minute ago, Achilles. said: And maybe it’s just knowing what inspired Kunst, but I swear I can hear Sufjan singing that. honestly. especially the “oh, me / oh, you” lines. CHILLS.
Kunst Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 1 minute ago, Achilles. said: I can’t read this line without thinking about My Immortal. But this is awesome! ——— And maybe it’s just knowing what inspired Kunst, but I swear I can hear Sufjan singing that. what kind of honor ?
Alesus Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 (edited) VOID (Veer Off Into Darkness) Spoiler verse one blood is all that glimmers in murky water set alight by search lights, fractals burst through the twilight the flames fan at my face but i’m past feeling, far past believing i’m adrift in murky water lost in the waves, lost to the world little one cries for mother tears fall soundlessly as comfort is not an option for me perfect picture yet the peace is broken time is dead and all is hurting chorus inhale, the sky is ablaze deep breath, my lungs burn too the flames are all and not scarlet journeys into the gloom silence now becomes me i will never sing again little girl is one with Mother never will she be the same nothing escapes murky water not sound nor even light let go, forget, be still journey quietly into the night verse two what do you think pain is for? is it only a figment of our minds? stabs of red sucked into nothingness, screams bubble but they remain inside nothing's left but the brilliance, the flashes of red and white veer off into darkness and fall into the despair nothing remains (nothing survives) everything dies in here chorus (x2) inhale, the sky is ablaze deep breath, my lungs burn too the flames are all and not scarlet journeys into the gloom silence now becomes me i will never sing again little girl is one with Mother never will she be the same nothing escapes murky water not sound nor even light let go, forget, be still journey quietly into the night Edited April 21, 2018 by Alesus
beatinglikeadrum Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 1 minute ago, Hug said: We love Platinum Best Friend Race Who is lipsyncing for the existence though.
touya kinomoto Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 1 minute ago, Hug said: We love Platinum Best Friend Race
Kunst Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 Just now, Gastrodonatella said: a select few people went missing and suddenly the environment cleared up and became friendly again, who would've thought not the iconic PH11 gif making a comeback
touya kinomoto Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 I know I did not do that good as the others did but I am attention-deficit so I will post my Asian top 10 hit SCREAM MY NAME (THE FAME) Spoiler [VERSE 1] Woke with a throbbing in my head Forgot which city I'm at again Curled up like a baby on the bed Try'na fight that weird kind of pain It hurts but I am loving it (loving it) Checked the calendar on the wall Forgot what date it is today Checked my phone, 24 missed calls Momma's sad I have to go away I left but I have no regrets (no regrets) [PRE-CHORUS] Because I am chasing my dream It's poison but also the cure It is driving me crazy But it is want I want for sure [CHORUS] Your cheers feel nauseating Your attention's sickening But I am craving for more It's the fame I came for, it's the fame I live for Book me more for my primetime Give me more of the limelight Because in this great big world It's the fame I came for, it's the fame I live for [HOOK] Las gloire. Fama. Der Ruhm. The fame. I want you all to scream my name. [VERSE 2] This is what I wanted since childhood Living the life of the glamorous But I sacrificed a lot of good The hefty price of being famous It ain't easy but I'm fine with it (fine with it) I'm forever under scrutiny Judgmental eyes watch my every move And there's no such thing as privacy I get bashed no matter what I do But this diva gotta deal with it (deal with it) [PRE-CHORUS] Because I am chasing my dream It's poison but also the cure It is driving me crazy But it is want I want for sure [CHORUS] Your cheers feel nauseating Your attention's sickening But I am craving for more It's the fame I came for, it's the fame I live for Book me more for my primetime Give me more of the limelight Because in this great big world It's the fame I came for, it's the fame I live for [HOOK] Las gloire. Fama. Der Ruhm. The fame. I want you all to scream my name. [BRIDGE] I want to be on every red carpet show And on the Academy Awards' front row I want it all, the gore and the glory And be exalted for eternity [PRE-CHORUS] Because I am chasing my dream It's poison but also the cure It is driving me crazy And there's nothing I want more [CHORUS] Your cheers feel nauseating Your attention's sickening But I am craving for more It's the fame I came for, it's the fame I live for Book me more for my primetime Give me more of the limelight Because in this great big world It's the fame I came for, it's the fame I live for [HOOK; OUTRO] Las gloire. Fama. Der Ruhm. The fame. I want you all to scream my name. Las gloire. Fama. Der Ruhm. The fame. I want you all to scream my name.
beatinglikeadrum Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 1 minute ago, KatyCatPH said: I know I did not do that good as the others did but I am attention-deficit so I will post my Asian top 10 hit SCREAM MY NAME (THE FAME) Reveal hidden contents [VERSE 1] Woke with a throbbing in my head Forgot which city I'm at again Curled up like a baby on the bed Try'na fight that weird kind of pain It hurts but I am loving it (loving it) Checked the calendar on the wall Forgot what date it is today Checked my phone, 24 missed calls Momma's sad I have to go away I left but I have no regrets (no regrets) [PRE-CHORUS] Because I am chasing my dream It's poison but also the cure It is driving me crazy But it is want I want for sure [CHORUS] Your cheers feel nauseating Your attention's sickening But I am craving for more It's the fame I came for, it's the fame I live for Book me more for my primetime Give me more of the limelight Because in this great big world It's the fame I came for, it's the fame I live for [HOOK] Las gloire. Fama. Der Ruhm. The fame. I want you all to scream my name. [VERSE 2] This is what I wanted since childhood Living the life of the glamorous But I sacrificed a lot of good The hefty price of being famous It ain't easy but I'm fine with it (fine with it) I'm forever under scrutiny Judgmental eyes watch my every move And there's no such thing as privacy I get bashed no matter what I do But this diva gotta deal with it (deal with it) [PRE-CHORUS] Because I am chasing my dream It's poison but also the cure It is driving me crazy But it is want I want for sure [CHORUS] Your cheers feel nauseating Your attention's sickening But I am craving for more It's the fame I came for, it's the fame I live for Book me more for my primetime Give me more of the limelight Because in this great big world It's the fame I came for, it's the fame I live for [HOOK] Las gloire. Fama. Der Ruhm. The fame. I want you all to scream my name. [BRIDGE] I want to be on every red carpet show And on the Academy Awards' front row I want it all, the gore and the glory And be exalted for eternity [PRE-CHORUS] Because I am chasing my dream It's poison but also the cure It is driving me crazy And there's nothing I want more [CHORUS] Your cheers feel nauseating Your attention's sickening But I am craving for more It's the fame I came for, it's the fame I live for Book me more for my primetime Give me more of the limelight Because in this great big world It's the fame I came for, it's the fame I live for [HOOK; OUTRO] Las gloire. Fama. Der Ruhm. The fame. I want you all to scream my name. Las gloire. Fama. Der Ruhm. The fame. I want you all to scream my name. LFN found dead. Give me that party anthem realness.
touya kinomoto Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 2 minutes ago, Corsola said: Honestly I see a lot of potential with this. Like I think you could serve some iconic entries in the future I agree. I am actually feeling a bit of Aurora with this.
Alesus Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 3 minutes ago, Corsola said: Honestly I see a lot of potential with this. Like I think you could serve some iconic entries in the future Thank you Let's hope I don't wait until the last minute with this round
ATRL Moderator Tsareena Posted April 21, 2018 ATRL Moderator Posted April 21, 2018 8 minutes ago, Corsola said: I'm proud of you tbh 6 minutes ago, Gastrodonatella said: it's ABSOLUTELY what @Tsareena deserves
Kunst Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 5 minutes ago, KatyCatPH said: I know I did not do that good as the others did but I am attention-deficit so I will post my Asian top 10 hit SCREAM MY NAME (THE FAME) Reveal hidden contents [VERSE 1] Woke with a throbbing in my head Forgot which city I'm at again Curled up like a baby on the bed Try'na fight that weird kind of pain It hurts but I am loving it (loving it) Checked the calendar on the wall Forgot what date it is today Checked my phone, 24 missed calls Momma's sad I have to go away I left but I have no regrets (no regrets) [PRE-CHORUS] Because I am chasing my dream It's poison but also the cure It is driving me crazy But it is want I want for sure [CHORUS] Your cheers feel nauseating Your attention's sickening But I am craving for more It's the fame I came for, it's the fame I live for Book me more for my primetime Give me more of the limelight Because in this great big world It's the fame I came for, it's the fame I live for [HOOK] Las gloire. Fama. Der Ruhm. The fame. I want you all to scream my name. [VERSE 2] This is what I wanted since childhood Living the life of the glamorous But I sacrificed a lot of good The hefty price of being famous It ain't easy but I'm fine with it (fine with it) I'm forever under scrutiny Judgmental eyes watch my every move And there's no such thing as privacy I get bashed no matter what I do But this diva gotta deal with it (deal with it) [PRE-CHORUS] Because I am chasing my dream It's poison but also the cure It is driving me crazy But it is want I want for sure [CHORUS] Your cheers feel nauseating Your attention's sickening But I am craving for more It's the fame I came for, it's the fame I live for Book me more for my primetime Give me more of the limelight Because in this great big world It's the fame I came for, it's the fame I live for [HOOK] Las gloire. Fama. Der Ruhm. The fame. I want you all to scream my name. [BRIDGE] I want to be on every red carpet show And on the Academy Awards' front row I want it all, the gore and the glory And be exalted for eternity [PRE-CHORUS] Because I am chasing my dream It's poison but also the cure It is driving me crazy And there's nothing I want more [CHORUS] Your cheers feel nauseating Your attention's sickening But I am craving for more It's the fame I came for, it's the fame I live for Book me more for my primetime Give me more of the limelight Because in this great big world It's the fame I came for, it's the fame I live for [HOOK; OUTRO] Las gloire. Fama. Der Ruhm. The fame. I want you all to scream my name. Las gloire. Fama. Der Ruhm. The fame. I want you all to scream my name. omg the Gaga 09 chills! a hook
touya kinomoto Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 1 minute ago, Gastrodonatella said: @KatyCatPH i think it's kind of charming tbh even if a lil extra (the hook is iconic but i kind of live?) Thanks Will. Gaga will be proud of me no? 2 minutes ago, Corsola said: It may not have been high charting but that doesn't mean it didn't display a lot of improvement from your beginning! That's what I am actually hoping for. That I am showing growth and not be stunted. I remember the last song I sent in for PH11 was really bad.
beatinglikeadrum Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 Let's Get Lost Spoiler Lets Get Lost Lyrics by: beatinglikeadrum 1. The tropical sun kisses us for the last time Skin touches sand and acts like it has its own romance You're next to me holding my hand looking at me with love Even with the clear sky we can feel the storm, feel the storm Pre-chorous Lets get lost oh honey ! I think I'm gonna touch stars soon I feel like I'm flying but I know I'll free fall Bcuz I've been lost in you. Chorus Lets get lost in the kiss In the touch Oh, honey you're giving me chills Lets get lost in the love We're lying here skin to skin celebrating feelings we can't rid off Lets get lost Oh please lets get lost 2. You're bitting my lip like you don't want me to go Your body on mine is a pressure I've never felt before It feels so good to be confused bcuz of your touch Pleasure of your body is making me loud. Bridge I am ready to follow you, Whatever you do Show me the ways I don't know and let me explore them with you
touya kinomoto Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 1 minute ago, Kunst said: omg the Gaga 09 chills! a hook Glad you like that. It's actually a Gaga tribute song with a touch of Katy. Congratulations again btw!
Achilles. Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 KatyCat’s song is like exactly what you would get if you asked Katy Perry to write a song like she was 2008 Lady Gaga. Your fave’s influence on you is very clear to see.
touya kinomoto Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 2 minutes ago, beatinglikeadrum said: Let's Get Lost Reveal hidden contents Lets Get Lost Lyrics by: beatinglikeadrum 1. The tropical sun kisses us for the last time Skin touches sand and acts like it has its own romance You're next to me holding my hand looking at me with love Even with the clear sky we can feel the storm, feel the storm Pre-chorous Lets get lost oh honey ! I think I'm gonna touch stars soon I feel like I'm flying but I know I'll free fall Bcuz I've been lost in you. Chorus Lets get lost in the kiss In the touch Oh, honey you're giving me chills Lets get lost in the love We're lying here skin to skin celebrating feelings we can't rid off Lets get lost Oh please lets get lost 2. You're bitting my lip like you don't want me to go Your body on mine is a pressure I've never felt before It feels so good to be confused bcuz of your touch Pleasure of your body is making me loud. Bridge I am ready to follow you, Whatever you do Show me the ways I don't know and let me explore them with you Carly Rae still outsold but this is really good. I agree that the verses are actually a slay.
touya kinomoto Posted April 21, 2018 Posted April 21, 2018 2 minutes ago, Achilles. said: KatyCat’s song is like exactly what you would get if you asked Katy Perry to write a song like she was 2008 Lady Gaga. Your fave’s influence on you is very clear to see. That's the last of my fave you'd see in me... hopefully.
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