Achilles. Posted April 15, 2018 Posted April 15, 2018 Writing this verse right now has got me feeling like:
Obsession Posted April 15, 2018 Posted April 15, 2018 I've sent in my entry! I'm eternally grateful to @conatus for looking at it before I did and I think it's a little more complex than stuff I've done for PH in the past
conatus Posted April 15, 2018 Posted April 15, 2018 Just now, Obsession said: I've sent in my entry! I'm eternally grateful to @conatus for looking at it before I did and I think it's a little more complex than stuff I've done for PH in the past
Speezy Posted April 15, 2018 Posted April 15, 2018 (edited) I wanted to be extra this season so I think I’m ready to send it All Edited April 15, 2018 by Speezy
beatinglikeadrum Posted April 15, 2018 Posted April 15, 2018 I have some verses written in notebook, some lyrics are in a completely different one, I even have some written on a paper towel. Now I must put it all together.
Kylie Jenner Posted April 15, 2018 Posted April 15, 2018 2 minutes ago, UFO said: Mess "ISLAND" looks like a penis what dicks you been looking at
UFO Posted April 15, 2018 Posted April 15, 2018 1 minute ago, Kylie Jenner said: what dicks you been looking at All kinds
UFO Posted April 15, 2018 Posted April 15, 2018 6 minutes ago, Corsola said: Stream the best kpop song btw YAAAAAAAAS! Stan sis Olivia Hye KILLED that ****!
Achilles. Posted April 15, 2018 Posted April 15, 2018 Is there like a law that every season of platinum hits must include at least one submission with “island” in the title?
UFO Posted April 15, 2018 Posted April 15, 2018 21 minutes ago, Achilles. said: Is there like a law that every season of platinum hits must include at least one submission with “island” in the title? Yes, there is
poki Posted April 15, 2018 Posted April 15, 2018 On one hand I do want to read people's songs as an act of kindness if people ask people to read them, but based on my chart run in PH11 I think I'm not the person who should be critiquing songs nnn.
ceremonials Posted April 15, 2018 Posted April 15, 2018 4 minutes ago, Corsola said: Persephone by @Gastrodonatella is still the biggest robbery of PH and I'm not even just saying that because he's my friend Reveal hidden contents The bolded parts of the song are from the perspective of the man Persephone would choose to marry. The unbolded parts are from Persephone’s perspective. The story of Persephone is that she was once a Goddess of fertility and nature, but was the target of many suitors who wanted to arrange a marriage with her. She was kidnapped by Hades and trapped in the underworld with him so that she would be forced to marry him, whether she wanted to or not. In the original story, she eventually warmed up to Hades, but in my song, I’m retelling the story so that she rejects him and decides to marry a man of her own choosing instead of submitting to loveless arranged marriages that Goddesses are constantly forced into. She’s still trapped in the underworld, but will go to any lengths to make sure Hades is the lonely one instead. Intro Stolen from the surface so a God could take my hand Resigned to be the princess trapped inside this wicked land Hook Confined beneath the forest floor, I see who walks above And if I must be married then I’ll have the man I want Verse 1 The sun breaks through the canopy in patches on the floor Reflecting off the morning dew that's dripping from the laurel In the distance there's a sound, a bird singing its song Its melody calls out to me while I keep walking on A whirlwind of leaves begins to form around my feet Discarded by the trees, they flutter freely in the breeze They dance and drift upon a whim, imbued with a new life They scurry past me down the path as if they were my guide Hook Enchanted by the beauty of a forest so serene The land beneath the trees is not as perfect as it seems Verse 2 I trail behind the leaves leading me to the forest's core A clearing filled with flowers scattered 'round a blue lakeshore The leaves fall softly down after the tailwind peters out I drop to smell the flowers and lay gently on the ground The petals soothe his senses and aromas calm his mind The gentle purr of hummingbirds act as a lullaby His eyelids fall as slumber calls, too weary to resist As roots shoot up and bind him by his ankles and his wrists Bridge The earth beneath the lake begins to tremble as it cracks The water drains into the gap, the blue fades into black I pull him ever closer to the portal in the ground He falls into the darkness where his screams won't make a sound Hook The silent mistress of a God is not the life for me A Goddess with my beauty deserves any man I please Outro Hades took me from my home, but I control my mind And now it's him who's all alone, a God without a wife Imagine writing THAT to get only #5 (when it's better than all of his #1s) This perfect 10
ceremonials Posted April 15, 2018 Posted April 15, 2018 Quote Hades took me from my home, but I control my mind And now it's him who's all alone, a God without a wife a couplet
ultraviolence.xx Posted April 15, 2018 Posted April 15, 2018 24 minutes ago, ceremonials said: a couplet ugh this is reminding me of my greek myth song, my all-season lowest peak
Achilles. Posted April 15, 2018 Posted April 15, 2018 (edited) My Achilles songs invented referring to Greek mythology in Platinum Hits. TB to when @Hug said this: “if you’re thinking about writing a song about being gay, it’s been done before and Achilles. Is already planning on doing it again, so you should really make sure you present your idea in a new, interesting way.” Edited April 15, 2018 by Achilles.
Galah Posted April 15, 2018 Author Posted April 15, 2018 Loving the covers and titles already. I wonder who'll be our top seller for this week? (and of course the top seller of Oceania, which is all that really matters, since we're never late to the party when it comes to smashes @North America @Hug 8 hours ago, ceremonials said: How are you going to know though with the new rating system? Maybe we will get a conversion chart that converts our sales into what they would be if they were scores. 52 minutes ago, swiftie13 said: Citrus outsold @Vulnicura's Island is still one of my favourite PH songs of all time, so sorry @Citrus. @Moonchild where you at sis
Galah Posted April 15, 2018 Author Posted April 15, 2018 7 hours ago, Element said: When did season 11 happen? Been done and been won. Sign up for 12, legend!
Bandito Posted April 15, 2018 Posted April 15, 2018 2 hours ago, Speezy said: Anyone avail. to read ? I can read if you'd like.
Auburn Posted April 15, 2018 Posted April 15, 2018 it's been a while since I wrote anything I don't even know where to start
Hug Posted April 15, 2018 Posted April 15, 2018 Basically I'm trying to write a song that people would want to punch if it had a face. I hope that comes across well
ICEY Posted April 15, 2018 Posted April 15, 2018 I wrote a song about this loaded guy I used to **** its literally a hoot and a half, is someone willing to listen to it??
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